Black Light. The Rave Pony

by BlackLight2015

Rating: mature
Tags: Random, Derpy Hooves, Slice of Life, Thunderlane, Main 6, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Romance, Sex, Bon-Bon
Length: 5967

This is a story about my OC pony named Black Light. :) she is a unicorn and she loves to dance and party. She likes Techno and EDM music

This story is about my OC pony named Black light and how she likes to dance her heart out. She will fall in love at one of the raves with the least likely pony. Who will she fall in love with? and how will she react to this new love? will it work out? time to find out. Rated M for language, sexual situations ie: OC and Thunderlane and threesomes. Mare on Mare. This is a first time trying to write a threesome and mare on mare scene. So if you don't like it I'm sorry.
Edited all 3 chapters
Vinyl Strach was taken out cause she ended up being a minor character. Bon Bon added in last chapter. She is in almost all of the last chapter

Published 2015-04-02 11:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-10-14 10:36:04 UTC

I know this pretty Rave Girl

I know this Pretty Rave Girl

Always think about her

And when she says hi to me

Butterflies go right through me

And when I see her dancing

My hips swayed to the pulsing beats of Dj PON-3’s music, my magenta and purple mane flying all over the place as I started to dance. I saw Rainbow Dash on stage with Dj PON-3; She had some glow sticks. I made my way up to the front of the crowd. I waved at Rainbow Dash; She smiled and threw me some blue, green, and orange glow sticks. The same colors as my cutie mark glow sticks, I hoof bumped her and started to make my way into the middle of the crowd. I’m ran into a black Pegasi stallion with a grayish blue and a light blue mohawk and golden eyes, and he was very attractive I turned and looked at him.

“Hey, sorry about that, “he said, smiling at me. I smirked at him closing the distance between him and me. He looked nervously at me biting his lip, ‘God, and that’s so hot, ’ I thought to myself. I pulled his hooves and put them on my flank, and he started to blush.

“You’re beautiful my name is Black light I moved here a few months ago” I smiled as I started to dance with the music. He smiled at me as he followed my lead.

“My name is Thunderlane, and it’s nice to meet you finally. Rainbow Dash and Vinyl Scratch have been telling me a lot about you, “he said as he pulled my flank closer to his body, I smirked at him again as I leaned him and kissed him roughly. I could feel him getting a little hot and bothered down there, and his wings were spread out for display. I smirked at this little situation, and I had gotten him into.

“Well, well, well, looks like I made someone a little excited,” I said, biting down on his ear.

“Y-yeah, l-looks like we have a l-l-little problem. What are we going to do about it?” He said. His stammering was adorable, and I moved my hoof along his feathers. He shivered as I giggled a little.

“Well Thunder stick with me tonight, and you’ll see what we will do about your problem,” I said as we made our way over to the bar. We had a few drinks, and Thunderlane had finally folded his wings. ‘The things I will do to him tonight’ I thought to myself as I bit my lip, he smiled at me as my favorite song came on.

“Come with me Thunder” I smiled as I walked out into the crowd.

“Hey, Blackie I see you met Thunderlane,” Rainbow Dash said, hoof bumping me. I nodded to myself.

“Yes, I did, and we will have a little fun after this rave is over” I winked. Rainbow Dash smirked at Thunderlane and then started to walk towards the crowd, she looked over her shoulder, and I followed. We waited for Thunderlane to catch on, he stood in between Rainbow Dash and me as we started to grind against him. I messed with his wings and by the time the song ended his wings were on full display.

“Man Thunder have fun with this one tonight, she will rock your world,” Rainbow said, smirking, she winked at me as she made her way back to the stage. I looked around at the crowd of ponies. I was in a sea of glow sticks and was enjoying every minute. I ran into my friend Derpy, and I hugged her tightly.

“Derpy I haven’t seen you in forever, I’m so glad you could come out to this rave,” I smiled, she smiled back as she noticed Thunderlane.

“So Thunderlane have fun with this one tonight, “she smirked and started to whisper in my ear. “So bestie you will have to tell me details tomorrow, “she finished wandering off into the sea of bodies. I smirked to myself as I ran my hoof up to his wing, he shivered again.

