Rise of Zekeby Hawkeye259ChaptersProloguePowering Up (Pony Version)The Final BattleMaking an entranceMeeting the Mane 6Powering Up (Human Version)PrologueZeke is a human, Age: 27, Laid down black hair. But he hates ponies, it all happened in 2003, when Zeke was 12. He was outside, playing soccer with his brother. Zeke lives right next to Canterlot High, where his brother goes. His brother decided to go inside to get some water, Zeke stayed outside. When suddenly, a blinding light caught Zeke's attention, Sunset Shimmer was transforming! Zeke stared in shock. When suddenly, BAM! A giant rainbow hit Sunset Shimmer. But that's not all, since he lives right next to Canterlot High, the Rainbow hit his house! All he heard was the screams of his family. He started sobbing. But then he saw that the people who destroyed his house were ponies. He also saw that the statue was a portal to the pony world. The only thing Zeke could think about was revenge. But he didn't just want to rush in, the Mane 6 Still had their powers. So he waited until the ponies went back to Equestria and everyone else left to make his move. He went to the town labratory and asked for a job. He told the workers his story and they hired him. He said that he needed weapons to take them on, so he and the other workers got to work on 3 big things. The first was a backpack like thing, he would wear it on his back and it would carry an unlimited amount of potions for him to use. He had all different types of potions. Weakness Potions, Strenth Potions, Underwater Breathing Potions, you name it. The second thing was this big metal arm, it would attach to his potion backpack. He could control it with his mind. He would mainly use it to hold ponies down so he could throw potions at them. The last things were these glasses that let him see the future if he has them on. But he didn't want those ponies to use them for themselves, so he had surgery in order to attach the glasses to his skull so they wouldn't fall off. It took until 2015 but finally his weapons were done. Zeke was ready, he had the perfect tools in order to take his revenge. Powering Up (Pony Version)The Mane 6 were at the castle with Princess Celestia, (Who was feeling a lot better) Rarity was just thinking about Zeke's armor, "Oh my! That armor, I got to make some of that. I could sculpt it out of metal if I could find some." Rarity said. Just then, Celestia got an idea, "Rarity, can you make you and your friends some armor?" Celestia said. Rarity's eyes grew big, "I would be delighted!" She yelled, and so she got to work. She needed Celestia and the other Mane 6 to help her. She also needed to make a specific super power and put it into each costume. She started out with herself, her armor was blue and had jewels all over it. Her super power was that those jewels would fly off her armor and attack whoever she wanted them to. Next up was Twilight's armor, it was black and had stars all over it. Her super power was that those stars would light up, blinding the pony or person she wanted it to. Next was Rainbow Dash, her armor was coated with Rainbows and there was a yellow button on her chest. Her power was that if she presses the button, lightning would shoot out. (This is getting boring, I'll just tell you the rest.) Applejack: Suit is Brown with apples, can grab apples off of it. Pinkie Pie: Suit is purple with confetti all over it, the party cannon is attached to her back. Rarity thought that she shouldn't make a suit for Fluttershy because she wasn't going to fight. But just then Fluttershy burst through the door and said "Get me some armor, I need to fight Zeke." Everyone else was surprised, but Rarity got to work. Fluttershy's suit was the best of all. She had a bear call, eagle talons, and porcupine skin. The ponies put on their armor and left out the door. It was time to fight Zeke for real this time. The Final BattleThe Mane 6 met Zeke in an open field, "So that's where my diamond went." Rairity said to herself. But Twilight stepped up and started her friendship monologue, "Revenge is not the answer, you will just get further away from you goal" "OBJECTION!" All the Mane 6 turned and looked at Zeke, who was angry. "The magic of friendship doesn't work on me!" He said angrily, which followed him grabbing Twilight and throwing her. Pinkie Pie shot her party cannon, only to have it do nothing to Zeke. Rainbow Dash shot lightning but Zeke stepped out of the way. "Time to reveal my secret weapon." Zeke said before whistling, Slash landed next to him and roared. The Mane 6 realized there was no way out of this, they're only choice was to fight Zeke. Zeke started out by grabbing Fluttershy with his metal claw, only to have Rairity break her out. Rairity then shot diamonds at Zeke, but he