Pretty Please Preen Me?

by Remedyfortheheart

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Scootaloo, Sex, Anthro, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Rainbow Dash
Length: 4913

Now that scootaloo has come of age she wants to confess her feelings to her idol and big brother, Rainbow Blitz. Struggling with ways to admit her love. She comes up with the excuse of her newly formed wings needing to be preened.

Today is my eighteenth birthday. I'm finally of age. I've waited forever to be able to do this. I can finally talk to Rainbow Blitz about my feelings. Oh! What do I do? I've never messed with another boy before. Maybe I can get him to come to me? But what if he doesn't take it. Augh! Why do you have to be so awesome that it makes this so hard to do, Rainbow!? I guess I can try to get closer to him as a woman. Hm...the sex will have to wait. Or does it? I wonder what he might do if I ask him about preening advice for my new wings? Hee hee. I bet he won't be able to resist me!

Story features Rainbow Blitz from the R63 universe. Scootaloo is still a girl. This is my Entry for the group "Preening" in their first every Preen Story competition. Cover art belongs to the talented Alasou.

The Winning story of the group "Preening" 's first ever contest.

Published 2015-03-26 02:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2015-03-26 02:10:01 UTC

I'm All Grown Up

Whew! I can feel how tight my chest is. It's almost hurting me. It's not a shortness of breath, because I'm so used to it by now. Must be something else. I can only blame my nerves for such a thing feel a slight shudder fill my body. My back foot presses along the brake to my awesome ride and I can see a cloud of dust kick into the air. How fast was I going exactly? Enough to where I could smell the fresh lifted up dirt fill my nostrils in what already was a tight fitting of air and hot blood within my body. A quick stop to see where I was going before I went to see him.

A curl formed among my lips as my heart only seemed to beat faster and faster within my tiny body. He was so close, and yet he was so far away from being that dreamy version of himself. Where he would court me and offer me flowers, kiss me every day in a loving embrace.

Giving a sigh I felt my hands leave my scooter, letting the beat up old thing flop to the side. It was made of metal and like always was in much better condition then I would ever be.

I could feel fingers curl into a ball as my worry filled eyes looked up at the cloud like home of the one I admired so much. He was such an influence on my life, that I couldn't wait any longer. I had to give him something back for having him lift me up so many times in my life. The biggest decision he had made for me was to be my mentor, my appointed brother. I had always been a fan of his, admiring him from afar, making sure he was happy whenever I was around, trying to be the best little sister I could be. Yet I know something inside was craving more.

Lately I haven't been able to think of anything else. When my eighteenth birthday came along. All I could wish and dream about was seeing Blitz in the nude. Oh, how I wanted to caress those baby blue abs of his, to feel his robust arms and wings folded around me, to kiss those rugged lips on his chiseled handsome face. Now I felt even more weary. Probably my body going nuts from the imagination filling my head.

A toothy smile unveiled along my giddy face. Orange lips acting like a curtain slowly revealing a growing smile that I could not fight back at all. This was going to be the day. I am going to make him mine. No pony else mattered right now. It was only him and me.

I wasn't just any girl of course. I've been with Blitz for a long time. I knew what he liked and how he ticked. I was his sister. What if he doesn't like me like that. I am his sister. So wouldn't he be disgusted with me wanting to make love with him?

"No! I can't think about negative thoughts!" My arm elbowed the air behind in a strange stroke, trying to rid my body of this guilty feeling that things could go wrong. Both of my gloved hands held a ball of frustration as I sent both hands flying to my cheeks, slapping some sense into my brain. "No going back now! You're old enough! You can do it! You're sexy! Think sexy! And you'll be sexy! I gotta do this!"

My brain spoke out loud to my physical body trying to keep where I wanted my feet planted on this spot. I wanted to run. I didn't want to chance this moment at the expense that I may make him flee from me. It would tear my heart apart to see him forced out of my life because he didn't want a strange stalker for a sister.

I took a glance back down to my attire for a quick inspection. The tight fitting revealing sports wear I had chosen to seduce Rainbow. A tight fitting black and purple sports top with a matching pair of shorts. It felt really tight and embarrassing to wear. The top hugged my upper body to where you could see each outline of my breasts. The girls pressed up and held up as if for show. The way the bottoms of my outfit hugged my athletic toned butt was all too revealing. Those shorts were really riding up my ass. My gloved hands ran along the waistline of my shorts hooking in my thumbs inside and feeling just how tightly it hugged against my form. Running my hands from front to back. Perking my tight round butt backwards as I felt my fingers meet along my back. Letting those awful girly shorts go with a snap.

