What is this Feeling?
The Date
Previous ChapterNext Chapter"More ribbon! No less ribbon. More powder! No less powder. "Rarity started commanding.
"RARITY!" the Mane 7 shouted.
"So Fluttershy are you ready for your date" Sunset asks, "Me and Comet Tail's first date went like this, he brought me flowers and chocolate, then we went to a park, then we-" she cut off by Rainbow Dash.
"Sunset Shimmer, this is Fluttershy's date not yours", Sunset blushed in embarrassment.
"Sorry" she whispered. Finally, Fluttershy was done. She was in a beautiful green dress with a flower in her hair.
"Do you think he'll like it?'' Fluttershy asks.
"I know my brother, and I know he'd like you no matter what your wearin'" Applejack responds. Soon, there was knock at the door.
"I'm coming Big Mac" Fluttershy exclaims. When she opens the door, it's the pizza delivery guy. "Oh! A hello" Fluttershy says embarrassingly.
"You look stunning" says the delivery guy.
"Oh, it's for a date" she answers.
"Oh, who's the lucky kid?" he asks.
"Big Macintosh" Fluttershy replies.
"Is he big and tall with green eyes and orange hair?" the pizza guy asks.
"Yes, why?" Fluttershy responds.
"Oh, because he's right there" says the pizza guy pointing towards Big Mac.
"You look as pretty as butterfly with rainbow wings" Big Mac says in awe. The comment gets Fluttershy to blush.
"You don't look to bad yourself" she replies walking towards Big Mac.
"Aw shucks, this thing?" he mutters, "I just bought this".
"So anyway, what are the plans for tonight?" Fluttershy asks.
"A stroll through town" he answers, "With a secret surprise" Big Mac whispers to himself. In the bushes, Discord is spying on the 2 of them.
"A stroll through town? Ha! We'll just see about that!" he sneers. When Big Mac and Fluttershy get into the town, Discord started to lay traps for them. One of them was a string with a mud puddle in front of it. Big Mac walks over it and trips.
"Whoa!" he yells. Soon, he's plastered with mud. Fluttershy and Big Mac stare at each other and start to laugh.
"Curses! Why must they always laugh at each others flaws!" Discord growls, "Never mind that trap, I've got better tricks up my sleeve" he snickers. Big Mac and Fluttershy continue their walk while Discord is on the roof of a building. He dumps birdseed over the couple and pigeons start to gather.
"Awww look, pigeons!" Fluttershy cheers, but Big Mac doesn't have the same reaction. Birds start to swarm around, so Big Mac tries to run away.
"Get lost! Go away! Mmph!" Big Mac had gotten pigeon feathers in his mouth, but continued running.
"Ha! Try catching your boyfriend now, Fluttershy!" Discord sneers, "Ha Ha- WHA?!". Fluttershy had started to sing which somehow gathered all the pigeons, including the ones that were chasing Big Mac.
"I know you birds are hungry, but me and my boyfriend are in the middle of a date." she tells them. She doesn't even need to finish the sentence because the pigeons had flown away. Fluttershy runs up to Big Mac who is covered in birdseed, mud, and feathers.
"Thanks" Big Mac thanks spitting out a few feathers.
"Teehee, you look kind of like a bird" giggled Fluttershy. Big Mac growled.
"Pigeons!" he muttered under his breath, but continued walking. Next, Discord had dug a hole."So the caterpillar said to the turtle-AHHHH!" screamed Big Mac as he fell into the hole. Fluttershy started to panic.
"Big Mac!" she called out.
"Down here!" he shouted from the hole. Fluttershy turned around and saw the huge hole in the ground. She tore of a branch from a tree and lowered it into the hole.
"Grab on to this!" Fluttershy shouted. Fluttershy suddenly felt a great force grab on to the branch. She manages to get Big Mac up half way, but he climbs the rest of the way.
"Phew, thanks" Big Mac breathes. Fluttershy nods her 'your welcome'.
"So what was that "Big Surprise"?" she asks.
"Close your eyes" Big Mac asks. Fluttershy closes her eyes. When she opens them she gasps with happiness. It was a park with a little picnic table, a lake, and some animals.
"I love it! I love it so much!" she gasps and gives Big Mac a big hug. After they ate, Fluttershy asked a question.
"Big Mac have you ever kissed or been kissed by anybody?". The question gets Big Mac to choke on his food.
"Nope" he responds.
"Have you ever wanted to be kissed?" Fluttershy asks him. This question gets Big Mac to blush.
"eeeyup" he whispers.
"Would you like to be kissed now?" Fluttershy asks.
"nope" he answers starting to tear up "See, I'm nervous and....*sniff* If we feel this way about each other...*sniff* then I-if something happens to o-one of us....*sniff* the other will be alone an-and h-heartbroken..*sniff* that's what happened wh-when m-my f-father..*sniff* died.....*sniff* m-my mom *sniff* committed*sniff* *sniff* suicide" he cries.
"Oh, you poor thing. Come here" Fluttershy murmurs, hugging Big Mac. Big Mac continued to cry in her arms. Soon, Fluttershy started to sing.
"**Hush now my little darling don't worry your little head. I will make all your worries wash away**" she sang, "**Don't be mad or sad just be happy and glad, just don't worry... it'll be okay**". Big Mac started to smile and wiped away his tears.
"*sniff* Thanks Fluttershy" he says.
"Your welcome, and just remember no matter what happens, I'll always be right here" Fluttershy responds, putting her hand over Big Mac's heart. Big Mac places his hands over Fluttershy's heart.
"And I'll be there too" he replied smiling, "I'm just...nervous" he mumbles.
"I was nervous when I was first kissed and "Discord" was nervous too" Fluttershy admits. Big Mac gulps and goes pale.
"So, y-you want to kiss me?" Big Mac sputters. Fluttershy blushes and nods. "Okay, we can kiss" Big Mac mutters smiling, who is secretly eager too. Fluttershy and Big Mac draw close to one another, but then Big Mac stands up and takes of his suit, his undershirt, and his shoes and socks. "You'll have to catch me first!" he shouts. Running towards the lake with only his pants, Big Mac jumps into the lake and swims away. Fluttershy laughs and takes off a part of her dress turning it into a skirt.
"Thanks Rarity" she whispers under her breath as she bolts toward the water. When she's in the water, she can't find Big Mac. She is suddenly pulled under the water. She panics until she realizes it's Big Mac pretending to a shark.
"Grrrr!" he grumbles under the water. Fluttershy squealed playfully and swam away with Big Mac on her tail. They ran around the park like little kids. Big Mac climbed over the table and leaped, but he missed. Fluttershy was in front of him and taunted him. They both bolted around the park. Fluttershy had never had this much fun in her life!
"Maybe he is the one!" she whispers. Big Mac was searching the park for Fluttershy, who tackled him into the grass. The two of them were just laughing their heads off when Discord caught up with them.
"Oh no" he whispered to himself.
"I caught you" Fluttershy teases. Big Mac started to sputter.
"Are we really going to do th-mmm" he is cut off by Fluttershy's lips hitting his. Fluttershy felt her face burn, she felt so happy that she didn't want to stop. When their lips separated Big Mac looked as red as an apple. Fluttershy pulled out a box inside were two heart necklaces.
"I bought these, they show a person's emotion toward their girlfriend or boyfriend" handing one to Big Mac. They both put them on. The silver hearts turned dark red. "That means we really, really like each other" she explains. She winces when she feels Big Mac's lips on hers again. Discord is fuming in the bushes.
"That's it! Time for EXTREME measures!" he growls.
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