The Perfect Dress

by DJSilentBrony

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark
Length: 1014

Rarity gets the invitation of a life time. Can she make the perfect dress in time?

this is the story of how rarity, having a personal invitation to Fleur de Lis's parties, thus causing her to go in a maniacal state making her result to injuring ponies taking their fur and other various parts to make the perfect dress in her own crazy way. While she thinks of this insanely brilliant idea she cant find the necessary supplies, causing her to go through the extreme of doing something that no pony can ever know about, if they do she will be in big trouble.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-05 06:04:02 UTC

Chapter one: The Invitation

Chapter One: The Invitation

This will be a work in progress, as of now i will make this public and i do not honestly know at all how long i will make this. This is also the first fan fic i have ever written/typed! I also hope you enjoy it due to many of my friends saying it is good.

Rarity had just finished the last of the stitching on her new dress, she planned to wear it at next years Grand Galloping Gala. This time she would be more aware of the situation as of just meeting Twilight, she was rushed to create what she thought would be the perfect dresses. She had finished her dress as she put it on her mannequin to display her latest work to people window shopping or just coming to buy something. While sprucing things up to look more sophisticated she saw a pony approaching her door, realizing who this pony was she scrambled to open the door. "Fleur De Lis" Squealed the ecstatic white pony. All that Fleur could reply with was handing the white pony a envelope with a golden seal.

Almost immediately Rarity squealed it was a note from Fleur claiming she wanted Rarity to be one of her guests at her exclusive private party, normally this would not bother Rarity except this was different. Fleur had hosted many parties the special thing that exited her, these parties are hosted once a year with less than a hundred guests. Rarity had known about these parties since she saw Fleur in Canterlot, but she had never had the opportunity to go to one. This being her first chance she gladly jumped on it but first she needed a dress. She knew this dress had to be different, one of a kind, extraordinary. Almost instantly upon realizing this she jumped up saying "idea".

Rarity had thought of the perfect most exotic design she could think of, a spectacular dress made of griffon feathers, though this would be inhumane it would be perfect. She wondered if there were any merchants in town selling artificial griffon feathers. After walking around Ponyville for countless hours she gave up. Once she was home all she could do was think of ideas, or brainstorm. She could take the train to Canterlot the next morning and buy them there, but she thought that would be to time consuming. The party was only a week away and she needed ways to create her perfect dress, would she be willing to do this?

The next morning Rarity sat at the train station thinking should she do it, how long would it take. Her mind went blank she for once in her life did not know what to do. The train had came to a grinding halt immediately snapping Rarity of her trance. This was it, she got on the train. As she sat on the train she added up about how long this trip should take, it would take about a day and a half. Rarity knew if they did not have the feathers she needed she would go through drastic matters and do what ever it takes to get what she wants, it is a once in a lifetime opportunity!

While Rarity was riding the train she looked out of the window. As the train neared Canterlot she saw what was to be the location that the exclusive Fleur De Lis's party would be. It took her several seconds to realize that she was several minutes away from Canterlot, she looked out of the window nearing the city. Several moments later the train came to a gentle stop. there was a slight static as the voice of the conductor said " We have reached the destination, Canterlot, next stop  Manehattan".  At that note Rarity trotted off of the train walking into the crowded streets of Canterlot.

The white pony knew she had to look as quickly as possible, she went from vendor to vendor looking at various items, yet none of them were as genius as the original idea. Slowly the pony walked back to the train station, sitting on a bench waiting. She thought for what seemed like forever, until finally she thought of the perfect plan. She knew who she had to visit, it was time to pay Rainbow Dashes old friend Gilda a visit, and this time Rarity would be the ring leader. She would be the one pulling all the strings, but she would not go easy on here. She knew how Gilda had treated Fluttershy, she knew how she deserved to be treated.

The trains conductor woke her up with the typical "next stop, Ponyville" she quickly ran into the train as the doors started to close. She sat on the train, waiting, thinking of what to do. Rarity slowly dozed off, due to the small amount of sleep she had. She awoke, luckily when the train came to Ponyville, she slowly trotted off, then running to her boutique, she had some planning to do. As she walked in to the door the door slammed. She did not know what was going on, suddenly all the lights came on almost blinding her. Pinkie Pie yelled "surprise!, you have been gone for a long time, we have not seen you, so i decided to throw a welcome home party, were you excited!"

Rarity was lucky, she was about to blurt her plan until the blinding light came on, knowing what she had planned could get even the most popular pony arrested. She did not dance she just stared into the air, no one knew what she was thinking, if they did, she thought if she did get caught people would understand that the element of generosity was actually the exact opposite, she resembled greed.

so that's chapter one this is also the first fanfic i have written. This is the first thing i have ever written if you would like to help me i would gladly except it! also i am not good at making dialog.