Dominant Species
Chapter 13, Alternate
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Dominant Species.
13
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Apple Bloom approached her second least favorite place in Ponyville. The School was her number one least favorite place. The Library was number two not because of who lived there, but rather because it was full of 'shudder' books.
“Well... Not like Ah'm here for a book or anythin' like that.” The red maned filly pushed the door open and entered. “Hello?” She called out.
There was no response, but she heard some noises coming from the basement.
“Oh, Twilight must be down stairs.” Apple Bloom smiled and headed for the door. She followed the stairs down and entered Twilight's basement lab, which was filled with strange contraptions, shelves with scrolls, books, vials of colored liquids, a few skulls and even what looked like a mummified hoof sat on a desk.
But Twilight was not in this room. The sounds were coming from behind a partially closed door.
Bloom carefully made her way over, not wanting to bump anything, and steering WELL clear of that creepy hoof. She peaked into the room and watched as Twilight was focusing her magic on a rather large floating crystal.
A few moment later, the glow faded, but the crystal kept floating.
“I did it. I created a teleport crystal.” Twilight almost danced with joy. “Now to test it out.” She placed a hoof on the crystal. “Canterlot.”
Bloom watched in awe as Twilight vanished. “Oh wow.” She trotted toward the crystal, a huge grin on her face. “It's still floating. All she did was do this and say Canterlot and...”
FLASH!
The world became white around the filly, the air being sucked from her lungs. She felt like she was falling, only without the sensation of falling.
Then the falling feeling came and ended with her hitting the floor.
A white marble floor.
Apple Bloom had landed on her face, her butt up in the air. “Ow...”
“OH my, what have we here?” A beautiful voice sounded from behind her. Rather close behind her.
Apple Bloom glanced back and saw none other than Princess Celestia standing behind her, her face only inches from Bloom's rear end, and a strange looking grin on her face.
“Apple Bloom?” Twilight's voice caught her attention. “RUN!!! Apple Bloom!!! RUN!!!” She screamed.
Apple Bloom was confused. She looked toward Twilight, and saw her floating in the air surrounded by a pink glow, her legs all spread wide. She looked up at the heavily panting Princess Celestia. “P... Princess?”
“Why hello there.” Twitch. “Are you the special surprise my dear little pupil said she was bringing for me? How sweet of her.”
Apple Bloom backed up and glanced around. The only door glowed purple and swung open. She bolted and jumped through the door, hearing it slam shut behind her. For some reason, Princess Celestia was scary. She was supposed to be sweet and kind and nice.
Bloom ran through the halls getting herself good and lost. She finally stopped and looked back.
The Princess was not there.
“What the hay is goin' on here?” She asked herself.
Before she had a chance to say anything more, a hoof grabbed her from behind and yanked her into a room, the door shutting and locking.
“What do you think you're doing? Canterlot is on lock down for the next three days.” A tall, dark blue pony with a flowing blue and starry mane looked down at Apple Bloom. Behind her was a dark, but beautifully decorated chamber, the private chambers of Princess Luna herself.
“N... Nightmare Moon?” Apple Bloom backed against the door and bowed, shivering in fright.
Luna looked amused. “Oh, I remember you. The little Foalenstien monster from Nightmare Night.” She knelt down before the filly. “Don't worry young one. I'm not Nightmare Moon. I'm Princess Luna.” She gently nudged Apple Bloom.
“Y... You're not going to gobble me?”
“Goodness no. What is your name?”
“Apple Bloom.”
Luna smiled gently. “Hello Apple Bloom. You can call me Luna.”
“Hello Luna.” Bloom smiled nervously. “Why was Princess Celestia so scary? I've seen her before, but she was always so kind and beautiful.”
“Ah, well... It happens from time to time. The Princess gets into a condition where she... Um... How old are you?”
“Almost eleven.”
“Dear me, too young for that explanation...” Luna fretted nervously. “How to explain to such a young filly...”
“Is she in heat or something?”
“Oh, you know about that?” Luna had a look of both shock and nervousness one her face. “How would you know of such a thing?”
“Miss Cheerilee taught us about that time of the year when all the grown up mares start acting funny, making all the stallions and the older colts act funny too. We're supposed to stay at home for that time. But that was over a week ago.”
“Ah, well... Princess Celestia... How to say... Needs to be hidden from.” Luna chuckled nervously.
