Changing For The Better

by BumblingBee

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life
Length: 2664

On the anniversary of a terrible day a mare finds a small filly, lost and alone. But what kind of challenges will this filly have to face as she grows up?

On the anniversary of a terrible day a mare, Day Dream, finds a small filly, lost and alone. Being the kind pony she is, she takes in the filly as her own. But what kind of challenges will this "unique" filly be forced to face as she grows up. And will she get through them?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-03-08 15:01:16 UTC

Chapter 1

On a bright and warm day there was a family, all curled up together in the shade of a tree. Mother, Father and daughter were curled up together happily, all fast asleep. The daughter, Umber Sky, was the first to awaken. She blinked a few times, smiling happily as she nuzzled against her sleeping mother. Though the white mare did not awaken at the barely noticeable touch of the filly. Umber Sky looked to her Father, who was protectively curled around his wife. She clambered out of her Mother’s loving hold and walked closer to her father. “Daddy! Wake up!” she said happily, yet softly. The stallion’s eyes half opened and a sleepy smile appeared on his face.

“Hello Umber.” he said quietly, momentarily glancing at the still sleeping mare.

“Daddy let’s play a game!!” the filly begged excitedly. Knight Watch sighed, shutting his eyes again for a moment. “I’m still very tired sweetie, maybe in a few minutes.” He suggested. Having only just awoken from his nap, he wasn’t completely ready to play with his energetic foal. Umber pouted, but murmured an ‘okay’. She walked a few steps away and sat down, looking up at the sky and watching the few wispy clouds pass them. Knight Watch smiled and his eyes slowly began to shut again as he listened to the steady breathing of his wife, Day Dream.

Umber Sky looked back at her parents and sighed. It was quite apparent that they had no plans to get up and play anytime soon. The small white filly looked around, searching for something to do. Her eyes fell upon the forest not far behind them. She’d been told about this forest of course, it was known as the Everfree forest. And she had definitely been warned about the dangers it held. Though the filly began to wonder. ‘How bad can it be if we had a picnic so close to it?’

She looked back at her parents. After confirming that they were definitely asleep again, the filly began to slowly trot towards the forest. Though the closer she got the more worried she felt. Standing at the edge of the forest, she stared into the darkness. Her ears were pressed against her head as she considered going back to her parents. ‘No, it’s fine. I’m not a baby. I’m a brave pony.’ she told herself, stepping forwards. The foal began walking into the darkness of the Everfree Forest.

Day Dream was awoken with a start when she heard a high pitched scream. She lifted her head quickly and looked around. She saw her husband, who was now also awake, but not her daughter. “Umber?!” she cried in a panic. “Umber!” she shouted, standing up. Her husband also stood up and he shouted out for their daughter alongside the pegasus.

“Momma! Daddy!” A voice cried. Day Dream turned to the source of the sound. She knew that voice, it was her daughter’s. “Umber!” She shouted, galloping as quickly as she could towards the source of the noise. Knight Watch galloped after the mare. Eventually the couple had to stop at the edge of the forest. Day Dream glanced along the edge of the tree line, her soft pink mane being swept up by a sudden breeze. “Umber?!” Knight Watch shouted. She could hear the panic in her partner’s voice. It matched her own. “Da-” the filly began. For a flicker of a second she was in sight, galloping towards the safety of daylight. Though she was cut off, followed by a sickening scream.

“Umber Sky?!” Day Dream shouted. There was no reply, not a single sound. “Umber!” she shouted again, though this time it was mixed with panic, fear and grief. Moon Watcher was struck with silence as the horrible truth dawned upon him. “Dreamy, come on.” he said softly, beginning to back away from the forest. “No!” the mare cried, tears running down her cheeks. “Umber!!” she cried again, beginning to gallop towards the forest. Knight Watch was, of course, in as much pain as Day Dream. But he couldn’t risk any dangers jumping out to them. He used his telekinesis to stop the mare. His magic held her in place, though she continued to try and run.

“Day Dream stop!” he shouted, tears running down his cheeks as he pulled her back. “It’s no use.” he said, struggling to talk due to the lump in his throat and the tears running down his cheeks. “She’s gone, Dreamy.” he whispered. He stopped using his magic, feeling that they were far enough away to stay safe for now. Day Dream fell into his embrace, crying onto his shoulder. Knight Watch cried alongside her, holding her close.

