After School Special: Refining Coarse Minerals

by Your Antagonist

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance
Length: 6432

While searching for a stolen diary, Snips gets captured by Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.

After bearing witness to an act of petty larceny by Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Snips decides to follow in the lead of his favorite superhero and takes justice into his own hooves by following the pair to reclaim what was stolen. Little does he realize that fate and the ever malevolent Diamond Tiara have much more perverse plans in store for the would be hero.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-05 06:24:02 UTC

The Diamond In The Rough & The Tarnished Silver

Warning/ Disclaimer: The following story contains depictions of sexual acts between two or more consenting animated equine minors. If this offends you, common sense dictates you should probably stop reading. Everyone else, grab your shame-socks.

After School Special: Refining Coarse Minerals

By: Your Antagonist

Cutting The Diamond In The Rough And Polishing Tarnished Silver

The Ponyville Literary Reference Emporium, or the library as it was referred to by anypony who wasn’t Twilight Sparkle, was as busy as it had ever been on a Saturday morning. The latest installments of popular novels and comic books drew a majority of the small town’s youth in addition to the regular crowd of scholars who did their best to drown out the noise that, naturally, accompanied the scores of children. Amidst all the chatter and scrutiny of the scholars, sitting at a table all by his lonesome sat Snips, pouring over a small stack of “Captain Equestria” comic books he’d managed to snatch up in the rush to grab the latest issues first.

Normally the stubby unicorn colt would have been accompanied by his inseparable—yet simple— counterpart Snails, but lately Snails had been too preoccupied by his new fillyfriend Twist to hang out with Snips as much as he used to. Snips didn’t mind it too much, but he was certainly a bit jealous of his friend’s luck with fillies. Even in class, Snips could barely manage to hold a conversation with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and they were basically colts with the bodies of fillies.

 It wasn’t that he was nervous around girls, he’d never been intimidated by the other gender in the past.  It was just that as of late, strange new thoughts about the opposite sex had begun plaguing his developing young mind. He didn’t know who to discuss this new development with or how to go about bringing it up, and as a result he wound up seeking refuge from these issues by delving head first into a stack of illustrated escapes from reality.

With a sigh, he attempted to get his mind away from the issue by turning his attention to the comic book before himself. This however proved to be a futile effort as the current set of panels showed Captain Equestria double-leg bucking the snot out of the villain before rescuing and kissing the obligatory damsel in distress. For a moment, Snips allowed his imagination to run away with him as he pictured himself as the big strong hero, beating up bad guys and getting kisses from various beautiful mares. It seemed all too perfect, but alas he knew it was not meant to be. He wasn’t big or brave enough, he was inept physically due to his portly frame, and his magic was weak to boot.

Yeah, right. Me a superhero, that’ll be the day. With a sigh, Snips flipped the comic book closed and picked another one off the stack hoping to Celestia that the next one would have more action than mushy romantic junk.

He turned to the first page and quickly found himself unable to focus on the story. He scrutinized and studied the words on the page but couldn’t concentrate on what the characters were saying. He still had girls on his mind. With groan, he rose his head and glanced around the library, but all he saw were groups of fillies with maybe one or two colts sprinkled amongst them.

After a few bouts of crowd searching, Snips’ eyes finally fell on the only remotely interesting occurrence in the whole library: the beautiful yet bookish Twilight Sparkle reshelving and reorganizing the books. Snips was in awe watching the librarian’s magic —as well as her flank— in action. Twilight was holding nearly every unoccupied book in the library with her magic and pouring herself a cup of tea simultaneously. Snips could barely pull off a flashlight spell. Wow, she’s amazing... I sure wish I could be that awesome with my magic, maybe then girls would notice me.

 He took note that the librarian's ability to multitask wasn’t limited to just magic as he watched her carry on a conversation with two thirds of the Cutie Mark Crusaders: Sweetie Belle and Applebloom. He wondered where the third member could have been, seeing as the three were normally inseparable, but shirked the thought just as quickly as it came.

Snips was just about to return his attention to Captain Equestria’s latest exploits, when out of the corner of his eye he caught a glimpse of something that was half pink, half gray, and all rotten to the core trotting haughtily into the library. Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon? That’s odd, I’ve never seen them in the library for... anything. What’re they up to?