“She does? But... She had Twilight Sparkle.” Bloom's eyes went wide. “We need to save her.”
“Twilight Sparkle?” Luna laughed out loud. “Oh dear Apple Bloom. Twilight is perhaps the one and only Pony, besides myself that is, who can handle the Princess when she is in this condition.”
“Really? Twilight is as strong as Princess Celestia?” Bloom was in awe.
“On, certainly not. While Twilight is perhaps the most talented Unicorn My sister and I have ever seen, she is perhaps a star compared to my moon or my sister's sun.”
“Oh... That big a difference?” Bloom blinked. “Then... Twilight IS in danger.”
“No she is not young one. She may well be able to keep Princess Celestia busy till she can recover. In the meantime, I am performing her duties.” Luna sounded a little giddy at the concept. She was going to be raising the sun and the moon for the next few days.
At that moment, the something hammered at the door. “Luna? Are you in there Luna?”
“Twilight?” Luna raised an eyebrow and opened the door. “I thought you were with Tia.”
“I... I was. But she escaped.” Twilight poked her head into the room. “You haven't by any chance seen a little filly with a red mane tied up with a bow, have you?”
“Twilight?” Bloom stepped out from behind Luna. “Are you ok?”
“Oh no. Apple Bloom... How did you get here? You didn't... You didn't use my teleportation crystal, did you?”
“Um... kinda?” Bloom grinned sheepishly.
“This is not good... The teleport crystal was disabled on this side for safety reasons. There's no safe way to get you home. If she catches you in the halls... It's all over.”
Bloom was feeling terrified. “But... She's Princess Celestia. She's nice, isn't she?”
“Very nice... sometimes too nice. Nice and cuddly and...” The blushing Twilight paused and glanced at Bloom. “Eh-hem. Luna, I need your help to find Tia. We can't run the risk of her getting out again. I heard what happened the last time she got out one hundred years ago.”
“I was not present, but I read about it in the history books...” Luna shuddered. She turned to Bloom. “Little Apple Bloom, you should remain here in my chambers. Do not let anypony in, do you understand? It's for your own safety.”
“Um... okay. I'll hide here.” She paused. “Wait, you're both going to leave me?”
“We'll be fine.” Luna reassured the filly. “And as long as you stay in here, hidden, you should be fine as well.” She turned to Twilight. “Let's go.”
Bloom watched the pair of powerful ponies closed the door, locking it with some what looked like a very complex and powerful spell. She could hear the hum of magical energy and backed away.
“Oh... What am I going... to... do?” She looked around, taking in the beautiful room. It was carved from obsidian, and covered by midnight blue satin wall hangings. The furniture was dark, rich wood, and Bloom could easily tell that even thought it was old, it was very well made and very sturdy.
The bed seemed to float off the floor, which confused the filly a little. She poked it with a hoof and smiled. It felt so soft, but also solid. The white fluffy stuff under the blanket looked like a cloud.
“Ah always wondered why Pegasus Ponies like to sleep on clouds.” Bloom's smile widened as she found she could actually climb onto the bed without falling through. “Oh wow, so soft an' cozy.” She lay down and stretched out, rolling around till she was flat on her back. “Ah declare... Ah want a bed like this.”
“Would you reeeealy?”
Bloom jumped and rolled to her hooves. She stared in shock. “P... Princess Celestia? How'd you get in here?”
“The window was unlocked.” She grinned a most lecherous grin and stepped up onto the bed. Her horn glowed and Bloom was held in place. “Now, Apple Bloom was it? I need your help with something very important. I'm a little... crazy at the moment and you're the only one I can ask to assist me.”
“Wh... what with?”
“I need to have a foal. My body is burning up fiercely. In fact, you are the ONLY pony in Canterlot Castle who can help me.”
“H... How? Ah'm only a foal mahself.”
“Exactly.” Celestia grinned.
“But... How?”
“Let me... let me give birth to you. You're the perfect size.”
“Uh... Ah've already been born an' Ah'm eleven. Ain't Ah too big fer ya Princess?.” Apple Bloom stared at the Princess and the crazed look in her eyes. “Yer right. Yer crazy right now.”
Celestia grinned. “Oh, I know exactly what I want. And you're going to help me.”
