True Elements of Harmony

by Doctor Octavo

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Zecora, Alternate Universe, Main 6, Trixie, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Romance, Derpy Hooves, Sex
Length: 9675

This is a story of how no matter what, no one pony can truly go it alone.

As time goes on and on the decisions of one pony doesn't just effect that one, but effects all ponies. This is a story of how one fateful morning lead to the grand change to Equestria and how doomed it is. And how it happened all in one day.

(This is my first time writing anything by the way)

Published 2012-05-07 06:34:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-13 04:12:40 UTC

Chapter 1: In to the Twilight

"Oh yeah!" Rainbow Dash hollered as her Wonderbolt clock struck 6:50. Celestia's sun was just peeking above the horizon as the cool spring breeze flowed though the land. She quickly grabbed her saddle bags and rushed out the door of her cloud house and speed towards Twilight's house. Dash would of left sooner but she wanted give time for Twilight to wake up a bit before she came over. Not only that, but the library doesn't open until 7:00.

She speed though the sky letting the damp cool air rush past her. This feeling and the rush of the wind around her only made her even more excited. "Todays the day!" Dash thought "The new Daring Do book comes out today and I'm going to be the first to get one to get a copy" Within Moments she had reached Ponyvile and glided to the ground to walk the rest of the way. Knowing that even tho she is the best flier in all of Equestria she tends to get a bit sloppy when she is over excited.
The town seemed so dark, quiet, and peaceful. As she walked onward she thought of what was going to happen when she reached Twilight's place.

"I hope she doesn't mind that I came over this early." Dash mumbled to her self. Just then she saw a familiar pony with a pink mane exiting Sugar Cube Conner. "Fluttershy?" Dash called out in a confused tone. " Fluttershy squeaked and shot of into the sky. Before Dash could say another word she was to far away. "Good ol flutter shy, only fast when she thinks shes in danger." Dash said with a smirk. She continued her way and with a few lefts and rights later she finally reached Twilight's house.

Dash tried to open the door but it was locked. "She still must be getting ready to open I guess" She said to her self. She paced around a bit until She noticed that Twilight's bedroom window was slightly open and a dim light was coming from it. " I wander if something is wrong" Dash thought to herself. She placed her bags by the door and flew up to the window, quietly opened it and entered.

She looked around the room and noticed Twilight at her desk huddled in a blanket seeming to be shivering and mumbling things to her self. Dash took this as the perfect time to prank her friend. She tip hoofed slowly over Twilight. As she got closer and closer she could hear Twilights mumbling more clearly

"ooh ..sh. right there"

"What in Celestia's name" Dash thought.

"Rain... bow...daaaashhh"

Hearing her name in such a way made her face start to get hotter and hotter as she pressed forward.

"Faster Dash... I know you can go faster."

Dash started to feel her body tense up. She had to know what Twilight was doing now. She then got close enough to see what Twilight was looking at... "It's a picture of me in the shower" Dash thought to herself as she put her hooves up to her face to halt her gasp. "Why would she have that... How did she get that?"

Twilight moaned once more and her horn began to light up and Dash realized what was going on, causing her wings to burst open making a loud *Pomf*.

Twilight then snapped around to see what the noise was to find her Rainbow colored friend starring at her. This caused her to loose focus on her spell causing it to explode sending Dash into one of Twilight's personal book shelves.

Twilight then ran over to Dash who was covered in books "OMIGOSH OMIGOSH OMIGOSH!" Twilight panicked " Are you alright Rainbow? Can you hear me?"

"Yea Twi... I'm fine don't worry" Dash said as she popped out of the pile of fallen books.

"Good! Because I wanted to make sure you could understand me while I YELL AT YOU!" Snapped Twilight.

"Wha?" Dash said with shocked face.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE DASH!" Twilight screamed.

Dash looked up at Twilight and couldn't tell if her face was red with embarrassment or rage.

"What kind of pony sneaks into others home and scares them half to death.

"Well I didn't mean to Twi, Honest, I just came over to get the new Daring Do book."

"What! Are you crazy? It's 5:00 in the morning!"

"I could of sworn that its was almost 7:00 when I left my hose" Dash thought to her self.

"Do you know how rude it is to come into other ponies houses like that? They could be..." She paused before she made a foal of her self."

"Let me guess" Said Dash with a sly grin. "Studying" she said while quoting the air with her hooves.

"Tha-thats not the point" Twilight growled " What we all do on our own time, in our own homes is..."

Before Twilight could continue Dash leaped forward and locked lips with the lavender pony. As Dash pressed forward Twilight's rage seemed to melt away.

Twilight thought for a moment to either break the kiss and continue her lecture or just go with what is happening. She then realized this is something shes been waiting for and decided not to ruin it and return the kiss. A few moments pass and the kiss broke and the two mares stared in to each others eyes.

"I uhh I-I" Twilight spurted out "Dash"

"Don't worry about it." Dash said smoothly "Lots of ponies have pictures of those they admire" Dash blushed. "Even pictures like yours"

"I-I can explain." Twilight stuttered.

"No need Twi." Dash said "Some how I knew you where going to be one of my biggest fans"

Twilight blushed "So you don't think I'm weird?" Twilight asked.

"Not at all. I thought you were cute when I first saw you." Dash said with a cocky attitude. "Cute for an Egghead thaattitudet is"

"Is That why you crashed into me?" Twilight said giving Dash a seductive look."

"You got me" replied Dash "I was too busy staring at the fine flank of yours to realize what were I was going."

The two then returned to there kiss but this time it was much deeper. Dash's tongue entered Twilight's mouth and started to explore only to be met with hers doing the same.

Dash then felt Twilight pushing her up and on to her hind legs bringing them closer and closer until there bodies touched. She also started to fell a wetness start to form between her hunches. As they kissed Dash felt the sensation of falling backwards and a sudden thud. Twilight had pushed her on to her back and is now on top of her still locked into the deep kiss.

