Once Luna had become aware of Twilight’s arousal during the preening, it had been impossible for her to take her mind off of it, and it had certainly affected the second half of the session. She’d caught herself using licks meant to heat and tease instead of ones meant simply to get the job done. The constantly growing scent both of them had been putting off got to her more and more and she’d tried breathing through Twilight’s feathers to filter it, but that had just proved to fuel her own desires all the more. Even her hoof and wing had wandered. Then watching Twilight orgasm like that…! She was surprised she didn’t release as well.

The time it took for Twilight to recover had provided her a little cool-down time, but not enough that she could have resisted taking things to the next level. But Twilight beat her to it. And that was fanning the flames like nothing else ever had.

As she watched Twilight approaching the bed, Luna found herself trembling with an anticipation greater than any she could remember. She had been longing for this moment - both the imminent sexy times and Twilight's taking charge. Up to this point Twilight had never tried to be in control of anything in the relationship - which wasn't to say that she'd been submissive, just that she'd never really put her desires forward. And now Luna felt her own nether fires burning brighter with every slow step Twilight took with that lust-filled look on her face.

It was the look of a predator that had cornered its prey. It said that there was no way out and no bargaining. It said Twilight had control and wasn’t about to give it up. That look sent a heat wave flashing through her body and she felt her own marehood clench and drip as it winked her desire. By the time Twilight finally reached the bed and growled her intent she was trembling with anticipation.

Was she ready? Oh Moon and Stars, Yes!

She wanted to shout it out, but that predatory grin and stare held her spellbound as Twilight slowly crawled onto the bed and slowly approached. Luna watched as Twilight’s nostrils flared wide, taking in the heavy scent of arousal that filled the air. The predator grin widened and eyes narrowed as some unknown thought was entertained.

"My dear widdle Woona has been a very naughty filly: interrupting my preening and making a mess of my new rug."

"I really don't think what I did was at a-"

Luna found her words cut off into a throaty moan as a magical caress slid along her underbelly, up to her ribs, then split to tease right at the base of both her wings where they were the most sensitive. She might – MIGHT – have been able to pretend a degree of indifference…but for the fact that the caress was not being applied only from the outside. It seemed that Twilight had figured out how to stimulate the nerves directly, and the unexpected assault had briefly rendered Luna speechless.

"What was that? You have to speak more clearly if you wish to be understood," Twilight drawled out sounding quite pleased with herself and the reaction to her efforts.

That authoritarian tone laced with cocky amusement sent a fresh thrill through Luna. She was beginning to lose her grasp on coherent thought, but she knew a response had been demanded of her and so she tried to give one. It was a doomed attempt that was cut off almost the moment it began as the magical caress shot up and along the leading edges of her wings before abruptly cutting out, leaving her panting and quivering as phantom sensations sped along nerves suddenly deprived of stimuli. She opened her mouth to try again and the caress came again, but this time on the underside of her wing, and all that came out was a long moan of pleasure.

~*~

Twilight eyes raked possessively over the sprawled and helpless alicorn before her. She sent the magic dancing across Luna’s wings in random patterns, flashing on and off in sync with the writhing mare’s own winking marehood. A devilish smirk ran across her muzzle at the thought that Luna was orchestrating her own torture.

The magic may have been doing its job, but Twilight herself was too excited not to take part directly in the fun. And so, ensuring Luna was held firmly in her telekinesis, she bent to run her tongue up the central groove on the frog of Luna’s rear hoof. Luna’s entire body gave a sharp spasm and attempted to retract the extended leg at the unexpected ambush. Unfortunately for Luna the telekinesis held and Twilight was able to continue her journey, licking and nibbling her way along the inside of her leg toward the neglected treasure at its end.

A litany of needy sounds and almost-words from Luna accompanied Twilight on her way down the leg, but when she skipped over the sopping sex and made to tease her way back up the other leg she was interrupted by a desperate plea of “PLEASE EVE!”

Twilight looked up to see Luna, struggling to maintain eye contact, her need written clearly across her face. Twilight stretched out and pressed her neck hard against Luna's dripping marehood and asked, “Please what?” followed a long, questioning, "Hmmmm?"

~*~

Luna’s control had finally broken. She’d been riding the ups and downs of her own arousal for too long and couldn’t take any more teasing or games. Her want had become a need. But while she saw in Twilight’s eyes that the need had been recognized, it was obvious that the predator wasn’t quite through with its prey just yet.

