Dominant Species

by AnnonyMouse

Chapter 11

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I dare, oh yes I dare. Here 'cum' the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
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Dominant Species.
11
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Three fillies sat around their tree clubhouse, trying to think of ideas for how to get their cutie marks, like they always were doing.

Scootaloo scratched her head. “I think we've done just about everything there is in Ponyville. I'm drawing a blank on new ideas.”

Sweetie Belle smiled. “There's still a lot of safe things to try.”

Apple Bloom was thinking. “Well, I don't know about this idea I just came up with. I saw my bid brother and his marefriend. They were doing something I've never seen before.”

Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's eyes lit up.

“Something new to try?” Scootaloo grinned.

“Is is something that won't get us covered in a sticky mess for once?”

The redheaded filly pondered. “Well... Peach Schnapps ended up covered in a sticky mess, but it looked like it was a lot ah fun.”

“Eew.” Scootaloo made a distasteful face. “I think I know what you're talking about. I saw Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash doing something together and they ended up both covered in sticky messes.”

“Oh, me too. Rarity and Fluttershy were doing something in Rarity's bedroom last night. It looked scary, but they seemed to be having a lot of fun. There was whips and chains and...”

The other two fillies stared at Sweetie Belle. “Ah dun think ya saw what Scoots an' Ah saw.”

“And then they started rubbing each other and making funny sounds and then Rarity got covered in a sticky white mess. She didn't even seem bothered that it got in her mane.”

Scootaloo laughed and turned to Apple Bloom. “Yep, she saw what we saw. So, maybe we should try this too.”

“But we don't have any coltfriends, or marefriends with colt parts.” Sweetie Belle replied. “And I don't think Rarity would let me borrow any of her whips and chains and riding crops or that ball thing that goes in her mouth, and I REALLY don't know about the hot candle wax on my hind area. I sat on a burr once and that didn't feel nice at all.”

“Hmm...” Apple Bloom tapped a hoof to her chin in thought. “Well, Ah know we can find some colts to help us... Any ideas?”

Scootaloo grinned at the Unicorn. “Oh, Sweetie Belle, do you think you can sneak out some of your sisters things? I dunno, like the ones you haven't seen her use?”

“What if Rarity catches me?” Sweetie Belle frowned. “She'd never let me borrow them, and I'm not going to steal from her.”

“Gosh darn it.” Apple Bloom stomped her hoof. “We gotta think ah sumpthin. Maybe Twilight can help us.”

“Oh, she's always willing to help us out.” Sweetie Belle beamed.

Scootaloo's eyes lit up. “Hey, Spike is a boy. Wouldn't HE have a colt thing?”

“But he's a dragon.” Sweetie Belle reminded her friend. “Wouldn't he have a dragon thing?”

“I don't know.” Sweetie Belle pondered. “I've never even thought about any of this before.”

Apple Bloom shook her head. “Nu uh. Spike ain't gonna help us. Ah mean...” She blushed a little. “Ah mean, maybe we aught keep this secret fer now. Just ask Twi 'bout it, all subtle like.”

Scootaloo nodded. “Leave it to me. I'll get us a book on whatever they were doing.” She grabbed her helmet and started toward the door. “You guys just wait here, I'll be back as fast as I can.” She rushed out the door and hopped onto her scooter. A moment later, all that could be heard was the fading buzz of her wings.

Apple Bloom had watched how fast Scootaloo had buzzed off, literally. “Ah think she's tryin' t' get the jump on us an' get her cutie mark first.”

“Oh dear. Hmm, what kind of cutie marks would we get anyway?”

Apple Bloom's face went as red as her hair. “Ah pony apples... We gotta stop scoots before she ends up with a colt part as her cutie mark.”
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Scootaloo scooted into Ponyville at high speeds. She took advantage of various obstacles to perform tricks and stunts, sometimes freaking out a pony here and there.

“I really should get to the library... but seriously? Read a book about doing that? Twilight doesn't have anypony like that, does she?” The orange Pegasus sighed. “Who am I kidding. She only likes books. Maybe there's somepony else who can help...”

She never finished her thought as she rounded a corner, and crashed into an equally surprised pony.

