The Other Me

by Emrealdsong

Rating: teen
Tags: Spike, Tragedy, Sunset Shimmer, Adventure, Discord, Flash Sentry, Main 6, Alternate Universe, Comedy
Length: 1441

One day in ponyville Twilight and her friends go on an adventure. The met the other them but, as for every adventure there is problem. They face good thing like proposals. But also learn about the disharmony here. Can Twilight and her friends help?

Warning: Contains Flash Sentry, sad concepts,lesbians, and 4th wall breaking
Once apon a time.. you know what this is just silly! Basically, Twilight and her friends go to a mountain near the breezies portal was and now there is a portal to the Bat Pony universe. Twilight and the gang came here for research on them. There plan is to find there Bat equivalents, but end up meeting more then that. They will witness proposals, fights, forgiveness, horrors of the fashion world, lose, and much much more.

Published 2015-03-26 16:30:03 UTC
Last updated 2015-03-26 16:30:03 UTC

Chapter 1: The start of the adventure

"So this is it," Rairty said looking at the portal in front of them.
"Yes, or at least I think so," Twilight said staring down at the map she levitated with her magic.
"So, are you waiting for an invite or what?" Rainbow said.
"Wouldn't y'all need r' plan?" Applejack said.
"Oh right," Twilight said, "Any ideas?"
Fluttershy raised her hoof and said, "We could ....meet our batselfs and report the difference between them and us."
"Fluttershy!" Twilight said cheerfully, "You're a genius!"
"Hello!" Pinkie said waving her hoof like crazy, "Can we go in pairs? I mean really it be more fun!"
"And it be good if one of us got into trouble," Rairty added.
"That's really a great idea," Twilight started, "Any requests?"
"I call Flutters!" Rainbow said.
"Oh fine," Rairty said, "Then I with Pinkie Pie."
"Then I guess Ima' with ya twilight," Applejack said.
"Then are we ready?" Twilight said.
"Well duh!" Rainbow said.
"Then let's go!"

~~~

"So do ya think that's Sweet Apple Acres?" Applejack said pointing to the sign that said Juicy Apple Acres.

"I'd think so," Twilight Sparkle said.

"Then yer bet that bat meh is here?"

"As long as bat you works on a dead farm, but that's very unlikely considering that the barns broken down, the trees have second to no leaves, and the ground here is as dry as a dessert."

"Well it's worth a shot, isn' it?"

"I suppose so."

"Then let's go!"

~~~

"We should go to the boutique first!" Rairty argued with Pinkie Pie.

"Nota we should go the the rock farm over there!" Pinkie pointed out pointing her hoof at the farm that had a gray-pink pony working on it's field.

"Pinkie!" Rairty exclaimed, "You just found bat you!"

"Well then can we go do that thing now?"

"If you mean get research then we may,"

~~~

"Why is this p-place s-s-so..... scary?" Fluttershy whisper stuttered.

"It's not scary it night here," Rainbow Dash said, "I think."

"Then what's that!" Fluttershy screamed as purple-gray pony almost crashed on top of them. *Crash!* The strange figure flew right into Rainbow Dash.

"Yeah!" Rainbow said, " Watch where you fly!"

"I'm sorry!" The figure now clear to be a bat pony cried out.

Fluttershy held out her hoof to the bat pony.

"Don't hurt me!" Now this just echoed in the night like sky, "Please."

"We won't hurt you, right Rainbow?"

"Fine," Rainbow said rolling her eyes, "Just tell us what you name is and why you think we're gonna hurt ya?"

"Don't you already know my name?"

"No," Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy said in sync.

The bat pony looked up, "Oh! You aren't who I thought you. And my name's Twilight"

"Twilight? As in Twilight Sparkle?"

"Yes."

"So why do you think we're going to hurt you?"

"Well, ok I'll tell you...."

~~~

"You have to make it rain Rainbow!" Bat Twilight said.

"No Twilight I won't make it rain!" Bat Rainbow said.

"Unless you'd like to starve to death, Make It Rain!"

"Are you deaf? I said No!" With that Bat Rainbow Dash bucked Bat Twilight causing her to fall.

~~~

"That's awful!" Fluttershy said.

"Why that no good other me!"

~~~

"So Twilight, do yer get a bad feelin' here?" Applejack said.

"Well yes.." Twilight said trailing off in her mind. After a brief silence, there was a rattle of branches from above.

"What was that?" Twilight said a little more quiet then usual.

"A dead tree," Applejack said trying to hide her sarcasm.

"Oh," Twilight said sheepishly, "Sorry."

"That pony should be scared for her life," A voice from above that sounded like Applejack's voice without the southern accent.