He watched as the troublesome twosome approached an unattended white saddlebag with green straps. The pair looked around cautiously before nodding to each other. Diamond Tiara popped the clasp on the bag and began to root through it, while Silver Spoon continued to scan around, her primary focus on Applebloom and Sweetie Belle who were still engaged in conversation with Twilight Sparkle.

What could those two want from somepony else’s bag? Wait a minute... isn’t that bag Sweetie Belle’s? Diamond Tiara emerged from the bag a moment later grinning snidely as she pulled out a small white notebook. Just as she did so, Silver Spoon began jabbing her counterpart in the side with one hoof, and pointing to the two approaching Cutie Mark Crusaders with the other. Without any further deliberation, Diamond Tiara shoved the notebook in her own saddlebag, and turned galloping out of the library with Silver Spoon only a few hoof-falls behind.

Why those thieves! I should tell Sweetie Belle what they just did! Snips quickly turned to dismount the table, and accidentally knocked over a stack of comics in his haste. Snips turned to look at the mess only to find two of the books had fallen open on pages that, unbeknownst to Snips, would alter his afternoon drastically. The chance set of panels on the first book showed Captain Equestria issuing a cease and desist order to a pair of thieves by way of fire magic, while the second book was folded over on one of the mushy get-and-kiss-the-girl pages that always seemed to conclude the installments of this particular story series.

As he looked down at these pages a thought crossed his mind. Hey... if  pretty girls always kiss Captain Equestria for saving the day, then maybe... Snips looked at Sweetie Belle who was oblivious to the fact that she had been robbed by Diamond Tiara. A wheedly grin began to crawl across the colt’s lips as he contemplated a most desirable outcome.

That settles it, I’m going after them! Then I’ll come back here, and Sweetie Belle will think I’m a hero. Maybe she’ll even be so grateful that she’ll...Snips face flushed red from contemplating the issue further, and he bolted for the library door, galloping as fast as his short legs could carry him.

Five seconds later, Snips reached the door panting and heaving. Sluggishly he stumbled out of the door into the busy Ponyville streets, all the while silently cursing his stocky build. After taking a moment to catch his breath, the colt looked left and right for any trace of the pilfering ponies. Aha! There they are! Snips watched the pair as they slunk into a passing crowd heading towards the Ponyville Marketplace and promptly cantered after them.

The marketplace was filled with its usual hustle and bustle of shopkeepers and cart owners giving their best sales pitches to potential customers perusing about. Snips was thankful for the busy atmosphere, as the throngs of shoppers helped to cover and conceal his presence from the fillies who had been checking behind themselves periodically since leaving the library.

After a few moments of following Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Snips watched the two disappear into a nearby clothing store. Oh good, they’re stopping, I can take this moment to rest. The plucky colt turned to find a nearby bench, all the while keeping his attention fixed on the entrance of the store. I oughta take this time to think about how I’m going to get that book back from those two. Hmm... how would Captain Equestria handle this? He’d probably just wait until they’re alone and beat the tar out of them! Snips punctuated that thought by pounding his hooves against each other abrasively. But wait a minute, I can’t hit a girl! Even fillies as rotten as them are still girls. Gah! Why couldn’t they just be colts, at least then I could—

“Hey, whatcha thinkin’ about, eh?” drawled a new voice from behind the pondering colt.

GAH! Who the hay!? Snips was so startled by the interruption that he fell off of the bench he had been resting on. He whipped round to face the source of the interruption and was met with the last pony he was expecting to see today.  “Sn-Sn-Snails!? Why did you sneak up on me like that!? And why are you here anyway? Weren’t you with Twist?”

“Yeah, but she went into that store.” Snails pointed to the same store that Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon had ventured into earlier.

“Well, shouldn’t you, you know, be with her?”

“Nuh-uh, no way, dude. Girls take forever in stores, besides that I told her I’ll be waiting out here. So what’re you doing out here? I thought you’d reading the newest Captain E.”

