The Demon Within

by SloppyMoney

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Human, Sad
Length: 3303

I was a normal kid until that one day my family gave me away to the damn government. All I remember is that it hurt like hell. But one day i was able to escape due to a malfunction in the whole facility. After that day I have been on the run.

I was a normal kid until that one day my family gave me away to the damn government. All I remember is that it hurt like hell. But one day I was able to escape due to a malfunction in the whole facility. After that day I have been on the run for far too long.

I was a top priority. Marked as a high threat to everyone. But one day I was able to escape it all. A magical portal opened in front of me and I knew that the portal was my ticket to freedom or maybe a higher chance of death for me.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-02-20 05:40:01 UTC

My Tourture Session And My Awesome Deal

I wake up after having another horrible dream. But for me they are normal. I am Jacob Baran, a kid who was chosen to do many tests on. To me it sucks. But for the scientists it is educational. Educational doesn't even describe it. The pain never stops and the horrible images keep on coming one after another. But one faithful day I was able to escape it all.

I yelled in pain as the needles kept going into my body in various places. The scientists were lucky that the restraints were working or else I would have made a run for it. All of the pain went away when the room went black. "Oh great, it's a power outage" one of the male scientists said.

"So doesn't that mean that anything that needs power will turn off" another one said very faintly as due to me running far away as fast as I can. After running for a couple of minutes I hear sirens go off. "Oh no, they want me that badly" I said to myself. As of that moment a big red figure appeared in front of me and started to make a deal with me.

"Hello my little boy you're in quite a pickle". He said. "But that is why I am here. I am going to make a deal with you". "What type of deal is it". I said being brave and very risky. "I will give you very dangerous powers to learn and immortality but I want to watch you suffer when you make friends or family and watch them die one by one". He said it with a little joy in his voice. "Deal". I said it so confidently.

So after I said deal a book popped up in front of me and I looked at each and every page very carefully. "Now" he said "show me a move from the book". He said so sternly. "Um ok I will try" I said a little nervous. The first move I wanted to try was called Hell Blade. It sounded so awesome that I had to try it. So after reading the instructions I did as they told me to and a Hell Blade appeared in my hands.

"Awesome" I said out loud. "Shall I give you a clone of myself to try it on". He said. "Yes" I said it like I was a murderer. So the devil made a clone of himself and I held the sword in my hand and gave it a good slice down the middle. As I pulled the blade out of the split corpse I looked at The Devil. "I love this, are you sure those are all of the moves in the world or something like that". I said. "Yes my boy those are all of the moves". He said like he was sad. "Some moves I cant give you but I can do this"

"Since your eager to use these powers I will let you kill me and get all of them, my soul will still exist and I will live on but you get my powers and can use them anyway you want". He said it so surely. 'Ok" was all I could say at the moment. I had a plan and a good one too. So the devil lowered his head and just as I went to slice it off he held out a weapon that was beyond awesome. "Before you kill me I want you to have this".

My New Life Is Starting

I stood there waiting for there next move but they didn't do anything. They just stood there waiting. After a minute they dropped there guns and backed away, allowing me to escape this hell hole. As I walked through the crowd I felt as if I needed to kill all of them, so I did just that. I jammed my scythe into the ground and impaled all of the guards once again. After I killed all of them I took there souls and got stronger.

After I walked towards the exit I was greeted by many guards who also let me go. I also killed them too. I slowly stood up and walked away from that place never wanting to see it again. My first visit was going to be my parents house and then away forever. After I walked for nearly 2 or 3 hours I made it to my home and knocked on the door.

From the inside I heard people whispering. "Is that our son". A female voice said "It is our son let him in". A male voice said. As the door slowly opened I looked at the woman with a look that will strike fear into anyone. As the door was fully opened a walked in a hugged my parents because I missed them so much. "I forgive you". I said to both of them. "I know you had to give me away but I don't care about that anymore, I am leaving for good". I hugged them both once again and left to start my new life alone.

None of them said anything they just let me leave. As soon as I walked out it started to rain heavily. "Ugh just my luck". I started to walk to my grandfather's house in the cold rain. After 20 minutes the wind picked up and slowly made a vortex in front of me. I slowly walked back from it but the more the more it pulled me in.

So I stood there waiting for something to happen and it did. The vortex became a white portal  and I thought to myself. "How bad can this be". I walked into the portal and started to fall right off the back. I looked down to see that I was approaching the ground very rapidly. After I kept falling a heard a women's voice call to me.