"Who are ya!"

"Nopony you need to know until I'm done with your little friend."

"Show yourself!" Twilight shouted, she was now shaking like crazy.

"Ok, I'll show myself. Just be ready for a cat nap."

"What do ya mean by 'Cat Nap'?"

"You'll find out in just a sec."

Author's Note

Hey! So if you found this story here. Thanks for reading it means a lot to see you enjoy my ideas that I come up with so thanks for reading! Thanks! Emrealdsong:twilightsmile:

Reunions and Wall Breaking

"Well she was a real meanie!" Pinkie started.

"And her word choice too!" Rairty followed, "How dare she call me a styleless horse."

"Yeah it was so bad Em had to leave it out of the story so it was bad word free."

Pinkie! Would you quit this wall breaking!

"But, I'm not breaking a wall?

I mean the fourth wall.

"Oh isn't that where I into real life or talk to the narrator?"
Yes, Pinkie it is now please let me continue the story for Pete's sake.
"There's a guy named Pete? Where!"
Nowhere it's a saying.
"Oh, ok!"
"Darling, who are you talking to?"
"Why the narrator Em!"
"Ok?"

~~~

"Rainbow, we've been flying for hours now," Fluttershy said, gasping for air. "We have to find Twilight and Applejack!" Rainbow Dash said. "Pony Dash, it's 6:59 am here," Bat Twilight Sparkle said. "Are you sure they are ok?" "Well no, but -" "Then let's look in that dead farm!"

~~~

"Are y'all ok?" Applejack said with a worried glance at her limping friend.

"I get it, I know you're worried but this is your seventh time asking about me," Twilight said, "And yes I'm fine."
"Sorry, but yer been limpin' since the bat pony hurt yer leg."
"It just hurts alright?"
"Ima' fine but y'all ain't."
"I'm too ok, besides I've felt worse things."
"Yeah, I'd know but, this is a serious."
"What, so now you're saying is that being attacked by crocodiles and plants from the everfree forest wasn't important or when I lost all of the alicorn magic that wasn't important either?"

"It were but the marks on your leg."

Twilight looked at her lifted left front leg. It had two very small dots on one side and the other side almost the same just farther apart. "You never said I was bit by that bat pony!"

"I thought ya knew that."

"Well I didn't apairently!"

"Twilight!"

"Rainbow is that you!"

"Yeah it is!"

Once Rainbow said this she, Fluttershy, and, Bat Twilight flew down toward them. Bat Twilight stayed behind Rainbow Dash. "Do either of ya know what time it is?"

"6:23 am," Bat Twilight shyly said as she step out from behind Rainbow Dash.

"How in Clestia can that be?" Twilight began, she didn't realize that her bat equivalent was right in front of her,"It's dark out and the moon hasn't moved since we came here."

"It hasn't moved for months now," Bat Twilight said a lot more bolder then her last comment, this got Twilight to look at her bat self first she didn't react then she straight up stood there silent. Like she was waiting for an invite to speak again and at perfect riming *whoss*.

Of course Twilight and her equivalent were first to respawn they said,"She's after me! Wait, she after you?"

"Rainbow is after you?"

"Rainbow is right here."

"No I mean Bat Rainbow!"

"Applejack?"

"Bat meh."

"What are you doing?" Twilight said.

"Getting ready to fly," Bat Twilight said, "Get Applejack on your back."

"What!"

"I'd rather be on Rainbow's back," Applejack said, "No offense."

"No I agree with you."

"Alright then Applejack you get on Rainbow Dash's back."

"Ok then sugarcube."

~~~

"So what do you think of this, darling?" Rairty said pointing to the short gray dress in the window shop.

"It's bland," Pinkie said.

"I know and much to short."

"What do you think Em?"

Pinkie!

"What I'm just asking?"

Fine I say my opinion, I think it should be longer and less like short shorts and could use some color like maybe purple, pink, and turquoise. Happy now pinkie?

"Yep!"
"Pinkie, who are you talking to now?" Rairty said.
"Em, silly!"
"Who is this Em character?"
"Well her real name is Emrealdsong on Fimfiction!"
"Fimfiction?"
"Yeah! That's where fan fiction writters put my little pony fanfics, in fact this is a fanficion story!"
"What's Emrealdsong's real name?"
"Em is it ok if I say your real name?"
I suppose.
"Ok, Rairty Emrealdsong's real name is Violet!"
"Well that's a nice name."
"I know!"

Author's Note

Hi you ponies so the reference count is at : 1 for this chapter
1. She's after me! She's after you? - Aladdin reference
So it won't be long till next chapter comes out see you there and be prapred for Flash Sertry