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Gone Wrong

by HerpicusDerpington
The Galactic Empire takes an interest in a planet in the far reaches of the Unknown Regions after it is observed that the star system revolves around it. It's suggested that a sentient species inhabits it. A task force is sent to investigate.

Edit: I don't think I can do this. My writing on this is kinda meh and I don't know if I want to continue. I guess I'll mark this as cancelled but I might come back to it.

In the depths of the Unknown Regions, a peculiar planet has piqued the interests of the Galactic Empire. The star system of this planet seems to revolve around it, instead of the other way around. Months of research determine that energies reminiscent of the Force are being used to manipulate its star, and it's quickly hypothesized that a sentient species inhabits the planet. A task force is arranged and dispatched to greet this possibly advanced civilization of maybe-Force-wielders. Of course, like everything the Empire does, not everything goes as planned.

First story, don't be too rough, yadda yadda yadda. Not entirely formatted to the best of my abilities, I'll go back and clean up the chapters at some point in time.

Teen
Cancelled
Crossover
Alternate Universe
Human
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
PPOPS

2945 words: Estimated 15 minutes to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2015-03-23 22:49:31 UTC
    415
  2. Chapter 1 2015-03-23 22:52:11 UTC
    1388
  3. Chapter 2 2015-03-23 22:55:24 UTC
    1142
  4. Chapter 3 2015-03-24 22:35:08 UTC