Snips perked up proudly “Well, if you must know, as we speak I’m on the trail of two wicked thieves, and once I finally confront them to show them the error of their ways, I’m going to collect my thanks from a very grateful filly if you catch my drift.” Snips nudged Snails in the side, winking as he did so.

It took Snails a moment to catch the implication behind the gesture. “Oh, ho ho, I know what you mean,” Snails chuckled, returning the nudge. “Just make sure you save a glass for your old pal, huh?”

“You know I will— wait, what?”

“Yeah, you’re going to get a milkshake from her, right?"

An air of oblivious silence blew between them. “Never mind, Snails,” Snips sighed, glancing over to the store he was supposed to be watching. To his surprise, the door of the boutique shot open and a ivory coated filly with a nappy red mane galloped out, sobbing as she passed by the colts on the bench. “Uhhh, Snails?”

“Yeah, dude?”

“Didn’t you just see Twist run by crying?”

“Yeah, dude.”

“Shouldn’t you, I don’t know, go after her?”

Snails took a literal minute to ponder Snips’ advice, chin scratching and all. “Yeah, you’re probably right, dude.” Snails took off prancing blissfully after his date, and in typical Snails’ fashion was headed the wrong direction

“She went that way, Snails.”

Without missing a beat, the dopey colt turned around, resuming his plodding trot in the proper direction. Sometimes, I really worry about that guy.

No longer distracted,Snips looked back at the shop in time to see his marks leave the store talking loudly and chuckling hysterically.

“—I still can’t believe you said that to Twist, Diamond, but the look on her face: priceless!” said Silver Spoon.

“I can’t believe she broke down crying so quickly. I must be getting better at this,” Diamond Tiara said smugly.

“I’ll say. Hey, when are we going to go through Blanky Belle’s diary? I can’t wait to see what kind of dirt we can dig up on her!”

“Hmm, I’d say right now is as good a time as any. Come on, let’s go to the school, nopony else should be there today. Besides, I feel like we’re being watched.” Diamond Tiara looked around uncertainly before starting off into the flow of foot traffic. “Let’s go, Silver Spoon.”

“Right behind you, Diamond!”

So, the school, huh? I’ve gotta get there before them, but how? Wait a minute... I know a shortcut! Who says never leaving the house on time doesn’t pay off? With that, Snips scampered towards a nearby fence sporting a massive hole and dove through. He had quite some ground to cover, but he was almost certain he could beat the two of them like the tardy bell on a Tuesday morning.

Fifteen minutes and half a pint of sweat later, Snips stumbled, huffing and heaving, into the desolated yard of Ponyville Elementary School. Huff... huff... well, it doesn’t look like they made it here yet. Snips took a moment to catch his breath before taking in his surroundings. Hmmm... where to hide? The yard was fairly barren save for a bush near the front entrance, and a bush near the back of the school.

Snips found himself strapped for time as the sound of feminine giggles pierced the languid silence. Reacting quickly, he sprinted for the far bush and threw himself into the foliage, bodily. He forcefully labored his breathing, and stilled his movements to the best of his ability, hoping that the approaching fillies wouldn’t notice the colossal dent in the top of the bush. Fortunately for him, the hoofsteps of the fillies went past his hiding place, ceasing only after they had reached their destination behind the schoolhouse. Snips maneuvered himself about in the bushes, gently pushing away any branches that obscured his vision of the pair. All I have to do now, is wait for the right moment.

Diamond Tiara retrieved the small white tome from her saddlebag and laid down on the grass. “Are you ready, Silver Spoon?” She flashed her friend a shark-like grin.

Silver Spoon returned the gesture with a smile befitting of a hydra. “Uh, like yeah.” Silver Spoon rolled her eyes playfully. “Let’s do this already.”

“Alright, let’s see...” Diamond Tiara flipped the book open, scanning and flipping through the pages in search of any particularly juicy entries. “Burnt breakfasts... hunting for butterflies... studying for test? Ugh... This isn’t a diary, this is pathetic!” Diamond Tiara swatted the diary away with enough force that it landed just in front of the bush Snips had holed up in.