“So are you ready to head out Thunder?” I asked quietly, and I felt him nod his head quickly. We started to walk out of the warehouse. Derpy, Rainbow, and Vinyl Scratch waved at me as we got outside. “Follow me, “I said as we made our way to my house, it was like Twilight’s library, but I did classes in boxing. We didn’t talk on the way to my house, but I was all right with that. I saw my house I forgot I had left the light in my room on, I unlocked my front door and let Thunderlane in. I turned the front porch lights on, locked my front door and walked up to my stairs. “So you coming baby?” I said in a sultry voice. Thunder nodded his head and followed me to my room. I slammed him hard against my wall, and I kissed him roughly as I steered him towards my Pegasus down the bed. I pushed him down onto my bed, and I straddled him as he deepened the kiss. I moaned loudly into his mouth, and I could feel his member hardening. I smiled against his lips, as he wrapped his wings around me. I bit down hard on his collarbone, and I heard him let out a grunt. I sat up and moved down his body, and I stopped in front of his now throbbing member. I slowly started to lick it up and down, and I could hear his breathing getting faster. I slowly opened my mouth and took inch by inch into my mouth and, as my head started to bob up and down. He put his hoof on my head as he pushed my head down further. I moaned as I began to go faster.

“Nnnuggh Black light I’m about to co- “he stopped as he came, I smirked to myself as I swallowed all of his hot seed. I looked up at him and smiled, and he was in heaven from the look on his face. I laid on my bed and waited for Thunder to come down from his high, he opened his eyes and smiled at me. I smirked back at him as I slowly ran my hoof down his member; It was still hard.

“Now Thunder are you ready for the real fun to begin?” I asked, swaying my flank at him a bit. He pushed me down roughly onto my back, and I smiled as he positioned himself in front of my soaking entrance. He slammed hard into me, and I let out a moan as I arched my back. He leaned his forehead against mine as he continued to thrust deeper into me, his breathing was getting faster, and he was getting sweaty. ‘Man Thunder doesn’t give up on me yet’ I said to myself as I bucked my hips, I let out a scream as Thunderlane bit down on my neck letting out a low growl. I wrapped my forelegs around his neck and pulled him closer to my body. He kissed down my neck peppering it with nips and bites which left my neck feeling red hot. Thunder slowed his thrusts and flared his wings, which made him look majestic He let out another low growl as I started to roll my hips. His thrusts were getting faster, and I let out a loud moan as I arched my back.

“Oh, fuck Black light I will not last much longer, “he said trying to catch his breath. Suddenly Thunderlane bucked his hips and rolled to where I was on top of him, I bit down on his neck, enticing another low growl out of him. I kissed down his neck, nipping and licking down to his collarbone, and I bit down onto his collarbone again enticing a deeper growl from him this time.

“Thunder” I moaned as he bucked his hips as I rode him harder. I felt my muscles tightening around his throbbing member and let out a moan as I came. Shortly after that, I felt Thunderlane stiffen as he came, I lay on top of him trying to catch my breath. I looked at Thunder and smiled at him. I got off of him and laid down next to him. I snuggled against him as I felt a pair of black wings enveloped me into a hug, I nuzzled into his black wings.

“Rainbow wasn’t lying, you rocked my world, “he said, nuzzling into my magenta and purple mane. I smiled at him, and I could get used to having him around a lot more. I started to get sleepy, and I could hear light snoring coming from Thunderlane. I nuzzled against his chest and slowly closed my eyes.

“Black light wake up”. I heard someone say to me, I slowly opened my eyes to see Rainbow Dash smirking at me, then I noticed Derpy and Vinyl Scratch. I saw a black-feathered wing laying over my head, and I smiled to myself as I remembered last night. I nuzzled against the black feathery wing. I sat up and looked at my best friends. I slowly got out of bed and started to brush my mane and tail. I walked downstairs with my best friends and got myself some juice.

“So how was Thunder?” Rainbow asked, wiggling her eyebrows. I laughed at her.

