The Tattered Rose

by ProfWho11

Rating: mature
Tags: Anthro, Dark
Length: 1713

Thinking she had found the one stallion who would accept her for who she was, she was taken to his place only to find out he wanted something more than a normal relationship.

Rose goes on a date with a stallion who treats her like a normal mare, but things turn bad when she awakens in his basement.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2017-03-07 22:33:47 UTC

Date Gone Wrong

It was a quiet evening in Ponyville. Nearly everypony was asleep, some were out having a good time. However, a chilling scream was heard throughout the town, waking the town and knowing what was happening as they recognize the voice. A few grinned. Others frowned. And some buried their faces in their pillows, trying to muffle the noise as some colts and fillies began to cry. Even the princesses heard these screams as they lowered their heads in grief. This was a night they would never forget...

Flaming Rose was different from all the other ponies. She wasn't an ordinary pegasus, for she was a Fire Pegasus. She was the last one living. See, the fire pegasi were early people roaming Equestria, just before the Princesses were born. Many say they were angels, preparing the land for them. Others consider them demons who burned anything and anyone that crossed their paths. She was considered a demon, even when she was isolated in her cottage in the middle of the Everfree Forest. One night, she decided to go for a walk, knowing that nearly everybody was asleep. She wore a tanktop, a short skirt, and some sneakers. She arrives at the town and begins to explore, her curiosity nearly reaching its peak. Just as she passed the fountain, she hears a noise, making the water splash a bit. She turns to see a stallion, perhaps in his twenties, on the ground, having tripped.

"Oh my goodness! A-Are you okay?" She asks, a bit concerned as she went over, trying not to raise an alarm.

"Yeah... I'm okay..." The stallion said, getting up and rubbing his head. He looks at her and sees just how fragile she looked. His eyes twinkled as he smiles. "Say, I haven't seen you around here. You new?"

"Kinda... I'm just walking around. I need to get back to the forest soon."

"Well... A forest lady. Cute." He notices how red her coat was as well as the cutie mark. "Fire Pegasus?"

Her ears perked up and quickly lowered as she shrinks into her shoulders. "Y-Yes... I-If you want me to leave, I'll just uh..." She slowly turned around and started walking.

"No no no! I never meant to say it like that! It's just amazing to see one in real life! Are there anymore of you?"

"No... I'm the last of my kind..."

"Wow... must be hard, surviving out here on your own."

"It is..." She looks at him. "Why are you being nice? Most would just spray water or beat me up..."

"Well, I'm not like all those ponies... I think you're really cute."

She smiles softly as she held out her hand. "I'm Rose..."

He takes her hand and kisses it. "I'm Lotus."

She giggles. "We're both named after flowers. That's so cool."

"Not as hot as Rose though."

"Okay, puns are over. Anyway... What now?"

"How about a drink? On me..."

"O-Okay. Never had a drink before."

"Then I'll be glad to give you the first glass." He began to lead her to a bar nearby as he puts his hand in his pocket, feeling a small capsule as he grins. "Just a little more... Then I can do whatever I want with her..." He soon walks in as he smiles, yelling at the bartender for two glasses of wine. "Alright. You need to sip your wine slowly as soon as it comes. It's better to savor it than to chug it all down."

She nods as she sits down, looking around the place for the first time as she saw many ponies clamoring and talking aloud. She wasn't used to this, of course, but she enjoyed it for a change. The glasses arrived as she took the wine and sipped it like she was told. It was strong, but she tasted the sweetness of the grape juice. "Wow... This is amazing!"

"Glad you like it. So... how about another glass when you're done?"

"Yeah!" She began to sip it all as she sets the glass down. She sees Lotus order another glass as he sat down.

Soon, the glass arrives as he took the hand he had in his pocket out and took the glass, dropping the pill unseen. "Enjoy..."

She takes the glass and sipped it all, swallowing the pill. The effects began immediately as she began to feel dizzy. "Ohhh....."

"What's the matter?"

"I think I sipped it too fast..."

"Maybe you can't hold your liquor."

"I-I need to go..." She slowly got up, but sat back down, afraid to fall over. Lotus got up and went to help her up. He picks her up and carries her out as he started walking to his own home, not dropping her off at her cottage. "W-Where we going?"