“Are you going to Princess command me? 'Cause if not... Ah'm outta here.” Bloom started backing away.
“Oh, but I need it... Please Apple Bloom? I won't command you, but I really do need this so very much. I'm begging you, please.” There were tears in the Princess's eyes.
“Y-Ya really do need it? Ah mean, what am Ah supposed to do? Ah'm just a filly an' Ah can't make no foals with a mare.”
Celestia leaned close and nuzzled Bloom gently, whispering into her ear. “I know this will sound strange, perhaps frightening, but you have to crawl into me, into my womb.”
“What?” Bloom backed away, to the edge of the bed. “But... Ah'm too big fer that.”
“You are the same size as the last filly I foaled so very long ago. As you can see, I am larger than a normal pony. You will not be hurt, but you will get the chance to feel the full love and warmth that I can give you.” She lowered her head. “Please Apple Bloom? Only you can help me.”
“Ah... Ah'm the only one... Ah guess... Ah can help ya. Ah mean, Ah love ya Princess, we all do, an' Ah bet anypony would do anything fer ya. Ah'll help ya best Ah can.” Bloom smiled nervously. She wasn't exactly sure what she was supposed to do. Crawl into the Princess? How the heck was she supposed to do that?
“Thank you Apple Bloom. Thank you so much.” She lay back, presenting her hindquarters and perfect slit plot.
Bloom stared at Princes Celestia's soft, wet, white folds and stepped forward. She knew now how she had to enter. She caught the enticing scent and lowered her head. She pressed her muzzle to the soft opening and inhaled deeply. The scent was soft and wonderful, and the warmth so inviting to the filly.
Celestia lay on her side and lifted her leg, allowing the full opening to be visible, and accessible to the filly. “Go on, you know what to do.” She smiled, speaking softly and lovingly.
Bloom opened her mouth and licked. She wrapped her lips around the soft mound of inviting flesh and sucked on it. The sounds of delight the Princess was making barely registered as she kept on sucking and licking.
With her hooves, she gripped both sides of the soaked, sweet slit and spread then, revealing the bright pink flesh within, and the most inviting little hole she had ever seen. She wanted to just crawl up into there. No, she NEEDED too.
Bloom reached back and undid her bow, letting her surprisingly long mane flow freely. She then spread those wonderful, warm lips again and pressed her muzzle to the Princess's vagina opening. She felt some magic flicker about herself and glanced up.
“There you go, you won't suffocate now. Go on and crawl inside, but be gentle please.” Celestia sighed as Bloom slid first one hoof, then the other into the opening, spreading the opening a little wider.
Bloom pressed her muzzle in deeper, her nostrils filling with the warm and loving scent. Deeper she pressed in till her face was engulfed into the folds and tight opening. Using her hind legs, she pushed in deeper, slow so as not to hurt the Princess. She felt her ears press against her skull as her head slid past the entryway.
Celestia felt her opening stretch, and it felt wonderful. She was excited, the concept of having a life within her was almost too much for her to stand. Still, the Princess moaned softly as the filly continued.
It was so warm in here, so moist as she pressed on, Bloom's forelegs helping spread the canal wide enough for her to squeeze in. As her shoulders touched Celestia's puffy labia, she shifted slightly to press first her right shoulder though the opening, and then with some work, the second.
Celestia was breathing heavily. The sensation of something living crawling into her very being was unlike anything she had ever felt in her very long life. It was strange, exotic, and erotic all at the same time. She clenched a little as her G-spot was rubbed against by Bloom's head.
The mare gritted her teeth, her canal suddenly tightening around the filly. She did her best to keep control and not squeeze too tightly as she came. Her soft cries filling the bedroom.
Bloom felt the warm, soft walls suddenly tighten around her, preventing her from moving at all. She tried to squirm, her hind legs kicking about a bit till the contraction ended after a long ten seconds. She then felt a hoof gently stroke her back.
The calming stroking relaxed Bloom's fright. After a few minutes, she braced her hooves onto the cloud bed again and pushed deeper into the wonderfully warm and inviting folds. She could feel her chest passing through the opening. It was tight, but not uncomfortable as the slick, slippery opening proved little difficulty to squeeze through.
The thickness of Bloom's chest was stretching the Princess to the very max. She winced a little, but it was not because of pain. It felt simply wonderful to feel Apple Bloom moving about inside her, and getting deeper with each minute that passed.