"Why are you falling so fast I cant reach you". I looked up and saw a cyan pony trying to reach me. I said to her " I am falling cause I want to fall". Saying that made me feel like a dick. But I didn't care at all. she then said "You re going to die I need to save you" It sounded like she was about to cry. "Just watch me survive it". I came to the ground faster and faster when I decided to use my new moves. I pulled out the book and looked for it. As I got to page 204 I saw it. The move that was going to make me look Bad Ass.

The Devils Flight. I concentrated on it and wings appeared on my back. I opened them and flew away faster than she was flying. After getting a great distance away I tried to land but lost control and went straight into a treehouse and was sore for the next couple minuets because I heard multiple voices from all around me.

"What is it". It sounded like a cowgirl was around. "I SHOULD THROW IT A PARTY WHEN IT WAKES UP". A very energetic girl was around me. Before I heard anything else I was picked up by something and it felt my mind was being invaded so I broke free of the grasp and dashed towards my holder.

It was a large white pony with wings and a larger white horn. During my dash towards this pony I pulled out my scythe and it wrapped around my arm and it formed a perfect blade. After reaching her and putting the blade up to her neck I spoke these life threatening words. "I am not from here in my world I was a monster and a killer, don't make me become a killer again because you would be my first target". With those last words I looked at the other ponies and walked out the door.

Apologies And My First Kill

After I walked out of the tree house I just realized that I wasn't going to have the same problems like before. I can start a new life here. Just as long as none of these ponies get me mad. As soon as I said that a big claw made contact with my face and sent me flying straight into a forest that was damn near pitch black. After getting back up I looked around and was greeted with these creatures that I would know as a manticore. After I slaughtered every single one of them I made a run for that village to kill what ever that thing was.

As I saw the village in the distance I saw what hit me in the face and maybe all over my body. It was a dragon. Not your normal everyday problem but I dint care at all. This dragon was going down and I as going to get that soul. As I came up on the dragon I leaped into the air and came down onto its tail cutting it clean off with my scythe. I enjoy bloodshed from time to time but I really enjoy it when my targets fight back.

As the dragon roared in pain it tried to hit me with it's fire breath. I never moved I simply stood my ground and let the fire hit me square in the chest. The only thing that got damaged was my shirt. As the smoke cleared my face got serious and I heard some ponies faint. I looked at some of the ponies and winked at them causing a few more to faint.

As blood kept pouring out of the dragons tail I wanted to end this fight once and for all. I took a step back and my scythe turned into a sword that wrapped around my arm. I used my super speed to charge into the dragons chest going straight through it's heart and pulling it through with me. As I landed on the other side I heard cries and doors shutting. I slowly stood back up and looked for the dragons corpse.

But instead I found a little pony. that face made me wonder so much. As the pony walked up to a body on the floor I soon realized that the pony was the dragon. As that pony rested it's head on the body I knew what I had to do. "Hey kid if I were you I would stand back you don't want to be near me when this happens". I didn't get a answer from this pony. Instead I got a mean look and a buck in my shin. After that the pony stood back and sat down. "I hate doing this so much". I said to myself.

Since I was so tall I had to kneel down and I pick up the pony. As I looked at the dead pony in my arms I had one thing to do. Hug it and I would risk my immortality for some pony. As I hugged the pony I slowly felt my life drain out of me and into her. As she was almost healed she hugged me back and I was surprised by it. As I set her down it felt like I got punched by a giant.

I went flying back and made a dent in the dirt road as I dragged some of it with me. I slowly closed my eyes and woke up some place else. As I slowly opened my eyes I was greeted with a pacing pony. I slowly stood up and look around. "What happened to me". I said.  Then this pony got really serious for a second. "Well after you healed that pony with your crazy skills or something you got knocked back by some explosion that was invisible to everypony". "Well that makes sense" I said to myself.

So after a long story made short I knew all about the history of equestrian and everypony. After we were done talking we heard a knock at the door. "Coming". Twilight sparkle said. Since I have some manners I decided I would get it. "No twilight I will get it". I felt like being nice for a change. Just thinking about that word would make me puke.

As I opened the door I was greeted with Princess Celestia. My first reaction was to slam the door and lean up against it with all of my force. But there was one wrong thing about me leaning up against that door. It was a pull door. So as of my surprise I fell backwards and came face to face with the princess. I wasn't nervous of to what she would have done with me . I deserved it. So as I got up and met her look she started to say some interesting words that caught my attention.

