The Black Swordsman

by Elliott Johnston

Rating: mature
Tags: Sad, Main 6, Tirek, Princess Luna, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Romance, Adventure, Sex, King Sombra, Princess Celestia, Alternate Universe, Human
Length: 3337

This story starts on a planet called Earth, and one normal aged 24 human man called Jack, has a weird experience, But he is going on the best Adventure than any Human would imagine..

But sometimes the days change, and when they change like Jacks Monday changed, it was unbelievable.
But sometimes god likes to play a little game with him, so he decides to make his Arcane Magick (Magic)
that was dormant, became exploding with power and ready to defend and offend his enemys.
He maybe a wimp at the start of this story, but Jack will get confident, glory, power, friends and maybe a girlfriend, but all we know is that what gender? what race? and what will he feel about that lets see.

hope u guys enjoy this story im coming up on the top of my head haha lol

Grammar,Punctuation Warning

Also, later on in the story Jack's name will be changed because of his own preferences.

Published 2015-04-11 15:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2017-11-20 08:52:09 UTC

Prologue (Edited)

Prologue

Hi, my names Jack, and boy o boy do i have a story for you guys, lets see, were to begin, Jack ponders.

Ah there we go, now i remember,  wow that was a long time ago, but anyways lets get back to the story.

Monday March 3rd 2015

Ding,Ding,Ding moans can be heard from Jacks bedside, "god fucking dammit alarm clock", "can you please shut the fuck up"! jack shouts. "I don't have time to deal with this shit" jack shouted.

As Jack, slowly and groggy, sits up out of bed, "why am i so tired i only went to sleep at eleven twenty",

Jack finally gets up out of bed to head to the shower, he pulled all of his Pajamas off, and onto the white tiled floor.

Jack walks over to the grey and silver nob, and turns it all the way to the right, the shower starts to trickle lots of water, out of its head, and jack gets in when its hot enough for him.

As the hot, and steamy water goes over his body, he finally relaxes, after a while of getting a shower, and dressed he now realizes, hes late for work."Oh shit, fuck sake i'm late!, Again i'm so gonna get fired for this" jack sighs for a moment, then moves on.

He walks down, his creaky old steps, and all jack hears, is a loud Creeeaak   sound, as he walks down the old steps.

when he got to the bottom, he walks straight out of the door, and turns around, and puts the key in the door, and locks its.

But then he turns to his watch, on his left hand, and he is so super late, and he will be fired for sure.

"Oh my god" jack shouts, "Are you kidding me?, why is my life doing this to me, what have i done"?.

Jack starts to leg it down the path, crossing streets and some shops, but the only reason why he is not taking his usual route, is because he wants to go through the forest, because its a quicker short cut, than his usual route.

As Jack, picks up speed, and gets closer, and closer to the forest, he gets a weird vibe, "what the hell?, whats this feeling, it feels so weird, even though its a forest there's not much nature in it, just lots of trees, and i mean alot but not many animals".

He finally reached the forest, and now has already entered the gates, trees are dotted to every spot imaginable, but he doesn't waste to much time, and runs even faster, and faster into the deep and thick woods.

But something clicked, something that reminded him, of when he was a teenager, somewhere around fourteen and fifteen, "holy shit, now i remember that My little pony's show, that's why this play reminds me of it, it reminds me of the Everfree forest".

But out of the corner of his eye, he sees a silhouette, running at an insane speed, that none human could imagine doing, but there was shinny object carrying it with he or she, it looked like a sword or some dagger.

"probably nothing, but wait why does it keep on getting faster, and faster at me,? what the hell,? it looks like the most hottest fucking chick, with,? cat ears and a tail, what?".

Then while he was thinking, what it could be, he didn't realize, the sword nearly coming in contact, with his right arm, he ducked, and ran off saying, "Hey watch that you could've killed me" Jack shouted.

He was running so fast, he was burning out of stamina, and the mysterious girl, chasing him with a long sword, like a maniac, but he kept on running, and running.

