Runaway Rainbow

This is my first story, and it's absolutely CRAP.

I'm cancelling this and fully rewriting it, plot and everything.

Won't be out for a couple of months...

Sorry guys...

It was too fast paced as well...

-Phantom

Here's what I wrote of chapter 4:

Twilight frantically paced around the area where her old tree home, The Golden Oaks Library, used to be, as the only remains of it were quarter of the bottom of it and ashes surrounding it. Since Tierek was defeated, the library had been cleaned up, but it kept disintegrating and they couldn't keep up with wiping all of it away each and every single day.

Her friends were starting to worry about the purple princess, she had been at this for hours now. It was already almost time for lunch, and most of Ponyville was starting to get suspicious at the sudden disappearance of the rainbow maned Pegasus. No pony actually knew of what happened, or where she had disappeared to. Even Spitfire was clueless, and they were the ponies who disappeared in the first place. Even Vinyl only knew the slightest information, that she had gone with Spitfire up the mountains to go save Soarin, as he had suddenly vanished over night as well.