That had been exactly a year ago now. Day Dream stood by the edge of the forest, not caring about the rain soaking her coat, mane and tail. She stared silently into the darkness. For the first few weeks after losing Umber Sky, Day Dream would return to the forest each and everyday, hoping and praying with all her might that by some miracle the filly would walk out and into her arms. Though that day never came and after a month, Day Dream gave up. Both she and her husband mourned their daughter still, though not as openly as they used to. The couple had eventually returned to work, treating life normally. Though their loss still plagued their thoughts, every day.

Day Dream had hoped her husband would have been able to join her, but he had not been able to get out of work for this day, no matter how hard he’d tried.

So there she was, a mare who had once dreamed of having a happy family. After the loss of Umber Sky, Day Dream and Knight Watch hadn’t had any more children. Whether it was the fear of losing any other children or not wanting to feel as though they were replacing Umber was unknown to them. The couple didn’t speak often. Knight Watch was normally about to leave for work at the time Day Dream got up and he didn’t get home until very late, as Day Dream was headed to bed.

Her spouse had never brought up their daughter and in return she stayed quiet. The few times they did find themselves in conversation they didn’t have much to say. They would exchange light conversation, about how work had been and how they were that day. Recently Day Dream felt her husband had become no more than an acquaintance and that broke the pegasus’ heart. She had dearly loved her husband and wanted to believe she still did.

Day Dream sighed heavily. She turned to leave and began walking away from the forest. Though the cloud coloured mare stopped when she heard a rustling. She flinched at the sudden sound and slowly turned. Her pale pink eyes scanned the edge of the forest, though she saw nothing. The mare shook her head, telling herself it was just her imagination. A sudden fierce breeze blew her mane back, brushing against her face momentarily. The wind pushed Day Dream back a couple of steps. She grimaced as the wind seemed to push her back towards the forest. She turned around quickly, hoping that maybe she would see any lurking dangers this way. Though as the wind and rain battered against her, she saw a bush rustling.

At first she assumed it was simply the wind, but every few moments a movement came from that area that didn’t seem quite right. The mare carefully approached the shrub and peered between the thickly intertwined branches. At first she saw nothing, but after a moment Day Dream saw a flash of light blue. She jumped back for a moment, but soon peered back through the thin branches. She soon realised that they were eyes, but not like the eyes of a normal pony. They were all blue, no iris or pupil, just plain blue all the way over. Thought they seemed to be slightly paler towards the middle of the eye.

The pegasus quickly pulled the branches aside and was shocked to see what was tangled up in the shrubbery...

Chapter 2

Chapter 2

Tangled up in the shrubbery was what appeared to be a small filly. Though she definitely didn’t seem like any normal pony, or at least none like Day Dream had seen. The most notable differences were the curved horn and insect like wings, reflectionless eyes and a hard shell exterior as opposed to a fur coat and holes in her legs and webbed mane and tail.

Day Dream jumped back in surprise, but quickly leaned back down. The small creature looked up at her with wide eyes. The white pegasus looked around, confused and searching to see if there was any creatures here like it, although she saw none. The rain continued to fall furiously against her.

She gently reached a hoof towards the creature, but stopped when the small filly moved away. “I’m not going to hurt you, it’s okay.” Day Dream spoke softly. The smaller equine cautiously leaned back towards Day Dream’s hoof, but leaned a little too far and stumbled forwards a few steps. Day Dream smiled at the innocent filly. “Let’s get you out of there.” she said, pulling the branches far enough apart for the filly to clamber out.

Once the insect like equine had untangled herself from the thorny plant the mare let go of the branches and looked around once more. “Where did you come from?” she wondered out loud. A flash of lightning erupted from the sky, startling both of them. The small creature quickly jumped behind Day Dream’s foreleg, deciding that the unfamiliar mare was currently safer than the storm raging above them.

The pegasus looked down at the filly and sighed. ‘I can’t leave her out here...’ she decided. Quickly she swept the filly onto her back and began galloping away from the forest. She charged through the storm and back towards town, the filly clinging on to the mare so she didn’t fall from her back.

Once they arrived in Ponyville Day Dream slowed to a trot. The streets were empty as by now everypony had retreated indoors  to hide from the sudden storm. Soon enough the two arrived back at Day Dream’s home. Once they were safe inside the warm the mare knelt down so that the filly could safely hop off of her back.