The fur of Twilight’s neck stroking against her sensitive flesh and winking clit sent new and stronger signals flashing up and down her spine, joining those coming from the – now gentled – magical caressing of her wings. On top of all that, the vibrations from Twilight’s hummed inquiry was another flash of tortured bliss. Through gritted teeth, she somehow managed to hiss out a barely understandable, "You are not playing fair!"

Despite that she’d seen the predator in Twilight and welcomed it, she had expected a far more tentative exploration from her bookish marefriend and these creative attacks were taking her very much by surprise. Not that she intended to complain! As long as she got her release that is…

"Fair?" Twilight growled as she began dragging her way slowly, very slowly, up along Luna's body. "I don’t recall asking if I was playing fair. Please what?"

Luna could feel her own juices being spread up along her body as they hitched a ride on Twilight's fur. The rubbing and tickling of fur along her sex was now also being applied to her teats as well, all while Twilight's magic continued to work over her wings, and Twilight herself licked and bit the fur and flesh along her path. It was too much for Luna and she was completely unable to respond coherently. But each time she thought she’d finally find release the peak seemed to move on her. Repeated, desperate chants of “Please!” were all she could get out between moans and hisses.

A whimper of protest was torn from her throat as Twilight's travel took her far enough that she was no longer pressed against Luna's marehood. Twilight paused there unmoving as Luna continued her chant, trembling at how very, very close relief was.

“Please what?”

She drew every bit of energy that remained to her in an attempt to scream her plea, but all that she managed to get out was a roughly whispered, “Please let me cum…”

“As you wish.”

For a moment nothing happened, but then Twilight slid forward again and Luna screamed in pleasure as the dual sensation of Twilight's teats clashing and rubbing with her own, as well as Twilight's teeth nipping suddenly at her throat, gave her that last tiny push she'd needed in order to fall over the cliff into a world of pure pleasure. Sight, sound, smell, taste, and touch were all lost to her as she rode the tsunami of her release. How long she was lost in that inner world she would never know, but it seemed for a while as though it would never end. Each time she thought it was finally being to ebb, some new spark would send her shooting to a new peak.

After that exquisite eternity, the chain of orgasms began to fade enough that other senses started to come back online, though small aftershocks continued to jolt her from time to time. First she became aware of the warm lassitude spread all through her body and of an ache of overused muscles. Then she felt the air rushing in and out of her mouth as she panted. Next she managed to fight open her eyes and met the set of deep purple ones mere inches away - the sight of which made her racing heart skip a beat as feelings of love for the owner coursed through her.

Finally, hearing returned.

"-na! Luna! Are you okay!? You'd stopped breathing for a minute there!"

"Mmmmm hmmmmm..." hummed Luna as she wrapped shaky forelegs around Twilight and pulled her down into a deep, loving, and unhurried kiss. Tongues sliding along each other and exploring mouths in long, slow passes. It wasn't about passion, it was all about extending the sensation of being connected body and soul.

When the two finally broke apart, still breathing heavily, Luna responded to the earlier, worried question. "Far more than just okay. I've never felt anything quite that intense before." She flopped her head back on the bed. "That was just... Wow!"

Twilight pressed their cheeks together and nuzzled her neck before moving up to her ear. "So I win then?"

Luna locked Twilight with an appraising stare. "As wonderful as that was, I don't think it counts as a fair counter-argument."

"But I didn't use anything but magic in the preening of your wings!"

“And I’m sure you used it exactly like you normally do…” Luna replied sarcastically and raised one eyebrow at the hot purple mess still draped over her.

Twilight huffed and looked off to one side. "Fine... you win."

There was a pause, then she looked back to Luna and the lustful spark was growing within her eyes again. "Of course, there’s other advantages to my method you know."

Luna felt her own fading lust begin to return as she became once more fully aware of the odor of sex, the wet and sticky state of the bed and their fur, and the heat of Twilight's sex where it rested on her stomach just past her breasts. An inviting grin stretched across her lips as she replied, "Oh? What sort of advantages?"

Twilight's horn began to glow. "Well, for example..."

Author's Note

This chapter gave me the most trouble in the first writing, and again in this rewrite. I'm still not happy with various aspects of it after four attempts at redoing it, but I'm tired of constantly reworking an old story instead of working something new, so it'll have to do.