Scootaloo groaned and opened her eyes. She was laying on top of the other pony, who was sprawled out on his back. The first thing she saw before her now wide eyes was the male sheath.

“Ow...” The other pony groaned, opening his eyes to see a little filly laying on his belly, her hind section only inches from his face, in perfect view. “Whoa...” He rolled, tossing Scootaloo off and back away. “Hey, watch where you're going...” He didn't sound angry.

Scootaloo got to her hooves and looked at the pony. White coat, soft blue mane and tail, a pair of white wings. She had never seen him in Ponyville before. “I'm sorry mister. I wasn't watching where I was going.”

“Ah...” He was blushing a little, but answered. “It's alright. I'm new to Ponyville myself. I guess I have a lot to learn about the locals.” He grinned nervously, looking Scootaloo over. “What were you doing on that... um... whatever that is?” he pointed a hoof at the now broken scooter.

“Oh, I... oh no. My scooter.” She trotted over and looked it over. The handle shaft was broken and the front wheel had fallen off. “It took me forever to make that.”

The Pegasus sighed. “Maybe I can help you.”

“I spent six months allowance on the parts alone.” She wanted to cry. “How can you help?”

“I can give you some money.”

Scootaloo's eyes lit up for a moment, but shook her head. “It was my fault. You shouldn't have to pay for my mistake.” She glanced and saw his cutie mark. A blue heart with a darker blue lightening bolt striking through it. On both sides of the heart extended wings. Her attention wandered a little lower. She had gotten the closest look at stallion parts in her life with that little accident.

“Are you ok?” He realized where she was looking and blushed a little more. “Um...” He then grinned. “You know, maybe I can help you earn some money.”

Scootaloo looked into the Pegasus Pony's blue eyes. “Really? How? I don't have a cutie mark and I'm not really good at anything.”

The stallion chuckled. “I'm renting a small house just outside of town. Why don't we go there and talk about it.”

“Well...” He seemed nice enough. “Ok.” She tossed her broken scooter and parts onto her back and followed the pony.
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The house was small, but cozy. It was a little ways out of town, up a lightly forested path and atop a hill. From here one could see a lot of Ponyville.

“Wow. This is a nice place.” Scootaloo looked over the cottage. It was well tended, neat and had a nice little garden off to the side.

“Wait till you see inside.” He lead Scootaloo in.

The filly deposited her broken scooter just outside the door and entered. Inside it was nice. A small living area and kitchenette in one. A small bathroom, an open door leading into the bedroom and one door that was closed.

The furnishings were nice, and looked a little on the pricey side. A brand new stove and refrigerator rested in the kitchen area.

“It's nice.” Scootaloo smiled. “Um, so what can I do to earn some bits?”

“For starters, what's your name?”

“I'm Scootaloo.”

“Hello Scootaloo. You can call me Cloud.” He grinned in a friendly way.

“Hello Cloud.” She glanced around again. “Um... You keep it nice and clean in here. I'm not that good at cleaning.”

“Oh, it's not anything like that. I have something I want to show you in the other room.” He gestured toward the bedroom.

Scootaloo trotted in and looked around. A nice big bed and a dresser made up all the furnishings in this room. “There's nothing in here.” She heard the quiet click and turned to see Cloud standing before the closed door.

“Why don't we get to know each other a little better before I tell you how you can earn some money.” He hopped up on the bed and stretched out. “This is the most comfortable place here. Come on up and stretch out. This is a cloud bed.”

Scootaloo hopped up and gasped. It WAS a cloud bed. “I'm really on a cloud now?”

Cloud smiled as Scootaloo stretched out. “Do you like it?”

“Oh yes I do. I've never been on a cloud before.” She rolled onto her back and stretched her wings and legs out. “So cozy. Bet a cloud bed is really hard to get inside a house.”

“This is a magic cloud. All the rage among the rich or wealthy in Canterlot.” Cloud smiled and looked over Scootaloo's cute little wings, thin chest, belly and inner thighs. “So, have you ever been on a bed with a stallion before?”

“Nope. Why?”

He smiled and stroked one of her wings with a hoof. “Really? So you don't know why we're here?”

Scootaloo blushed as he touched a sensitive spot on her wing. “Ahh... What are you doing?”