Hey, it’s right there in front of me. I could just reach out, snatch it and run, but I’ll have to be careful about it. Snips slowly extended his hoof outward only managing to brush the cover.

 “That diary is almost as lame as its blank flank owner! I knew we should’ve gone after Applebloom’s,” Diamond Tiara grumbled.

“Honestly Diamond, you didn’t even read it all the way through,” sighed Silver Spoon. The gray filly trotted over and snatched the fallen book just out of Snips’ reach.

Oh, dangit, I almost had it too.

“That’s because there’s nothing worth reading in there, Silver Spoon,” Diamond Tiara huffed.

“I’ll be the judge of that. Hmm...” Silver Spoon combed through the pages with much more patience than her counterpart had displayed. After a few moments of scanning, the silver-maned filly was about to follow Diamond Tiara’s earlier suit, when she came across a particular set of week-old entries that just seemed somehow “off” compared to the rest of the entries.

Dear Diary,

Last Night, I heard my sister yelling from her bedroom, and I remembered that she’d brought somepony home with her. I thought that the guy she brought back was killing her, so I ran to her rescue. When I got in there, it looked like I was right, he was on top of my sister choking her, and stabbing her belly with something I couldn’t tell what it was. I ran at him and tackled him off of Rarity, but she pulled me off of him. When I asked why she was helping her murdr mueder killer, she chuckled, and told me they were playing a game and that I shouldn’t worry about it. She gave me a glass of warm milk and sent me off to bed after that, but I still heard screaming. What game could they be playing where she’d have to scream like that?

Dear Diary,

Rarity had another stallion over last night, and she sent me to bed early so she could play that game. When I asked her if I could play, she panicked and said no. When I asked her why, she told me that she’d explain when I was older. No matter how much I begged and pleaded for her to tell me, she wouldn’t budge on the issue, so I of course did what anypony else would do. I snuck into her closet and watched her play the game. They started with some kissing on the lips, and  then they started kissing each other in some other weird places. At one point the stallion even licked Rarity’s horn and she shot fireworks from it. I guess my big sis must be really, really good at that game, because at some point, she had the stallion yelling even louder than she was before they suddenly stopped and went to sleep. It looked fun, so I think I’ll try and play it sometime with Applebloom and Scootaloo when Rarity isn’t here. Who knows we could even get our cutie marks for it.

Dear Diary,

Something wonderful happened yesterday! I was playing with Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Pipsqueak in the boutique, when Applejack and Rainbow Dash came to pick up AB and Scoots. Rarity had plans with a stallion, and she almost kicked Pipsqueak out, but I convinced her to let him stay. After she was gone, I realized I had a colt to play her game with! So I took Pipsqueak upstairs to Rarity’s room —he kept calling me ‘princess’ for some reason, it was really cute— invited him to join me on her bed and then we— Silver Spoon dropped the book and her jaw simultaneously as the words upon the corresponding passages on the page were forever burned into her memory. “B-Blanky Belle, didthat!?”

Diamond Tiara took note of her friend’s behavior and promptly picked up the book so she could know what the fuss was all about, but unlike her friend, the spoiled, sheltered filly didn’t quite understand the crux of the pages contents. “Like, what’s the big deal? So she saw her sister playing a stupid game, and played it herself with that weird kid.” Diamond Tiara threw the book to the ground.

“The big deal, Diamond, is that in a manner of speaking, Blanky Belle one-upped us.”

“She one-upped us?” Diamond Tiara scoffed at Silver Spoon’s deduction of the diary entry. “How exactly did she one-up us? It’s not like she got her cutie mark or anything.”

“Well you see—”

Okay, Snips, they’re not looking, and the book is right there. It’s time to be a hero! Snips felt a surge of adrenaline flood into his brain, and decided to let it take control. Screaming like a maniac, Snips sprang from his hiding place dashing like mad towards the book. “Raaaaaaaahhhhhh!”

“What the hay!?” His sudden outburst had startled Diamond Tiara, who instinctively whipped around and threw her hindlegs out in a desperate double-leg buck. Unfortunately for the would be hero, Diamond Tiara’s hooves connected with his jaw, sending him sprawling into the wall of the schoolhouse. “I thought somepony was following us!”