Twilight then broke the kiss this time. "You have no idea how long I've waited for a moment like this." She said as she started to rub her body against Dash's.

"Oh really" Dash answered as she stared into Twilight's violet eyes. " the question is, what are you going to do with that moment now that you have it pinned down?"

"Oh I can think of a few things" Twilight said as she buried her muzzle into Dash's neck. She planted a few kisses followed by a few nips causing Dash to moan. She then continued her barrage of affection down Dash's chest, to her belly, finally ending between her haunches.

Dash began to slightly bite on one her wings in anticipation of what is to come. She couldn't believe that, not only one of her best friend was this into her, but what that friend was about to do to her. Dash began to think that this was the best and most random thing that has happened to her.

Twilight started to lick the inside of Dash's thigh with long but slow strides, getting closer and closer to Dasha's hot spot.
Dash couldn't help but giggle at the feel of Twilight soft tongue going across her body.

"I wander what will happen if I do this?" She said as she placed her tongue at the bottom of Dash's spot. Before Dash could respond Twilight took a nice long lick on her main point.

Dash's body jolted upward and her eyes shot wide open "Da!-Celsti...yaaahahaaa." Dash cried. She couldn't believe that a simple lick would cause such a reaction to her. Was it because she hasn't had any in a while or was it just the fact that it was Twilight doing this to her.

Twilight continued to lick, as Dash's breath grew deeper and filled with moans and curses. Twilight almost wanted to tell her to stop that and that cursing was wrong and immature. But she decided not to. Instead it made her feel more in control and dominate, knowing shes causing the Rainbow colored Pegasus to cry out her mind in pure pleasure.

Dash's mind was racing so fast she could of sworn that it could do a sonic rainboom... Twice! Several times Dash's tried to speak only to have odd gibberish and moans come out. The licks became deeper and deeper as they went on. Sometimes Twilight's licks would cause her to flap her wings violently, sometimes it felt ticklish and she would let out a giggle or two.
As Twilight worked her magic with her mouth she also started to rub Dash's belly and sides with her hooves. Starting with small circles and growing into to lager ones.

Dash squeaked at the feeling of having a belly rub as one of her hind legs started to twitch.
Twilight looked up after giving Dash one more long deep lick with an audible smack. Looks like my little Rainbow likes having her tummy rubbed.

"Uhh-Huuu" Dash moaned while her tongue hung out her mouth.

"I think I know something else you might like as well" Twilight said as she returned to where she was at. she then placed her mouth over Dash's hot spot.

"But we already did..."

Twilight's tongue plunged deep into dash causing the Pegasus to almost come immediately.

"WHA HA HIYA" Dash screamed as she reached down to hold her friends head.

Twilight then continued to thrust her tongue into dash repeatedly as Dash's moans became louder and louder

"Twi... T... IW... Light!" Dash muttered, pleasure rushing threw her "TWILIGHT!"

With one last plunge, Dash reached her limit and came, letting out a loud cry.

Twilight's face was covered in her friends love and continued to lick Dash's spot.

Dash just laid there and basked in the after glow quivering from time to time as Twilight enjoyed her reward.

Just then the door opened and Twilight's face became that of pure horror.

"TWILIGHT!?!" screamed a familiar voice.

"Oh no... I forgot about him" Twilight gasped and she quickly lifted her head, muzzle still covered in Dash's love.

"Whats the meaning of this?" the voice said again. "Is... Is that Rainbow Dash?"

Dash just stared at the celling , panting, completely oblivious to the world around her.

Twilight slowly moved head to see who had found them out. Much to her hopes sadly, it was someone she didn't want to see this. "Oh umm hi... Big Brother."

Chapter 2: A Friend in Need

Near the Everfree Forest lay a small little cottage. Within it laid several small animals, snuggled in there bed and dreaming. All except one small puff of white hair. Angle looked fiercely and the clock. Tick... Tock... Tick... Tock... Hes was up all night just starring at the cock. The clock read 3:49. A few seconds later and the clock stuck 3:50 and Angel Leaped in to action. He actually more like tiptoed into Fluttershy's room and nudged her awake. Fluttershy's eyes burst open as Angel shoved his paw into her mouth to stop the scream he knew she would do. A few moments pass and Fluttershy nodded and the bunny removed his paw.

"Thank you Angel" Fluttershy spoke in her soft sweet voice. "Is it already time."

The bunny the pointed at the clock witch now read 3: 30.

"Thank you for waking me a little early so I can get ready, but do you think 30 minuets is a tinny bit much?" Fluttershy said as she got up from her bed. She tip hoofed around the house gathering things for her little outing.

The bunny then quickly look at the clock again and rubbed his eyes. He could of sworn it changed.

She put a few items here and there into her saddle bags and she headed for the door outside. Just before going out angel hopped over to Fluttershy and gave her leg a hug.

"Oh don't worry Angel" Fluttershy reassured the bunny. "I will only be gone a few nights and I'm sure you'll like you sitter." With that she quietly left.

Luna's moon was still out and the cold air seemed to bite at her wings causing them to shiver. She then wondered if what she was about to do was worth it. She then bonked her self on the head

"Get a hold of your self Fluttershy" she growled at herself.

She hasn't missed one of her "meetings" ever since they started and she wasn't going to now. With a new burst of determination she pressed forward to ponyvile. More importantly, Sugar Cube Corner.
As she reached the large candy like building, time seemed to get slower. When she finally reached the door she knocked on it via a special code. Two knocks, then four, then two again. She waited a few moments and the door opened revealing a odd looking Pinkie Pie.

Her mane flowed downward over half her face devoid of any of the poof it usually has. Her coat also seemed to be that of a darker pink as well. "Oh hi Fluttershy" said pinkie in a monotone voice. "Come on in..."

