The Visitor

by startistic fluttershy

Rating: teen
Tags: Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rainbow Dash, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Fluttershy, Adventure, Random, Main 6
Length: 1895

Rainbow Dashes sister is coming to stay for a day? Suddenly Fluttershy is vomiting everywhere

Dashes sister Lighting Star is coming to say on such short notice. A Day before Scootaloo's birthday. Thunderlane's special package is it working or is fluttershy very ill?

Sorry for last fan-fiction hopefully this one is better give me positive feedback and do be honest. If you think it deserves different category message me cause i don't know myself Thanks :yay:

They might be other ponies include that isn't in a tag sorry max is 5

Published 2015-02-08 03:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-02-08 03:50:02 UTC

Lighting Star

Rainbow Dash slept at Fluttershy's last night, because both girls haven't seem to spend a lot of time together. The door into the room Rainbow Dash was sleeping in opens a tad.

"Dashie, it's morning. Also, I've made breakfast," a quite voice said,

"Also your phone is ringing" She added on.

"Who is it" Dash said under the covers,

"Um it says Lighting Star" Fluttershy said.

Rainbows ears shot up,

"Hand me the phone quickly" Dash said reveling herself within her covers.

Fluttershy handed the phone over to Dash as she answered.

"Hi Star....Oh really well....Tonight....For 2 weeks,ain't you got work....Days off....Alright bye" Dash said hanging up afterwords,

"Who was it Dashie" Shy said walking towards her mare friend.

"My sisters coming to stay" Dash said.

"I've hardly even seen her, The last time was when we was at summer flight camp, after that she moved to Canterlot, haven't seen her since"she continued,

"Maybe shes nice anyways why don't you and her come over for something to eat then you can bound" Shy suggested to her,

"That is not a bad idea Shy" Dash said .

Fluttershy kissed her and walked towards the door,

"Meet you downstairs" Shy said trotting downstairs.

About 1 hour later, Rainbow Dash was pacing around her house waiting for her sister to arrive, Then there was a knock she rushed over and opened the door.

"Rainbow Dash" Said the mare

A yellow Pegasus was stood in the doorway, She was much older then Dash, her mane is a mixture of orange and green,Her eyes was also a mixture of red and yellow, Her cutie mark was a pitch black shield with a pure ice white cloud with a steak of yellow lighting coming out of the cloud. It was Lighting Star.

"Hi Lighting Star come in" Dash said opening her door wider.

Lighting smiled and walked inside, Dash closed the door and approached her sister.

"A few things to say before we catch up" Dash said smiling,

"Alright" Star said sitting down

"My special somepony has invited us over and am not telling you who they are until you see them" Dash was teasing her sister,

"Cool... tell me Dash how have you been" Star said grinning a little.

"Fine,i got accepted into the wonderbolts academy,me and fl... um my special somepony have been going out for 3 years... what about you Lighting" Dash said,

"My job,that i had for seven years,they finally promoted me now i get payed double.... also Sorain said am lacking in speed" Star said,

" Your part of the wonderbolts" Rainbows mouth dropped,

"Eeyup..." Star stopped as Dashes phone went off.

"Its Fluttershy XOX Are you coming your late call me XOX" Star fell over laughing.

"What are you laughing at" Dash was mad,

"That dog it fell over" She pointed to the tv,

Dash rolled her eyes and walked into the kitchen to call fluttershy.

"Fluttershy....Yeah....I know Star just....Nickname....We will set of soon....What Rarity....Oh well thats sweet....CMC Sleeping over...Suger its her birthday"Dash got interrupted,

"are we going yet" Star said.

"One minute....Lighting wanted to know when we were setting off yet....What dose Scootaloo want for her....DJ's um....Yeah i know Vinyl and Neon Lights....Alright I will....Ok where is it....Sweet Apple Acres....A new scooter and i will sign your name to it was well....Alright bye" Dash hung up.

"Lets go " Star said opening the door Dash walking out with her.