“He was way better than I thought he would be. He said I rocked his world, plus he lasted a lot longer than I expected he would.” I said winking at Rainbow. She laughed.

“I told him you would, you know what you’re doing, “she said as she ate one of my doughnuts. “Anyway, I got to head out I’ll see you later, okay?” I nodded as she left with Vinyl Scratch. Derpy sat and had some juice me.

“So how was it?” She asked, smirking at me. I smiled at her as I finished my juice.

“It was unbelievable. I now know when he’s close he’ll flare his wings, which makes him look even hotter. Plus, he knows how to get me going with all his biting and growling.” I said smirking. Derpy smiled and hugged me.

“Well, I hope this one sticks around for you” she smiled at me as she got up to leave “I’ll stop by again after I delivered the rest of the mail” she finished as she flew out my window. I stretched and walked upstairs to get ready for the day, and I took a long hot shower. I brushed out my hair again and put my favorite neon orange bow in my hair, and I wondered downstairs to see if I had anyone wanting to box today. I didn’t see anyone around, and I decided it was a good time to get a little done around my house. I turned off the lights and walked up the stairs to the first floor of my house, and I cleaned up my living room and kitchen, I did all my dishes and moved to my laundry.

“Actually on second thought, I think laundry can wait. Since Thunderlane is still in bed, “I said to myself, laughing a little as I made my way upstairs. I straightened up my room a bit while Thunder slept. I didn’t have much else to do since no one wanted to box. I didn’t have any plans. “Hmm, wonder what every pony else is up to today?” I said to myself as I looked out my window. Pinkie Pie was busy working at Sugar Cube Corner, Twilight and Spike were outside, I was thinking of visiting them since AppleJack was busy on the farm. I didn’t want to leave since he was still sleeping. I sighed as I made my way downstairs. I noticed someone was knocking on my door.

“Hey Blackie I brought your mail” Derpy smiled happily at me. I gave her a small smile in return.

“Bills, bills, junk, man my mom hasn’t sent me a letter in weeks. I wonder why, ” I said mainly to myself. Derpy gave me a small smile as she left. I closed my door and put all my stuff from boxing away for the day. If no one were here, by now, there would be no one showing up, and I made my way back upstairs to see Thunderlane still sleeping. I rolled my eyes

“Men” I laughed to myself as I snuggled against him. ‘I could get used to him being around’ I thought to myself as I slowly dozed off when Thunderlane wrapped his wings around me, I nuzzled into them and let out a content sigh.

“Hey Black wake up” I heard a Thunder’s voice waking me up. I opened my eyes and smiled at him as I sat up. He hugged me with his wings and nuzzled into my mane, and I blushed a little as I hugged him back. I couldn’t understand why I was blushing, and a stallion has never made me blush before. He looked into my green eyes, and I stared back into his gold ones. He started to lean forward, and I met him halfway as he kissed me gently. He laid me down on my bed, and he nuzzled against my neck, nipping and kissing down my neck. I leaned my head back as he kept kissing down my body, my breathing was getting faster. Thunder slowly rubbed a hoof against my soaking wet entrance. I let a soft moan as he rubbed a little faster. I felt his tongue run around the edges, and I took a sharp breath as his tongue darted in and out. His tongue started to swirl around my already sensitive nub, and I let out a loud moan as he sucked on it. He began to lick slowly along the edges again, and I was aching. I knew I was close, and I bucked my hips a few times so his tongue would go deeper. I let out a loud moan as I came all over Thunder’s face, he looked at me and smiled. I smiled back as I relaxed. I felt a wing rub up to my body. It made me giggle as it stopped by my forelegs.

“I could get used to being around you,” he said as he nuzzled against me. I smiled to myself after he said that. I wonder what else today will bring between Thunderlane and me.

Author's Note

This is a story about my oc pony Black light. :rainbowkiss:

Plus this is my first actual try at a graphic sex scene. :twilightblush:

So don't be to harsh on me.:derpyderp2:

Raver's Fantasy.

Raver's Fantasy.

