My little betrayer

by Bronyracer35

Rating: everyone
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Length: 920

It's time for Cris to face reality and face what's coming up ahead

After the huge comosion Cris caused in Manhattan he decides to go to ponyville but for suprise he has to prove his brother(shining armor)and his sister(twilight)that he he's a new stallion.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-01-29 04:50:01 UTC

Chapter2(the hideout)

As Cris left equstria he walked throw ponyville Cris told him self how they betrayed it's pretty sad as Cris walked throw town he looked up in he billboards and it said plz stay away from this suspect he armed and very deadly cris told him self well so my brother post a picture of me in the billboards and says stay away from me that's just great,as everybody stared at Cris he told him self I better run,and Cris was right cause he saw the police going after him he also saw his brother as Cris ran from the police they shot Fire at him with guns)give it up Cris your just running from your guilt said S.armor you,dame this guy really wants me but I ain't going to allow it (as the police trys to surround Cris he pulls a gun out and shoots the car like trying to give a warning to him to stop following him,but suddenly he was surrounded,S.armor came out of the car,Cris you got no where else to go just give it up,never you took everything from me says Cris,as he looks behind him he see's a river and then jumps S.armor shoots Cris in the arm while he's in mid air Cris yells(AHHH!)and as Cris hit the water S.armor told the guards I want this guy found and fast,but as Cris open his eyes he went up to the surface and saw boats looking for him so he decide that he was going to swim under water,as Cris left the crime scene he was wet and hurt and as he saw the news he looked, watch for this suspect and as Cris  felt tired and hungry he decide to go where his old warehouse was,as Cris opens the door he see's that it's all messy,and as he turns around he see's the cops so he rapidly gets into the warehouse Cris told to him self this,this could be the hideout but if I want the heat of me which is condition 5(the heights rank of police there is) I might want to stay put a few weeks here Cris says.cris told him self If I stay here I might not be looked for that's just genius says Cris.a few weeks pass by he starts to se that his condition was going down 4,3,2,1cris was suprise he told him self what does he not want to se me,maybe that's it because he think that I betrayed him maybe he just wants me out of town,but bro I'm still here and I'm going to find out wy you don't want me here for.

Chapter1(a ruined wedding)

I can't belive I'm coming back to my hometown after what pepole think I've done,oh well.as Cris(the character of the story)try's to remember what he done he has a flashback about the cruel things his brother and sister said):big brother I think Cris is just,you know like not part of the family he's 24 and and has no job,he just stays there in the couch all the day doing what?,nothing says twilight.yea I know, he's just a lazy ass who doesn't do nothing I told if he want a job with me but he said no,God bless him says S.armor.as Cris remembers those horrible words he makes his way in to equstria, yea just a little more and I'm there.Cris thought he was a lone but what he didn't expect is that someone was following him,and then Cris gets rammed by another car)Cris: Ohhh,God what was that Cris looks behind him he says no I can't be,it was his old enemy Alex hey Cris miss me,as both cars went throw town Cris kept telling him self but how I thought I lost him, as soon as Cris saw up ahead,he saw stop wedding up ahead Cris decided he had to go throw the wedding,as Cris car viciously took every thing in his path he quickly turn the car around,as he tried to accelerate Alex stops in front of him,Cris rapidly got out of the car and then Alex tripped him.Sit down how have you been its time settle a score from Manhattan don't you think says Alex,as Alex was about to arrest Cris shining armor appeared,what on earth is going on here,you two you got a lot of explaing to do! Says S.armor(Alex gasped)look man I am so sorry about the wedding,but this guy is from out of town and he has something I want says Alex.S.armor looked at Cris he was shocked to se his brother is back in town,been a long time(as S.armor felt like vomiting because he couldn't say the word)br,bro,brother.( S.armor told Alex what's his bounty and Alex corresponded its 250,000 dollars,twilight appered she cept saying whos that)twilight it's not a good a idea if you saw this S.armor says.(twilight angryl went up to Cris)Cris HOW DARE YOU SHOW YOUR FACE HERE! Twilight said.S.armor got  twilight calm down he's not worth,Alex got back into his car and left.bro,sis come on I'm sorry Cris says,they both angrily told him to leave,as Cris left he told his brother you wish you hadn't said those words,S.armor grabbed the microphone from vinyl and said that guy,is my brother S.armor responded,every one so shock,his brother told to him self I will get you for what you've done and you going to wish you were never my brother.S.armor told every guard and police officer I want that guy arrested and it better be condition 5 says S.armor angrily.