"So what are we going to do tonight Pinkie" asked Fluttershy as she entered.

Pinkie stared at fluttershy with a dark glassed look. "were doing the same thing we do every time this night comes." Said Pinkie. "Make Cupcakes"

Fluttershy nodded "you have him downstairs right?" she asked.

"Yes... Hes still in one piece but I don't know how much longer he can go" Pinkie said with a bit of worry in her voice "He was one of the fun ones"

Fluttershy walked over to the pink pony and put her fore leg around her. "Don't worry. If he were to break on us I know where we can get a new one." She said in a dark seductive tone. "Nice, big, strong, and FULL of spunk.

Pinkie looked softly into Fluttershy's eyes "Can... Can the next one be red?" she asked with a pleading tone.

"Well in fact I know of a certain big red stallion that would be perfect for the job."

Pinkie then leaned her head into Fluttershy's neck "Thank you."

"Hush now" Said Fluttershy as she started to lead her gloomy friend downstairs. "everything will be fine" As they descended down into the basement Fluttershy could see a dim red glow. It was bright enough to see but dark enough to not understand what your seeing. when they got to the bottom the looked into each others eyes.

"Fluttershy" Pinkie said looking as tho to burst into tears.

"Please don't cry" Fluttershy said as she leaned in close and gave her a kiss.

Pinkie returned the kiss and opened her mouth to invite Fluttershy's tongue.

As Fluttershy explored her friends mouth she could taste all sorts of sweets. This was one of her favorite things about Pinkie. her mouth always tasted good.

When the kiss broke Fluttershy nodded to a table in the middle of the room. "Shall we get started then."

Pinkie's ears twitched upward for just a split second. "Okki dokki" She said. "I'll go get Jack ready for you"

As Pinkie headed to another dark room Fluttershy walked into a small blocked off area to change in to some clothes. She put on some black latex socks, a black vest and, a black and pink caller with a Butterfly tag. She then walked back to the main room to find Pinkie laying on the table sucking on the Stallion hood end of a 8 inch strap-on.

"Almost got Jack ready for you" said Pinkie in a more excited manner. "Do you want me to put it on you now?"

Fluttershy nodded and climbed on to the table and stood right above Pinkie as she strapped the strap on to the yellow pony. She then lowered her body to once again to go into a deep kiss with the party pony.
While they were locked in the kiss Fluttershy maneuvered the toy near Pinkie's hot spot and started to nudge it. With each nudge Pinkie squeaked and pressed deeper into the kiss. As they conitnued pinkie's squeaks turned into whimpers and Fluttershy took this as the sign to move to the next part of there activities.

She slowly started to enter the stallion hood into pinkie inch by inch and return Pink let a long relieving moan. When she got around the 4 inch mark Fluttershy spread her wings wings open.

With a small grunt and a flap of her wings Fluttershy thrust the rest of toy deep into pinkie causing the earth pony throw back her head breaking the kiss, screaming "CUPCAKES!". After stopping for a moment to let Pinkie catch her barrings she counted to pump the toy in and out of her friend. With every pump Pinkie sang (more like screamed) the lyrics to her cupcake song.

Fluttershy had fun with this part because it made her feel like a DJ. She used the way she thrust to change the way Pinkie sang. slowing down or speeding up her thrusting would change the the tempo of the song. Grinding would make Pinkie hold a note and how she gridded would change the pitch of the note. The harder the thrust the louder the note. Fluttershy always wondered if this is how Scratch felt when she made music.

"All. Yo-u. Have TO do iiiis take a cuuuup of FLOWER" Pinkie sang as her expression became more and more lively. "Add it-to-the mix"

"I know what I could add the mix" thought Fluttershy.

"Now just a Little someTHING sweet, not Ssssour. A biiit of salt just a PINCH.

Fluttershy then started to speed up. "Almost there" She thought to her self.

"Baking these treats is Suuuuch a Ciiiinch. Add a teaspoon of Va-vanilla. Add a little.

Fluttershy then stopped "More?" she asked.

"YES! MORE MORE" Pinkie screamed

"Well then... A One.. A Two.. A One, Two.."

"count to. FOUR!" screamed Pinkie as Fluttershy continued to do more harder and harder thrust. "Cupcakes! Sooo Sweet and Tasty! Cupcakes! Don't be To hasty. Cupcakes! Cupcakes, cupcakes. "and in one final thrust Pinkie came screaming the final word as her main seemed to explode back into its normal Poofy state "CUUUPCAAAACKESSS!"

Exhausted from the workout she just did, Fluttershy took a few moments to catch her breath . She then looked down at the pink pony who had fallen asleep.

For the last few months around the time of the full moon Pinkie would get into a almost unliftable depression. When this happened Fluttershy would come over and stay with Pinkie for a few nights giving her a special treatment. Fluttershy first thought of it as more like a civil service to the town. What would ponyvile be like without there Hyper Active Pinkie Pie. But as time went on, a connection was made between the two and they have been together ever since.

Fluttershy quietly got off the table and headed up stairs to grab a small bite. Pinkie always let her get a snack after there activities. She went to the cupboard and took a small bag of cookies and munched on them for a bit.

Just then a knock happened at the door and Fluttershy let quick "Eeeep" and bolted behind the counter. "Who i-is it?" She quietly cried out". the knock happened again. "I'm sorry but were not open yet" she said trying to pass of as one of the cakes. Once more they knocked. Fluttershy then realized that the knock was the secret code.

Only she knew the code. confused and scared she grabbed a frying pan and advanced to the door. "1... 2..." she reached for the door. "3!" she swung the door open and held the pan up like a shield. "Who are you!" but there was no response. she peeked over the pan to see that there was no one there. she then went out side closing the door behind her.