I can't believe boys like this type of thing. I look like a stripper.

I adjusted those shorts to dig further into my toned cheeks, deep enough to where it was uncomfortable. All in a effort to try to further increase my sex appeal. A groan escaped my lips as I lifted my legs to get use to the new position of fabric digging right up my cheeks.

It felt like I was just delaying myself. I was panicking inside, wanting to just scream out all of my emotions and run. That wasn't going to get me what I wanted though. Giving my new wings a flap I could feel how powerful they were. Several growth spurts came along in succession with my new age. I was considered 'a late bloomer' of a flyer, or so that's what they're calling it. It has only been a few days and I can see how my wings are still growing.

Having not use them at all in my childhood. I'm still lacking the muscles to even fly. The flutter like motion I was so used to when I was a filly was still a habit of mine. I looked like a clumsy girl practicing out in my yard for the last few days. It would take me forever to catch up to Blitz's level of flight.

With a last sigh and final push of wiping any and all thought away. I brought my hands to cup my lips and finally called out to Rainbow for a lift. My lips puckering up to let out a high pitched whistle come into the air. Trying my best to look cute I bring my arms behind my back. To show off more of my impressive grown body for Rainbow. I could feel my tail wagging behind me like a love struck puppy. It was feeling like forever by now. My breath becoming a bit uneven as I couldn't seem to return it to it's natural rhythm.

I waited there, with my lips curling into my teeth, biting down. More nervous than anything else I've done with my life. Then I saw him. A blue blur of a speck looking down over the edge of his cloud home. A smaller line outstretched and waved down to me. It was him! A sudden rush of heat filled my body seeing him without his shirt on.

"Hey kid! Give me a moment I need to grab a shirt!" He called out to me in the same cute nickname that he had granted me.

"Oh wait! Please!" My mouth moved on it's own. If I was just there right in front of him I would have pounced him so hard. I spoke out without thinking. How was I going to play this out!?

Just tell him "nevermind". Let him know you can wait. But I can't. Not anymore.

"It's an emergency!" Again I panicked, speaking without thinking straight. What was I saying? Curse this hormonal body!

"What's wrong?" Blitz asked peeking back down over the edge of his cloud catching my voice carrying out to him about my 'troubling' matter. Now I just felt like running away more than ever. I wanted to slap myself for just reacting due to the lust held within my body.

"I need to see you!" My voice carried out. This time I was telling the truth. I did have a need... a certain need. I needed his rugged body over my now legal adult one.

I could see Blitz hop off of his cloud and swoop down, as if he was on a diving board. His wide blue wings spreading out in a magnificent display. I could feel my heart continue to pound out like the drooling fangirl I was. Before I knew it, he had landed right in front of me. His wings giving one final mighty flap as his feet touched the ground. Kicking up more dust than what my scooter had done moments ago.

"What's wrong?" Blitz asked reaching out to me looking to see if there were any marks, scars, or injuries placed upon me.

Taking this chance I swayed my hips to the right side. My right hand slipping down my side slowly in a slight sultry tease.

That's right stare at me Blitz.

He looked very hot right now. His developed body that he had trained in all his years was cut in the right places. A nice set of abs that covered his stomach. His toned arms and chest that was developed from all the crazy maneuvers he had done hundreds of times over, being the expert flyer he was.

Wearing nothing but shorts he rushed to my side. He was so busy worried about me he wasn't even wearing anything on his feet. Oh I felt sort of like a princess! With my prince coming to my side. In reality though I felt a bit guilty, because I was just the girl crying out "wolf" to lure a hottie to my side. I felt my lips curl up nervously in a goofy toothy grin. My hands clenching shut.

"Uh...I need something." I began, yet had no plan on how to continue with this.

"Very funny Scoots. I thought you were hurt." Rainbow said crossing his arms over his chest. I almost was sent into that dazed drooling state once again. As Rainbow crossed his large strong arms over his chest. He still looked yummy even when mad. I would buy a calendar for just this shot of Rainbow alone. Hang it along my wall and just swoon over it for the rest of my days.

"I, uh....I'm....in trouble." Another excuse filled my lips, as it just came out in scatter shots of mumbling words.

"Trouble?" Rainbow raised a brow at me. As if expecting to hear about a crime.

"No, wait! I need help. I do need help!"

"Alright Kiddo. If you want to just hang with me you're always welcomed to do so." Rainbow told me as I held up my hands innocently. How has he not noticed my slutty attire by now? Was it even working? Dang! I would have to try harder to get him to come at me. I mean come on! I'm a hot eighteen year old just begging to have some quality time with her 'big brother'.