Chapter 2

Raver's Fantasy

This is my melody and it's just the Ravers Fantasy

Cause I know if you're in love with me tonight

We'll Rave it through the night

I smiled to myself as I looked at Thunder; he smiled back at me as he stretched out his wings. "So what do you have planned for today?" I asked Thunder smiling slightly. He gave me a small smile in return.

"Well I have to meet up with a few pegasi to go to our Wonderbolts tryouts, other than that I have nothing planned" he finished.

"Oh my god you're trying out for the Wonderbolts!? I must be there to watch you and Rainbow Dash" I exclaimed. Thunder smiled at me, I gave him a hug good bye as he flew out my window. I decided to go visit Twilight, I hummed to myself as I made my way to her Castle. I knocked on her door, Spike answered the door. "Hi Spike, I'm here to see Twilight. I was wondering if she was going to watch Rainbow Dash tryout for the Wonderbolts?" I asked. Spike smiled at me.

"Come with me" he said. I smiled and followed him throughout Twilight's castle; we finally made it into the main room. The only one there was Twilight Sparkle.

"Oh Black Light how are you? What brought you here today?" She asked smiling at me a little.

"I felt like coming and seeing how you were doing in your new castle" I smiled as I sat down at the table. She smiled and looked at Spike.

"Spike you should get her some of my favorite cinnamon tea" she finished. Spike nodded and ran off. I wondered where everypony else was. I knew Rainbow Dash was busy trying out for the Wonderbolts.

"So Twilight where is everypony?" I asked. She smiled at me as she put down her book.

"Well Rainbow Dash is trying out for the Wonderbolts, I'm actually really sad none of us can go watch her. Pinkie Pie is busy baking today, Fluttershy is taking care of a sick bear today, Applejack is busy harvesting zap apples. Rarity is working on her new line of clothing, and I'm just doing my normal reading" she smiled. I nodded.

"Yeah, Derpy is busy with the mail and of course DJ PON-3 is sleeping" I laughed. Twilight nodded as she picked up her book and put it down by her desk. I smiled as Spike gave me my tea, I sipped on the warm liquid.

"I'm just sad that none of us can go see her tryout" Twilight said sighing. I nodded; I know how bad Twilight felt. We're usually right there whenever somepony else is trying something for the first time. I finished my tea; I sat there quietly while Twilight was busy sending Princess Celestia and Candace letters. After she was done she sat down. "I'm always so busy sending letters, and everypony else is busy with their own lives. I wish we could just spend a day or two together" she finished. I nodded.

"I agree, I wish everypony wasn't busy today. I think I'm the only one who has nothing to do today" I finished handing my cup to Spike. Twilight nodded.

"Well I better go see what Princess Celestia needs" Twilight said. I nodded and made my way out of her castle. I decided to see if Pinkie Pie could make me my favorite cup cake. I sat down and smiled at the bouncing pink pony.

"Hiya Black Light what can I do for you?" She asked happily. I smiled.

"Well Pinkie Pie I was wondering if you could make me my favorite cupcake today" I said.

"Oh the cake batter cupcake with white cream, sprinkle frosting?" She said excitedly. I nodded. She happily hopped her way back to the kitchen. I sat there for a while watching everypony walk by and stop by the little stands here and there, I smiled with I saw Big mac pulling his cart of Apples. Pinkie Pie handed me my cupcake and I wandered around town for a while stopping here and there at little stands. After a while of wondering I decided to head back to my house, I walked upstairs and took all of my bedding off of my bed. I threw it into the laundry and started the washing machine, I smiled as I fabreezed my bed and pillows. I was a clean freak and always fabreezed my bed every time I washed the bedding. I walked downstairs and sat in the kitchen for a while enjoying the peace and quiet. I watered my aloe plant in my kitchen window; I talked to it for a while and went upstairs to water my bonsai tree. I decided I wanted to watch some tv so I went downstairs to my living room and started watching one of my favorite movies. I sighed; I wonder how long Wonderbolts tryouts took. I was hoping to see both Rainbow Dash and Thunderlane again. I usually don't get that attached to stallions but there was something different about Thunderlane. I blushed after thinking that, I turned my tv off and went back outside to water the flowers around my house. After that I decided to sit on my swing for a while, I smiled when I saw Fluttershy coming towards me. "Hi Fluttershy" I waved.