She then heard a voice call her out, causing her to panic and dash off into the sky. "That sounded like Rainbow Dash" she thought to her self. "It doesn't matter. I can't her know why I'm out this late... I guess I'll just have to wait a bit before returning to Sugar Cube Conner."

She landed in a Field to catch her breath before heading back to Pinkie's. Out of nowhere she started to hear a strange noise. Almost like gears but at the same time like some thing was breathing. Moments later a tall blue box appeared before Fluttershy causing her to faint.

Chapter 3: The Derpy in the rough

Celestia's sun was high in the sky as everyone's favorite bubbly gray Pegasus drifted about though Ponyvile. She didn't really have a set goal at the moment just like she really didn't have a set flight path to avoid the clock tower up ahead. Witch you could probably of guess she flew right into it.

After the crash, Derpy regained her composer and checked for any damage she might of caused only not really have found any. She only saw that the clock read 12:00. She then continued on her way to nowhere. As she flew away the clock stuck 11:59.

She flew down to the local cafe and sat at one of the outside tables to actually plan out her day. She didn't plan on staying much longer in ponyvile. She been traveling with a pony who called himself The Doctor. No one would believe her but she and him have been traveling though time and space in a ship called the TARDIS. Due to certain events tho, Derpy decided to take a bit of a break from all the misadventures and settle down a bit here in her own time.

She wasn't sure what she was going to do or where to go. She didn't work at the post office anymore and she wasn't sure if she could go back where she used to live in Cloudsdale. She wasn't sure what all the time traveling shes been doing has effected her current time line.

With a soft sigh she pulled over a news letter that was left on the table and started to read it. After reading for a bit she came across an add for a modeling job in Manehattan. "Maybe I can be a model." she giggle at her self. "If that weird yellow Pegasus could do then so could I." She dressed up several times during her adventures with the doctor, and she was complimented a lot for looking odd but cute. Lots of ponies said that her eyes marked her as a free spirit, to only go for what she truly believed in. But others mocked her and made her feel unwanted. "Well thats that!" She said aloud. "This is what I choose."

"Excuse me madam?" a voice called her "What do you choose?"

"This job right here!" Derpy said still focused on the news letter. "Cuz I remember this one time, I was eating a muffin by the lake and ummm I saw my reflection and I uhh I thought. Wow Derpy, your cute looking, you could do that as a career."

"Do what?"

"Be professionally cute looking" she said finally looking up and the other pony

A simple dark gray stallion with an even darker gray mane stood by her with a note pad in his hoof, stood before her. "I'm glad for you." said the waiter in an official tone "But what do you choose to order"

Derpy blushed. "OK... ummm how much is a... she stared at the menu with her one eye while the other spotted a bird trying to pick up a stick.

"May I suggest the Gourmet Banana Muffin" The waiter pony asked with a sly smile.

"Oh yes! very much please"

"The Muffin will cost 10 bits"

"Oh umm..." she checked her wallet, witch she kept tucked underneath her wing, but found only to find a few bits. she looked up at the Stallion. "I'm sorry but I don't think I'll have enough for it. I only have a few an I need them to get to Manehattan." She got up and started to leave only to be stopped by the stallion.

"Excuse me madam but may I suggest you trying to be a Model for the Carousel Boutique here in town instead?" He said in a soft but jolly tone. "The owner is always looking for new models for her dresses, and my I say, it is a lot cheaper to look for a job in a place you already are, no?"

"Alright I guess" Chipped Derpy. " I guess I will get the muffin them" she said as her belly started to roar.

"Do not worry about the bill madam." said the waiter. " I owed the Boutique owner a favor." The stallion left but only for a few minuets and returned with a large and very good looking muffin.

As Derpy slowly ate her muffin she reached for the news letter again and started to read. After a while she came to a very interesting column about the local farm family.

It read that apparently Applejack, the one in charge of the farm has been missing for a week, only to be last seen running into the Everfree Forest. "Well that is odd" Derpy thought to her self. It also read that there might be something going on due to the fact that the youngest member of the family, Applebloom, is refusing to talk to officials about Applejack's disappearance. With a closer look she realized that the date of the news letter was wrong and was actually dated for next week. Chalking it up as a typo, she finished her muffin, said her farewells to the waiter and headed for the Boutique.

As she approached her destination she couldn't help but think of what being a model would be like. Just then 2 other ponies exited the building. She noticed that the two where walking awfully close to each other with the rainbow maned one with her wing over the purple one.

"Aww" Derpy thought almost wagging her tail. She always thought love was such a lovely thing to see. She never thought about it with herself tho. Even tho she has spent so much time with The Doctor she always felt distant from him.

As she entered the boutique she was instantly amazed by all the nice dresses that where around. Ball gowns, evening dresses, you name it. just then a dark purple maned unicorn popped put from behind one of the racks filled with dresses.
"Oh hello there darling, I'll be with you in just a moment" she said as she finished hanging up a few dresses on to the rack. "How can... I..." She stooped and stared at he Pegasus

"Umm I was wandering about the modeling job marked in the news letter?" Derpy asked

"Job?" The unicorn asked." I... I never put an add out for a job"

Derpy then realized that the add she read was for the one in Manehattan "Oh sorry. I..."

"But would you like to model for me?" said the unicorn in a rushed tone.

"OK... that was weird." Thought Derpy almost wanting to back away "I would love to!" she said in a worried voice.

"Good, good" the unicorn said as she stared into Derpy's eyes. "My name is Rarity, and you might be?" she asked as she
moved closer and closer to Derpy.

"My name is Derpy hooves" before she could realize, Rarity was only a few inches from her face.

"Your eyes" she whispered.

"Yeah, I know there kinda" Derpy started

"There the most beautiful color of topaz I have ever seen." Interrupted Rarity. "They go so well with your golden mane and tail witch also compliments..." she took a moment to fell Derpy's coat with her hoof. "your beautiful Boulder fur. It would be a tragedy not to let you model for me."