“Shh. We're just going to play a fun game.” Cloud stroked her wing again. “Do you like how that feels?”

“It's nice.” Scootaloo relaxed as Cloud patted her wing. She gasped a little as he started nibbling at her jaw line. “Ohh...” She tilted her head back. “I like that.”

Cloud grinned, his hoof stroking Scootaloo's coat on her chest, slowly petting down to her belly and to her inner things.

Scootaloo spread her legs, almost melting as she was touched in ways she had never been touched before. Her eyes went wide as Cloud's hoof slid between her legs and stroked her tiny plot. “Ahh, wait...” She gasped as he massaged gently.

“You don't like this?”

“It... it feels good.”

“I'll stop if you want me too.”

“I...” Scootaloo thought about what she had seen Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie had done. “It's ok.” She smiled as he massaged more, sliding the edge of his hoof between her lips.

Cloud could feel just how tight this filly was. He smiled as he moved his body so his head was between her legs. “Did you like how that felt?” He looked up at her with his blue eyes.

Scootaloo smiled back at him. “Yes, it felt nice.”

“Then this will feel even nicer.” Cloud's mouth wrapped around Scootaloo's vagina, his tongue exploring everything, both outside and as far inside as he could reach. He smiled as his tongue met resistance. He couldn't believe his luck. A virgin filly.

He kept up lapping, nibbling and sucking at anything and everything that had to do with Scootaloo's pussy. He was pleased when she suddenly tenses up and gave a cute scream. A small amount of pussy juices spurted into his mouth, which he eagerly sucked and licked up.

Scootaloo was dripping wet between her legs. She was gasping for breath, panting happily.

“You really did enjoy that, didn't you?” Cloud smiled.

Scootaloo nodded. “Are you going to put your stallion part into my filly hole?” She asked, smiling and blushing madly.

Cloud blushed. He had not actually been planning on doing that with Scootaloo, not till he had gotten her used to the idea. Apparently she was already entertaining such thoughts. “Only if you want me too.” He rose to his hooves, revealing his meat.

Scootaloo's blush deepened. It was the same size as the one Dash had, but this one was the real thing, not some magic toy that simply looked real.

Quickly she was on her hooves, her hindquarters lifted high and her tail to the side. “Please. I... I want to do it.”

Cloud would have prayed to Celestia in thanks, but figured, such an act would invite disaster. So he held his tongue and positioned himself on top of Scootaloo. “You've never done this before, have you?”

“Nope. This is my first time. I've done everything else I can think of to get my cutie mark.”

Cloud grinned as he pressed the tip of his meat to her puffy and wet slit. “I'll be gentle.” He pushed forward, the tip entering, stretching her lips open till he felt the resistance.

Scootaloo moaned happily as she was penetrated up to this point. She then felt something odd as he tried to push in deeper.

“This next part might hurt a little, it being your first time. Do you really want me to continue?” Cloud asked again, just to make sure.

“I... Yes. I'm not afraid of a little pain. I've crashed on my scooter so many times before.”

Cloud nodded and pushed forward with a quick, controlled thrust, tearing through the thin hymen.

Scootaloo's forelegs gave out and she buried her face into the cloud bed. She gave a startled cry of pain. A small trickle of blood dripped down her leg.

“Scootaloo?” Cloud was worried. Had he actually hurt her? This was his first time being with a virgin filly after all.

Scootaloo shook her head. “It... it's ok. It doesn't hurt that much.” She lied. It had hurt more than a little.

Cloud nodded and started moving his hips, pulling out slowly, then pushing back in a little quicker. He kept repeating this over and over. “You're so tight.” He admitted. She was the tightest he had ever had. The usual fillies in Manehattan, Cloudsdale and even Canterlot were experienced, and thus had been used before by other stallions. “Does it still hurt?”

“A little...” She gasped as he pushed in, a little deeper than before, and a little faster. She moaned as he slowly pushed deeper with each inward thrust, those moans becoming louder as he built speed. “But... it's feeling really good now.”

Sure, he was at best eighteen inches long, and about two inches thick, but she was able to take just over half of what he had to offer.