Hungry?

Both of them were flying to fluttershy's cottage, when Dash asked her sister,

"Would you like to go to Fluttershy's little sister's 12th birthday party tomorrow. Pinkie Pie is planning it shes the best party planer in Ponyvill."

"Alright, Then," Star Smiled.

They Landed in front of The cottages door Star leaned and knocked,

"Also Applebloom,Rarity and her sister is here" Dash said.

Star knocked again,

"One Minute" A quite voice said as plates smashed,

"Scootaloo careful, Be a dear and let Rainbow Dash and Lighting Star in" A muffed voice said.

Scootaloo opened the door.

"Hi you two come in",

Scootaloo ran off as both mares stepped inside. Lighting first spotted pictures of Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash there was loads, The thing that caught her eye was a gray hoodie that Rainbow gave her then she thought to herself.

"FlutterDash...Is Rainbows special somepony Fluttershy."

Dash knew what her sister is thinking

"Surprise She's my special somepony," Dash said smiling

"I thought it was a g...." Star stopped

The cellar door opened as another Pegasus appeared she closed the door

"Hi you two" Shy said

"Hey Fluttershy this is my sister Lighting star" Dash said.

Fluttershy was approached by the older mare,

"Hello Fluttershy," Star said smiling Fluttershy smiled back

"Flutters can we talk upstairs" Dash said

Fluttershy, nodded and flew upstairs as Star introduced herself to Rarity (Upstairs)

"Is it working" Dash said

"I've made an appointment tomorrow after Scootaloo's, birthday make sure your there on time" Shy said

"I will take you there also is that why you were in the cellar"Dash said

Fluttershy nodded, both girls went downstairs. They went into the kitchen to see the food was set out and Lighting,Rarity and the CMC around the table waiting for them.

"Hurry up big sis we are all hungry" Scootaloo said as they all agreed,

(1 Hour later at midnight) The CMC,was asleep and Rarity had gone home. The ones left lighting star,Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash. It was a very awkward moment, Dash yawned as she fell asleep upon Fluttershy,

"She's so peaceful when she's asleep i will take her upstairs if you want you can stay there is a spare bedroom for you and..." she got interrupted,

"Alright but i fight in my sleep" Star said,

"I know follow me"Shy said.

Both mare headed upstairs,

"3rd door on the left, The girls 1st door, 2nd door bathroom and the 1st door on the right is the room me and dash are in night" Fluttershy said walking into her room.

Lighting walked into the spare room, she walked over to her bed and lays down thinking to herself,

"I Thought Rainbow Dash was dating a guy, Well i should never-under-ester-mate her, That girl could do grate things, I wonder,I could convince spitfire to let her into the wonderbolts, Am going off track. Fluttershy's, Sweet, They knew each other from the very start. Also why was she in the cell. Oh well i will ask her tomorrow if not think about it.

She went to sleep (In Fluttershy's, room)

"Flutters were is Star" Dash said she was laying in bed

"Asleep....Also this is the first night in the same bed together" Fluttershy, said giggled, she climbed into bed

"Yeah" Dash said wrapping her wing around Fluttershy.

"Your sister is sweet" Fluttershy said yawning,

"She is Fluttershy" Dash said as Fluttershy nuzzled into Rainbow's mane,

"Night Dashie" Fluttershy said falling asleep,

"Night Flutters" Dash said also falling asleep.

At 3am Applebloom was downstairs getting a drink then there was a knock on the front door. She answers.

"Hey there little filly is Lighting Star in" It was Sorain.

"Ya One Minute" Applebloom said running upstairs. soon after Lighting was downstairs at the front door,

"Hey Sorain whats up" Lighting said he could see he had been crying,

"You okay" She added on using her wing to comfort him.

"Fleet Foots dead and we need you" Sorain said,

"Oh No" Her ears shot up,

"Lets go" Star said walking out with him.

Scootaloo's Birthday

Next morning Dash got up early only to find a note on the table. She picked it up, and read it.