Owwww... that really hurt. Dazed and confused, Snips slowly rolled unsteadily to his back, and sat up only to be met with the scowling face of Diamond Tiara. Normally anytime Snips was face to face with Diamond Tiara, he usually feared for his life or his reputation, but right now, he couldn’t help but remark on her looks. Wow, for the filly equivalent of Nightmare Moon, she’s actually really kinda pretty up close. Snips chuckled nervously at his thoughts, and made the attempt to scramble away from the venomous glare piercing his soul. For his troubles, Diamond Tiara shoved him back down planting her right hoof firmly on his chest to keep him from moving. Okay, the pretty is gone, this hurts!

“How long have you been watching us, dweeb?” Diamond Tiara growled, applying more pressure to his chest.

Snips wanted nothing more than kick Diamond Tiara off of him and deliver some cliched superhero’s monologue along the lines of: “Fiendish harpy, I’ve been trailing your treacherous exploits since this very morning!” Yet there two reasons why he couldn’t. Firstly, as embarrassing as it was for the colt to admit, he had been absolutely overpowered by a girl. There were no two ways about it. Diamond Tiara definitely had him pinned down using only one hoof and half of her strength, he could just feel it. If he even tried to get up, she would just shove him right back down. Secondly, he kind of liked where was at the moment. Diamond Tiara was really pretty after all, and he couldn’t explain why but there was something very appealing to him about this whole situation.

“I asked you a question!” Diamond Tiara leaned her face in closer to his so she could glare directly into his eyes. As she leaned closer, her hind legs wound up straddled over his to secure her balance. Unbeknownst to her, the warmth radiating from her firm thighs in this particular position was having a superfluous effect on a certain part of her nervous victim’s anatomy.

On the other side of the spectrum, Snips was all too aware of what was happening to himself. It was a fairly natural occurrence for a colt his age —so he’d been told— but nonetheless it was still a rather embarrassing one. In any other situation, he’d have excused himself to another room so he could wait for it to go away on its own, or in those exceedingly inconvenient situations, he’d have hidden it using anything at his disposal. Unfortunately, being empty hoofed with Diamond Tiara on top of him, not only could he not retreat somewhere else to let it wear off, but he couldn’t even conceal it. Please don’t notice, please don’t notice.

“Hey, don’t ignore me!” Ordered Diamond Tiara. “I’m right here you miserable— wait, what’s poking my leg?”

Oh, manure. Maybe she’ll ignore it and just kill me. Snips was about to find that he was in fact not that lucky.

Diamond Tiara began to slowly back away from Snips so she could properly identify what had been poking her in the thigh.

Desperate to cover his shame, Snips lunged forward, grabbing the fillies forelegs as tightly as he dared, only to find that at the cost of ridding himself of one issue, he had unveiled a whole new slew of problems.

“Let go,” Diamond Tiara said simply.

“Uh, I, heh, I can’t.” Snips grinned sheepishly. She really might kill me.

“I said let go, dweeb.”

“So, nice weather we’re having isn’t i—” Snips’ sentence trailed off as Diamond Tiara placed a hoof on his horn and pushed him away with all of her might. Snips put up a fair amount of token resistance, namely none, and consequently landed on his back, hard.

With Snips lying supine, Diamond Tiara could plainly see the offender behind the mysterious thigh poking and reeled back in disgust. “Gah! Silver Spoon, what is that thing?”

Oh boy, here we go.

Silver Spoon grimaced at the sight of it as well, but hesitantly cracked Sweetie Belle’s diary open to the very page that had scarred her so earlier. “It’s that,” she said pointing to the offending passage.

Diamond Tiara glanced at the passage, then Snips, and repeated for good measure.

“So that’s what that talentless marshmallow used to get a leg up on us, huh? Well, there is no way I’m going to let that blank flank have anything over me.” Arrogantly, Diamond Tiara stomped closer to Snips who was to recovering from his prior abuse. At the sight of Diamond Tiara, the realization that he was still “exposed” rushed back to his mind. The colt panicked and covered up his shame with his hooves.  Diamond Tiara thought nothing of it as she  shoved him back down. “Move the hooves, now.”