Oh my god, what is she doing?, why is she chasing me, with a sword she could've killed me, there a hiding spot.

i dove into the Tree, were a massive hole was, luckily she didn't see, i jumped inside of it, and waited.

As she came closer, and closer i could hear, her foot steps, "god damn she looks so sexy, dunno why, she trying to kill me though", but apparently she heard, what i said, but i couldn't see, if she was blushing (but she was).

girl "What did you just say", "Oh shit" the girl swings at the tree, and cuts right through it.

It even cut a tiny bit, of my hair, of my head, as the tree fell to the side, i was trapped in a little hole, looking up at her.

I find what words to say, to her before she kills me, "i'm so, so, so, sorry i didn't mean to say anything rude, but i couldn't help but think about it, i am a boy you know", i said the girl starts to blush madly, like a tomato.

The girl bends down, and says "Run", "What"? i said "I SAID, RUN" the girl shouted.

I stood up, and she faced me, with none emotional eyes, like she was waiting, for me to sprint.

I ask "why did you chase me, and tried to kill me" i asked in the most, smallest voice, i could muster.

"i'm an a assassin, NOW RUN, BEFORE I KILL YOU", my eyes shout out, as she said those words.

Then i got my legs into gear, and ran as fast as i could, i ran, and ran, and ran but i stopped, and looked around,

"ermm, this is not the forest, i was in before, it looks more dense, and even scary looking", i said scared.

But i stopped, to think of the girl, and why this forest is different, like i knew it looked familiar, but i was snapped out of my thoughts, when i heard the loudest lion shout ever, it even sounded like, "oh god no that sounded like a Manticore, oh shit i better help that girl, shit but im weak to fight off a lion, with fucking stingers jesus christ".

I started, sprinting towards the sound, of a battle going on, but as i jumped in the bushes, i saw the same Assassin, on the floor, ready to be striked by a large stinger, i don't know what happened to me, but it felt like, energy, and adrenalin shoot through my veins, and body.

It felt like i had power, and speed, i looked over to the right, like the world was in slow motion, and found the sword, sitting there all innocent. so i decided, what to do right then, and there.

I got all the air, and shouted as loud, as i could, even it sounded 45x louder, than the Canterlot voice, "DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE TOUCH HER" the two looked at me for a second, then it all became, a blur to them.

I sprung forward, with all my might, and grabbed the sword, from the ground, and sliced through its stinger, then jumped up, into the air, and came right back down, to its neck, and sliced through its neck, then the body slumped to the ground, lifeless.

As i recovered, from my attack, all there was left, was the cut in halve stinger, leaking out yellow liquid, and a sliced head, by a tree, the body was spilling out blood, everywere, and the manticore, was no more.

I looked around, and saw the girl on the floor, with wide eyes, "i errr" i started to speak "im sorry, if i scared you in anyway, i didn't intend to kill the manticore only wound him, but i can not stand by, and watch a beautiful person like you die by that beast".

The village

The girl got up, from her battered feet, she came closer, as her curiosity grew, and grew, when she was nose to nose with me, she spoke "How did you do that, and why did you save me" she said with curiosity.

"Because i saw someone in danger, and i came here to see what was going on, but you were about to be killed, by a manticore, so i just, snapped" i said with confusion.

"Well, what is your name, i didn't quite catch it, i'm afraid" she said "Oh my names Jack Fire, and what's yours, if you don't mind me asking?" "my names Lyna cold, and its a pleasure to meet you, Jack Fire" loud lion shouts could be heard, in the distance,  "We must go, Lyna there could be more dangerous things, in these woods i said.

We both sped off, into the dark, and cold woods, "so can i ask you, why you were trying to kill me?. "its because, if i find anything regarding alien, or spiritual threat, i will find them, and kill them, but you do not seem evil so, ill trust you.

We both see a sign, that say's Ponyville "is that a town, or something Lyna?" i said curious, "yes it is Jack, that is the town, i live in as of now, there are friends, i want you too meet, but they are not human, but they are ponies.

"Wait, ponies,? what the fuck,  wait oh my god," i shouted " so i was right, this is Equestria, how the fuck, did i end up here?.

