I know this Pretty Rave Girl

Always think about her

And when she says hi to me

Butterflies go right through me

And when I see her dancing

My hips swayed to the pulsing beats of Dj PON-3’s music, my magenta and purple mane flying all over the place as I started to dance. I saw Rainbow Dash on stage with Dj PON-3; She had some glow sticks. I made my way up to the front of the crowd. I waved at Rainbow Dash; She smiled and threw me some blue, green, and orange glow sticks. The same colors as my cutie mark glow sticks, I hoof bumped her and started to make my way into the middle of the crowd. I’m ran into a black Pegasi stallion with a grayish blue and a light blue mohawk and golden eyes, and he was very attractive I turned and looked at him.

“Hey, sorry about that, “he said, smiling at me. I smirked at him closing the distance between him and me. He looked nervously at me biting his lip, ‘God, and that’s so hot, ’ I thought to myself. I pulled his hooves and put them on my flank, and he started to blush.

“You’re beautiful my name is Black light I moved here a few months ago” I smiled as I started to dance with the music. He smiled at me as he followed my lead.

“My name is Thunderlane, and it’s nice to meet you finally. Rainbow Dash and Vinyl Scratch have been telling me a lot about you, “he said as he pulled my flank closer to his body, I smirked at him again as I leaned him and kissed him roughly. I could feel him getting a little hot and bothered down there, and his wings were spread out for display. I smirked at this little situation, and I had gotten him into.

“Well, well, well, looks like I made someone a little excited,” I said, biting down on his ear.

“Y-yeah, l-looks like we have a l-l-little problem. What are we going to do about it?” He said. His stammering was adorable, and I moved my hoof along his feathers. He shivered as I giggled a little.

“Well Thunder stick with me tonight, and you’ll see what we will do about your problem,” I said as we made our way over to the bar. We had a few drinks, and Thunderlane had finally folded his wings. ‘The things I will do to him tonight’ I thought to myself as I bit my lip, he smiled at me as my favorite song came on.

“Come with me Thunder” I smiled as I walked out into the crowd.

“Hey, Blackie I see you met Thunderlane,” Rainbow Dash said, hoof bumping me. I nodded to myself.

“Yes, I did, and we will have a little fun after this rave is over” I winked. Rainbow Dash smirked at Thunderlane and then started to walk towards the crowd, she looked over her shoulder, and I followed. We waited for Thunderlane to catch on, he stood in between Rainbow Dash and me as we started to grind against him. I messed with his wings and by the time the song ended his wings were on full display.

“Man Thunder have fun with this one tonight, she will rock your world,” Rainbow said, smirking, she winked at me as she made her way back to the stage. I looked around at the crowd of ponies. I was in a sea of glow sticks and was enjoying every minute. I ran into my friend Derpy, and I hugged her tightly.

“Derpy I haven’t seen you in forever, I’m so glad you could come out to this rave,” I smiled, she smiled back as she noticed Thunderlane.

“So Thunderlane have fun with this one tonight, “she smirked and started to whisper in my ear. “So bestie you will have to tell me details tomorrow, “she finished wandering off into the sea of bodies. I smirked to myself as I ran my hoof up to his wing, he shivered again.

“So are you ready to head out Thunder?” I asked quietly, and I felt him nod his head quickly. We started to walk out of the warehouse. Derpy, Rainbow, and Vinyl Scratch waved at me as we got outside. “Follow me, “I said as we made our way to my house, it was like Twilight’s library, but I did classes in boxing. We didn’t talk on the way to my house, but I was all right with that. I saw my house I forgot I had left the light in my room on, I unlocked my front door and let Thunderlane in. I turned the front porch lights on, locked my front door and walked up to my stairs. “So you coming baby?” I said in a sultry voice. Thunder nodded his head and followed me to my room. I slammed him hard against my wall, and I kissed him roughly as I steered him towards my Pegasus down the bed. I pushed him down onto my bed, and I straddled him as he deepened the kiss. I moaned loudly into his mouth, and I could feel his member hardening. I smiled against his lips, as he wrapped his wings around me. I bit down hard on his collarbone, and I heard him let out a grunt. I sat up and moved down his body, and I stopped in front of his now throbbing member. I slowly started to lick it up and down, and I could hear his breathing getting faster. I slowly opened my mouth and took inch by inch into my mouth and, as my head started to bob up and down. He put his hoof on my head as he pushed my head down further. I moaned as I began to go faster.

“Nnnuggh Black light I’m about to co- “he stopped as he came, I smirked to myself as I swallowed all of his hot seed. I looked up at him and smiled, and he was in heaven from the look on his face. I laid on my bed and waited for Thunder to come down from his high, he opened his eyes and smiled at me. I smirked back at him as I slowly ran my hoof down his member; It was still hard.

“Now Thunder are you ready for the real fun to begin?” I asked, swaying my flank at him a bit. He pushed me down roughly onto my back, and I smiled as he positioned himself in front of my soaking entrance. He slammed hard into me, and I let out a moan as I arched my back. He leaned his forehead against mine as he continued to thrust deeper into me, his breathing was getting faster, and he was getting sweaty. ‘Man Thunder doesn’t give up on me yet’ I said to myself as I bucked my hips, I let out a scream as Thunderlane bit down on my neck letting out a low growl. I wrapped my forelegs around his neck and pulled him closer to my body. He kissed down my neck peppering it with nips and bites which left my neck feeling red hot. Thunder slowed his thrusts and flared his wings, which made him look majestic He let out another low growl as I started to roll my hips. His thrusts were getting faster, and I let out a loud moan as I arched my back.