Terrified of the earth pony’s surprising strength, and a little excited by the whole situation, Snips swallowed nervously and wordlessly obliged.

The spoiled filly began investigating the completely mortified Snips to get a better idea of what she was dealing with. She experimentally extended a hoof and began poking the new anomaly. “Hmm, it’s kinda squishy... and small...”

“Sm-sm-small!?” Feeling indignant, Snips shot up only to meet the soul-piercing gaze of the inspecting party. Any ounce of righteous wrath the colt had at that moment faded away as Diamond Tiara once again effortlessly pushed him back down.

Curious, Silver Spoon trotted over to join her friend to observe the debacle. “Diamond, I think you’re supposed to lick it to make it bigger.”

“Lick that?” Diamond Tiara winced at the thought. “Are you sure Silver Spoon?”

“I’m just going by the diary,” said Silver Spoon.

“Fine,” Diamond Tiara sighed.

“Wait, lick?” asked Snips. “What do you mean— YOWCH!” A jolt of pain shot through the colt’s leg as Diamond Tiara had drove her hoof straight down into Snips’ thigh.

“Nopony told you to talk, and I don’t want to hear your voice. Just shut up while I do this.” Diamond Tiara seized Snips’ shame with both hooves, forcing herself to draw closer with her tongue extended. She clenched her eyes tightly as her warm tongue made contact with his soft flesh, drawing upwards and returning a sensation not unlike like a hot knife through butter.

The muscles in Snips lower back clenched up at the sensation rending through his virgin flesh. He shuddered as a newfound ambience crawled from the point of contact and rode along his spine, only to dispel the bliss it bestowed upon him in a fit of quick shivers as the filly’s tongue glided from his peak.

Diamond Tiara was still hesitant with her licking, but she returned her tongue to the shaft before herself and put a little more force into her next attempt. To her satisfaction, as she ascended she could feel Snips growing longer and harder in her grasp. The sounds of a light squeal escaping Snips caught her interest, inspiring her to to try a little harder with her technique. She began exploratively tracing the length with her tongue, wrapping it about as she saw fit, stabbing into it as curiosity guided her. Her inhibitions had all but melted away at this point, and she began to relax and enjoy herself.

On the receiving end of this encounter, Snips was losing his mind in the ecstasy Diamond Tiara’s inexperienced curiosity provided him. The warm saliva flowing from her tongue gave off a wonderful melting sensation each time she rolled her tongue along his sensitive flesh.

Silver Spoon watched in curious bewilderment as she watched her normally-composed friend give into a lust-driven ferality before her very eyes, with somepony like Snips no less. The silver-maned filly couldn’t deny that she was somewhat curious what it was like, and the scarlet blush slowly creeping along her face certainly wasn’t helping her conceal that fact either. Deciding that if Diamond Tiara could do it, she could too, Silver Spoon dropped Sweetie Belle’s diary and leaned in close looking for an angle to approach from.

Diamond Tiara took note of this and moved away, gesturing for her friend to give it a shot. “Go ahead and try it, Silver Spoon. It’s a little weird at first, but it gets really fun, trust me.”

Silver Spoon grinned sheepishly and nodded at Diamond Tiara before fixing her eyes to Snips’ member. It was much bigger, a little intimidating even, than before Diamond Tiara had started. Silver Spoon swallowed nervously before making her slow descent to Snips’ throbbing tip. The gray filly however had a much different approach in mind than her counterpart. While Diamond Tiara had focused primarily on tongue play, Silver Spoon opted to grace Snips’ senses with her lips instead.

The moment Silver Spoon’s lips engulfed him and guided Snips into the moist hearth of her mouth, he quivered twice as hard as he had when Diamond Tiara ravaged him. Silver Spoon kept her tongue static as she made her first descent, taking Snips halfway inside her maw, to get acclimated with the combined taste of Snips genatalia and her friend’s residual saliva. Feeling slightly more confident in her abilities, Silver Spoon made her ascent only to shoot back down even lower than the first time, eliciting a low grunt and some involuntary shuffling from Snips’ lower body. This intrigued and encouraged Silver Spoon to study his reactions each time she bobbed up and down. After developing a steady rhythm, she began incorporating her tongue in a much different manner than Diamond Tiara by applying a humid pressure to the sensitive underside of the shaft.