As we walk through town, a few ponies were walking by there everyday normal life, but as they seen me, they stared for a few moments, then carried on with there day.

"ok this is a bit weird, normally they would just stare, then flee away from me, since they have never seen anything like me, before, but i don't know why, there not running away in fear, maybe because there always, weird things happening in this little town" i pondered.

"Yeah, well that happened to me the first time, but i guess your just lucky, or they just think that your my brother or something, witch i'm not obviously" Lyna deadpanned.

As we got through half of the town, we saw a pony, with bright pink hair, light pink body, and she looks like shes either, on drugs or just hyper.

When this pink pony saw us, she gasp, and whizzed of thus, breaking logic and laws of physics

"well that was interesting, do you know who was that pink pony, Lyna?".

Keep in mind, that Jack here doesn't want to tell anybody yet, so hes gonna be clueless about everything, and he will wait till its the right time, and i mean he doesnt want to tell them, they are fictional and part of a TV program.

"Oh her shes called Pinkie Pie, she sometimes acts like that, and little weird" said Lyna

"little,? that's an understatement, anyway not to be rude, or anything but since ive just got randomly teleported, to this unknown planet, were do you think ill sleep?" i said.

"Well not to embarrass you or anything, but you will have to sleep in my bed with me, and ill ask Twilight, if you can" Lyna said.

"Wait, WHAT! but ive never slept with a girl, if that's true, then i promise i wont do anything, if you want me too.." (To be honest, i really wish she did, she actually is pretty nice) (I can hear you, (giggle) you know and thanks for the compliment

(GOD DAMMIT, LYNA YOU CAN READ MINDS!)

"hahaha don't be so mad, i wont use it, with out your consent, or if your in danger" Lyna said calmly "well yeah, you can use it, for that kinda thing but don't use it on purpose, because i like were my privacy is thank you"

They finally got up, to the golden oak tree "wow, so that's your home,? kinda neet if you ask me." "Its alright i guess, but its better than nothing" she said

We walked up to the steps, and knocked on the door three times, "coming" a feminine voice said the door slowly opened, and a pair of 2 Violette eyes were looking at the both of us.

"Oh hey Twilight, i want you to meet my new friend here" Twilight looked, over to the strange but familiar being, right next to Lyna "err hey Twilight my names Jack, Jack Fire" i said nervous

She gasped, and opened the door so fast, faster, that would put rainbow dash to shame, She ran over, and grabbed me by the shoulders, and dragged me into her home

"aah why are you dragging me, i can walk my self you know" she throws me onto the sofa, wow its actually quite soft i thought.

Lyna comes in bursting out in laughter, "Hahaaha, oh my it was so funny, the way you got dragged in, you were like oh no help me"

Twilight walks over to Lyna, "Lyna i need to whisper you something" she said quietly "Yeah what is it Twilight"

"have you noticed, how hot he looks even though hes not my species"

"Yeah hes pretty hot, but if you tell him it might get alittle further, for you i mean wink, wink"

Twilight turned a bright crimson "i would not do such a thing, and i only just met the guy, so why are you being so calm about this"

"because i met him, in the forest and we have been talking, and getting to know each other, oh and did you know he saved me from an manticore, he killed it because i was about to be stung by its stinger"

Twilight went wide eyed "How could he, take on a manticore?" I walked over to see why they are whispering, and walked behind Twilight, and tapped on her shoulder.

"Yes Jack" she turned around, going crimson again and a bit nervous, and i noticed it aswell, "why are you going red?, and whats got you nervous, because you looked like you were having fun, dragging me across the room like a ragdoll".

"Im sorry, im sorry its just that, i have not seen your kind before, and you look quite familiar to Lyna, over here so i guess i got too excited, didnt i" she said full of sorrow

I even saw, tiers about to flow down her cheek, so i walked over to her, and gave her a loving hug "hey, hey Twilight, its ok i was just wondering, what it all was about, don't please, dont cry i dont like seeing cute girls, or mares cry."