"No, no! It's not an excuse! I just....I'm embarrassed to tell you!" My lips carried on. I could feel my own brain wracking itself in ideas motivating me mentally to keep it up.

Good start! Good recovery! Keep it going! Now let him have it!

"It's my wings! Yeah! My wings." I could feel my inner voice screaming out at me for chickening out. Still holding back that sexual favor I really was craving for from him. Scolding myself in regret, as my lips had to continue with what I had given him. "Ever since I got them they've just been getting filthy and It's been so much harder to maintain. Can you help me?" My fingers came up along my chest pressing fingertips into one another. My hips weakly swaying to the other side in a weak final attempt at being sexy for my blue hunk of a Pegasus.

"Ugh! Your wings? You mean you need them preened?" Blitz asked me with a look of confusion. "Why can't you just ask-? Oh....Oh!" He finally came to the realization that no pony else could help me with them. My lips blew out hot air that filled my tense lungs. He was buying it. Before I knew it, he held out his hand and tipped his head to the sky. This was the part where I would take his hand and have him carry me up into the sky.

"Come on Kid." Blitz told me right before I laid my hand along his and he pulled me into his side. I held on tight like I always did and felt him lift me up as he pushed off of the ground. His fine wings easily able to carry all the added weight. With no strain on him at all. It took only a couple of flaps to get back up into the clouds.

He hovered over the puffy white floor and descended. Landing first and laying me down. His arms leaving my waist as he led the way. Waving his hand over his shoulder at me to follow along. I didn't want those hands to stop touching me, yet they did. I would have to work harder to keep his touch on me now.

I held my hands together feeling my feet shuffle along the cloud ground, entering his house with uneasiness. He agreed to preen me. He was going to touch my wings. This was happening. This was actually happening. There it was again that uneasy feeling in my chest where I couldn't continue to breath. Rainbow came back with a tight white tee covering his handsome stud muscles. I could feel my lips quivering in a pout.

Why did he have to put them away?

"So your emergency Scoots is that your new wings are filthy?" Rainbow asked again. Placing a hand along my shoulder and pushing me to turn around for him. My wings flew out to their sides letting him examine them. I didn't care at this point. He was touching me. And hopefully he was staring at my perky butt in those tight shorts I chose for him.

"Yeah, see?" I bent forward. Placing my hands along my knees. Pushing my behind back towards him. I could feel that fabric stretch further into me.

He better be enjoying this. I could hear my ears catching wind of his feet shuffling back as if not expecting me to suddenly almost rub against his crotch. It was fun knowing that, now we were both adults, I was almost his same height. I could do all sorts of things to him now that I couldn't do before.

"Rainbow?" In a silent reply back to my questioning words his fingers came back up and pinched a portion of my right wing along it's bend. He was exploring me. His fingers running along the edge feeling feathers brush along those fingertips.

"Mmm!" What just came out of my lips?! I bit down along my left hand. Trying to pretend to make this as formal as possible. This was getting too erotic for my senses.

What was Blitz thinking about? It bothered me. Those thoughts fading out of my mind as I felt something wet and soft meet my left wing. With his right hand busy his left one slid up my backside towards the couch. Bending me over it slowly. I could feel how easily his larger body could topple mine over, and yet it didn't. He was gentle and caring. Like I had expected. His left hand trailed along my back, slipping along the curve I had made from arching it.

The sensations were driving me wild. I bit down hard on my index finger, closing my eyes to focus on his touch. I was getting wet from the touching, the way his lips trailed along the edge of my left wing, laying it over in between each feather as he held that one wing with both hands, keeping it spread out for his work, working his way inside bit by bit.

It didn't feel like a regular preening. He was much too quick with how he was doing it. Already working on My right wing. Skimming right along the edge too. My wings twitched out more. Unable to control it as my wings were showing how aroused my body was getting. It was embarrassing having Rainbow see my wingboner. Holding it within his hands and tonguing it oh so slowly that I didn't care about anything else.

"Something's not right." Rainbow told me as I felt a hand press along my butt slipping into my shorts and pulling it down just enough to reveal everything.

"W-what?" Acting innocently I kept a childish mentality to persuade him to go further, not minding how he was throwing himself on me.

"You're moving too much." He stated. I rolled my eyes knowing full well I wasn't moving at all.

"I am? I-I'm sorry Rainbow." I said cutely feeling something press along down between my thighs. All those times I've practice with toys had made sure that this moment would feel as good as possible was about to pay off.

"Have to use a preening tool." Rainbow gave out an excuse.

