The Creature

by Pedro-Paramo

Rating: mature
Tags: Tragedy, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Human, Other, Fluttershy, Sex
Length: 4368

What happens when a nightmare comes true and happens to be a bless for you at the same time?

Something dark lurks in the shadows of your dreams. Every living's dreams. You make contact with it and it grants you your darkest desire but at which cost?

Published 2015-01-27 03:40:03 UTC
Last updated 2015-02-03 04:32:58 UTC

In the shadows

You find yourself in a dark place where the only light around is where you should remain. In this place, you can hear the sounds of the idols you love, being fictitious or real. The odd dark place is a cube made out of crystals where the light lives surrounded by darkness.

Your idols are represented by images on stone that has a rectangular form. In order to call them you must take the object in front of the image of your idol, which is rectangular with some incrustations of some sort of crystal unknown to man. There isn't anything odd or peculiar about the figure, but strangely reminds you of the idol and it has an irregular form but they all are the same.

You are a brony, so your idols are the brave six protagonists in your fantasy world. You are confused. This place is spooky and exciting but how did you get here? You don’t remember but for some unknown reason you know the rules of this place.

One of them that takes your attention the most says, “Count the quantity of incrustations on the control of power one thousand times and the idol you have choose, shall have sex with you.”

You get nervous and start to sweat cold for knowing this nonsense rules but on the other hand they give you some feel of truth.

Indecisively, you begin to look at the pictures of your idols. Applejack gives you a sensation of happiness and pride, in a characteristic horse position that marks her power. You turn around to see Rainbow Dash; her pose shows bravery and confidence. Hell, it even makes you feel brave by only looking at it and you know she is your favorite pony so you want to try her power.

You take the control of the power and you don’t see any familiar form, but a bunch of irregular forms. Not having much importance, you ignore it and begin to to count the incrustations counting eighteen. Confusion starts at the five hundredth lap and it makes the counting wrong, giving you seventeen or sixteen. In the process you begin to hear familiar sounds of your idol as the fear begins to consume your mind. So, you drop the control and leave it on the floor without even bothering to put it back in its place.

Once more, you begin to sweat cold as the adrenaline pumped through your veins. You had the closest encounter with your idol and that scared the shit out of you because you know that’s not supposed to be possible.

You turn around and see Fluttershy, her attitude one of shyness, beauty and elegance never seen before in your life. I must have her, no matter the cost! you think to yourself.

Without thinking, you take her power. Your heart starts to pound faster at the look of the incrustations having a form of irregular stars like Twilight’s cutie mark, and being that not enough they are a big quantity of incrustations. You begin to panic. I won’t make it! There are a lot! I will never have what I want!

Suddenly, anger and bravery sink in your mind reforcing your desition to do it.

You don’t know how many times you've counted the incrustations, because your mind starts to get confused so you begin to count wrong once again. Inadvertently looking to one of the transparent walls of the cube a horrible creature smashed on the wall; its red eyes look at yours, making you feel sick and terrified. Its big bags under the eyes indicate it’s not a light creature and mane looks like Fluttershy’s but its messy hair indicate its troubled. It has a big mouth that when opened, exposes some shinny sharp teeth that seem capable of breaking bones with one bite. The thing is huge like a dragon and even looks like one but with a humanoid form.

You recognize this creature; it has to be Fluttershy as it is yellow and pink.

This was noticed for an instant before the creature vanished quickly into the darkness. You start to panic when you remember that there's one entrance and you must close it before it’s too late; your instincts indicates that you are in great danger. So, without waiting any longer, you run to the entrance and watch in terror as the creature is getting closer by the second like a lizard as in the last second you manage to close it. To your shock it looks exactly like Fluttershy. You know it’s her for her colors and shape, her eyes are nowhere to be seen because they are covered in darkness, but you know she is looking at you and she is not very happy.

Her face in this condition provokes you panic. Perhaps, she seems sweet and with libido, but you don’t feel comfortable with the evil aura she emits. Soon, her presence starts to feel repulsive and without word or sign you know it wants you to let her in so you can have your reward. You know it's true and that you deserve it, but at the same time you know is a trap.

The price is very high. Very, very high.

YOUR LIFE.

You wake up sweating cold and agitated. The warmth of your blanket is nice and makes you feel safe as relief invades your body and between puffing and panting, you begin to remove the warm blankets. But you remain silent and a look of utter shock immediately forms onto your face. You heart starts to pound faster as the adrenaline started to drive through your veins once again. It’s her…

IT’S HER…

In front of you, between the blankets, Fluttershy is reposing on your legs and seems confortable and nice. She notices your staring and with the most cute and delicate movements she wakes up. The shy mare looks at you with this eyes matching the Niagara Falls in beauty. The need to say something is strong but Fluttershy gently shushes you with her hoof.