Derpy blushed "Oh really? Your too kind"

"oh don't be too modest my dear" Rarity said. "you will have to do a bit of a tryout first"

"I'm ready for anything' said Derpy."

"All right then." Rarity said as she used her magic to float over a few dresses. "These dresses are part of my new line. I call it... The Time Traveler" she said with a sense of pride.

Derpy made a little giggle. "Then I got this in the bag" she thought to herself.

"If you can make these look good, witch I know you can, the you'll be the new my new model.

"What happened to the last model" Derpy asked.

"Oh. Rainbow Dash? Yes. Her. Apparently she said that she'll be working with Twilight a bit more now and that she won't be able to model for me anymore." Rarity let out a little pout. "She wasn't a very good model anyway." she said with in a low mumble. "But I'm sure your a way better model than her, so lets get started shall we?"

For the next few hours Derpy showed off what she could do on Rarity's min walk way which was surrounded by mirrors.
"OK Dearie. One more dress and I'll make my decision" said Rarity even tho she decided to hire Derpy long ago.
Derpy walked down the small walkway in a black dress with with several white diamond studded belts all over the it. The dress was heavy and warm but as she saw her self in the mirrors she felt like she could take on anypony Past, Present, or future.

"Shes perfect." Rarity thought to herself. "OK. you can get off the stage now" she exclaimed

As derpy tried to get off the stage her usual clumsiness kicked in and she slipped off and fell right on to Rarity. Instantly Rarity's face flashed a bright crimson.

An artist of any sort, Drawing, Music, literature, even clothes should always have an eye for what they do. Rarity was no exception. She loved her dresses and the made her feel so alive when making them. Now seeing her work on a pony with the perfect colors on top of her made her emotions explode.

"Oh I'm so sorry" Derpy panicked.

"I must have you" Rarity exclaimed as she reached her head up and locked herself into a kiss with the unexpected Pegasus.

Derpy was reluctant at first at the affection that the unicorn was showing but as the kiss continued she found her self pushing more and more into the kiss. Her thoughts raced. "Nopony has ever just wanted to love me like this before." she thought.

The kiss lasted for about a minuet and Rarity broke it. Then using her magic she turned the two over so she was then on top. The look in her eyes were mad with lust to see her own work below her, ready for her. She couldn't believe that the pony she's been looking for to model her new line, was not only to pony she would fall in love with, but a mare as well.
"I would of never thought of doing such thing with another mare." Explained Rarity "But you are more perfect than that of any Stallion I have seen.

"But what about my eyes" Derpy said in an almost unbearable whisper. "how can I be perfect if my eyes aren't?"
"Oh my dear." Rarity chuckled. "If being around Twilight has taught me anything. its that Perfection and beauty is only in the eye of the beholder." Rarity said in a sweet voice. "And you my dear, are in my hold" she said as she leaned in for another kiss.

Hearing this made Derpy's heart jump as she met Rarity half way for the kiss. after a while Derpy then broke the kiss and stared into Rarity's eyes.

"Dearie..." Rarity spoke in a socked tone. "Your eyes."

At that moment Derpy's eyes where actually both looking the same way. "Well I guess your double perfect for me cuz your in both my eyes." Giggled the bubbly pony.

Hearing such an adorable thing come from such an adorable pony caused Rarity to squeak in joy and start to planting kisses all over Derpy's head.

Derpy continued to giggle as the kisses tickled. As time went on the kisses became slower and slower and Derpy's body began to relax.

As Rarity continued, she started to suck on the Pegasus neck from place to place leaving small wet patches of fur.
Derpy moaned at the feel of the wetness as it dotted her neck side. She's never felt someone give her the love that this alabaster unicorn was giving her. The more wet spots she felt on her neck the more wet she felt between her haunches.
While still tasting her new love's neck Rarity, with her magic, started to undo the zipper of the dress fallowed with a light touch with her hoof.

The nice cool air once again touching the gray pony fallowed by the unicorn's hoof caused Derpy to gasp in pure pleasure.
Rarity continued her hoofs path as she reached Derpy's main spot, more importantly, her hot spot. She started to rub it slow and firm at first but then started to pick up speed.

Derpy moaned and started to twitch due to the treatment the unicorn was giving her. She was almost unable to keep her eyes open. As the pleasure passed threw her, one of her eyes was focused on celling while the other was focused on Rarity's horn.

Without thinking she took a long lick of the horn causing the unicorn to stop and shudder with a loud cry of her own. The scream gave Depry an idea as she placed the tip of Rarity's horn into her mouth.
"Oh Dearie." Rarity pleaded. " I don't"

But before she finished her plea Derpy thrust the horn into her mouth causing Rarity to cry out even louder.
"GAAaa Celestia!!!" Rarity screamed as she involuntary started to rub Derpy's hot spot faster.

This lead to a cycle of pleasure. The faster Rarity rub, the faster Derpy worked her magic with her tongue. The faster she did that the harder Rarity pressed down across her spot. The harder she did that Derpy sucked harder and faster causing Rarity to try to keep up with the rhythm of Derpy's movements continuing the circle.

As time went on there combined moans turned into screams as the final moments of first bonding came to a close.
Rarity's horn burst with a warm light that seemed to escape the gray mare's mouth causing her to have her own burst as a puddle of her love formed on the floor between her legs.

After a few minutes of basking in the moment together they heard a voice.
"What are you guys doing?" asked the small groggy voice.

Rarity quickly looked up to see her little sister standing only a few feet from them with her eyes half closed. "Ummm. I can explain sweetie" Rarity started.

"Don't bother" said the little filly. "I don't want to know why you two decided to have a water fight at 5:00 in the morning.
Derpy and Rarity then looked at reach other, then out the front window.