Cloud started moving faster, his speed building as he was starting to drive Scootaloo into the cloud bed. Her tightness increased, nearly crushing him and making it harder to push in, but he didn't stop, and he didn't slow down.

Scootaloo was screaming into the bed by now. The screams were of one who was REALLY enjoying what she was doing. Or rather what was being done to her. Her screams escalated suddenly as she buried her head deeper into the cloud to muffle her screams.

Cloud nearly had the blood flow cut off as he gave a massive final thrust into Scootaloo, right at the same time as her final, orgasmic clamp. He gritted his teeth, knowing he couldn't cum inside of her, she was just WAY too tight at the moment.

He pulled out and coated Scootaloo's ass, thighs and back with a massive spray of thick, white cum.

The pair collapsed onto the bed, side by side, facing each other.

“Oh wow...” Scootaloo purred. “That was awesome.”

“Oh yea... that was the best ever.” Cloud agreed.

“Did I get my cutie mark?”

Cloud chuckled. “I'm afraid not this time.”

“Can we do it one more time?” Scootaloo smiled.

“Are you sure you want to do more?” Cloud could already feel his stamina returning rapidly.

“I'll try anything at least once to get my cutie mark.” Scootaloo said with pleading eyes.

Cloud grinned and rolled Scootaloo onto her back. “Anything you say?” He pressed the tip of his cock to Scootaloo's ass.

“Uh, wait a second. What are you doing?” Scootaloo was suddenly unsure she wanted to do this.

Cloud spoke in a calming tone. “Hush now and relax. If you tense up this will hurt, but if you relax, it'll feel really good.”

Scootaloo nodded a little. “Alright, I'll try.” She relaxed, unpuckering her anus. She felt the pressure as Cloud pressed into the tight opening and grit her teeth. She gave a small grunt as he entered her, followed by a sudden gasp.

“How does that feel?” He whispered into his playmate's ear.

“It feels really strange. I don't know if I like this.” She looked away. Her eyes clamped shut as he pushed in deeper. Scootaloo felt so dirty for doing this.

Soon enough, the weird feeling started becoming a good feeling as he rocked back and forth, fucking Scootaloo's ass gently. Her breathing soon matched the rhythm of Cloud's movements.

Cloud was doing his best to keep himself from going too fast or blowing his load so soon. This tight young ass was just so unbelievably tight and hot. With each thrust, he felt the threat of blowing his load instantly. Hell, this was her anus. He could cum in her safely without worry about getting the filly pregnant.

Slowly but surely, he fucked Scootaloo faster and faster. The filly gasping, unable to even think clearly.

Scootaloo was loving this feeling. She couldn't believe she had been afraid. She felt her own orgasm build up suddenly, ripping through her. She squirted her pussy juices all over Cloud's belly and genitals, providing him even more natural lubrication.

He fucked her ass as fast as he could now, pushing in deeper than what he had into her pussy. Over a foot of his length was buried inside Scootaloo, and soon, he felt the surge, the hot pleasure as he burst. He filled Scootaloo's ass with his hot seed.

In response, Scootaloo covered her hooves over her mouth to keep her scream muffled. The feeling of the hot liquid inside her was almost too much for her young mind to bare.

Cloud pulled out with a loud pop. He looked down at her dripping pussy and somewhat stretched ass. Cloud's grin grew. “I have an idea. Another fun game.” He got off the bed. “Let's wash up first.”
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They had shared a shower and had washed down, then dried off. Once dry, Cloud brought Scootaloo to the closed door. “Can you guess what's in here?”

“Not a clue.” Scootaloo was curious.

“It's a second bedroom.” He pushed it open. “You're welcome to come stay whenever you like.”

Scootaloo's eyes went wide. “A bedroom? Like a real one I don't have to share with the other orphans?”

“You're an orphan?” Cloud looked shocked.

Scootaloo hung her head. “It's not something I'm proud of. My parents aren't alive anymore.”

Cloud smiled softly. “Would you like a home?”

“Do you mean it?” Scootaloo's wide eyes became wider.

“Yea, I do.” He ruffled the filly's mane.
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To Be Continued...
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Author's Note:
Oh dear, Scootaloo got some Scootalove, but also got in WAY over her head...
Also, Cloud is not my OC, but I did get permission.

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