"Hello Blackie how are you?" she smiled.

"I'm good just got done watering all of my plants in my house and outside my house" I exclaimed.

"Oh that's good. I love to water my plants and just talk to them" she smiled. I nodded in agreement. She sat on the other swing and we swung silently for a while. I enjoyed Fluttershy's company, she may be quite but she was one of my many best friends.

"So what brought you this way Fluttershy?" I asked as I got off of my swing. Fluttershy hopped off of her swing as well.

"Well I heard how bummed you were that none of us were able to make it to Rainbow Dash's tryouts. Plus I heard your boy Thunderlane was there too. So I wanted to hang out with you and make you feel better" she smiled. I nodded.

"I'm glad you came to visit it gets lonely in this big house of mine" I said as we walked up the stairs to the kitchen. I poured Fluttershy and I a glass of green tea, I handed the glass to her and sipped on mine. The cool liquid felt nice going down my throat. Fluttershy and I ended up talking for hours, so long that neither of us saw that it was dark outside.

"Oh my I didn't see how dark it got" Fluttershy said.

"Seriously it's already dark?" I said.

"I'll see you tomorrow" Fluttershy said as she left. I waved goodbye to her and went back inside. I locked my front door and turned off the porch light. I turned off the lights in the living room and kitchen and finally made it to my room. I snuggled into my clean bedding; I had hoped that Thunderlane would show up. I loved cuddling with him, I sighed as I slowly started to doze off to sleep. I heard a knocking on my window, freaked me out for a minute until I realized it was Thunderlane. I smiled as I opened the window to let him inside, he kissed me roughly. I wasn't expecting that. I shoved him onto my bed, I started to nip and bite at his neck. His breathing hitched as I ran my hoof along his length, I smirked when he had to sit up. His wings were flared out, I ran my hoof along his feathers and he shivered. I blushed when he pushed me down. He started to rub his hoof at my entrance, I let out a moan. I felt Thunderlane position himself at my entrance; I arched my back as he started thrusting. He leaned his forehead against mine as he started to thrust harder. He bit down on my neck, I let out a moan. I stared to roll my hips.

"Oh there you go babe" he said grunting a little. I kissed him roughly as his thrusts were getting faster, he flared his wings out. I felt him roll to where I was on top, I bit down on his neck enticing a low growl. I smirked as I licked and nips at his neck. I nipped at his collarbone, he growled in return. He started to buck his hips.

"Oh shit..Thunder I think I'm going t-" I let out a loud moan as I came. We rolled again to where Thunder was on top, his thrusts started to slow. He bit down on my neck, He growled as he came. We laid there for a minute, I sighed happily as I lay there under Thunder. He kissed me gently, he got off of me and I snuggled against him.

"I could really get used to this" Thunder said before dozing off.

"Me too Thunder..me too" I said happily.

Author's Note

Sorry everypony this was just a filler chapter :fluttershysad:

Welcome to the club

Welcome to the club

It's alright, your ready for the night of your life, stars will shine so bright, they say we're dancing the stress away

This beat is underneath your feet, right now together we will meet, this place will blow your mind away

Welcome to the club now, gonna pump it up now, this is an emergency, music is my galaxy, welcome to the club now, everybody's up now, we've got it going until the break of dawn

Time Skip. It's been 6 months. Thunderlane and Black Light are getting close to each other

I danced around my room as my music blared through my house, my magenta and purple mane was in a pony tail. I was getting pumped to teach my boxing class, I let out a sigh as I turned my music off and headed downstairs to the boxing room. I smiled at some of the mares and stallions in there. Derpy, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and Bon Bon made up the mares. Big Mac, Thunderlane, Noteworthy and Caramel for the Stallions. "Hello stallions and mares. Welcome to my boxing class, now first off. Who here knows how to properly throw a punch?" I asked. I figured some pony would know, but no one raised a hoof. I sighed. "Okay well it's very easy to learn how to punch" I smiled. I showed them the stance to get in, I had to move Derpy's legs to get her situated.