"Now if you excuse me, I'm going to make my self some breakfast." said the filly as she walked into the kitchen.
The two mares then sighed and and kissed one more time.

Rarity then broke the kiss with a face of pure horror. "SWEETIE BELLE MAKE BREAKFAST!?!" she screamed. "I have to stop her" she said as she shot into the kitchen.

Derpy smiled. "I wander if she'll let me stay here a few nights so I can find a place to." she stopped her thought. "Silly Derpy, she'll probably insist that you stay hear." She giggled in her mind as she walk into the kitchen. Just then a note was slid under the front door.

Chapter 4: Part 1: So This is How it Ends

"Aww No! If I don't get home before they find out I've been out this late, my sister is gonna tan my hide!" Said the small Applebloom as she entered the edge of Sweet Apple Archers.

She felt as if tho she were Rainbow Dash as she raced thew the trees, dodging and weaving. When she got to the house she quietly entered. She went to the kitchen, placed her bag on the counter and pulled out an odd bottle with a tan liquid inside...

"This will is going to be one great prank." said applebloom in a whisper. "I might even get a cutie mark because of this."
Just then the light came one.

"What in Tar-nation are you doing up little one." Said a deep voice. It wasn't loud but Applebloom could feel it in her bones. She slowly turned her head to find Big Macintosh standing in the door way into the kitchen. She felt as tho she was being crushed by his stare alone.

"Umm ahh." she panicked. "I uhh got thirsty... for some... Apple juice."

"OK?" said the said the big red beast. " Then drink it and go back to bed then." he mumbled.

"Ummm. Don't need to... you scared the thirsty right out of me." she said as she looked all around suspiciously.
Big Mac knew the look of an apple who is lying but decided to let it slide.

"I guess I'll just go to bed then" she said as she quickly walked out of the kitchen and back to her room.

Big Mac took a sigh as he too walked back to his room. He climbed into bed and wrapped his arm around the pony next him.
"Did you find out who made that noise?" the white unicorn asked

"It was just ma little sister." Big Mac replied

"Your darling sister Applejack?" the unicorn asked with a high class tone.

"Enope." Big Mac said. "It was Applebloom."

"Ahh. Shes such a nice lass." Said the unicorn.

The unicorn turned around to face Big Mac and they kissed. After a few moments Big Mac broke the kiss.

"How long are you staying here in Ponyvile" asked Big Mac. "I hardly get to see you anymore."

The unicorn stared into the gentle giants eyes. "I can't stay for very long this week." The white pony started. "I'll have to leave by noon tomorrow. You know, Garden parties, big events, all that and what not."

Big Mac's eye saddened.

"Don't worry big guy." The unicorn said, trying to pick up the red stallion's mood. "I have planed to spend all next week here in Ponyvile... With you."

Big Mac's eyes widened as he made a manly squee.

"But for now lets just enjoy our selves shall we." The unicorn yawned. "Good night Mac"

"Good night Fancy" said Big mac as the both drifted off to sleep.

As Celestia's sun rose, Applejack was the first to awake. she mumbled her self out of bed slumped into the shower, almost fell back to sleep in the shower, and then slumped into the kitchen. She saw Applebloom's bag on the counter.

"Haven't I told dat girl to put her bag were it belongs." huffed the grumpy earth pony. She then spotted the strange bottle with the tan liquid in side. She grabbed the bottle, popped the cork and smelled it's contents, "Woo Doggy!" Applejack said instantly perking up her ears. "This stuff is Ripper than a wet pony's diaper" She took a moment to decide how to deal with the little trouble maker. After a while of looking into the bottle she got a bit thirsty. "Maybe a gulp or two wont hurt" she thought as she took a few chugs from the bottle.

"Applejack!" screamed a small filly. "What are you doing?!?"

The shock of being caught in the act caused her to drop the bottle, smashing it on the floor. "Applebloom I-I" she panicked.

"Nooooo!" screamed Applebloom. "Ma science project! Now I'll never get that chemistry cuite mark."

"Science... Project..." Applejack gulped. "What did I jus drink?"

"Well" Applebloom started. "I thought I could make a super happy potion by combining a lot of recipes.

"Wa... what recipes?" The now shaking orange pony asked.

"Well let see. part of the cutie mark recipe, that love recipe, and a recipe for something called R63, all mixed into our Apple Family cider."

Applejack then started to feel dizzy. "Are y'all *hic* crazy." choked out Applejack."Don't *hic* don't y'all remember what happened the *hic* first time ya made those?"

"I didn't use the full recipe for any of them... I just put the stuff in that sounded more helpful." said the little filly. "I thought if I didn't use the full recipe, then the full effects wouldn't happen."

Apple jack opened her mouth to speak, only to fall face first into the floor. After a while the earth pony regained consciousness to find her self in the Cuite Mark Crusader clubhouse. After a while of concentrating to regain her sight she hear the voices of the Crusaders.

"I don't know what to do guys. This is bad. Real bad!" whined Applebloom.

"Calm down." Said scootaloo "Maybe Jack here will like it?"

"I don't know." said Sweetie belle "Today has just been weird."

"What are y'all talking about" asked Applebloom.

"This morning I caught my sister and the new model doing stuff." Sweetie said in a dull voice. "I knew what they were doing but I pretended that I didn't"

"What were they doing?" asked Scootaloo.

"They were playing patty cake" said Sweetie as she put quotations in the air with her hooves.

"The same patty cake" Scootaloo said mimicking Sweetie Belle "that we do every Saturday"

Hearing this caused Applejack's face to turn red. She decided that enough was enough and she slowly stood up causing the 3 fillies to shriek.

"Will one of y'all..." Applejack stopped. "Will... One... of." Her face filled with more and more terror as she said each word. "I-is... M-m-my voice?"

