RED
Final
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Everything is fucking worse in hindsight. This fic isn't great, but considering it was a one through with a sensitive topic, I think it did well enough. Gonna cap this off and wrap it up.
Also...this maybe be one of my best works on a clop scene.... Now...I'm gonna go change.....
Final
The door snapped shut as Harp was tossed out. I followed after Red as she steamed. "Uh...you alright?"
"Fine." She stomped past and turned her head up. "I didn't really want to wait around listening to him talk about his boyfriend anyways. The others weren't going to show up."
A loud knock came from the front door. I jogged over and peeked my head out. A colorful herd of horses and a man in such a tight tee shirt it threatened to rip off like the hulk, were waiting at the door. I waved at them. "Hi.... She's...not feeling well." I stuck my hand out. "Jamie...nice to meet you al--"
"Close the door!" Red shrieked, with a stomp of her hoof.
I frowned as apologetically as I could at the herd of gay and ducked back into the apartment. "Red? Red where'd you go?"
"Bedroom!" She shouted with such a quiet rage I couldn't help but flinch. "Just.... I'm gonna freaking pee on you."
"What?" I walked through the living room and towards the hallway into the bedroom. "Why would you do that?" I laughed softly and opened the door into the bedroom. Red's wings were flung out as she tried to strip bare. "What's going on?"
Red shook her head. "Mark you...or something. Keep those--" She sighed heavily. "Looking back at Harp...I don't really trust my friends around people I care about...romantically."
"You think they'll make a pass? Still?" I walked in and closed the door. She shifted left and right on her hooves, the tapping grew a bit obnoxious. "Red, what's up?"
She looked up at me with a rather solid frown. "You haven't touched me since I changed...."
I stared at her. "I only touched you--"
"You kissed me before."
I bit my lower lip. "I did. That wasn't-- It was weird, but yeah." I scratched my head. "But I still kiss you...." I stared at her as she turned away. "Do you think I'm gay?!"
Red snapped back around with an annoyed look about her posture. "Really? I think you're gay...because you picked up a mare in a bar."
I put my hand up and held it there as I tried to think of a rebuttal. "I mean, no... no." I scratched my head. "Then what's wrong?"
Red flapped her wings a few times. "You haven't touched me...you haven't even tried."
I shrugged. "I thought I'd give you space. Going from one gender to the other has to be at least somewhat jarring, I wanted to give you some time to adjust."
Red folded her wings away. "So if I asked you to put me in bed right now, would you?"
I held my arms out. "I've got nothing to lose. I'll fuck you in front of your friends if you want!"
Red's wings flung out hard enough to cause her to stumble. "Whoa there--"
"Holy shit." I covered my face and snickered. "Popped up like a fucking jack in the box." I leaned down and covered my eyes. "Oh shit...easy--easy...." I sighed and shook my head. "I'm okay." I rubbed my eye and breathed. "Like a jack in the box."
Red turned away as she started to blush. "I just-- Go call them back."
I leaned back. "Uh, I might have--"
"I want them to hear it." She lowered her head and walked past. "They can stay in the living room." She hurried out and galloped through my home. I stood there in the bedroom, left to contemplate how easily she called my bluff.
I picked up her sweater and ran the soft material across my hand. "God damn it." I tossed it against the bedpost and sat down. The bed creaked loudly under my weight. "Is it like...a dominance thing!?" I rubbed my forehead. It could be dominance, but over who wasn't as clear. Over me, maybe. Over her friends, probably.
I stood up and walked out. I peeked around the corner and watched as Red ran over. "So you're showing off, aren't y--"
"Shh--shh-shh." She headbutted my groin and pushed me back into the bedroom. "I'll be back, like five minutes."
I held my hands up. "Really? This is like some weird I'm better than you thing!"
Red laughed loudly and walked away. "I know...it's great." She leaned her head back and laughed into the air. "I win, I have the colt, I have the change, I win." She laughed and whipped her head around. "Fuck you Snow, fuck you Diamond!"
"Did they like...steal your date--"
"So many times!" She hurried out of the hall. "Now shut up!" She zipped away into my main room, leaving me standing as some weird trophy. I let out a soft sigh. "Worth it?" I walked around to one of the boxes Red had brought with her. I dug into it and pulled out a pair of striped red and white panties and socks. "...Yeah, worth it." I tossed them over the bed and stood like an idiot.
I could hear yelling and cheers from the other room. I stood there, waiting. I started unpacking some of her things into a dresser drawer. "Oh no, he's just getting ready to fuck me? What? No way! While we're here? Yeah, I want you to hear it, I want you to know your place you filthy pleb." I mocked and jeered as I packed cloth away. I sighed softly. Deep in the back of my mind, I equated her competitiveness to her change from a stallion, and it dug into my gut.
