The Creature
In the shadows
Load Full StoryNext ChapterYou find yourself in a dark place where the only light around is where you should remain. In this place, you can hear the sounds of the idols you love, being fictitious or real. The odd dark place is a cube made out of crystals where the light lives surrounded by darkness.
Your idols are represented by images on stone that has a rectangular form. In order to call them you must take the object in front of the image of your idol, which is rectangular with some incrustations of some sort of crystal unknown to man. There isn't anything odd or peculiar about the figure, but strangely reminds you of the idol and it has an irregular form but they all are the same.
You are a brony, so your idols are the brave six protagonists in your fantasy world. You are confused. This place is spooky and exciting but how did you get here? You don’t remember but for some unknown reason you know the rules of this place.
One of them that takes your attention the most says, “Count the quantity of incrustations on the control of power one thousand times and the idol you have choose, shall have sex with you.”
You get nervous and start to sweat cold for knowing this nonsense rules but on the other hand they give you some feel of truth.
Indecisively, you begin to look at the pictures of your idols. Applejack gives you a sensation of happiness and pride, in a characteristic horse position that marks her power. You turn around to see Rainbow Dash; her pose shows bravery and confidence. Hell, it even makes you feel brave by only looking at it and you know she is your favorite pony so you want to try her power.
You take the control of the power and you don’t see any familiar form, but a bunch of irregular forms. Not having much importance, you ignore it and begin to to count the incrustations counting eighteen. Confusion starts at the five hundredth lap and it makes the counting wrong, giving you seventeen or sixteen. In the process you begin to hear familiar sounds of your idol as the fear begins to consume your mind. So, you drop the control and leave it on the floor without even bothering to put it back in its place.
Once more, you begin to sweat cold as the adrenaline pumped through your veins. You had the closest encounter with your idol and that scared the shit out of you because you know that’s not supposed to be possible.
You turn around and see Fluttershy, her attitude one of shyness, beauty and elegance never seen before in your life. I must have her, no matter the cost! you think to yourself.
Without thinking, you take her power. Your heart starts to pound faster at the look of the incrustations having a form of irregular stars like Twilight’s cutie mark, and being that not enough they are a big quantity of incrustations. You begin to panic. I won’t make it! There are a lot! I will never have what I want!
Suddenly, anger and bravery sink in your mind reforcing your desition to do it.
You don’t know how many times you've counted the incrustations, because your mind starts to get confused so you begin to count wrong once again. Inadvertently looking to one of the transparent walls of the cube a horrible creature smashed on the wall; its red eyes look at yours, making you feel sick and terrified. Its big bags under the eyes indicate it’s not a light creature and mane looks like Fluttershy’s but its messy hair indicate its troubled. It has a big mouth that when opened, exposes some shinny sharp teeth that seem capable of breaking bones with one bite. The thing is huge like a dragon and even looks like one but with a humanoid form.
You recognize this creature; it has to be Fluttershy as it is yellow and pink.
This was noticed for an instant before the creature vanished quickly into the darkness. You start to panic when you remember that there's one entrance and you must close it before it’s too late; your instincts indicates that you are in great danger. So, without waiting any longer, you run to the entrance and watch in terror as the creature is getting closer by the second like a lizard as in the last second you manage to close it. To your shock it looks exactly like Fluttershy. You know it’s her for her colors and shape, her eyes are nowhere to be seen because they are covered in darkness, but you know she is looking at you and she is not very happy.
Her face in this condition provokes you panic. Perhaps, she seems sweet and with libido, but you don’t feel comfortable with the evil aura she emits. Soon, her presence starts to feel repulsive and without word or sign you know it wants you to let her in so you can have your reward. You know it's true and that you deserve it, but at the same time you know is a trap.
The price is very high. Very, very high.
YOUR LIFE.
You wake up sweating cold and agitated. The warmth of your blanket is nice and makes you feel safe as relief invades your body and between puffing and panting, you begin to remove the warm blankets. But you remain silent and a look of utter shock immediately forms onto your face. You heart starts to pound faster as the adrenaline started to drive through your veins once again. It’s her…
IT’S HER…
In front of you, between the blankets, Fluttershy is reposing on your legs and seems confortable and nice. She notices your staring and with the most cute and delicate movements she wakes up. The shy mare looks at you with this eyes matching the Niagara Falls in beauty. The need to say something is strong but Fluttershy gently shushes you with her hoof.