had his Diamond Claw block it. He threw a slowness at Rainbow then had Slash claw at her. Twilight went for the dragon but it slashed at her, causing her wings to lose some feathers. Twilight fell to the ground, seeing this, Fluttershy curled up into a ball and started laying on the ground. Zeke used this opportunity to make Slash breath fire at Fluttershy. Rainbow gasped and yelled "NOOOO!" before jumping in front of Fluttershy before the fire hit her. When the smoke cleared, Rainbow was just laying there, with only a couple feathers on her wings. All of the other ponies ran over to her and Rainbow opened her eyes slowly and smiled. She then started talking, "You guys are the best friends I ever had, and tell Tank to never forget me. Never. Forget.. Me..." She closed her eyes and let out her final breath. All the Mane 5 hung their heads, Twilight looked over at Zeke and yelled "YOU MONSTER!" She lit up her stars and blinded Zeke, he could see into the future but he couldn't see this coming. Rairity then shot diamonds at Zeke, causing his hand to start dripping with blood. Zeke grunted in frustration and jumped on Slash. He bandaged up his hand while Slash did the work for him. Pinkie put Applejack into the Party cannon and launched her at Slash, causing him to fly away. Zeke used his Diamond claw to slash at all the ponies at once, he then got ready to strike when Celestia appeared and jumped on Zeke. Again, he could see into the future but he couldn't see this coming. Celestia used her horn to cut off Zeke's glasses. (Remember, Zeke's glasses were attached to his skull) Zeke let out a scream and fell to the ground, dead. Twilight started panting and walked over to Rainbow's body. She started crying but Celestia came and patted her on the back. Twilight knew that Equestria would never be the same without Rainbow. Making an entranceZeke stepped into the portal, expecting to turn into a pony, but he did not, he stayed as a human. Zeke was a little surprised at this, "That's strange, I should've became a pony." Zeke said. But then Princess Celestia walked into the portal room. She gasped and said "A human? What is a human doing here?" Zeke didn't answer the question, he just walked up to Celestia and punched her, knocking her out. Princess Luna saw this, she grabbed Celestia and ran out. Zeke had the castle all to himself. His first objective, Find and kill the Mane 6. But first he had to find them. He used the telescope to look around Ponyville. The hunt was on. Meanwhile at the hospital Celestia was just waking up, Nurse Redheart was at her side. Celestia was confused, "Who was that guy?" she asked. Nurse Redheart answered, "Luna described it as a human, it hit you in the head and you fell to the ground, Luna brought you here." That cleared up some things, but there was one more thing. "Where is Luna now?" she asked. Nurse Redheart answered this too, "Luna said that she was going to warn the other Princess's" Celestia was relieved, the other Princess's could take care of him, especially Twilight. Nurse Redheart turned out the light and Celestia went back to sleep. Zeke didn't find any trace of the ponies who ruined his life but he did find a strange house in the Everfree Forest, he decided to check there. He knocked down the door and saw Zecora. (Who was finally learning how to speak right) Zecora heard this and said "Don't you know to respect other ponies property?!" She was mad. Zeke saw zebras in his world, but none like this. "She must be related to the Mane 6." Zeke said to himself. Zecora didn't know who he was but she answered. "Yes, they are friends of mine." Zeke had found a friend of the ponies, he knew what to do. He threw a weakness potion at her and grabbed her with his metal arm. "Game over." Zeke said with a smirk on his face. He threw Zecora into the wall, knocking one of her shelves down. "Time for the others" Zeke said before leaving. Meeting the Mane 6Luna burst through the door to Twilights castle, where the Mane 6 were. "What brings you here Princess Luna?" Twilight asked. Princess Luna was panting, she was tired. "A human is in Equestria, he knocked out Celestia!" She yelled. Twilight and the others were in shock. "Where is he?" Pinkie Pie asked, "He must be new, we haven't thrown him a welcome to Ponyville party!" Applejack sighed and said "He must be dangerous, he doesn't need a welcoming party." Rainbow Dash smiled and said "He must be pretty awesome to have knocked out the Princess out." "Wait, where is Fluttershy?" They heard the door open and close, then they heard a sound that sounded like a Pegasus taking off. Luna rolled her eyes and said "Stop messing around!" Twilight thought the same thing, so she said "If there is one pony who would know something about this, it's Zecora!" So the Mane 5 (Fluttershy is gone) ran off to Zecora's house. When they went through the Everfree Forset, they saw that Zecora's door was gone. "What happened to her door?" Twilight asked to herself. The Mane 5 walked into the house and saw that it was wrecked. Then they saw Zecora lying on the floor. "Zecora!" Everypony screamed. They ran over to Zecora, "Call for help!" Rainbow yelled. So Twilight did, 2 minutes later Nurse Redheart had Zecora on a stretcher. "Do you think that it was that human?" Rarity asked. "Yes, both Celestia and Zecora were knocked out in a matter of an hour." Nurse Redheart answered, and they carried Zecora off to the hospital. After the Mane 6 (Fluttershy is with them again) walked out of the hospital, Zeke landed in front of them. "The human!" Fluttershy said and she hid in a bush. "I've finally found the ponies who ruined my life." said Zeke, and he told the ponies his story. "Is that why you have that magnificent looking armor on?" Rarity asked. All the other ponies got in fighting stance. Zeke laughed and said, "You really want to take me on? O.K." And he got in a fighting stance as well. But the ponies were outmatched, every time they did an attack, Zeke would counter it one way or another. The ponies had no choice but to retreat, they had to get stronger in order to beat Zeke. Powering Up (Human Version)Zeke realized that those ponies are strong, they lost, but they put up a good fight. "I'm going to need better armor" Zeke said to himself. Just then he saw a sparkle of the corner of his eye, he turned around to find Rarity carrying a giant diamond. He used his metal claw to swipe that diamond "COME BACK!!!" Rarity yelled as she saw her diamond float away. Zeke, with the diamond at hand, went back into the human world and had some gemworkers carve it into a suit of armor. Zeke knew this armor would protect them from the Mane 6. Zeke also upgraded his claw, he made it diamond as well. Now it has a stronger grip and it hurts more, Zeke then got a strength potion out of his backpack and threw it on himself. There was only one thing left to get, a fighting partner. He went down to a cave and saw a sleeping dragon. He used his new diamond hand to snap, that woke the dragon up. He then was able to give the dragon commands by doing different hand signals (Kind of like how that guy did to the raptors in Jurrasic World) Soon he was able to get the dragon to do just about anything he wanted. He got on his dragon, which he named "Slash", and took off. He took Slash to the Everfree Forest and had him destroy trees on command. Eventually a couple Temberwolves showed up and looked hungry. Zeke smiled and pointed at the wolves, Slash breathed fire and killed them. Zeke started laughing and Slash roared, Zeke knew he could avenge his family now.
PrologueZeke is a human, Age: 27, Laid down black hair. But he hates ponies, it all happened in 2003, when Zeke was 12. He was outside, playing soccer with his brother. Zeke lives right next to Canterlot High, where his brother goes. His brother decided to go inside to get some water, Zeke stayed outside. When suddenly, a blinding light caught Zeke's attention, Sunset Shimmer was transforming! Zeke stared in shock. When suddenly, BAM! A giant rainbow hit Sunset Shimmer. But that's not all, since he lives right next to Canterlot High, the Rainbow hit his house! All he heard was the screams of his family. He started sobbing. But then he saw that the people who destroyed his house were ponies. He also saw that the statue was a portal to the pony world. The only thing Zeke could think about was revenge. But he didn't just want to rush in, the Mane 6 Still had their powers. So he waited until the ponies went back to Equestria and everyone else left to make his move. He went to the town labratory and asked for a job. He told the workers his story and they hired him. He said that he needed weapons to take them on, so he and the other workers got to work on 3 big things. The first was a backpack like thing, he would wear it on his back and it would carry an unlimited amount of potions for him to use. He had all different types of potions. Weakness Potions, Strenth Potions, Underwater Breathing Potions, you name it. The second thing was this big metal arm, it would attach to his potion backpack. He could control it with his mind. He would mainly use it to hold ponies down so he could throw potions at them. The last things were these glasses that let him see the future if he has them on. But he didn't want those ponies to use them for themselves, so he had surgery in order to attach the glasses to his skull so they wouldn't fall off. It took until 2015 but finally his weapons were done. Zeke was ready, he had the perfect tools in order to take his revenge.
Powering Up (Pony Version)The Mane 6 were at the castle with Princess Celestia, (Who was feeling a lot better) Rarity was just thinking about Zeke's armor, "Oh my! That armor, I got to make some of that. I could sculpt it out of metal if I could find some." Rarity said. Just then, Celestia got an idea, "Rarity, can you make you and your friends some armor?" Celestia said. Rarity's eyes grew big, "I would be delighted!" She yelled, and so she got to work. She needed Celestia and the other Mane 6 to help her. She also needed to make a specific super power and put it into each costume. She started out with herself, her armor was blue and had jewels all over it. Her super power was that those jewels would fly off her armor and attack whoever she wanted them to. Next up was Twilight's armor, it was black and had stars all over it. Her super power was that those stars would light up, blinding the pony or person she wanted it to. Next was Rainbow Dash, her armor was coated with Rainbows and there was a yellow button on her chest. Her power was that if she presses the button, lightning would shoot out. (This is getting boring, I'll just tell you the rest.) Applejack: Suit is Brown with apples, can grab apples off of it. Pinkie Pie: Suit is purple with confetti all over it, the party cannon is attached to her back. Rarity thought that she shouldn't make a suit for Fluttershy because she wasn't going to fight. But just then Fluttershy burst through the door and said "Get me some armor, I need to fight Zeke." Everyone else was surprised, but Rarity got to work. Fluttershy's suit was the best of all. She had a bear call, eagle talons, and porcupine skin. The ponies put on their armor and left out the door. It was time to fight Zeke for real this time.
The Final BattleThe Mane 6 met Zeke in an open field, "So that's where my diamond went." Rairity said to herself. But Twilight stepped up and started her friendship monologue, "Revenge is not the answer, you will just get further away from you goal" "OBJECTION!" All the Mane 6 turned and looked at Zeke, who was angry. "The magic of friendship doesn't work on me!" He said angrily, which followed him grabbing Twilight and throwing her. Pinkie Pie shot her party cannon, only to have it do nothing to Zeke. Rainbow Dash shot lightning but Zeke stepped out of the way. "Time to reveal my secret weapon." Zeke said before whistling, Slash landed next to him and roared. The Mane 6 realized there was no way out of this, they're only choice was to fight Zeke. Zeke started out by grabbing Fluttershy with his metal claw, only to have Rairity break her out. Rairity then shot diamonds at Zeke, but he had his Diamond Claw block it. He threw a slowness at Rainbow then had Slash claw at her. Twilight went for the dragon but it slashed at her, causing her wings to lose some feathers. Twilight fell to the ground, seeing this, Fluttershy curled up into a ball and started laying on the ground. Zeke used this opportunity to make Slash breath fire at Fluttershy. Rainbow gasped and yelled "NOOOO!" before jumping in front of Fluttershy before the fire hit her. When the smoke cleared, Rainbow was just laying there, with only a couple feathers on her wings. All of the other ponies ran over to her and Rainbow opened her eyes slowly and smiled. She then started talking, "You guys are the best friends I ever had, and tell Tank to never forget me. Never. Forget.. Me..." She closed her eyes and let out her final breath. All the Mane 5 hung their heads, Twilight looked over at Zeke and yelled "YOU MONSTER!" She lit up her stars and blinded Zeke, he could see into the future but he couldn't see this coming. Rairity then shot diamonds at Zeke, causing his hand to start dripping with blood. Zeke grunted in frustration and jumped on Slash. He bandaged up his hand while Slash did the work for him. Pinkie put Applejack into the Party cannon and launched her at Slash, causing him to fly away. Zeke used his Diamond claw to slash at all the ponies at once, he then got ready to strike when Celestia appeared and jumped on Zeke. Again, he could see into the future but he couldn't see this coming. Celestia used her horn to cut off Zeke's glasses. (Remember, Zeke's glasses were attached to his skull) Zeke let out a scream and fell to the ground, dead. Twilight started panting and walked over to Rainbow's body. She started crying but Celestia came and patted her on the back. Twilight knew that Equestria would never be the same without Rainbow.
Making an entranceZeke stepped into the portal, expecting to turn into a pony, but he did not, he stayed as a human. Zeke was a little surprised at this, "That's strange, I should've became a pony." Zeke said. But then Princess Celestia walked into the portal room. She gasped and said "A human? What is a human doing here?" Zeke didn't answer the question, he just walked up to Celestia and punched her, knocking her out. Princess Luna saw this, she grabbed Celestia and ran out. Zeke had the castle all to himself. His first objective, Find and kill the Mane 6. But first he had to find them. He used the telescope to look around Ponyville. The hunt was on. Meanwhile at the hospital Celestia was just waking up, Nurse Redheart was at her side. Celestia was confused, "Who was that guy?" she asked. Nurse Redheart answered, "Luna described it as a human, it hit you in the head and you fell to the ground, Luna brought you here." That cleared up some things, but there was one more thing. "Where is Luna now?" she asked. Nurse Redheart answered this too, "Luna said that she was going to warn the other Princess's" Celestia was relieved, the other Princess's could take care of him, especially Twilight. Nurse Redheart turned out the light and Celestia went back to sleep. Zeke didn't find any trace of the ponies who ruined his life but he did find a strange house in the Everfree Forest, he decided to check there. He knocked down the door and saw Zecora. (Who was finally learning how to speak right) Zecora heard this and said "Don't you know to respect other ponies property?!" She was mad. Zeke saw zebras in his world, but none like this. "She must be related to the Mane 6." Zeke said to himself. Zecora didn't know who he was but she answered. "Yes, they are friends of mine." Zeke had found a friend of the ponies, he knew what to do. He threw a weakness potion at her and grabbed her with his metal arm. "Game over." Zeke said with a smirk on his face. He threw Zecora into the wall, knocking one of her shelves down. "Time for the others" Zeke said before leaving.
Meeting the Mane 6Luna burst through the door to Twilights castle, where the Mane 6 were. "What brings you here Princess Luna?" Twilight asked. Princess Luna was panting, she was tired. "A human is in Equestria, he knocked out Celestia!" She yelled. Twilight and the others were in shock. "Where is he?" Pinkie Pie asked, "He must be new, we haven't thrown him a welcome to Ponyville party!" Applejack sighed and said "He must be dangerous, he doesn't need a welcoming party." Rainbow Dash smiled and said "He must be pretty awesome to have knocked out the Princess out." "Wait, where is Fluttershy?" They heard the door open and close, then they heard a sound that sounded like a Pegasus taking off. Luna rolled her eyes and said "Stop messing around!" Twilight thought the same thing, so she said "If there is one pony who would know something about this, it's Zecora!" So the Mane 5 (Fluttershy is gone) ran off to Zecora's house. When they went through the Everfree Forset, they saw that Zecora's door was gone. "What happened to her door?" Twilight asked to herself. The Mane 5 walked into the house and saw that it was wrecked. Then they saw Zecora lying on the floor. "Zecora!" Everypony screamed. They ran over to Zecora, "Call for help!" Rainbow yelled. So Twilight did, 2 minutes later Nurse Redheart had Zecora on a stretcher. "Do you think that it was that human?" Rarity asked. "Yes, both Celestia and Zecora were knocked out in a matter of an hour." Nurse Redheart answered, and they carried Zecora off to the hospital. After the Mane 6 (Fluttershy is with them again) walked out of the hospital, Zeke landed in front of them. "The human!" Fluttershy said and she hid in a bush. "I've finally found the ponies who ruined my life." said Zeke, and he told the ponies his story. "Is that why you have that magnificent looking armor on?" Rarity asked. All the other ponies got in fighting stance. Zeke laughed and said, "You really want to take me on? O.K." And he got in a fighting stance as well. But the ponies were outmatched, every time they did an attack, Zeke would counter it one way or another. The ponies had no choice but to retreat, they had to get stronger in order to beat Zeke.
Powering Up (Human Version)Zeke realized that those ponies are strong, they lost, but they put up a good fight. "I'm going to need better armor" Zeke said to himself. Just then he saw a sparkle of the corner of his eye, he turned around to find Rarity carrying a giant diamond. He used his metal claw to swipe that diamond "COME BACK!!!" Rarity yelled as she saw her diamond float away. Zeke, with the diamond at hand, went back into the human world and had some gemworkers carve it into a suit of armor. Zeke knew this armor would protect them from the Mane 6. Zeke also upgraded his claw, he made it diamond as well. Now it has a stronger grip and it hurts more, Zeke then got a strength potion out of his backpack and threw it on himself. There was only one thing left to get, a fighting partner. He went down to a cave and saw a sleeping dragon. He used his new diamond hand to snap, that woke the dragon up. He then was able to give the dragon commands by doing different hand signals (Kind of like how that guy did to the raptors in Jurrasic World) Soon he was able to get the dragon to do just about anything he wanted. He got on his dragon, which he named "Slash", and took off. He took Slash to the Everfree Forest and had him destroy trees on command. Eventually a couple Temberwolves showed up and looked hungry. Zeke smiled and pointed at the wolves, Slash breathed fire and killed them. Zeke started laughing and Slash roared, Zeke knew he could avenge his family now.