"Dear Dash, I had to be called in for work sorry, Soon I will spend more time with you....L.S".

Rainbow Dash sighed and pulled up her phone and called Vinyl.

"Hello....Hi Vinyl can you and Neon do me a favor....Can you come to Fluttershy's sister's party tonight and both be the DJ....Pinkie Pie?....Shes busy with decorations....Thanks....Sweet Apple Acres...See you there bye." Dash hung up as Fluttershy stepped into the kitchen.

"Morning" She said,

"Two things....no wait three.First Its here" Dash said giving Fluttershy a scooter,

"Second, Lighting had to go early, her work really needed her, and Third, Vinyl and Neon are bucked" Dash said,

Fluttershy jumped in glee.

"I love you so much Dashie" Fluttershy said giving her a kiss,

"Love you too Flutters" Dash said after pulling away.

The CMC (Scootaloo, Sweetiebell And Applebloom) ran downstairs,

"Happy Birthday Scootaloo" Both Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy said,

"Can we go outside into the back garden?" Scootaloo asked, and Fluttershy nodded.

Then ran outside, messing around,

"Are you getting checked up today after the party" Dash asked her,

"Yeah Hopefully it worked. Have you paid Thunderlane anyways?" Fluttershy asked,

"Don't Worry I have" Dash said,

Scootaloo ran inside.

"Sweetiebell kicked the ball into the Everfree forest can I get it?" She asked her,

"NOOO...um no dear i will get it" She said, soon after Sweetie and Applebloom ran inside,

"TimberWolf attack" Sweetiebell shouted.

Fear grew in Fluttershy's heart. She flew outside to see two TimberWolf stood there. She stopped flying and fell upon the floor, She got stomach pains then she puked,

"Fluttershy!!" Dash said flying outside to see the two TimberWolf stood around the Pegasus,

Rainbow Kicked them causing them to run off back deep into the forest. Fluttershy went pale.

"I think its working" Dash said smiling helping her up but she fell back down,

"Applejack is here" Applebloom said in the doorway,

"Um y'all okay" Bloom said looking at Fluttershy.

"Yeah Ju...."She vomits again,

"Angel quick...." More vomit coming up,

Angel rushed over with a bucket and a mop, Rainbow Dash grabbed the mop and started to clean up as Angle put the bucket in front of Fluttershy. Applejack went into the back garden to see the mess.

"You okay Sugercube?" Applejack questioned,

"Yeah lets go" Fluttershy said,

"Have Vinyl and Neon arrived?" Dash asked,

"Yeah lets go" Applejack said,

About halfway there, Scootaloo, Sweetiebell and Applebloom were in front followed by Applejack then Rainbow Dash holding a bucket in case of Fluttershy Vomiting again. Within 10 minutes they arrived, Everypony in Ponyvill was there, They stepped inside.

"Happy Birthday Scootaloo" they all said, the music started on full blast for 5 minutes,

"When you can't feel your hooves you know the music is loud enough!" Vinyl shouted.

Fluttershy was laying on a hay bale at the back of the barn with Rainbow Dash. 5 minutes later Neon turned the music down. Scootaloo opened the present from Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash.

"A new scooter wow Scoot" Applebloom said smiling,

Scootaloo went up to Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy while everypony else danced, Pinkie singing the pony pokey.

"Thanks you two" Scootaloo said hugging Rainbow Dash,

"Be careful when you hug your sister" Dash said,

"Why What's wr..."Scootaloo was interrupted by Fluttershy Puking into a bucket,

"That's why" Dash said getting her a clean bucket,

"Whats wrong with her?" She asked.

"No idea but she has an appointment at the hospital tonight after your party ill tell you then" Dash said,

"Scootaloo come here" Pinkie said with a cake on the table,

"Happy 12th Birthday Scootaloo" Everypony said,

The End?

Author's Note

hopefully you like this one better working on a new one with the question being answered whats wrong with Fluttershy