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The Platinum Deception

by NeverEatTheLemonsAlone
Commander Hurricane is gone, traveling north. Pansy is exploring the lands to the south. Chancellor Puddinghead and her advisor Smart Cookie are far too busy with diplomacy. Clover was alone with her old friend Platinum. Now Clover is truly alone.

Clover the Clever was one of the greatest spellcasters of all time, only falling short of her teacher, Star Swirl. No pony could match her spell for spell but he.

Her friends are departed. Private Pansy is in the far south, exploring new territories. Chancellor Puddinghead and Smart Cookie are far too busy with diplomacy to ever speak to her. Commander Hurricane has flown far to the north to chase the Nimbus Ring. Her last company is her oldest friend, Platinum.

Now she's alone.

Platinum vanished without a trace right front of her, immensely powerful magical energy nearly burning her senses. Something has taken the Once-Princess, but unlike Hurricane, she has no need to travel far into the outer reaches of the world to find what she seeks.

No, for Clover and Star Swirl, the culprit lies far closer to home.

A side story to From The Mist.

Lastly, if you dislike my story, kindly leave a comment telling me exactly why. Every bit helps, and I aim to please.

Teen
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Adventure
 
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3332 words: Estimated 17 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. I 2015-01-29 18:07:09 UTC
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  2. II 2015-01-30 02:26:07 UTC
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  3. III 2015-01-30 07:16:01 UTC
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