A crack of his voice as he began showing signs of being just as nervous as I was as this whole situation. I pressed my hands along the couch to prop myself up, giving him room to get inside. He held my hips with care and brought himself inside of me. Spreading my already wet snatch open for his cock to slip in.

"Haa....aaahh! Rainbow!.....Ha haaa haa!" My fingers curled around whatever it could on the cushions. My head tossing my purple mane over my shoulder as my lips parted. Giving way to a series of groans and moans.

Almost as if forgetting about moving rainbow continued to run his tongue over my right wing. Now able to get underneath each layer of my primary feathers to my secondary. Why wasn't he going to town on my naked butt right now? My wings felt so good though. Without a thought of what to give out for an excuse I simply moved back into his crotch. Moving on him myself. Pants replaced my normal pattern of breathing, filling the air with heat as I moved along his shaft. Rainbow gave out a groan of his own biting down onto my left wing.

"Oh Rainbow!" I yelped out not anticipating the sudden rough play. His teeth nibbled away at my stretched out wing, bringing his lips along to the base where my wings met with my back, running his tongue around the base of my wings.

It was too much. I was running myself along whatever inch I could just wanting to get off just like this. His mouth left my wings and trailed up my upper back. Kissing my shoulderblades and then suddenly biting down there.

I got louder and louder, feeling my efforts pushing back against him, working my tight body on and off that yummy cock. My eyes flew open and I looked underneath, catching a sight of that black cock entering and exiting me. That's when it happened, as he kissed the back of my neck. I came hard and let myself clamp around that invading horsecock. I shuddered as the wave of an orgasm took over, making me flop to the couch as I felt the ripples of my built-up pleasure come out all over as jolts along my spine and brain.

"What was that?" Maintaining that child like act to keep my side completely innocent. I suddenly felt Rainbow push back into me. The stallion was growing in heat now. I could tell as he held onto my waist, completely forgetting about my other wing as he began thrusting inside of me. Letting each inch dig into the very walls of my precious flower. Figuring that the act should finally come to an end I looked over my shoulder at him giving out a yelp of surprise.

"That's not a preening tool-ooooooo! Oh!" I couldn't help but groan out at how he was forcing my body to rock back and forth. Pulling me back into his hips only to make me bounce forward. He couldn't stop himself as he had not climaxed yet.

"Dear Celestia! You're tight, Scoots!" Rainbow groaned out with a howl following after. He placed his hands along my orange rump and dug in. Letting his hands take their fill of my plump butt.

"My butt! Rainbow....Rainbow!" My mind was starting to blank out. I knew I wouldn't be able to keep up with Rainbow which only made him ever more alluring as I wanted to lose myself in this moment.

Giving me a naughty spank he pushed me down into the couch, his cock still inside of me as I turned to my side. Staring down at the first colt that had his way with me. My right leg spread out into the air tossing it over Rainbow's broad shoulder. Watching as he lifted up my top just enough to show off my perky tits. Giving each one a quick grope before he continue to plow my pretty little eighteen year old body.

"I'm yours Rainbow, all yours!" I moaned out at him leaning up wanting to kiss him so much. My eyes focused now on his lips rather than that cock that was plunging into my marehood.

He was rough. Using my body for his own pleasure, digging in as deeply as he could to where each rough thrust was making me yelp out in increasing volume as my pleasure was peaking once more. My tongue dragged out of my lips, as I held onto my bouncing breasts, feeling my grasp tighten on them as I came again all over his meatrod.

"Mmmmmmmm! Ahhhhhh...Haah! Rainbow! I love you, Rainbow!" Stupefied in the moment I let out the phrase too soon. I began to wonder if Rainbow would ever reply to my confession. I began to regret that, as I watched my body, lost in its own desires, that I had no choice. It had all felt so good, my dreams finally coming true.

I blinked a couple of times and noticed that my body hadn't stopped rocking. The tight feeling within my body only got worse as I felt Rainbow's throbbing member still drilling it's way into me. Sinking in further and further. Was he holding back this whole time? My mouth parted as I began to almost scream out in pleasure now.

Holding onto my purple mane. Going crazy as Rainbow went wild, fucking my tight tiny body like an animal. Tossing my leg off of him with a swift motion of his arm, I watched as he held onto my waist and treated me like a toy. Witnessing the beast inside of him that was probably bubbling up to this point. My seductive simulations working far better than I had hoped, as I grew more weary by the moment. Rainbow was hitting me so deeply inside. I could feel my womb kissing the tip of that cock again and again and again.