You start to feel confused but the fear of your dream tells you are right to be afraid… she without advise starts to give it to you as she wispers to your ear.

“Your life”.

Your heart sinks at this, so, you try your best to get away from her to no avail as she steals a kiss that leaves you without breath giving you the feel as if it was your fisrt one. She stucks her tongue into your mouth as your tongue dances with hers in a watery and warm kiss leaving you with the desire of penetrate her with your now erect penis.

She knows your intentions and unzips your pants with her hoof while she gives you a smile giving her a cat like libido. She strokes you with a gentle but quick way her fluffiness makes you feel in heaven as her marshmallow softness makes you precum. After you covered white your bed she smiles in a angelical way guiding your erected member to her moist marehood. The head of your member meets her privacy all wet from waiting for your arrival, it's tight and warm rivaling the pleasure that your other experiences. She appeared to have a special gift as her pussy sucks your meaty member with an insatiable appetite. She moans and goes harder and harder as she squirts all over yourself but not ending there as she begins to go deeper and harder hungry for your seed. Squirting over and over until your happy liquid left your member making Fluttershy yell ecstatically because of your seed.

She stops fucking you and leaves your member all limp to smash with your body, feeling her wetness and the viscosity of your seed. She is now looking at you contemptuously from above as you start to notice some darkness starting to cover up her eyes.

This is not good.

You have received the reward but now it's time to pay and there's no scaping. The  anger overtakes you punching her, feeling betrayed and cheated, but her face looks immutable like if your best shot didn't compare to her power. Your eyes stung as you begin to cry feeling helpless begging for your life saying this was a mistake and that you shouldn’t even entered that realm, but because of your ignorance and lack of intelligence you did the unthinkable. Fluttershy remains immutable at your begs and treats, she just wants her payment.

You begin to curse at her because of your actions and cried even louder than before. So, with effort, you reach for a paper and a pen from your night table. You beggin to write:

To anyone that cares.

I have made a lot of mistakes in my life but today I had committed the worst of them all and nothing can fix it.

Please mom, dad, forgive me. I never wanted to be a pest. It’s just that I didn't know how to demonstrate my love to you.

Brother, sister, Never do what I have done because you’ll never live the happy life that you deserve.

As for my beautiful, loving girlfriend, please forgive the suffering I have put you through. I love you more than words could describe, but the unfortunately flesh is very weak and I am afraid that I have failed.

To all of my wonderful friends, that always looked after me. That were there whenever I needed them. Thanks…

Leaving some tear stains on the paper you left the note on the table remembering that you had a cigarette and a beer on your table. So, you grab them; lighting the cigarette and opening the beer with your teeth you enjoy them, belching out the smoke in a decorative way to the creature in front of you. As you get to the very last of the beer you throw it to the wall across your room as the unfinished cigarette causing a little fire that start to increase.

You look at the creature in front of you one more time with more hate than before you tell it, “What are you waiting for?! Do it! You piece of shit!”

Without fear you look how the creature lows its gaze upon you, its pupils are red and it stares at you with evilness her smile challenges your anger.

Now, you are the brother.

You take down the door with a kick as you look at your brother’s corpse covered in flames. You want to rescue him but it seems like it’s too late. At the distance, you see a piece of paper on the table and without hesitation you rush inside covering your nose from the smoke with your shirt  grabbing the paper that somehow stayed intact. You get out of the room to call the firemen telling them with discretion what happened.

You hang up, directing yourself to the kitchen looking for the fire extinguisher trying to fight back with bravery without success. Soon, the fire extinguisher stops working as the house burns more and the amount of fire increases, giving you no choice but to leave the house. You leave the house covered in soot just to see a creepy looking creature looking straight at you from your brother’s room, leaving you in shock.

.

You are now a fireman. You arrive with your partners at the house after being called by some kid, when you see him sitting in the little garden without moving, looking at the house burning. Your partners start to work but no one seems to notice the kid sitting in the grass.

You approach him with a blanket to remove him from there so everyone can work without problem. The kid is very obedient and gives no trouble, but you can’t help to notice he keeps looking at the window. So, you look too.

That was the worst decision you ever made. A weird creature was staring at you, smiling with evilness. You pretended that it as just your imagination, just nothing as you turn around. But deep inside you feel scared and think, Whatever happened here, it’s not over. It’s just… the beginning.

Gray

In the light making it darker

After some time, the policemen begin to receive many reports of suicides and disappearances. Most of the cases are dismissed for lack of proof. But a group of them still suspect that the cases must be murderers because these activities have become unusually repetitive.

You are one of those police officers.