While it was dark in here, Bloom could feel something with her hooves. Was this the end of the vagina? But she was barely half way in. She prodded a little and her hoof slipped through a small opening. Her second hoof slid through with no difficulty and she carefully spread it.
Celestia gasped as she felt her cervix spread, and Bloom starting to enter her womb. She smiled as she felt the filly's head press against, then slowly, through and into her womb.
Bloom was now at her hips, and it was now almost impossible for her to push her way in any further. Using her forelegs, she started, very carefully and gently, pulling herself in. She squirmed through the second tight opening, and at the same time, working her hips into the vagina opening. It took nearly ten minutes to get her slightly curvy hips to slide in.
Once Bloom finally fitted her hips into the tight, wet and warm channel, she found it much easier to pull herself in even further. Her entire upper half, to her chest, was now in the warm womb, surrounded by a soft flesh that made her want to fall asleep right there.
But she was not done. Somehow, she continued pulling herself in, curling up and into a comfortable little ball. Finally, Bloom's hips and legs slid through the cervix opening and into the womb. It was no difficulty to worm her tail in with her, curling it between her legs and to her belly.
The sensation of being in the womb... She didn't remember it at all from before, but it was warm, so comfortable, like she was floating and curled up in noting but love.
Bloom sighed contently as she closed her eyes and fell asleep.
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“Where is she?” Twilight was frantic. Her mane and tail were worse then when she had thought she would be tardy for a certain letter some months ago.
“I have no idea.” Luna was equally frantic, her mane and tail no better than the Unicorn's.
“We should check on Apple Bloom, just to make sure she's safe.” Twilight suggested. “Wait, do you have a window in your room?”
Luna paled. “Oh no... The barrier is around the castle. She can still enter the grounds and fly outside, just not beyond the walls. How could I have not thought about that before.”
The pair rushed as fast as they could back to the beautiful black wood doors and unlocked it. They burst in and froze.
Celestia lay on the bed, her belly swollen as though she were pregnant. She was sleeping with the most peaceful look on her face.
“Oh my Celestia...” Twilight felt her heart fall into the pit of her stomach. “She... She didn't...”
“Tia...” Luna rushed up to the bed and shook her sister awake. “Tia... where's Apple Bloom? You... You didn't...” She stared at the 'pregnant' belly.
“She's safe.” Celestia purred, rubbing her belly, a dreamy expression on her face.
“How COULD you?” Luna almost screamed. “I mean... HOW?”
Celestia giggled. “Do not fret little sister. She is sleeping soundly, within my womb. Soon, perhaps a few days, I will give birth to her. She will be unharmed and unchanged.”
Twilight shuddered a little. “But... How can she breath? It's not exactly open to the air.”
“A little magic was all it took. Apple Bloom is in no danger within me.” Celestia rubbed her belly and giggled. “She's dreaming. I felt her kick a little.”
Luna wanted to chew her sister out, but Twilight spoke first. “Princess? I know you say she will be alright... but... I don't know. This can't be healthy. She's eleven years old and she's not exactly small.”
“Apple Bloom is the same size as my youngest daughter when she was born many hundreds of years ago. No, Bloom is a little smaller.” She sighed and laid her head down. “Luna, might I sleep the night here? I'm quite tired from this.”
Luna glanced at Twilight, who simply nodded. “Very well sister, but please... Do not ever do something like this again. It is not natural.”
Celestia giggled a little. “Luna, do not fret. While my body urged me to bare foal, I did not wish to bare a foal of my own. When you reach my age, you may understand. Perhaps on a couple centuries I will decide I am ready again.” She sighed and closed her eyes. Within seconds, the Alicorn was asleep.
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Three days later.
Luna stared at Twilight, a pleading look in her eyes. “Please Twilight? I... I'm not sure I can be in there alone.”
Twilight sighed. “Of course Luna.” She pecked a kiss onto Luna's cheek. Together, they entered Princess Celestia's chambers to aid in the rebirth of Apple Bloom...
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To Be Continued...
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Author's Notes:
For those of you reading this and feeling ill, I apologize. For those of you who read this and enjoyed it, I apologize. ... this unbirth and rebirth of Apple Bloom chapter was actually the ORIGINAL version of this chapter, writing while I was drunk, hehe.