She stood up straight again once the filly had sat down on the carpeted floor. Day Dream went upstairs and grabbed some blankets and towels. She dried herself off and went back downstairs. The filly was in the same place she’d been before Day Dream went to retrieve towels and blankets. She smiled seeing the sleepy filly, curled up contentedly. The pegasus approached the filly and draped a blanket over her gently before lying down on the rug, close to the smaller equine.

Day Dream had never seen a pony like this, and decided that in the morning she would try to find some information on what the little filly could be. She began to drift off and was soon fast asleep, the rain still pouring down outside.

About an hour later the front door was pushed open as Knight Watch entered. The rain had stopped just before he left work so luckily he wasn’t soaked through and through like his wife had been. He looked over to the rug, noticing his wife curled up, fast asleep. A small smile appeared on his face, though it faltered when he saw a smaller shape, covered by a blanket.

    Knight Watch stepped towards Day Dream, his hooves clicking against the wooden floor louder than he’d expected and awakening the mare. Day Dream’s head lifted swiftly and she immediately reached out, pulling the small shape under the blankets closer to her. But the mare relaxed when she saw it was only her husband.

    “Are you okay Dreamy?” he asked. Day Dream nodded and smiled, standing up.

    “Yes, sorry, you scared me a little bit there.” she explained. Knight Watch apologized but the mare brushed it off, telling him it was alright. “So Day Dream, what’s under the blankets?” he asked, raising an eyebrow.

    Day Dream suddenly smiled. “Well, I was at the edge of the forest and you’ll never guess what I found-” she was cut off when the small filly woke up, pushing the blanket off of her as best as she could. Knight Watch caught sight of her and jumped in front of Day Dream protectively, his horn glowing as he prepared to defend his wife.

    “How did a changeling get in here?!” he asked, his voice low and slightly aggressive. Day Dream frowned, confused. “Changeling? So that’s what she is!” the mare thought out loud. Knight Watch glanced back at the mare, frowning. “Dreamy, what happened when you went to the forest?” he asked.

    “I found this little filly, she was tangled up in the bushes and was so scared. I couldn’t just leave her out there.” The pegasus confessed. She spoke in a soft and suddenly timid voice, one that made her other half regret shouting.

“Dreamy, Changelings are very, very dangerous. That… thing… can’t stay here!” the stallion told her sternly.

    Day Dream frowned and stepped back, as if protecting the small creature. “Knight she’s just a foal. She wouldn’t be able to hurt anypony at her age. We could raise her to behave, to act like a normal pony-” The unicorn spoke up before she could finish.

    “Raise it?? Dreamy, changelings aren’t like ponies, they’re different.” He tried to explain. “They’re nothing but useless trouble makers!” This earned a stern glare from the pale pegasus pony. “That’s how they’re raised, if we raise her then she’ll know how to act in a pony society.” Knight Watch flattened his ears against his head and looked anywhere but at his wife. His eyes settled upon the changeling foal, who had retreated mostly underneath the pile of blankets.

“Now, we can raise her together, as a family. Or I can go, taking her with me and raise her on my own.” she spoke in a voice Knight hadn’t heard for a long time. He sighed.

“Fine. She can stay. But as soon as she begins to destroy this town I will be taking her back to the Everfree forest.” he said, standing up straight again. Day Dream flicked her tail in a slightly annoyed fashion. She turned and sat back down next to the filly, lifting her out of the blankets and cradling her gently.

Knight Watch grumbled in a low tone and walked towards the kitchen, only half listening to Day Dream speak to the changeling.

“Do you have a name little one?” the white pegasus asked. The changeling looked up at her for a moment before slowly shaking her head. “Hm, you seem to understand what I’m saying… can you speak?” she asked. The filly took a moment to process Day Dream’s sentence before shaking her head again. Day Dream smiled softly. “Well, don’t you worry. We’ll teach you.” she reassured the filly.

“Now, what should we name you?” Day Dream wondered aloud, tapping a hoof against her chin.

“How about Jinx, since I’m sure I’m jinxing Ponyville by letting her stay.” Knight Watch mumbled.

“Jinx… That’s it! Jinx sounds like a wonderful name for you, little one.” Day Dream said happily. Apparently ‘Jinx’ was all she’d heard.

So that was that. ‘Jinx’ was to stay with the family, until further notice. Knight Watch really didn’t like this idea, at all. But, he knew his wife had felt a sense of emptiness and uselessness after Umber Sky was taken by the forest. Maybe keeping the foal would satisfy the maternal instincts Day Dream had.

‘Please let this all be okay.' Knight Watch hoped, watching as the pegasus went upstairs with the changeling.