"My house is closer... It'd be best it you spent the night there..."

"O-Okay..." She closes her eyes for what seemed like a few seconds. She opens them up to find she was tied down to a bed. She sees Lotus staring at her as he grinned a malicious smile.

"Good to see you're awake..."

"Lotus? What's going on? Where am I?"

"You're in my basement. It's been awhile since I had a cute mare in my house... Especially a special one like you..."

She pulls on the bonds that attached her to the mattress. She then struggles a bit as she listened to Lotus laughing. "Wh-What's so funny?!"

"I just love watching mares fight... It turns me on..." She can see a bulge forming in his pants as he walked over to her. He then placed his hands on her body, exploring every curve he could find. He sees she was blushing and squirming as he grins more. His hands stop at her breasts as he began to feel them around. "How long have you been hiding these milk bags?" He stops as he soon grabbed her tanktop and ripped it open, exposing her breasts as she felt cold air hitting her hard, causing her to shiver. He began to feel them again as he leaned down and began to suckle on one of them.

"S-Stop!" She begged, twisting her body to try and pull away, but to no avail.

"What's the matter?"

"I-I don't want this!"

"I do~" He went back to suckling as he moved a hand down, lifting up her skirt and rubbing her pussy through her panties. He sees she's trying to cross them, but the ropes held them open as he soon gripped the panties and tore them off. He smiles as he brought them up to his nose and takes a deep breath, taking in the intoxicating scent that made her irresistible. He felt his pants tightening as he felt his "friend" throbbing hard against the fabric. "You got me going already~ I hope you have enough energy~ I'll be going on all night long~" He takes off his shirt and his pants. She can see it peeking out a bit as he slides his boxers down, watching it bounce up. He gets on top of her and began to prod her entrance.

She whimpers a bit. "P-Please no..."

"Why not?~"

"I-I've never-"

"Oooh~ My first virgin~ I'll be real rough with you~"

"No no no!"

He slams himself in as he hears her let out a bloodcurdling scream, the noise echoing around the town as the ponies woke up, including the princesses. He begins to thrust hard into her, grunting and groaning as he listens to her cries and whimpers, empowering him even more as he thrusts faster. He puts his hands on her cheeks, making her look at him as he smiles at her. "I don't care what you are... I don't care what you can do... In the end, you'll always be a weak little girl with a fucked up past... And now, your future is fucked." He moves even faster, holding her close as he grunts, his hips smacking hers. She continues to cry out as steaming tears fell down her soft cheeks as the hot, salty water dissolved a bit of her coat. He ignores this as the head of his cock began to flare up, nearly about to burst. She squirms around even more, whimpering now as she knew he wasn't gonna pull out. Lucky for her, she made herself sterile a long time ago. He never knew this as he pushes all the way in, cumming and filling her up with his seed as he moans. She winces as she looks away. He soon collapses on her, panting heavily as he kisses her neck. "I gotta say, you're my favorite so far..." He pulls out as he began to get dressed. "I might consider keeping you in here... Make you my personal slave..."

Her eyes widened as she heard this. This time, she had had enough as she pulls on the bonds, the ropes snapping as she bursts into flames. Lotus looks at this as he backed away. "I would've been fine with a simple beating, but this? This is when I've had enough!" The flames began to grow as everything around her began to smoke up. Lotus tries to escape, but the fire already reaches him as he screams, burning straight to ashes. She limps out, the whole house burning as ponies were standing outside. All they saw.... was a broken girl with nothing to lose as steam rose from her eyes. Her golden eyes were glowing as the flames soon began to die down. The last thing she whispered before passing out was... "What could I have done to deserve this cruelty?" Her body slamming to the ground, the last thing she sees is a white alicorn approaching her. She slowly looked up, her vision blurred as the alicorn leaned down and whispered with a gentle voice, "You've done nothing, child... These ponies misunderstand... Forgive them... and forget their actions... As for Lotus... He's already paid for his recent actions... I have you to thank as you have kept him from hurting every other mare... I shall make sure that no more ponies hurt you this way..." She weakly smiles as she passes out. She soon woke up back in her cottage, greeted by her fawn.