"Deeper?" Applebloom said trying to finish her sister's question.

"There's a... mirror over there if you wanna..." said Sweetie as she trailed off at the end of the sentence.

Applejack slowly turned around to look at her self in the mirror.

"I think you look cooler." complimented Scootaloo as the other 2 shot her the stare.

"I... You... I... You..." Applejack couldn't believe her eyes... or should I say His eyes. In the mirror she saw a much broader version of her self. Her hair was now shorter and scruffy and she now had a bit of a goatee going on. "You turned me into a stallion!?!"

"I'm sor..." Applebloom stopped her apology. "NO! I didn't! Y'all the one who drank my potion without knowing what it wuz!"

Applejack's eyes shot open and his face got even redder. He looked all around the room as to search for a response that wouldn't make him look like a foal. His mind went wild. "What will the rest of my family think? Is this permanent? What will my friends think? Do I have a..." He looked down between his haunches to find a new addition. He then sat down and covered him self with his arms thinking "Oh NO! I'm naked." Then the realization kicked in that all ponies are usually naked, calming him down just a bit.

"All right Jack" said Sweetie Belle."Don't mind if we call ya Jack, well we do have an idea on how to change you back..."

"Alright, Shoot" Said Jack said being glad to have changed the subject.

"Every time Applejack messes up a potion, who is there to fix everything." Asked Scootaloo.

"Hey!" Protested Applebloom. "who are you? the potion police?"

As the girls started there usual banter Jack already figured out who they were talking about... At least he thought he did as he left the tree house and headed to Twilight's.

As the Crusaders calmed down they realized that Jack left.

"Do you think he knew that we were talking about Zecora's?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"I sure do hope so." said Applebloom.He would look like an idiot if he went somewhere else...

They laughed a bit as Scootaloo slid in between them. "So guys" she said with a sly attitude. "Whose up for some patty cake."

Chapter 4: Part 2: This is How it Begins!

As Jack ran threw Ponyvile, he received many strange faces from the townsfolk. He felt like this was her first time in ponyvile. On his way he noticed that the clock tower said 11:59, "Good." He thought. "Twi should still be home." As he reached Twilight's library, he busted threw the door. "Twilight! I need yer help! screamed Jack. Just then a blunt and hard pain hit Jack's side as he flew into a bookshelf. "What in tar-nation?" complained Jack as he got up from the pile of books.

There stood a rather large white stallion with a blue mane. "What do you want with my sister." the stallion said as he
scratched the floor readying himself for another charge.

Jack thought fast. "Umm. wait... Shining Armor... it's me... Applejack, ya know."

Shining stood there and thought about what this strange pony was talking about. Moments later he went back into his charge stance. "Nice try changeling, but I'm not being fooled again." he said. "If your going to try to fool us, at least try to get the gender right."

"But I am..." Jack started as he was kicked in the face, sending him out the door and on to his back. "Damn" Jack thought."No wonder hes a captain... Hes good... and fast."

He stared up into the sky and gasped. "what in the hay?" he said to him self as he stared into the now dark morning sky. After starring up at the sky he decided to get up and look at the now lit up clock tower. "5:10?" He said to himself. Just then he heard to scream come from Twilight's room. Jack almost decided to go see what happened but then realized he would have to encounter Twilight's brother again.

He started to wonder who to got to next as it, like Applejack would say, hit him like a blinded bull with it's tail on fire. "zecora!" He said aloud "I bet zecora has a cure for what ever I has." He thought for a moment. "I'll need to go get some supplies for the trip threw the Everfree forest." And just like that he was off to Sweet Apple Archers. As he got into the house, he tip-hoofed around gathering things for his trip. just then he herd the front door open and hid in one of the bottom cupboards. It was a very tight fit but he knew he couldn't be seen. just then he heard Applebloom's voice.

"This will is going to be one great prank." said Applebloom in a whisper. "I might even get a cutie mark because of this."

"Oh. and who was this prank for hu?" Jack snapped in his mind. just then he noticed the light come on.

"What in Tar-nation are you doing up little one." Said Big Macintosh.

"Umm ahh." Applebloom panicked. "I uhh got thirsty... for some... Apple juice."

"OK?" said Big Mac " Then drink it and go back then." he mumbled

"Ummm. Don't need to... you scared the thirsty right out of me."

"She's a lion to ya big bro!" Jack screamed in his mind.

"I guess I'll just go to bed then" Applebloom said.

Jack then heard her lave and then Big Mac. He waited for a few second and come out of the cupboard and finished gathering supplies. He left the house and started for the forest.

As Jack reached the edge for the farm right before the forest he saw Applebloom run past him muttering something about getting back home and the fact she got lost. Jack was stunned as he saw his little sister run past him when he just heard her at the house. He continued to the forest. after 20 minuets of walking he heard Applebloom again but this time she wasn't making any sense. "Etal gnitteg sti. emoh teg dluohs I... Kcirt eht od lliw ekoj nisiop fo sevolc erof kniht I!" Jack looked aroud only to see Applebloom walking backwards and then just vanishes into thin air.

Jack stood there almost as tho he had just lost a starring contest with a cockatrice. "I got to get out of here" said jack to himself as he started to sprint to zecora's. moments later Jack arrived at zecora's hut. Instead of bursting in this time He knocked light and waited. The door flew open and the Zebra rushed him and locked lips with the Startled Stallion.

Jack screamed in confusion as zecora pulled him into her hut and closed her door with her tail. She threw him on the ground and stood above him. jack stared at the zebra with shock. The air seemed thick and misty almost as tho she was a true witch doctor.

"I'm sure you have noticed the strange events of today. That is the cause of the time lines Decay. As for your condition of being male. To find a cure, you will always Fail. There is a way to change back. To go back in time, thats the Fact."

