Alternative Night

by Rontio
A slightly different telling of the Night Mare's intrusion.

One day, Luna falls asleep as normal. However, this sleep is not the same as others, as she has a visitor within her own mind.




In my opinion, this isn't that great. However, if you all enjoy it, I might consider making more. Point out ANY and ALL mistakes you notice, and be as blunt as you wish. I want this to be as good as possible. Give me your honest opinions, and worry not about being persecuted. At least, not by myself.

I made it dark because I'm not sure. Advice on tagging this is appreciated and welcome.

Everyone
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
 
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2408 words: Estimated 12 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. Alternative Night 2012-06-07 15:15:52 UTC
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