Swords are awesome

"Are you ok now?" i said sincerely, the cute purple mare was still wrapped tight in my bear arms, "yes im fine now, thanks for the hug" Twilight smiles, we both let go of each other before it gets awkward, "Hey Twi, is it ok if i go out side for a bit i need some air" she looks confused at my statement, "course you can im not stopping you, so go ahead" she smiles.

I walked passed Lyna, and not even seeing the fact that shes blushing hard right now "see ya Lyna ill be right back"

"uhh.. yeah sure" Lyna stutters, I walk out the door and looked at the beautiful scenery around me, i was walking to the everfree forest and i don't even know why i chose to go to that kind of place there could be dangers everywhere.

it suddenly got really dark for a moment and i think i see a castle "holy shit that's the castle from the show" i ran towards the old and rundown castle to find a broken up bridge "well, this bridge looks like it could collapse any minute im surprised its still there after a thousand years" i walk across step by step and being careful not to break the wood underneath me to my doom.

for some reason i actually got across without falling, if i did i would be a goner "damn this castle is big, in the series it didn't look that big at all but i was looking at a bloody computer screen" i turn around to hear very loud growls similar to wolves, "oh shit" i see 3 timberwolves come out of the dark greenery bushes, they jump over the bridge without any hesitation i run so fast you would be calling horses snails.

I run passed the open doors of the castle and close the big doors behind me and hopefully they stay that way, lots of collums are littering the floors and some are even broken down, "im kinda surpised that this place is still up without that many support holding it up" i see a shiny long object in the ground were the altar is.

I walk over to the altar to find it looks like a handle of some sort and its in the ground with deep cracks around it, "wait does that look like a sword?" i ask my self unknown of a black mist watching me. Yeah this could be an actual sword "to be honest i think swords are more honorable than guns and they look way cooler" so i deiced to pull on the swords handle and hearing audible cracking noises from the bottom of the handle.

I pull with all my might and i finally pull out the sword, leaving me panting and exhausted from using up my energy i look over at the sword and it looks like the Elucidator from Sword art online. "Oh.. my god is that...is that the Elucidator, how is it here?" i hear the door open and in comes the timber wolves.

"God fucking dammit how the hell can those pieces of fucking wood push a door 10x bigger than themselves, i swear magic is bullshit" i shout at them but they get into there fighting stance as there green eyes lock onto mine.

"Ok fuck heads lets see how you fend against my Elucidator"

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I charged at them with all my fury slicing one of the timberwolf head off and green gooey substance coming out of the neck, and carefully dodging one of the wooden claws trying to slice my rib cage open, i bring my Elucidator up meeting the stomach of the 2nd timberwolf and sliced its whole body in half, leaving the other timberwolf but this timberwolf was different he had many scars on him mainly the eye and it was bigger than the normal ones, "so, your the alpha wolf?" i asked.

surprisingly the wolf started to talk "Yes i am and may i ask your name human?" he said in a raspy tone "So you know what i am, and to answer your question its Jack and yours?" i asked, "Its Black scar and if you defeat me here every timberwolf will respect you and you will gain the title Alpha.

We both got into our stance and my elucidator in a tight grip, we both rushed at each other i swung my blade as hard as i could and black scar tried to block it but it went straight through his claw and ripped it clean off, he screamed in anger and ran at me full force i moved out of the way and swung my sword straight through his skull decapitating him with a loud thud.

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"You were a good fighter black scar, i hope you find peace were ever you go. i said with tears in my eyes i picked the body and head up and went outside and berried the body and prayed while the black mist in the castle was watching me while i prayed.

I got up and walked back into the castle to take a break of what had transpired here but i saw a black mist hovering infront of me "um who are you?" i ask the mist curiously The mist stepped backwards and turned into a ball of blackness and out came a pony that i already knew it was Nightmare moon.

"holy fucking shit".

My Life Is A Nightmare.

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The Walk

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The Embarrassing Boutique

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OC Character Pics

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The Dark Repulser

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Darkness

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The Pain Inside

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Inner Demons

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I am really sorry. This Story Is Now Cancelled.

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