“Oh, fuck Black light I will not last much longer, “he said trying to catch his breath. Suddenly Thunderlane bucked his hips and rolled to where I was on top of him, I bit down on his neck, enticing another low growl out of him. I kissed down his neck, nipping and licking down to his collarbone, and I bit down onto his collarbone again enticing a deeper growl from him this time.

“Thunder” I moaned as he bucked his hips as I rode him harder. I felt my muscles tightening around his throbbing member and let out a moan as I came. Shortly after that, I felt Thunderlane stiffen as he came, I lay on top of him trying to catch my breath. I looked at Thunder and smiled at him. I got off of him and laid down next to him. I snuggled against him as I felt a pair of black wings enveloped me into a hug, I nuzzled into his black wings.

“Rainbow wasn’t lying, you rocked my world, “he said, nuzzling into my magenta and purple mane. I smiled at him, and I could get used to having him around a lot more. I started to get sleepy, and I could hear light snoring coming from Thunderlane. I nuzzled against his chest and slowly closed my eyes.

“Black light wake up”. I heard someone say to me, I slowly opened my eyes to see Rainbow Dash smirking at me, then I noticed Derpy and Vinyl Scratch. I saw a black-feathered wing laying over my head, and I smiled to myself as I remembered last night. I nuzzled against the black feathery wing. I sat up and looked at my best friends. I slowly got out of bed and started to brush my mane and tail. I walked downstairs with my best friends and got myself some juice.

“So how was Thunder?” Rainbow asked, wiggling her eyebrows. I laughed at her.

“He was way better than I thought he would be. He said I rocked his world, plus he lasted a lot longer than I expected he would.” I said winking at Rainbow. She laughed.

“I told him you would, you know what you’re doing, “she said as she ate one of my doughnuts. “Anyway, I got to head out I’ll see you later, okay?” I nodded as she left with Vinyl Scratch. Derpy sat and had some juice me.

“So how was it?” She asked, smirking at me. I smiled at her as I finished my juice.

“It was unbelievable. I now know when he’s close he’ll flare his wings, which makes him look even hotter. Plus, he knows how to get me going with all his biting and growling.” I said smirking. Derpy smiled and hugged me.

“Well, I hope this one sticks around for you” she smiled at me as she got up to leave “I’ll stop by again after I delivered the rest of the mail” she finished as she flew out my window. I stretched and walked upstairs to get ready for the day, and I took a long hot shower. I brushed out my hair again and put my favorite neon orange bow in my hair, and I wondered downstairs to see if I had anyone wanting to box today. I didn’t see anyone around, and I decided it was a good time to get a little done around my house. I turned off the lights and walked up the stairs to the first floor of my house, and I cleaned up my living room and kitchen, I did all my dishes and moved to my laundry.

“Actually on second thought, I think laundry can wait. Since Thunderlane is still in bed, “I said to myself, laughing a little as I made my way upstairs. I straightened up my room a bit while Thunder slept. I didn’t have much else to do since no one wanted to box. I didn’t have any plans. “Hmm, wonder what every pony else is up to today?” I said to myself as I looked out my window. Pinkie Pie was busy working at Sugar Cube Corner, Twilight and Spike were outside, I was thinking of visiting them since AppleJack was busy on the farm. I didn’t want to leave since he was still sleeping. I sighed as I made my way downstairs. I noticed someone was knocking on my door.

“Hey Blackie I brought your mail” Derpy smiled happily at me. I gave her a small smile in return.

“Bills, bills, junk, man my mom hasn’t sent me a letter in weeks. I wonder why, ” I said mainly to myself. Derpy gave me a small smile as she left. I closed my door and put all my stuff from boxing away for the day. If no one were here, by now, there would be no one showing up, and I made my way back upstairs to see Thunderlane still sleeping. I rolled my eyes

“Men” I laughed to myself as I snuggled against him. ‘I could get used to him being around’ I thought to myself as I slowly dozed off when Thunderlane wrapped his wings around me, I nuzzled into them and let out a content sigh.

“Hey Black wake up” I heard a Thunder’s voice waking me up. I opened my eyes and smiled at him as I sat up. He hugged me with his wings and nuzzled into my mane, and I blushed a little as I hugged him back. I couldn’t understand why I was blushing, and a stallion has never made me blush before. He looked into my green eyes, and I stared back into his gold ones. He started to lean forward, and I met him halfway as he kissed me gently. He laid me down on my bed, and he nuzzled against my neck, nipping and kissing down my neck. I leaned my head back as he kept kissing down my body, my breathing was getting faster. Thunder slowly rubbed a hoof against my soaking wet entrance. I let a soft moan as he rubbed a little faster. I felt his tongue run around the edges, and I took a sharp breath as his tongue darted in and out. His tongue started to swirl around my already sensitive nub, and I let out a loud moan as he sucked on it. He began to lick slowly along the edges again, and I was aching. I knew I was close, and I bucked my hips a few times so his tongue would go deeper. I let out a loud moan as I came all over Thunder’s face, he looked at me and smiled. I smiled back as I relaxed. I felt a wing rub up to my body. It made me giggle as it stopped by my forelegs.

“I could get used to being around you,” he said as he nuzzled against me. I smiled to myself after he said that. I wonder what else today will bring between Thunderlane and me.

Author's Note

This is a story about my oc pony Black light.

Plus this is my first actual try at a graphic sex scene.

So don't be to harsh on me.