"Ah, Rainbow! Rainbow! Fuck!... Hah, yes!" I couldn't hold my voice back anymore as every ounce of my body and mind had surrendered to the amazing stallion rocking my whole world. The couch began to slide as the colt had more endurance than anything I had imagined.

Coming up to my third time cumming I reached up for Rainbow. Wanting the chance to kiss him. "Kiss me! Oh, Kiss me Rainbow!"

The stallion lunged forward bending my lower half into the air as his hips grinded into mine. I could feel my wet mess dripping along my thighs and trailing along my ass. He was so rough and brutal to my pussy that I couldn't help but cum at the sudden caring kiss.

Rutting himself deep inside, I felt a hot torrent of thick fluids run it's way inside of me. Rainbow gave out a long groan along my neck. Breaking out sweet kisses. I held myself along his neck as I felt his hips give me a couple more thrusts. Making sure he pumped everything out. He had came inside of me. It was sweet and everything I could have hoped for. My eyes closed and I could feel the welling of tears flood along them, happy that he had chosen to do it with me.

"Oh... fuck... Scoots." Rainbow groaned out attempting to pull out. As I felt those first few inches leave my body I pulled on him. I held onto him fast and dug my head into his shoulder.

"No! Not yet, please! Can we? I want to stay like this for a bit." For once I could finally come out with my words and thoughts matching one another.

"I'm so sorry, Scootaloo. I'm so sorry!" He hugged me back and almost seem to be on the verge of crying himself. Did he think I didn't want this? He must have thought that I knew nothing about adult life or about a real set of wings, because I've never had them before in my life. I had enough street smarts to know what sex and real preening meant. Right now he must be feeling guilty of taking advantage of me.

"What for, Rainbow? I'm so happy." I told him wanting him to be just as happy with me.

"For reals? Even with the lying and the raping?" Rainbow looked in my eyes with shock. His aged old face and eyes were gorgeous. I had fallen even deeper into that hole for Rainbow Blitz. I gave my reply in a kiss. Slowly lapping my open lips over his. Flicking my tongue off of his cheek. I brought my head back and licked my lips.

"You're a bad liar Rainbow." I giggled finding Rainbow blushing for me. Sticking my tongue out hinting more at what had taken place and why.

"You little sneak! You were trying to seduce me?!" Rainbow said gasping out in relief. He attacked my neck in a series of kisses. Holding my head to the side as he tickled me with his lips.

"Ha hah HAH! No wait, Rainbow! HA HA HAAA HA! Rainbow!" With a bit of force I managed to unhinge Rainbow's mouth off of my neck as I looked into his eyes. He sighed out and laid his forehead along mine.

We shared a couple more kisses before he let off, slipping out of me. While he got up to fix himself, I stayed laying there. Tired from the three waves of pleasure he brought to my now experienced body. I ran my hand down and traced my loose lower lips. Feeling how full I was with both touch and the hot sensation of it churning inside of me.

"How long have you been planning this, Scoots?" Rainbow asked lifting up his boxers and shorts back up.

"A long time," I said not wanting to seem like a super creepy stalker.

I had no idea when I decided I wanted to screw him, but I did at one point. We had known each other for so long that it didn't matter. We were part of each others lives, even more so now. Now no matter what. We had this special bond. I was no longer his little sister, but another mare, vying for his hand.

"Do you... Do you love me Scoots?" With the last bit of my own strength I leaned up. He wasn't calling me kid anymore? He was considering me as an adult now. I couldn't help but give out a cocky snicker and reply back to the one I loved so much in this world.

"Preening tool and all!" I felt my eyes welling up again crying in happiness. Rainbow gave a wide smile of his own and gave my weary thigh a rub.

"What 'cha got planned later?" Rainbow asked. Still moving with this boundless energy he always had. I could feel my teeth digging into my tongue. Naughty things popping into my head freely now without restraint. I was free to express myself now that I had given him everything.

"You know? You still have my other wing to do, right?" With a sultry reply. I curled my legs in as I spread them out along the sides of the couch. Letting my left hand spread that claimed tight slit of mine. Feeling a bit of his essence leave me just for a lewd display.

Author's Note

Revisions are done. This is my entry for the group "Preening" in their first ever "Preening Story contest." Special thanks to Shirotora for proofreading this story. His efforts to make it look as clean as possible has helped me so much.

I understand Scootaloo is portrayed differently but wasn't everyone at one point in their lives? Remember Scoots is 18 now and wants something she's never had before. I hope you enjoyed the read and if you want me to make a squeal please let me know down in the comments and leave a like for the story. It means so much!