Feeling left out, Diamond Tiara decided to join back in back in the fun, licking around the edges that Silver Spoon had neglected. It was only a matter of time before Silver Spoon had removed her lips from Snips’ circumference to join her partner in crime in the explorative caress only their tongues could provide.

Snips was in absolute euphoria as the two ferociously attacked and wrapped around him greedily like dueling cobras, neither willing to give up an inch for the other. As they continued, he felt something roiling up from deep within his loins. As he’d spent a good amount of time “ridding” himself of those urges whenever it was convenient, he knew exactly what was coming. The more the two squeezed and stroked, the more intense the build up became until finally he felt himself explode and released his hot load upon Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon who reacted immediately to the sudden unwelcome occurrence.

“What the— hey, what’s this white stuff!?” howled Diamond Tiara, as she wiped the discharge from her cheek.

Silver Spoon spat a glob of the brackish substance from her mouth and sighed. “You couldn’t have given us any warning?” Silver Spoon fussed.

“Eh, heh, heh, sorry about that,” Snips chuckled nervously sitting up. “Well, I guess we’re done here, righ—”

Diamond Tiara angrily shoved the still erect Snips back down to the grass. The fellatio had only riled her up and inspired a powertrip. “Did I say that we’re done yet?” she asked burying her hoof into Snips’ chest.

“Ummm, no, no you didn’t,” Snips whimpered under the pressure bearing down from her hoof.

“That’s right, I didn’t.” Diamond Tiara climbed onto him, straddling his hips, all the while keeping a constant crushing pressure on his chest. “Now shut up so I can do this.” Diamond Tiara put her all of her weight on Snips’ chest so she could raise her flank. “Put that thing in me,” she ordered.

“I don’t really know how,” Snips mumbled.

“Well, you’d better figure out how before I—”

“Hold on a second Diamond, I’ll help you get it in,” Silver Spoon offered. She seized Snips’ length between her hooves and felt its owner jump somewhat at the contact. After lining the tip up with Diamond Tiara’s sex, she nodded to the filly letting her know that everything was set.

Diamond Tiara returned the nod and slowly began to ease her hips down, chewing on her lower lip as she felt her prize slide slowly inside of her. As this was Diamond Tiara’s first time, she had no idea what to expect, but was spurned on by the detestable idea that Sweetie Belle had done this before her. The descent had gone smoothly for both parties, as Snips was treated to the overwhelming heat and tightness of his partner’s fillyhood, while Diamond Tiara was able experience some of the most intense sensations her body could afford her, until she was met with resistance. Thinking nothing of it, she bore down even harder but winced as she received a sharp jolt of pain for her trouble.

Snips took note of the pained expression on his dominator’s face and chanced her wrath by showing concern for her well being. “Hey, are you alright?”

“Sh-shut up, I don’t need your concern, you loser,” Diamond Tiara hissed in response. A moment later, the pain subsided, leaving behind a wealth of delectable sensations in its place. “See,” she huffed, “that took care of itself. Let’s keep going.” Diamond Tiara lifted her flank up slowly, allowing Snips to revel in the delectation of her tightness, before she slammed herself back down, filling her mind with a mind with an intense elation. She rode Snips even harder the third time, increasing the intensity as she reached the fourth and the fifth counts, before she allowed her hips to move seemingly on their own accord.

She grinned snidely as she looked down at Snips’ simple face twisted up in excruciating rapture as heaved and huffed in time with each fall of her flank. She was absolutely dominating him with each pump, subjugating him to the whims of her body, and she found every moment of the encounter to be absolutely exquisite. For the portly fool beneath her, the pleasure derived from this experience was purely a physical venture. For her however, the true essence of their union stemmed from the idea that she had broken and manipulated him to such a pathetic state.

