Sadist in Equestria
The room was dimly lit with fluorescent light bulb lamps located around a dirty examination table set in the middle of the room. Blood stains streaked across the walls at random consistent with the severing of arteries. The room felt haunted by the countless souls that had perished inside. This room belonged to Dr. Jason S. Vunderheimer wanted for over 50 counts of Murder to the first degree in the USA. he is a tall middlel aged white man wearing a standard doctor’s coat stained with blood of previous victims. Inside the room Begging could be heard.
“Ah, such a fine specimen.” Said Dr.Jason with a menacing smile as he picked up his grey bone saw with his gloved hand.
‘P-Please don’t do this, I have a w-wife and 3 children!” Begged his helpless victim strapped to the examination table in the middle of the room. He had short black hair with a medium build, he was thrashing against his restraints with all of the might he could muster out of his malnourished body. He had no clothes present save for the pair of tattered boxers he had on.
“Awww, Are you going to cry now?” Chuckled the doctor. Despite his victim’s screams and desperate pleading he slowly started to saw through his right femur, blood spurting from the wound as he committed the heinous deed. The doctor knew the human anatomy very well and knew that the femur was the most painful bone in the anatomy to break, or in this case, saw through. The doctor giggled slightly to himself as he reveled in his helpless victim’s screams of pure pain. He put down his bone saw down on the table to his left that contained his medical tools it’s sharp edged now covered with strips of flesh and carefully took out his favorite stainless steel scalpel.
“Now, please hold still.” Jason evilly joked as he lined up his scalpel’s sharp edge to his victim’s eye. The person strapped to the table was near unconscious from the excruciating pain he had experienced from the doctor’s now blood covered bone saw. He barely had enough energy to try to plead to the sinister man with the scalpel.
“Let me-” was all he managed to to get out before the doctor jabbed his scalpel into his eye only deep enough to severe the optic nerve but still enough to cause even more pain.
“PLEASE END ME NOW!” He yelled desperately. “Oh, why would I do that? the fun has just begun.” Jason said sadistically.He started to slowly twist the scalpel tearing the eye into shreds and adding on to the pain. The pain was too much to bear for the victim and he passed out into blissful unconsciousness.
“Oh no, you’re going to be awake for every second of this.” Jason said angrily as he took out an adrenaline shot from his right coat pocket. He jabbed the syringe into the victims unruined leg with force. After a few seconds he came back to consciousness with a loud gasp and sweat running down his temples.
“Please, just l-let me d-die.” He pleaded “I’ll do a-anything!”
“Oh will you now?” He said as he returned back to his medial table and retrieved a bottle of highly concentrated sulfiric acid.
“Just Open wide!” He poured half of the acid onto his face and watched as the skin began to blister and eventually fall off. The screams of pain were getting to be too much for jason’s ears. As much as he enjoyed them it was starting to hurt. A few hours later Jason exited the room, his Doctor’s coat now covered in fresh blood, Laughing evilly to himself.
“The next one will be in for a nasty surprise!” He said as he went down the corridor to the room next door. A Large machine could be seen inside.
End of prologue
Author’s notes:
What do you think about this so far? Should I continue this? This is my first story so Constructive criticism is welcome. I’m also in need of a pre-reader in case I continue.