I swallowed it back and tried to focus on more feminine things. I scratched my head as I pondered the logistics of equine vaginal virginity. "... What went wrong in my life that this is a problem I have to think about?" I looked around my apartment, the rustic styled furniture old and wooden, carved by some pony a long time past. "Fucking, dicks." I lifted Red's box into the open dresser drawer. My arm tightened up as I remembered the feeling of Red's balls falling off in bed.
I sighed heavily as Red pushed the door open with her flank. She was laughing and smiling. She swung around and her smile shifted into an agitated grimace. "Horse feather--ass." She snorted. "Diamond thinks she's funny, oh you're afraid he'll like an actually pretty mare, eheheheheh. Ugh." She kicked the door closed and groaned. "I hate that bitch so much...."
"Then why are you her friend?" I stepped away from the dresser and turned to her. "That's a girl thing, hanging out with people you hate."
Red groaned. "No I know.... One thing I kinda liked about being a stallion, if somepony pissed you off you could just walk away and kick dirt in their face. But mares don't do that!" She sighed. "Maybe it's a Canterlot thing."
"Maybe." I walked up to her and shrugged. "So what happens now?"
Red lowered her head and glared at me from under her eyebrows. "Sex." She walked past me and grabbed the cloth I'd tossed against the bed. "You want these on?"
I shrugged. "Sure...why not." I undid my pants and tossed them away. I couldn't help but feel a bit icky screwing with guests in the house, but breaking a mare in the for first squeaky and squirmy time to a crowd had a certain appeal to it.
Red pulled her socks on slowly and balanced with her wings. "What's wrong with you?"
I walked to my bed and pressed my hand into it. The springs groaned and cried as it was depressed.
Red stayed stoic for a few moments before turning to a wide cheeky smile. "That's great." She finished with her socks, looking a bit like a candystriper as she moved. She hopped up onto the bed and laid flat on her back. She sank in with a groan from the wooden frame. "So they'll hear every move, right?"
I sighed and finished getting undressed. "You're so happy with yourself--"
Red smiled and nodded. "I really am--mam-am-ama...." She stuttered as I climbed up onto the bed and crawled over her. She smiled nervously as I put my hands on either side of her and slid my hips up towards hers. "That was freaky.... This position is freaky...." She laughed again and wiggled in place. "I mean...having you over me is fine, but this is like...super over--" Her voice caught as I lined myself up and pressed my tip against her. Her back legs tightened around my sides as she reached her forelegs up and braced herself on the headboard. "Whoa there! Slow down."
She wiggled around and tried to flex her wings. "Jamie...my wings are wedged."
I moved one hand to her side and rubbed her warm belly with my thumb. "Calm down...."
Red groaned softly and tried not to let her head fall back as I pushed against her warm wet slit as she dribble down over my head. "I am calm...but my wing is stuck."
I lifted her up and held her back far enough to let her wing escape. She kept it pressed up against her back. "...I thought you said your wing was stuck...." I set her back down and prodded her again.
Red groaned loudly and stared up at me. "Wait...wait, kiss...kiss first."
I kept myself pressed against her and raised her head up. We shared a soft little kiss on the lips for a few seconds before I set her back down into the creaky bed. I rubbed her stomach and grabbed the inside of her thigh. "Okay...relax--"
"Wait!" Red pulled her socked hooves back to cover her mouth. "...Just...just wait."
I held her leg up while her other sat pulled against my hip. "Okay...." I felt myself twitch as her clit flashed out and rubbed against my cock, only to wink again in a self-fueling, grunt inducing, spazm.
Red let out a long groan and laid her head back. "It's just weird having you over me like this."
I let her leg down and crawled face to face with her. She blushed a bright blood red as I smiled at her. "Better?"
Red looked away and scrunched up her muzzle. "No--" Red's hooves pushed out and jammed aganist my chest as I poked her hole, the warm little marebody begging to be filled. "Wait!"
"For?"
"For me to be ready!" She barked in my face. "Just wait!"
I sighed and dug my hands into the sheets. Red's face tightened up as pressed forward. "Wait! Wait! ...Wait!" She started to stop pressing against my chest and slid her hooves around towards my neck. "Jamie wait...wait! Wait I said wai--" Her voice snapped into an extremely sharp gasp as I slipped just inside her soft little mare hole. She was warm and creamy, and when she tightened up and squeezed my head I couldn't help but groan. "I said wait...." Her voice was low, caught saying something she didn't mean. Her ears went back as I pressed forward. She kept me wrapped tight as could be as I slid further and further into her squishy little body.
She closed her eyes and pursed her lips into a neat pout as her voice melted into a drooling moan. "Wait...wait...." She slipped a few more complaints in as I sunk deeper and deeper into her. Her hooves slid softly around my neck and met around my spine. She hung lightly on my neck as I filled her.