You start to worry about your family because it seems like they  mainly focuses on young ones and you have a son and a daughter. You cannot allow something so horrendous to happen to your children because they're all you have. But everything changes when you get the feeling that something is wrong. You don’t know what it is or why but you feel as if you must get home immediately.

So armed with courage and your trusty nine millimetres, you speed to your house at full velocity in a car of the force. You arrive soon and open the door of your house. You begin to feel restless because of the abysmal silence, so your heart start to pump large quantities of adrenaline that start to run through your veins when you hear your son scream in terror. With weapon in hand, you run in the direction of the screaming.

When you open your son’s bedroom door, you find a very disturbing surprise.

There, where you son lay, is this creature resting peacefully but your son looks at you very terrified. So you dispose yourself to help him and you succeed on taking him out of the bed, but just when you’re about to exit the room a soft and gentle voice stops you in your tracks. Both of you feel disturbed. The voice says just loud enough for you to hear, “Your life”. If it weren’t for the fact that you knew this was not natural, you’d have believed that there is no threat, but your instinct tells you to point your trusty nine millimeters and point it at the creature.

So when you turn around to face it, the creature looks at you with the most beautiful and pure eyes you have ever seen. But just as you’re about to fall for her charms, you realize that this is the same creature that has been described in the suicide cases.

Your son is scared behind you and tells you to shoot it.

You are frightened as well, but you manage to say “You are under arrest by the charges of multiple murders and kidnaps. All you say can and will be used agaist you in a court of law. ” You don’t know what to say or do. The terror is too much.

The creature laughs with grace and kindness and begins to stand up from the bed. It starts to move with a smooth and graceful stride towards you, making you angry and fearful. “Freeze or I’ll shoot!” You threatened.

The creature just laughs and smiles like the most innocent of creatures. So without waiting more, you shoot to point-blank.

You manage to hit it in the shoulder, making the creature cry of pain in the most tender and pain filled voice you've ever heard. Your son moved to the pitiful snivelling creature and rushes to her aid.

You are confused and you don’t know what to do. You just hurt one of the most majestic and noble creatures you have ever seen and if that was bad, your son looks at you with hate because you injured an innocent creature.

The confusion... it’s powerful and you don’t know what to do. After witnessing this... this madness you can't think right anymore. For some odd reason, suicide seems like the only reasonable idea as you now give up on trying to find an answer. Putting the gun to your mouth, your face has become covered in tears before you blow your brains out.

You stop being.

You pay no attention at what just happened. Your only worry is the creature, which is cuddled at your chest as you feel her heart pounding with affection. You grab her chin while you go into deep thought, staring at her beautiful blue eyes. Without waiting, you close in a kiss with strength and passion, making your tongue dance with hers and continuing this for some time until you can’t take it anymore.

So with a growing libido and rudeness, you shove her to the floor, staring her succulent cheeks while taking off your pajama pants off revealing a erect and venous member that practically yells that it's ready for action. So you approach her with your manhood nearing her wet pussy. You grunt, feeling her warm and wet puffy folds, starting to rub against it with your member with delicateness.

You thrust your member, the creature moan in pleasure while you start to get a rhythm like a wave back and forward. Feeling her soft and glossy fur against your skin makes you feel shivers travel down your spine. Her vagina clenched around your penis in as if trying to milk your warm, thick seed while she moves at a desirable speed.

Your thrusts begin to turn spastic and uneven after a few minutes as you near your peak. After a few jerky thrusts, your love juice rushes inside her tight pussy making your vision get fuzzy as your breath becomes laboured because of the lack of oxygen.

Soon you remain weak and brushed your hand on her lower back fur, feeling your life running out.

You stop being…

You are a private detective.

You begin to receive cases of this suicide-kidnap from the families of the victims turning to you because the police does nothing.

They think it was murder and even you, moved by feelings and your sense of justice, start to believe is true.

A mother is crying in front of you with her five year old daughter all confused on her lap. She wants justice to be done and the scene got into your heart. So to calm down you start to light a cigarette and with the best intentions, you entrust yourself to make justice because you hate to see a woman cry that way.

You say goodbye to her as you start to get your hands to work and when you open an archive, you realize the horrible case you got into.

Father and son, the father was a cop approximately in his forty’s, and the son was only thirteen years old. The two were shot. The father, it seems, blowed his brains out and the son has been shot to the heart. Seems as if the father shot the kid and afterwards shot himself.

Your curiosity becomes stronger as you check the rest of the archives. As you begin to look through files, the disturbing facts of the scenes before you are getting worse one after the other.

Some young men had their guts pulled out, some were hanged and the others sitting in a bloodbath by their families. Some of the other archives were from missing ladies and children.

You become enraged because the victims are so young or successful, like the poor man that killed himself by cutting his veins in the bathtub.