"Oh I'm sorry" she said as I moved her legs. I laughed and shook my head.

"Derpy you're fine don't worry about it. Just a little readjusting" I said smiling. Most of the mare and stallions had it down. Noteworthy needed help as well with the stance. I showed them how to get their foreleg ready to throw the punch, and then throwing the punch. I smiled at my class as they learned how to throw their first punch, I walked around my class as they practiced their punches for a while. After I was sure they had it down it was time to spare, this part I was nervous about. None of these mares and stallions were my regulars. "Okay every pony we're going to spare now. Now Derpy and Noteworthy I want the two of you to spare" I said. They looked nervous as hell, I knew they could do it. "Fluttershy and Caramel I want you two to spare" I said looking at the rest of my class.

"Can I request a sparing partner?" Rainbow Dash asked. I nodded.

"You can, who do you want your sparing partner to be?" I asked a little interested.

"Big Mac" Rainbow Dash smiled. I nodded and the two of them started to spare.

"Bon Bon and Thunderlane you two can start sparing now" I said as I paid attention to Derpy and Noteworthy's sparing. They were doing well, I nodded as I moved on to Fluttershy and Caramel. They were slow but they got the technique down stat, that was a very good thing. I watched Big Mac and Rainbow Dash for a while and walked over to Bon Bon and Thunderlane. I smiled at Thunderlane, he looked very uncomfortable sparing with Bon Bon. I started to bring out the small speed punching bags, I set them up and waiting for them to finish their sparing practice. I smiled at them all when they were done. "Okay everypony I'm not sure if any of you have used a speed bag before but you need to pay attention and keep the pace, if not you will get hit in the nose" I said. I showed them the technique, Derpy was the only one that got hit in the nose. I showed her how and watched her for a while, I nodded once she got it down. I was so glad my boxing class was almost done. I smiled at my class once they were done. "Well done everypony, you all did a very good job today" I smiled. They all waved goodbye except Bon Bon and Thunderlane, I wandered over to them.

"Hey babe so uh Bon Bon wants to join us in a little fun today" Thunderlane smiled. I smirked at Bon Bon.
'So little miss Bon Bon wasn't so innocent huh?' I thought to myself.

"Oh yeah? Well Bon Bon what do you want to do? or get done to you?" I smirked. She blushed furiously.

"Um well.." she trailed off. I tried my hardest not to laugh.

"Okay well how about we surprise you?" I asked. She nodded. I turned around "Come this way my dear" I said soothingly. We left the boxing studio and walked up the stairs to the kitchen, and continued up the stairs to my room. We made it to my room, I locked the door and motioned towards the bathroom. "First my dear Bon Bon we must clean up from our Boxing class" I smiled. She nodded nervously. Thunder nudged her into the bathroom. I walked into the shower first, Bon Bon stood in front of me and Thunderlane was behind me. I turned on the warm water and let it cascade down my long white body, I smirked at Bon Bon as I kissed her roughly. She blushed and kissed back harder, I smiled at her as I started to clean her body. Thunderlane started to clean my body as well.

"Well, well, well, who's going to clean me up?" Thunderlane asked. I smirked at him.

"I think Bon Bon is up to it" I said. I smiled to myself as Bon Bon and I were clean, I moved so Bon Bon could clean Thunderlane off. I got close behind her and moved my hoof down to her entrance, I rubbed my hoof against it slowly. She let out a yelp but spread her legs out further. "Good Girl" I whispered in her ear. I started to rub her a little harder and faster, her breathing was starting to get faster. Thunder kissed me roughly, Bon Bon let out a loud moan as I stuck the tip of my hoof into her soaking entrance. Once Thunder was done rinsing off I turned the water off. I smiled at Bon Bon who was blushing at me. We dried off and headed to my room. "I think I'll finish what I started, Bon Bon lay down" I said. She nodded and laid down on her back, I ran my hoof from her chest to her entrance. I earned another loud moan from her, I rubbed my hoof along her entrance a while longer and positioned my face in front of her wet entrance. I felt Thunderlane position himself in front of my dripping entrance, I slowly licked around the edges of Bon Bon's pussy. She gasped in return, I felt Thunder slam hard into me. I let out a moan as I lifted my flank into the air. I got a grunt from him in return. I felt him slap my flank, I let out a moan in return. I darted my tongue in and out of Bon Bon, she was moaning and gasping for air. Thunder's breathing was starting to get faster, hearing him like that made me horny. My tongue swirled around Bon Bon's very sensitive nub. She let out a scream.

