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Feedback

by RQK
Twilight Sparkle gives her life to save Equestria. Complications in time and space conspire to correct that, but can a long-dead mare be saved?

Princess Twilight Sparkle has died a hero, but no one knows why.

Between an ancient evil that had not even existed until she struck it down, a mysterious crystal ball that bears some unknown significance, and a set of cryptic notes and behaviors from the princess during her final days, the circumstances behind it all are murky at best and suspect at worst.

And the rabbit hole only grows deeper from there.

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Feedback - Substitute - Divergence

The Crystal Ball Trilogy is a series of stories which deal with time travel, parallel universes, and other manipulations of time and space. Feedback is the first story; it is succeeded by Substitute and Divergence.


Digital pdf version here
Print book version here

Featured on 7/19/2015!
Featured on Equestria Daily! 8/21/2015
Featured by Everfree Northwest! 3/11/2016
Featured by Seattle's Angels! 9/27/2016
Goodreads entry~

Edited by
PersonalGamer
Kuairu

Live reading by Alchemystudent
Fan-art by Miss Hoot

Teen
Complete
Drama
Mystery
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
SSTM

84467 words: Estimated about 7 hours to read

15 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2015-03-29 04:05:18 UTC
    1016
  2. 1 - Memento 2015-03-29 04:05:35 UTC
    5249
  3. 2 - Passing 2015-04-08 15:30:53 UTC
    5187
  4. 3 - Transcend 2015-04-15 15:42:35 UTC
    4978
  5. 4 - Decisive 2015-04-22 16:45:05 UTC
    4799
  6. 5 - Working 2015-05-14 00:29:33 UTC
    4664
  7. 6 - Accuracy 2015-05-20 19:30:01 UTC
    6373
  8. 7 - Relapse 2015-06-03 18:55:12 UTC
    8839
  9. 8 - Broke 2015-06-10 11:02:59 UTC
    8440
  10. 9 - Interval 2015-07-08 20:27:43 UTC
    6422
  11. 10 - Expunge 2015-07-15 08:37:04 UTC
    4525
  12. 11 - Surrender 2015-07-22 14:36:06 UTC
    4712
  13. 12 - Feedback 2015-07-30 02:04:18 UTC
    9805
  14. 13 - Causality 2015-08-09 01:03:37 UTC
    8005
  15. Epilogue 2015-08-09 03:07:59 UTC
    1453