However, you start to see a pattern. Some of the archives talk about some writings left behind by the victims or mysterious packages received before their death.

All of them talk about some series called ‘My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic’ and some ‘Fluttershy’, that fits the profile of ‘the creature’ related on some hand writes tell.

Even you start to dismiss the case because it sound like some dementia came from a horror book and had sex with a brony, a pathetic one by the way because ponies and death don’t go together.

In the heat of the moment you begin to throw the archives to the trashcan while you take your cup and dispose yourself to make some coffee because you feel tired and you can’t alud you the luxury of sleeping on the work.

You are about to drink sip from the hot, bitter and precious liquid when you hear someone knocking on the door and irritated for the interruption, you prepare yourself to yell at your secretary because you are not in the mood to receive more crazy things about the pony case.

Your anger stops being when you open the door and realize no one is out there. So with curiosity, you begin to look around to spot with a package on the floor. You look at it for a space of time when you decide to pick it up as you close the door of your office and throw the package on the trash can; because whoever dared to interrupt you from the coffee time, didn’t deserve your time.

Once you sipped the hot liquid, you start to feel relaxed, warm and most important: awake. The coffee took effect and you start to feel active again.

You hestle on your chair as you think about the box in the trashcan. You feel like something is calling you but you try ignore it. Still, the call feels stronger and stronger. Soon you can no ignore it anymore and take the box to see its content. Between the plastic you find a disk that has the words ‘My Little Pony’ on it.

You furiously break the disk throwing it at the trash.

You yell at the skies “Are you laughing at me? Fuckers! I hope the devil takes you to the very depths of hell and makes you suffer for all of eternity!”

To relax you smoke another cigarette because you have to work. You call your secretary and tell her to let the next person come into your office.

You hear a knock and you tell whoever was out there to come in. A blonde woman walks in and sits at the chair in front of your desk. She stares at you with her blue eyes making you feel uncomfortable. So, you ask her what’s the matter, that you have some work to do. Be brief. And if she was going to talk about the pony case; please abstain and leave immediately.

She opens her mouth and begins to talk, “Did you see it?”

With curiosity you ask, “See what?”

She answer smiling from ear to ear, “The package.”

You just lose it hitting youbr desk with both hands as you start to point furiously at the woman “Come on! Get out; get the fuck out of here! I don’t want to know anything about your bullshit, you damn idle prick!”

She stands up and leaves quickly, leaving you all alone. You’re stressed and irritated, your head is starting to hurt as you try to calm your pain by caressing your temples. Soon, you call your secretary asking to throw everyone out and to bring some aspirins.

The secretary arrives with a glass of water and two aspirins. She is brunette with a temptation body. In concern, she asks you “What’s going on? Why suddenly you throw everyone out?”

You answer after consuming the aspirins and drinking some water. “That blonde. She putted me on a bad mood, that’s all”, she looks at you confused and you notice it. You attempt to comfort her with your arms, “What is it, honey?”

She turns around to see you with some fearful eyes, “I never let a blonde come to see you, actually, you haven’t call in half an hour, just to throw people out and ask for aspirins.”

The disturbance invades your body by hearing this as you turn around to stare at the trash can. Not waiting for anything, you leap on it searching for the disk, but there is no sign of it. Your secretary starts to feel worried about you and asks you for the reason of this nonsense.

With horror in your eyes, you tell her to leave, that you give her the day off, and with no further explanations you push her out of the office locking the door behind you. She tries to reason with you but to no avail. So in the heat of the moment you just fire her, giving her no more reason to stay at your side. She leaves angry.

The silence is your only friend right now.

But some weird noises start from the other side of the door. They sounded struggles, meaning that someone or something is trying to get in, getting louder and louder each second, leaving the try and hearing some laughs, then silence becomes present again.

Fearfully you try to reach for your revolver on the dragger on your desk as you start to move slowly towards the door. You try to open it but to no avail. You realize you are locked in. You ask yourself What is going on here?

You turn around to see the blonde lady from before. She is staring at you with those horrible blue eyes and she is smiling really wide and creepy making you feel angry, “You again?! I've had enough!”

You hold your revolver and point to her starting to shoot, but you see that she falls to her knees in a second to finally smash with the floor. You approach to her to double tap, “Better to be sure”.

Then without hesitation you go to your chair and sit like nothing happened here as you stare at the body. You close your eyes for a little moment and when you opened them again the corpse was gone.

You start to freak out. This is not natural. Laughs can be heard from everywhere now making you feel weak of mind every second as you lose your sanity.

After some hours of psychological torment you start to laugh maniacally and point the revolver to your head as you stare into infinity, saying goodbye with your hand as you blow your brains off.

You stop being…