SPIDER-MAN: Broken Destiny

by optimusprime142

Chapter 11: Spider-mane no more (Kind of)

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His blood was now boiling, so he waited until she closed the door to shoot up.

“YOU LITTLE… I WARNED YOU CELESTIA WARNED YOU AND YET YOU STILL TRY,   YOUR NOT GETTING MY BUCKING BLOOD”

“Y-Your not supposed to be awake!” she could tell he was mad

“Were taking this to your dad.” She got a evil grin after a quiet swing, they arrived at her house and once he knocked he was pulled inside and punched with a hoof to the ground

“My. fillie. Always. Gets. What. She. WANTS, first im gonna kill you. Then im gonna force the elements out of town. And finally ill have that apple blank flank’s name changed TO BLANK FLANK!” he was then webbed and beaten on by peter.

“You think this is about you? Or your little brat of a fillie?! Theres more to life then that! I thought being a dad, you could see that. Guess I was wrong.” By the time he finished that sentence, he had a fractured snout and a black eye                         .

“Go call the hospital. Im done here.” Once he got home,  twilight, fluttershy, applejack, pinkie pie and rarity looked rather angry

“Whats the problem?” Twilight basically shouted

“your attitudes the problem! You’ve been getting more and more aggressive each day! If you don’t get you act together , I will make you find your own house.” That’s when everyone started yelling at him after a few minutes he had enough.

“STOP YELLING AT ME!!” the five ponies didn’t realize until after he stormed out the house that they took it a bit far and waited for him to come back.

“Everything always goes wrong in my super hero life…. Well no more. Im Spider-mane no more.” He threw the suit in the dumpster and walked back home.

“Listen pete we-“

“Don’t bother.” He just stormed to his room and locked the door.

“Uh, pete. Theres a robbery at rarity’s shop, I think they need spider-mane.”

“I threw the costume away. Im done playing hero, DONE getting yelled at AND DONE GETTING NEARLY KILLED!”

“Peter I will ram this door off its hinges if you don’t open this door!”

“Go ahead. See if I care.” She stayed true to her word and rammed it down.

“PETER, WE NEED YOU RIGHT NOW” she slapped him across the face

“OW, that hurt! Fine ill go save her dumb shop.” He left to the same dumpster he left the suit at and thankfully it was still there. He sluggishly put it back on and swung to the scene.

“Alright im here. Whos the culprit?

“We don’t know he wont come out.”

“Fine ill find him.” He went inside to find out it was diamond tiaras father.

“thought you learned your lesson by now “Old man”.” The one voice he was dreading to hear.

“No. NO! Not you!” He made a run for it but peter webbed  pulled him and drug him outside

“here.” He tossed him towards the officers and swung back home.

“Im back.. guys?  The lights were  off so he assumed something was wrong, then pinkie jumped in his face and yelled

“SURPRISE”  He jumped back at the sudden shock. Then the lights came on and practically everyone he knew was in the library

“we felt bad for yelling at you like we did so we threw a surprise party to cheer you up!” he started laughing, not a forced one. Just a casual easy going laugh.

“ You guys didn’t NEED to do this, I was coming back with some news, I know who robbed your bank rarity, it was diamond tiaras dad.”

“The same diamond tiara who picks on apple bloom and her friends?”

“yep, and when he started beating on me, he said he was going to drive you guys out of town. Among other cruel things. Have you guys seen rainbow I haven’t seen her since I” he quickly covered his mouth

“You havnt seen her since you did what?” they all asked he was now blushing

“I went to talk to her earlier and before I left I Kissed her….” A parade of “Awwwws” followed.

“Ooooh how was she, was she a good kisser?”

“It was only a quick kiss on the lips ok? Oh speak of the devil here she comes now! “ just as rainbow dash came through the door everypony asked her “What was it like kissing him?” “Was he a good kisser?“ she was confused until she saw peter standing there. Then she flushed.

“Im sorry, but im not entitled to answer these questions. Pete, outside please.” Once they were outside

“Why did you tell them that you kissed me? Now everyponys going to know by morning!”

“ it slipped out alright? I asked   if anyone had seen you.”

“Is it ironic that you were my first kiss?” Needless to say, they both blushed.

“No ,  but sorry to disappoint, but your not my first kiss. Ive kissed a few girls in my time hehe”

“You dirty dog!”

“What can I say? I was a girl magnet back on earth!’

“Well, it looks like I got caught in that magnet.” He was flushing.

“er.. I thought it was just a silly mare crush…”

“Thats an understatement pete. So, think you could continue being spidey?” She was batting her eyes.

“I made up my mind. There is no more Spider-mane.”

“Don’t say that! Ponyville needs y-“ Twiligth came galloping out.

“I just got a letter from celestia, someone was caught in a explosion of electricity!! He coul-

“Electricity?! Oh no.. no no no they cant handle this if whatI think was birthed from that explosion! I can barely handle electro as a human, and he was birthed from a SMALL explosion!” He quickly went to change but stopped before putting on the mask.

“Peter? Can I come in?” Dash was peeking through the door.

“yeah sure.”

“Whatre you waiting for, Put the mask on and start Fighting!”

“Im not sure if I should, im tired of these endeavor- OW” She slapped him like twilight did.

“Your being such a foal, being a hero isn’t about how much you get hurt or how many times you get yelled at, its about keeping everypony safe! And making sure there happy! So are you gonna stand here and sulk or are you going to go out there and KICK BUTT?!” He waited a minute before putting the mask on and making a web microphone. He quickly swung towards where the explosion was.

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