"Mr...um". She paused and looked at me. "Baran, Jacob Baran and you don't have to be formal with me". I said sternly. "Ok Mr. Baran I need to talk to you for a moment".

My Blood Fest And My Escape

"Whoa, is this Death's Scythe from Dante's inferno" "Yes it is, you're very smart and that is why I trust you with this". "I don't even know what to say". I put the scythe on a strap and I put it on my back. "You don't need to say anything just kill me". He said. I brung the sword up to his neck and sliced his throat with one swift motion. He slowly started to bleed out and as he came closer to dying I was able to see his soul more and more Cleary.

When I remembered my plan I pulled out the scythe and jammed it through his soul and it absorbed it. "Never make a dumb deal". I looked at the scythe and I put it onto my back. As time unfroze I was instantly swarmed by guards. "Freeze and come peacefully or we will be forced to shoot". "Well ok you got me". I slowly put my hands up. When they were at a good enough height I grabbed my scythe and jammed it into the ground.

When it was jammed into the ground the ground started to dig up as it got closer and closer to the guards. When it was right under the guards I pulled my scythe out and spikes of many different sizes impaled each and everyone one of them. As each of them slowly died out I felt my body grow stronger and stronger. Since I was the devil I thought about killing this whole facility and leaving like I did nothing.

So after slaughtering the whole facility I came up to a group of new kids who were going to be tested on. I pulled out my scythe and broke the console with it. After seeing that the electrical fence had deactivated the kids ran. All except for one girl. I slowly walked over to her and she crawled away from me. She crawled right into a corner though. So after her little moment I held out my hand to offer her some help.

She slowly took my hand and hugged me. "Thank you for saving us". "Your Welcome". I was in shock. She saw what I did to many guards and she still hugged me. She kissed me on the cheek and ran for the exit. As she walked away I heard gunshots and many bodies falling. "NO DONT GO". I was to late she went around the corner and got filled with lead ranging from her head to her toes.

At that moment I broke down into tears. "Why god why". was all I could mutter to myself. I slowly rose back up and made my way for the leader of this hell hole. After arriving at the door I broke it down and I ran up to the leader of this place. He pleaded for mercy but I didn't listen to him. I stabbed the scythe through his chest and drained him of his life. After I did that I was cornered by many guards.

Some Shocking Information and The Diamond Dogs

As Princess celestia and I went outside we both had a interesting chat. "Jacob I needed to tell you something and you might not like it". She said it so nervously that it made me worried. "Ok go on and tell me it cant be that bad". I said it so confidently. "Well my faithful student wrote this to me when she brought you inside her home". She handed me a letter and I read it very carefully.

The letter said "Dear princess celestia, I have took in the new being into my home and will ask many questions when it wakes up. P.S. I think I'm in love with some pony. I was speechless because I had a big feeling that she was in love with me. But i didn't let it get to my head at all. "Well thank you for letting me see this. I

will keep this a secret between us". I said making my expression 100% serious. As I said that she gave me a look that basically said thank you. After I looked back I heard the door open and a mare who was blushing came out and walked past me and started to walk away. Her slow walk soon turned into a fast gallop. When I looked back at princess I noticed that she wasn't around at all.

"She really does like me. No one has ever felt that way for me before". When I said those words my expression never changed. As I looked around one more time I decided to go and make friends with the mane 6. Before any of that happened I heard a cry for help coming from the center of town. As I sprinted towards the crowd of ponies I soon noticed what was happening.

A big group of ponies were hurt badly and were being cared for by many nurses. "What is going on". I said to some ponies of looked at me. One of the ponies looked at me and said some crap about some diamond dogs hurting all of these ponies since they were near the gems or something like that.

"Where is the diamond dog lair". I said it so seriously. As I asked this question all of the ponies in the crowd looked at me. Even twilight sparkle was in the crowd and looked at me when she heard my voice. All of the ponies pointed in one direction and i looked where they pointed. Before i did a full turn i heard many screams coming from behind me and all of the ponies ran for their life. All except for one.

That one pony was twilight sparkle. As she slowly walked up to my side I looked at her and looked towards the diamond dogs that were apparently here to get some revenge on the ponies. As twilight looked at me she tried to speak. But as she was trying to speak she kept stuttering and tearing up for one reason only. She cared about me.

As i kneeled down to meet her height and i told her one thing. "You need to go and get these ponies out of here". I looked at her and gave her a hug. I never knew if i kept my immortality or not. So i gave her a hug just in case. As i stood up she told me this "do what you must to save us". As she told me that i pulled out my scythe and gave her a nod in confirmation.