I gave a quick thrust and slammed my hip against hers. Her head shot up and mouth flung open as she cried out. I could see saliva trail from her teeth as she tried not to scream. She pulled herself up and against my neck as she stuffed her mouth against me to muffle her cries. "Celly--Celly--Celly--fuck." She licked my neck and kissed my skin as I rooted myself in her warm little hole, growing creamier and tighter as she moved.
I shuddered as I pulled myself out and slid noisily out of her I held my breath and paused before giving her a quick prod. She licked my neck and hugged me tight as I slid my now slimy cock back into her soft little pussy. I carefully reached down and pressed my thumb against her clit as I pulled out. But, my head caught and Red tightened up, refusing to let me go. "Wait...wait...."
I pulled back with a lewd plop and Red caved. She pressed her chin against my shoulder and her cheek against my jaw. She huffed and whined over my ear as she failed to draw breath, her voice growing higher, breathing heavier, and body shakier as she twitched. "Put it in, put it in, put it in!" She tightened her legs around me and with a loud high pitched moan her entire body shook and twitched. I felt something warm shoot across my cock and groin, coating me with warm liquid as she dug her hooves into my bare skin.
Her moaning slowly dropped down to a greasy uncontrolled groan. "Oh my--fuck." She rubbed my neck with her hooves and kissed my jaw. "I'm sorry babe...you didn't get to cum. The first time...I'd never even felt somet--"
I lined myself up and slid back against her, easily burying myself in her warm hole. She leaned against my head and clamped down as I slowly slid back in. "Wait...wait!" She wiggled her hips as I slowly massaged her pussy, dripping and twitching as I glided back and forth. I could feel her ear slip back and lay flat as I put my hand to hold her hip. I kept my motions calm and smooth, riding her gently as I could.
She let out a constant low moan over the sound of the bed rocking. I moved my hand to her back and rubbed under her wing as I slipped past her soft organic little slit. I laid her back and let her hooves fall back down against her chest. She stared up at me, eyes bright blue and narrow as I moved. She blushed like mad as I looked at her, even going as far as dragging her hooves to cover her mouth. "Don't look." She stared up at my eyes, locked with me. "Jamie don't look at me...it's weird." Her voice was low, only just hanging on as she smiled a nervous, self conscious smile.
I kept myself going even and easy, filling her warm depth, then sliding out with her sticky fluids dripping off me. I couldn't help but feel a bit proud, she looked glazed, like I was keeping her orgasm going with each soft movement, never really reaching a peak but filling her entire body with a soft easy going pleasure from hoof to head. The dumb smile was a dead giveaway.
Red sighed heavily and leaned back into the bed. "Do I feel good?"
I let out a long held breath. "Yeah--"
"Yeah?" She shot back immediately in such a soft pleased tone I nearly lost my composure. She batted her eyelashes at me as I hit her hips again. "You feel good too baby."
I stopped holding my breath and let my breathing ease out into a constant low pant. She stared into my eyes as I took her. I leaned down and met her pouting lips with a kiss. She pushed back and we stayed locked gentle and chaste as the lower half did the talking. Two sets of lips jammed up together, two sets of eyes locked staring as one rode an endless trip through lala land, and I tried to hold back the pent up ache waiting to drip into her.
I buried myself deep and let go. I got a soft moan from Red as she closed her eyes. The first shot was violent, like popping the cork of a champagne bottle, but then as the rest came it turned smooth and soft, overflowing with liquid I kept myself still and let her toy with my back, as I'd done for her. I could see black streaks running down her eyes as she stared at me.
I gave myself a second to catch my breath as I went lightheaded. I propped myself up with both hands and pulled myself out. Red laughed dumbly. "Feels so warm...." She pushed a hood down to her stomach. "Ahh." Her voice was so high yet so contained and sweet that any idea of her being a stallion shattered in place of a sweet little mare with a voice like honey over toast.
I kissed her one last time and hung over her. "Red...you alright? You're crying."
Red sighed heavily. "Nopony ever held me like that." She rubbed her eyes, smearing her makeup over her hooves. "Nopony was ever that gentle." She reached up and kissed me. "...So that's what love is supposed to feel like."
I laughed softly. "That's so corny."
Red laughed back. "I know." She kissed me again. "I love you."
"I love you too." I held her against me and rolled onto my side, she snuggled up against my chest as I pulled her against me.
A high pitched scream came from the door. "Oh my gosh I love it!" Harp's voice ripped through the doors. "Aaaaah! That was--yay!"
I groaned loudly. "Harp...get everyone the fuck out of here!"
"Okay! Okay yeah!" Harp pranced away, his talons smacking loudly against the floor. I could hear yelling in the other room, and before long everything went quiet.
I held my mare against my chest and settled in for a sweaty nap.
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