The Burning Traveler

by dramize the feral
A traveler from an ancient hybrid race comes to ponyville.

The Kirin an ancient hybrid race that are few in number and their number only diminished more since the end of Discords reign causing the families of Kirin's he created to flee deeper in a still chaos corrupted patch of forest where they learned to fight and tap into their magics They had learned to thrive as they almost hit extinction. But after Tireks Rampage the natural balance of void and normal magic was thrown of causing that forest to spread prompting these last few Kirin to explore.



My first story criticism is welcome

Teen
On Hiatus
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Random
Anthro
Gore
 
ODM

46979 words: Estimated about 4 hours to read
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40 Chapters:

  1. The New Smith (Edited) 2015-03-23 20:10:15 UTC
    1853
  2. The Knights of Duality(Edited) 2015-03-24 05:56:50 UTC
    1161
  3. The Cold Brawler (edited) 2015-03-25 04:23:43 UTC
    980
  4. Sky Tallons and Drain Fang 2015-03-25 19:13:26 UTC
    1131
  5. The Knights Reunited 2015-03-31 19:13:59 UTC
    1076
  6. The Consuming Flame and Dark Storm 2015-04-02 04:54:13 UTC
    1518
  7. The Shy Beast Awakens 2015-04-18 01:35:28 UTC
    1624
  8. Explations 2015-04-24 14:12:06 UTC
    1166
  9. Blood Moon 2015-05-09 20:06:21 UTC
    959
  10. Discord's day 2015-05-15 19:28:07 UTC
    741
  11. Kirin Tradition 2015-05-21 23:14:33 UTC
    1036
  12. The Burnning Spider 2015-06-11 17:06:02 UTC
    1120
  13. He's BAAAAAAAAACK 2015-07-05 15:53:50 UTC
    1580
  14. Breaking Tradition 2015-07-20 00:35:33 UTC
    905
  15. Family Reunion 2015-07-29 16:39:21 UTC
    1018
  16. The challange 2015-08-07 02:15:34 UTC
    2012
  17. Infestation part 1 2015-08-11 02:42:49 UTC
    1621
  18. Infestation part 2 2015-08-14 02:25:00 UTC
    1941
  19. Wow 2015-08-14 15:01:55 UTC
    1071
  20. Jinxs and Tricks 2015-08-21 22:57:25 UTC
    1192
  21. The Bar 2015-08-24 21:12:07 UTC
    1386
  22. Aftermath 2015-08-27 23:54:44 UTC
    985
  23. The Battle part 1 2015-08-29 19:13:02 UTC
    1209
  24. The Battle part 2 2015-08-31 03:33:56 UTC
    1328
  25. First Day of School or Hell 2015-09-03 19:25:11 UTC
    872
  26. Day One 2015-09-08 23:01:47 UTC
    1112
  27. Day Two 2015-09-18 15:51:39 UTC
    1038
  28. The Orchard Part 1 2015-09-24 04:04:07 UTC
    1054
  29. The Orchard part 2 2015-09-27 17:02:37 UTC
    1174
  30. Freedom 2015-09-30 22:03:09 UTC
    1072
  31. The Agreement 2015-10-01 21:17:11 UTC
    802
  32. Prep Work 2015-10-06 03:36:23 UTC
    1050
  33. The Summit 2015-10-11 03:01:27 UTC
    1031
  34. The Club 2015-10-14 17:12:26 UTC
    953
  35. Whispering Corruption 2015-10-16 13:40:19 UTC
    1024
  36. The Bee and The Beast 2015-10-18 22:22:15 UTC
    815
  37. New Type 2015-10-24 17:31:05 UTC
    1087
  38. Reunion 2015-11-06 23:59:24 UTC
    916
  39. Demonic Order 2015-12-04 04:46:41 UTC
    1128
  40. The Queens Road 2016-01-10 20:06:24 UTC
    1238