the new end...

by LOLZ1259

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad, Tragedy
Length: 1039

a pony named apple crumble has to fight to save herself and her ponyville friends but when she find about the truth what happned

a pony named apple crumble has to fight to save herself and her ponyville friends but when she find about the truth what happned, you might not predict what might happen

did you know that im going to write another story that explains everything that happned, how it happned and everything else

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-02-22 00:30:02 UTC

chapter 2 prologue

Hi if you already didn’t know my name Its APPLECRUMBLE and I got myself into so deep stuff I’ll tell you my story

I was going to twilight’s house to do some studying when I got there I found that twilight left a note

“sorry applecrumble I had to go to cantorlot to meet my bbbf (big brother best friend) and help him protect it from twilight”

you sigh you go over to a stack of books and you start to read then for a while  then you realised that it was getting dark and you decide to go home as soon you walk outside you feel a hard force knock you to the ground then you pass out

chapter 4 just why...

You tell the mayor what just happened she didn’t believe you, you tell her it all happened,

“well I guess you can stay here for the night, in the mourning you can show me where this cellar is".

You wake up from the night before you see the hooded mare outside your window you yell, mare mayor runs up stairs and asks you

“what happened”

as you start to stutter you point hoof at the door  she slowly turns around  *slice*, the  mare was  dead, you smash the window with your hooves they start to bleed as you jump out of the window you see twilight you call her name she look at you she sees you crying, she ask you

“why are you crying?”

you tell her really fast what happned then she gasps and then she saw the hooded mare with blood on her coat, twilight starts to run to her tree house  you run after her, you get to here and tell her

“she’s the pony  who  murdered the mayor"

twilight  starts to right a letter to the rest to her friends she reply’s

“I know that that”.

Later they arrive and ask what was wrong

“a pony with a hood on killed mare mayor and killed 3 other pony’s"

applejack replied "that could be no it couldn’t be, where is this, where did the mare lock you up?!”

you reply with in a cellar I think near a barn sorta looks like yours”n sorta looks like yours”

rainbow dash replied “let’s go there and see if your correct”

once you arrive at sweet apple acres you find a  hidden cellar  under some bush you go down there rarity screams applejack does rainbow dash too at the sight of the cmc all dead  on the ground,  applejack ,rainbow dash and rarity start to cry…

the new end

It was grim dark the smell of sewer surround me “where am I” my eyes stared adjust to the lighting. I look at my hooves they got covered in blood I looked around and saw 3 lifeless corpses I shrieked in horror then I saw it somepony walking down a set of stairs I yelled at the hooded mare

“HELP ME”

the mare took of her hood and then he glanced at me and said

“your next”

Then he started to trot over to the 3 corpses  she grab one and ripped out the heart then she shoved it down my mouth I spat at the mare in disgust. As I start to insult her she levitated a knife to my throat *gulp* she stared up at me and then she threw her hoof at my I tried to react she froze me she walked out of the cellar…

chapter 3 escape...

I woke up still chained to the wall you try to think away to get out but you head had a hard throbbing you could barely think, you get past the fact that you might die and get brutally murdered. You think of a way of escape but your goanna need help from that hooded mare you don’t know why but

“for my escape to work you’re going to need her down here”

you thought. You cried and yelled and moaned, after a while the hooded mare comes down, you think to yourself “what if it doesn’t work, she might kill me” you realise that the risk does not matter you try the escape attempt anyway,

“Shut up you worthless pony”

she shouts at you, you quickly break free form you chains then you kick the mare and then you punch her in the snout, she passes out as you start to gallop up the stairs to freedom, then the mare gets up and starts to trot up the stairs your heart starts to race then get you start to run to help then you as you started to gallop faster and faster, after 15 mins you start to slow down to take a breath, you find yourself in front of mare mayors house you knock on her door loudly the door opens with the cheerful face of mare mayor  when she saw your face  she asked you

“are you ok? What has you so scared?”

you quickly gallop into her house to relax and to realise what just happened.

Chapter 5 is it always death…

You turn around then you see the mare with a knife you yell

“run!!!!!”

then everypony runs then blackness. Then you wake up from a dream you weren’t in your bed you were in a hospital bed you see your friends crowd you then you ask

“what happened"

rainbow replies with a simple

“she stabbed you”

you repliy to your friends

"so it wasn’t a dream”

twilight replies

“other ponies have be dying and there’s been no trace of anypony killing them but we need  to find the hooded mare and kill her and this will all be over”

as you start to get up you hear a faint voice saying

“night night”

you ask

“did you just hear that”

they reply with

“what are you talking about?” asked rairty

“don’t worry”

you go to the cellar with some knifes you told fluttershy to stay at her house,  as all 6 you walk up to the cellar you hear a yell of pain then you see the hooded mare and you plunge at here then nothing you pass right though her like a ghost then you realised that everypony’s dead, you guess it’s an end with no beginning