A New Pony of Generosity

by PegaWriter

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Comedy
Length: 565

Coco Pommel becomes the Element of Generosity

After Rarity learns she won the show in Manehattan, she is visited by none other than Manhatten’s most famous fashion designer, Showlight. He wants to hire her for a permanent position as his company, an offer that doesn’t come to just anypony. With her friends urging, Rarity accepts the position, but realizes that without her around who will help be the Element of Generosity and take care of her store?

Suddenly, it dawns on her. There is only one pony she can trust, some sort of instinct maybe but she will do.

(( Adopted fanfic idea from The Rated Ponystar ))

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-02-10 04:22:15 UTC

Chapter 1- Generosity

I trotted across the room happily, Freedom!, my glorious thoughts sang. Freedom from Suri!, my hooves felt light as air as I glided across my hotel room. That evil mare had consumed my life for too long now, and I had so much to do. I could do anything!

"Oh my Celestia! Just think, all the dresses I could make! I, I could even open my own line!" I thought out loud, my ecstatic voice cheering proudly. "Oh there's so much time left here in Manehatten. I have 3 more days, don't I? Maybe I could go shopping! Oh, there's so much more to here then Trottingham."

Trottingham. My eyes widened, When Mother and Father hear about this! They'll be so proud that I will finally be on my own! I continued my trotting and bouncing as I twirled some scrap fabric in my hooves. The small flower in my mane flew out, snapping me back from my trance.

"If I'm to go out I should make myself presentable." I mumbled as I lifted my blue brush in my hoof. I softly pulled on my light blue mane, Why are there so many knots? Ugh...

A sudden knock came on the door.

"Who is it?" I practically sung to the door.

"Rarity, darling!~"

"Oh!" I smiled and put the brush down, it looked good enough. "Come in, Rarity! The door's open!~"

The white unicorn mare trotted in brightly, her perfectly styled mane trailing softly behind her. She was holding an average sized box, with a large purple gem adorning the top. I was quite curious as to the contents of it, but deciding against asking, should I sound rude.

"Coco! Darling, I have something I'd like to speak with you about." She set the box down on the bed and put a hoof on my shoulder.

"Do you think we can discuss it over lunch? I was just about to head out." I smiled at her.

"Sounds wonderful darling! I know just the place~"

We trotted out the door happily.

"So dear, what I had to ask you..."

"Hm?" I squeaked while sipping my glass of water.

"I would like to give you Carousel Boutique."

I gagged and spat the water in my mouth. "W-WHAT?"

Rarity shot me a mischievous grin as she wiped the water off her coat.

"And more importantly darling-"

"More?!"

"-I would like you to take over my place as the Element of Generosity."

If I had anymore water in my mouth I would have spit it again. Me? An Element of Harmony? I must have heard her wrong.

"I'm sorry Rarity, I must have heard you wrong. Can you repeat that?"

"I would like you to take over my place as the Element of Generosity. You see, Showlight-"

"The Showlight?" My eyes widened. Did she really mean-

Rarity smiled and squeed. "Yes! He asked me if I could be a permanent part of his company!"

"Oh, Rarity I'm so happy for you!"

"Yes, isn't it amazing! But anyway, I realized that nopony could take of the Boutique with me gone, or wield the Element of Generosity! Or even more importantly, take care of Sweetie Belle..."

"Who?"

"Oh, Sweetie Belle? She's my little sister."

"Oh, I didn't know you had a sister."

"You didn't? Well, she's absolutely lovely, and quite sweet-" She shuck her head, "Nothing