"Look zecora" Jack exclaimed. "Can y'all just talk normal for once?"

zecora looked at Jack beneath her with an annoyed look. "...Fine" she said with a dark tone. "Look dude, I have no idea how the fuck all this shit is going on yo."

Jack's jaw dropped hearing zecora speak while not rhyming.
"All I know, is that I met my self from the future and I told me that every time something weird happens to the Elements of Harmony, time and space seems to fuck up. She also told me that if I fucked you then 1 of 2 things will happen.

Jack's eyes shot open. "yeah... right." he said in a calm voice.

You'll either go back to 12:01 this morning when you were still asleep and you'll just pass this off a dream you'll forget" She takes a breath "Or the best and least likely case scenario is that you'll go to 11:59 tonight, and if you can finally finish the day, doing this will end the curse once and for all."

"Whaaaa?" is all Jack could muster at the moment.

"I knew this wasn't going to be easy." Zecora sighed "It only takes one of the Elements to fix everything. It just that the way the time line is fucked up, none of you can finish it! They all keep reliving the same moments with only very little change from each time over and over. You all have been doing this for 2 years now!

"we've been doing the same thing over and over again for 2 years now?" Jack yelped.

"Yes, but each time it it repeats, the time line seems to fix it's self little by little, changing little by little. Thats only cause you guys just started doing something different, something odd. What ever you guys are ding is causing the time line to flux in a way that it can be fixed. And like I said... Only one of you has to do is just finish one day."

"Why can't I just wait the day out and finish it that way... not that I wouldn't like to umm mate wit ya." Jack asked.

"Look dude. According to my latest self telling me whats happening, she told me that you've tried that like 50 times already. Each time you woke up finding out your a Stallion and that you don't remember anything.

"So I guess the only way is... your way then" Jack said as his face started to get hot. "But zecora... I Just turned into a Stallion today... I don't know if I can..."

zecora put her hoof one Jacks mouth. "Look down fool.

As jack looked down he was surprised to see his own massive 10 inch Stallion-hood standing tall. "When did this happen?" Jack asked in confusion.

"I guess the way I talked made you a little excited hu?" she said as she lowered he self onto Jack's Member "Or it could be the aphrodisiac that I put in the air."

Jack watched carefully as she slowly teased him barely poking his member into her spot. After a while she finally got jack about 3 inches into her. "I never knew this is how the guy felt." Jack said as pleasure flooded threw him.

"O-really" zecora said as the slammed her full body downward.

"Woah there!" Jack hollered as zecora's actions almost caused him to end soon. "I almost felt like I was about to explode."

"Glad you didn't." said the zebra. "Cuz we haven't even started." she said as she started to pump her hips up and down.

Jack's breathing got heavier and heavier as the zebra worked her stuff.

She slowly started grind her hips as she move faster little by little. "Oh I've been waiting for this for a long time."

Jack looked up and saw that the zebra's eyes were now purple.

"Oh hohohoo." laughed the zebra as her pumps became faster and faster.

Jack tried to move but couldn't. He looked up at zecora one more time and saw a deep red glow above her forehead. "That nrgh. That glow... thats uni-unicorn magic." He said starting to fell pressure build up inside him.

"Oh come on little hay seed... whats wrong?" Said the zebra in a familiar voice. "The poor little stallion cant finish with my magic holding him now can it?

"Trixie you bitch!" Jack screamed out before screaming out in pleasure.

"You hate me, yet you body begs for me." said the zebra as a the same deep red glow that is coming from above her head enveloped her whole body. seconds later the glow disappeared revealing the blue unicorn Trixie.

"So everything you told me GaaaAaaa. stop humping me while i try to AaAAaagure witch chew." Jack cried out. "Everything you told me was a Lie?"

Trixie continued. "Stupid farm pony. It's all true! The thing is is that I've been behind it all the whole time" She said increasing her movements even more.

Jack was at his limit yet Trixie wouldn't let him finish. "Trixie... you... Trixie! How?... How were you able to control time like that."

"Simple" said Trixie. "I borrowed the good doctors... what do you call it... TRADIS, yes." She slowed down to a slow grind so her victim could listen to her but still be under her spell. "I had to get rid of that dumb bimbo he was with but that wasn't hard. Get rid of her, take her place and then I could get the Doctor out of the way. With that ship combined with my magic I have been messing with your time. your lives, and your dreams for messing with mine.

"what are you talking about" growled Jack.

Trixie giggled "Oh you simpleton. It might not be clear right now but you will see my plan in action. In fact you will be the first one to help me get my revenge." Just then a purple flame covered Trixie this time, and when it went away she had turned into Twilight.

"Stop it Trixie! I know its you!" Jack snapped.

"Oh really then" Trixie said returning to her thrusting but this time she was slowly releasing her grip on Jack. "Even tho you know it's me can you still come seeing her like this?"

Jack closed his eyes gasped. "You wouldn't dare!"

She then released the full grip one him so now he was the one holding back... And he was loosing. In one final bout he was done "I'm sorry Twi" He moaned as he climaxed. He opened his eyes to find a small off white ball in front of him.

"Are you crazy" Said Trixie. "Do you think the Great and Powerful Trixie would let some underhanded farmer shot anything like that into her. Your lucky she even did anything to you at all.

Jack looked at her with his mouth open in disbelief.

"Have you ever been taught manners. your not suppose to hold you mouth open... It's rude." She then with her magic thew the white ball into jacks mouth.
Jack shot forward due to the taste of bitterness that hit his mouth. He looked around and saw that he was now in his room. he looked over and saw that in the mirror that she wasn't a stallion any more and that she was a mare again. "I'm applejack again... Wait! the time warp!" Hollered Applejack.

She looked at her clock and It read... 12:01. On the clock there was a note. It read.

The Elements will fall.
Harmony will fall.
your land will fall.
And I
Shall Rise
Twilight Sparkle