You start to feel confused but the fear of your dream tells you are right to be afraid… she without advise starts to give it to you as she wispers to your ear.
“Your life”.
Your heart sinks at this, so, you try your best to get away from her to no avail as she steals a kiss that leaves you without breath giving you the feel as if it was your fisrt one. She stucks her tongue into your mouth as your tongue dances with hers in a watery and warm kiss leaving you with the desire of penetrate her with your now erect penis.
She knows your intentions and unzips your pants with her hoof while she gives you a smile giving her a cat like libido. She strokes you with a gentle but quick way her fluffiness makes you feel in heaven as her marshmallow softness makes you precum. After you covered white your bed she smiles in a angelical way guiding your erected member to her moist marehood. The head of your member meets her privacy all wet from waiting for your arrival, it's tight and warm rivaling the pleasure that your other experiences. She appeared to have a special gift as her pussy sucks your meaty member with an insatiable appetite. She moans and goes harder and harder as she squirts all over yourself but not ending there as she begins to go deeper and harder hungry for your seed. Squirting over and over until your happy liquid left your member making Fluttershy yell ecstatically because of your seed.
She stops fucking you and leaves your member all limp to smash with your body, feeling her wetness and the viscosity of your seed. She is now looking at you contemptuously from above as you start to notice some darkness starting to cover up her eyes.
This is not good.
You have received the reward but now it's time to pay and there's no scaping. The anger overtakes you punching her, feeling betrayed and cheated, but her face looks immutable like if your best shot didn't compare to her power. Your eyes stung as you begin to cry feeling helpless begging for your life saying this was a mistake and that you shouldn’t even entered that realm, but because of your ignorance and lack of intelligence you did the unthinkable. Fluttershy remains immutable at your begs and treats, she just wants her payment.
You begin to curse at her because of your actions and cried even louder than before. So, with effort, you reach for a paper and a pen from your night table. You beggin to write:
To anyone that cares.
I have made a lot of mistakes in my life but today I had committed the worst of them all and nothing can fix it.
Please mom, dad, forgive me. I never wanted to be a pest. It’s just that I didn't know how to demonstrate my love to you.
Brother, sister, Never do what I have done because you’ll never live the happy life that you deserve.
As for my beautiful, loving girlfriend, please forgive the suffering I have put you through. I love you more than words could describe, but the unfortunately flesh is very weak and I am afraid that I have failed.
To all of my wonderful friends, that always looked after me. That were there whenever I needed them. Thanks…
Leaving some tear stains on the paper you left the note on the table remembering that you had a cigarette and a beer on your table. So, you grab them; lighting the cigarette and opening the beer with your teeth you enjoy them, belching out the smoke in a decorative way to the creature in front of you. As you get to the very last of the beer you throw it to the wall across your room as the unfinished cigarette causing a little fire that start to increase.
You look at the creature in front of you one more time with more hate than before you tell it, “What are you waiting for?! Do it! You piece of shit!”
Without fear you look how the creature lows its gaze upon you, its pupils are red and it stares at you with evilness her smile challenges your anger.
Now, you are the brother.
You take down the door with a kick as you look at your brother’s corpse covered in flames. You want to rescue him but it seems like it’s too late. At the distance, you see a piece of paper on the table and without hesitation you rush inside covering your nose from the smoke with your shirt grabbing the paper that somehow stayed intact. You get out of the room to call the firemen telling them with discretion what happened.
You hang up, directing yourself to the kitchen looking for the fire extinguisher trying to fight back with bravery without success. Soon, the fire extinguisher stops working as the house burns more and the amount of fire increases, giving you no choice but to leave the house. You leave the house covered in soot just to see a creepy looking creature looking straight at you from your brother’s room, leaving you in shock.
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You are now a fireman. You arrive with your partners at the house after being called by some kid, when you see him sitting in the little garden without moving, looking at the house burning. Your partners start to work but no one seems to notice the kid sitting in the grass.
You approach him with a blanket to remove him from there so everyone can work without problem. The kid is very obedient and gives no trouble, but you can’t help to notice he keeps looking at the window. So, you look too.
That was the worst decision you ever made. A weird creature was staring at you, smiling with evilness. You pretended that it as just your imagination, just nothing as you turn around. But deep inside you feel scared and think, Whatever happened here, it’s not over. It’s just… the beginning.
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