"Oh god Black Light" she screamed as her hooves pushed my face further into her folds. I started sucking on her nub as she screamed and moaned. Thunder's wings flared as he continued to thrust into me. He slapped my flank once more, I felt my muscles clenching against his member as I came. I lapped at Bon Bon's juices as she laid there. She looked like she was in heaven like Thunder was the first night we fucked. I kissed Thunderlane roughly as we waited for Bon Bon to come off her high.

"So Blackie what are we going to do to her next?" He asked smirking.

"Well let's see if she can handle your huge cock" I said biting his ear. I smiled as Bon Bon sat up.

"What are we going to do now?" She asked blushing a little.

"Oh my you're so cute when you blush. I'm going to see if you can handle Thunder's huge cock here" I said as I smiled at her. Her eyes got wide. She lifted her flank up as Thunder positioned himself in front of her soaking entrance. He slammed into her making her scream loudly.

"Oh yeah that's fucking hot" I said to myself as I moved my hoof towards my pussy. I ran my hoof along my folds a few times before pushing my hoof inside me. I let out a moan as I started to get myself off. Thunder was slapping Bon Bon's flank and biting her neck as he fucked her, she was screaming and moaning his name. I moved my hoof in and out of my folds faster, I starting to breath faster. I came as Bon Bon, and Thunder did. I smiled to myself. I panted as I was catching my breath, I'm glad we decided to do this. I thought to myself.

"Ready for the last part Bon Bon?" Thunder asked. She nodded.

"Lay on your back again my dear" I said smiling. I started to slowly rub my entrance against Bon Bon's, she let out a moan. I knew she'd like this. I smirked, I looked over at Thunderlane who was already hard again, he started to rub his hoof along his hard cock. I started to thrust against Bon Bon, she wrapped her back legs around me. I let out a loud moan from the new position. "Oh my god Bon Bon" I moaned as I started to go harder and faster.

"Fuck Black Light" Bon Bon moaned loudly as she threw her head back, I bit down on her neck. I looked over at Thunderlane who's hoof job was going well, it was really hot to see him get himself off. Bon Bon and I came, our jucies swirling together onto my bed. I panted as I rolled off of her. She was catching her breath. I looked over at Thunder as he came, streams of cum landing on my bed and legs. Bon Bon kissed me. She caught me off guard, I kissed back eagerly.

"We'll have to do that again soon" Thunder said quitely. Bon Bon nodded in return.

"Agreed today was one of the best days of my life" she said getting up and making her way to the bathroom. After she was done cleaning up. Thunderlane and I said goodbye to her. I whispered in her ear.

"If you ever want to have a little fun just with me let me know" I winked at her, she blushed and nodded as she left. I smiled to myself as Thunderlane and I took a shower. 'Best Day Ever!' I thought to myself. As Thunderlane was rinsing the shampoo out of my hair he turned me around and kissed me gently. I blushed.

"Blackie I was wondering..will you be my special somepony? I want you in my life. Your the best mare for me" he said smiling. I nodded.

"Oh of course Thunderlane. After being with you these last 6 months I've come to love you dearly" I said quietly. Thunderlane blushed.

"I love you too" He said hugging me.

Author's Note

Alright guys I hope you liked my Clop fic. This is my first time trying a threesome scene and Mare on mare scene. So if you didn't like it I'm sorry. :twilightsheepish:

The End! :raritystarry: :heart: