Piercing Eyes

by Draco S Brony

3. The Feels!!! (unedited)

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David had proceeded to scout the area until he had found the place he was looking for.
“Ponyville” he said looking at the Welcome to Ponyville sign that was right outside the small town. He had seen Canterlot up on a nearby mountain so he knew Ponyville would be there somewhere.
He giggled like a schoolgirl (schoolfilly?) and proceeded to skip right into town. As he skipped he got some odd looks from the other ponies, but he didn't care, he was in the land of his dreams, and nothing could ruin this moment.

Just then he saw a pink pony zip bye, apparently trying to stay out of his sight. For most it would have worked, but because of his memory and extreme attention to details, it did not.
She was a pink pony with no wings or horn, making her an earth pony. She had a poofy, magenta, mane and tale, as well as bright, sky blue, eyes. Her cutie mark was a picture of 3 balloons 2 blue ones and yellow one between them.
He smiled, already knowing who she was, and what would happen next. He sat there thinking of what he wanted to do, he smiled deviously, deciding to have some fun with her. He saw her approaching from behind so he readied himself for what was to come.

As she launched herself at him, he spun so that he was facing her. Rearing up on his hind legs, he brought his front hooves under hers, grabbing her sides. He lifted her up and twirled her through the air, like a princess, using the momentum from her leap

“Alas, it has been too long my love! Long have I waited to see your beautiful face once more!” he said, in his best dramatic voice.
“And I have missed you my love! It has been hard these many years without you by my side.” She responded as he set her down, apparently deciding to play along.

“What a cruel mistress fate must be to have made us children of rival families.” He said, draping a hoof over his forehead dramatically.

“Indeed, what I wouldn't do to change our lineage so that we may stay together” she said hugging him close and letting a tear fall. Oh she’s good…

“But now we must rejoice! For I have discovered a way to finally bring us together!” he said, placing a hoof on her shoulder.

“For truth? We can finally be as we have wished for so long?” she said sitting on her haunches and bringing her for hooves to her chest, a bright hopeful look upon her face.

“Yes, your father has agreed to meet with me on the subject. He even gave me a peace offering.” He replied.

“Oh? What is it?” she said looking at him questioningly
“It was-” He cut himself off, coughing furiously before collapsing into her hooves.

“My love!” she held him close to her chest and pushed his mane out of his eyes (despite the fact that she couldn't see his eyes) noticing the blood on his lips. Oh, he’s good… “What has happened to you?”

“The peace offering, it was a wine sample, it must have been poisoned.” He said, convulsing slightly while breathing shallowly.

“No! This cannot be!” she said, sad tears streaming down her face.

“I’m afraid it is my love, all I ask now, is that you hold me close until I pass.” He said, bringing a hoof to her face to wipe away her tears.

“Of course my love.” She said, doing as asked. She held him close to her until his hoof which had been resting on her face fell limply to the ground. She raised her head to the air while yelling a dramatic “nooo!” before collapsing over him.

She hadn't noticed but they had drawn a massive crowd. As she finished her last bit the crowd erupted with applause. Some were even in tears from the performance, while others just stood there slack jawed. She and David got up and bowed, before running off laughing at their own antics.

“Hahaha-hooo… that was wonderful Pinkie Pie!” said David, addressing the pink pony. He had noticed that despite his thin look he was rather tall compared to most ponies.
Maybe even taller than…HIM.

“I know! You were great too though.” Said Pinkie Pie, bumping against him in a playful manner.

“Indeed! I can't wait for your party.” He said, placing a hoof on her shoulder “However, I must regrettably ask that you hold off for a time being. Until I am done setting some other events in motion. Is that alright?”

“Sure!” said Pinkie pie, a cheery smile on her face. ”How much time you need?”

“Oh, don't worry, you'll know when I'm ready. Anyway, good bye miss Pinkamena Diane pie.” He said, as he began to walk a separate direction.

“Ok, bye!” she said, stopping to wave a hoof before continuing on her way.

Just then, she stopped and realized something she hadn't before. “How did he know my name?”


Author's Note

Sorry this didn't come out sooner like I said it would. But, like I said in the comments, I had to fix some small, story related things, first. There are probably still more of the same grammar issues and such, but those will be fixed when I have this, and the upcoming chapters, edited.

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