“D-Diamond Tiara,” Snips managed to grunt between fits of abuse. “I think I’m gonna—” he winced as another jolt of electric pleasure surfed through his being and a familiar swelling started to overtake him. “I think I’m gonna—”

Diamond Tiara recognized the grunt as the precursor to his earlier climax and immediately stood up, allowing him to fall out of her harmlessly. “Oh no, I’m not letting any of that nasty white gunk anywhere near me,” she declared. She was still in control of this situation and if she was going to let him finish, it was going to be on her terms.

Placing a forehoof on his throbbing member, she began stroking up towards his belly, since she had decided this was the safest place to let it go. After a few strokes, she had magnanimously cured his burden, by allowing him to finish on his own coat at her hooves. She took a moment to admire her work, silently enjoying the pitiful site of the conquered colt laying in the dirt covered in a puddle of his own filth. More importantly however, she’d caught up to Sweetie Belle which now put the two back at square one where the unicorn filly was just a talentless blank flank with no even ground to stand on. It felt good to be back on top.

Diamond Tiara remembered that Silver Spoon hadn’t had a turn with Snips yet, and turned around to find the filly buried snout-deep into Sweetie Belle’ diary “Silver Spoon, don’t you want to try that?” She began shoving the still recovering Snips lightly in the neck “Get up you lazy—”

“I’m fine Diamond,” Silver Spoon interjected. “Besides I don’t think he can go again, you kind of wore him out,” Silver Spoon pointed out. As testament to SIlver Spoon’s observation, Snips turned to his side and began panting as if he’d just run a marathon.

“Oh, well, you’re not really missing much,” said Diamond Tiara. “Come on, let’s go to my house, I want to take a bath to get the smell of him outof my fur.”

“Right behind you, Diamond,” Silver Spoon chirped, following her friend back to town.

Once the two had left, Snips rolled to his side in the interest of getting up, but something caught his eye. In their haste, or their negligence Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara had completely forgotten Sweetie Belle’s diary. Wow, I got forced to do that with Diamond Tiara, and I’ll get to kiss Sweetie Belle? It must be my lucky day! I guess the good guy really does always win. He stood up and wobbled over to the book, placing it on his back.  All right now then to return to the library, and collect my reward!

Snips exited the school grounds and started to make his way back to town when he noticed somepony trotting up the road. Somepony he’d been looking forward to seeing for quite a while. “Hey, Sweetie Belle!” he yelled, galloping to meet her halfway.

“Hello, Snips,” Sweetie Belle chirped in greeting. “How’s your Saturday?”

Good, but it’s about to get much better. “Not bad, just reading comics and foiling thieves,” he said as nonchalantly as possible.

“Sounds like fun, I guess I’ll leave you to it then.”

“Hold on a second, I got something for you.” Snips reached behind his back and presented Sweetie Belle with the diary she had no idea was even stolen.

“Hey wait a minute, that’s my... how did you get that!?” she shrieked snatching the book out of Snips’ grasp.

“A superhero has his ways.” Snips turned his chin up and beamed proudly at his unspoken deeds. “Now then, maybe we could discuss some kind of reward or somethi—”

“Reward!?” Sweetie Belle’s voice cracked out anger. “Why would I reward you for returning my diary after you stole and read through it!”

“Wait, I didn’t read your diary!”

“Then why are there fresh hoof-prints and dirt all over the pages!?”

“I can explain that, you see there were these thieves and I—” Snips sentence trailed off into a sharp yelp of pain as for the second time in a day, he took a double leg buck to the face from an extremely agitated member of the opposite sex.Nose turned up at Snips, Sweetie Belle cantered away furiously without looking back to admire her work.

As for Snips who once again found himself dazed and confused on his back, covered in blood, mud, sweat, and other questionable bodily fluids, he could take solace in one thing. Sure he wasn’t a superhero, maybe he didn’t exactly beat the diabolical villain, and Sweetie Belle would probably never speak to him again for the rest of their lives, but there was still one positive amidst all of these negative outcomes. Years from now, when he would look back on this moment and laugh at his mistakes, he could proudly say that despite all of the abuse he’d taken on this day, he was still Diamond Tiara’s “first”. Incidentally, when that time in his life finally came, he could also proudly lay claim to the honor of having been Silver Spoon’s "only”.

The End.