The Secret of Dusk Shine
News Break!
Previous ChapterNext ChapterSo anyone who liked this story has probably known that it's been dead in the water for a while now, yeah sorry about that but I got into a funk and kind of hated the direction the story was heading. Thankfully this will be fixed soon! As a complete rewrite of this story will be taking place in the near future, plot holes will be fixed, and outside of the first two episodes being used as a loose guideline don't expect any of the events in this new story to line up with the show that much.
I agree with some of the comments in that I had an interesting premise but mangled it. This version will be much better I can promise that much, I was young at the time and admittedly very new to writing in general and didn't know when to real myself in and as a result multiple ideas ended up getting spliced together and not for the better.
Q. Will this still be a slice of life story?
A. That's hard to say actually, Expect more of a long plot with some slice of life elements thrown into it.
Q. What will happen to this story?
A. This version will be left up for posterity but I recommend going to the newer version that will be going up.
Q. What were you doing all these years?
A. A lot of writing and other things besides, I am very busy however and updates might be a little slow to come out, expect maybe once a month.
Q. Will the new story just be a retelling of this one?
A. NO! This story is getting rewritten from the ground up, I spent a lot of time honing my writing.
Q. Will you actually finish this one?
A. I hope so, with a planned storyline there will be an end to the story eventually.
Beyond this I will be setting up a few other ways to stay in contact with me or support me very soon. Be on the look out for when The Secret of Dusk Shine Redux is released.
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