truly loved

by electric blaze

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 4654

pinkie has a crush on cheese, and wants to find him to tell him she feels.

pinkie is getting strange feelings about cheese after the birthday bash and realises she loves him, so she is determined to find him to confess how she feels, hoping he feels the same way in return. she relies on her pinkie sense to find him and does so, but will he feel the same way about pinkie in return?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-04-03 09:34:43 UTC

after the birthday bash

The pink pony took a deep breath and let it back out again, watching the light orange colt walk off into the distance. The two of them made great success planning and holding Rainbow's birthday bash, and Pinkie felt exhausted. She looked back and smiled at the chicken shaped rubber toy, lying lifeless in a sculpted case for him.

"Well boneless, I guess there's nothing left to do then go home. Hey! I might as well introduce you to Gummy!"

She gently closed the case and trotted home. However she kept on having a lonesome feeling as she was walking home, like she was missing something. Later she just shrugged it off, like it was just an affect from her weariness. But it kept on coming back to her, like constant whispers in her ear. She tried to get rid of it by eating cupcakes, telling jokes to Gummy, you name it. Pinkie tossed and turned roughly in her pink and blue polka dot blanket, then it hit her. did she miss Cheese already? it must of been it, whenever she thought of him after the party, her cheeks flushed a bright cherry red. she slowly leaned up and rested her head on the wooden backboard behind her.

"Wait a secoooond......am...am I... "

Pinkie suddenly gave a small chuckle to herself.

"Of course not! Besides, we barely know each other!...But does it really matter? we could still be..."

She gave a dreamy smile, but then it suddenly dropped.

"He could be halfway across equestria by now! I Could never see him again....unless..."

Pinkie put on her beard wig and stroked the tip with her hoof, as if she was thinking seriously. (she kinda was) Her eyes lightened up and sparkled with hope and confidence, her grin growing wider.

"Ponyville express! That's it! But how am I going to find him?"

She glanced at her back, watching it twitch. Aha! she thought; my Pinkie sense could help me find were Cheese is!

"Great plan Pinkie Pie! Well thank you pinkie, your too kind."

Pinkie giggled to herself.

"Cheese Sandwich, here I come!"

taking your friend's advice

pinkie ran back and forth for stuff to pack. she threw in her streamers, glitter, cupcakes, and even her party cannon. she closed the case, but had a struggle closing it fully! she jumped up and down until she gave up, giving a loud grunt. she bounced on her tail, sending her to shoot up high in the air.

"CANNONBAAAAAALLL!!!!"

she screamed, landing and finally closing the pink suitcase. she quickly fed gummy by giving him gummy bears (who wouldn't of guessed?) and flopped boneless onto her back. she trotted to her right window, bordered with rainbow candy shaped love hearts. she sighed as she watched Luna finish fully raising the moon, and checking to see that everypony was in bed and fast asleep. for all except pinkie, she was sure she was the only one who was still awake. she was wrong. pinkie's ears perked up as she heard a gentle knocking sound at sugar cube corner's front door.

"OOOH, a customer! but who would be up at this time of night? oh well. I'll be there in a shake of a spring baby lambie's tail!"

pinkie slid backwards down the banister and answered the door, but to her surprise, it was all her fluttershy! she always thought of her to be an early sleeper, also she was too scared to go to pony Ville's centre on her own at night.

"hi pinkie..i was hungry and I couldn't sleep...can I come in?"

pinkie gave a gentle smile and nodded, putting her hoof around her and taking her in. she gave her a mug of hot cocoa and some cheesecake.

"what are you doing being up so late...at mine? does discord know you're gone?"

"me and discord have been married for 5 months now...im sure he's fine."  (yes I made them married don't yell at me.)

(back at home) discord was stroking into the air thinking he is stroking fluttershy's mane, but wakes up realising he wasn't. she was gone! discord looks around in shock and confusion.

"fluttershy? where did you go?"

(back at sugarcube corner)

"speaking of which, what's the matter with you?"

"i couldn't sleep and I think im coming down with somethiiiing...."

"and...what's that meant to be pinkie?"

pinkie took a deep breath and blushed a little. fluttershy peered over to see what was the matter.

"i think...I think I love cheese sandwich?"

she gave a shy grin, making fluttershy gasp in shock.

"you..you do? but you used to be jealous of him! and you even challenged him to a goof off!"

"i know...but I got to see him! I super dooper miss him! ive packed my bag and was just about to leave to find him with my pinkie sense!"

pinkie shouted loudly all in one breath, fluttershy giggling and smiling friendly.

"im coming with you, ill buy the train tickets, we'll follow your pinkie sense."

pinkie gasped in excitement and her eyes twinkled.

"YOU MEAN IT?! AWW, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!"

she jumped by fluttershy and hugged her tightly.

"alright then," fluttershy giggled, "let's go!!"

to be continued...

the journey

pinkie and fluttershy quietly opened the door and galloped to the pony ville train station. they looked around in confusion, for it was surprisingly bustling with ponies. pinkie recognized an old friend who was working on a railway track. it was Copperhoof,  a light chocolate coat pony with a dark drown and a hint of light yellow. her eyes were a beautiful shade of emerald green, and she wore a blue cap with a picture of her cutiemark witch was a screwdriver with oil splatters. fluttershy's nose wrinkled with the strong smell of gas surrounding the building.

"COPPERHOOF!! OVER HEEEEEERE!!"

she paused and looked up, checking her surroundings. she gave a big smile to a waving pinkie pie and her embarrassed friend next to her. she took her ripped hankie out of her tool box and wiped the oil of her body, jumping out of the train tracks and ran to pinkie. she gave her a hug.

"aww, pinkie pie! ive missed you! I haven't seen you in ages! who's your friend?"

copper peered to pinkie's left to have a closer look at her. she smiled at fluttershy, and she returned with a small smile,  blushing in a shy manner and quickly looking away. copper giggled, looking back at pinkie.

" this is one of my bestest friends in the world! besides you."

pinkie gave a awkward squee, but she just chuckled.

"it's okay. what's her name?"

"this is fluttershy! the element of kindness herself!"

"its a honor meeting you, fluttershy. anyway, what's the matter?"

pinkie looked at fluttershy and gave her a nudge, telling fluttershy it was her que.

"you see miss copper, we really need two tickets for where exactly?"

fluttershy gave a quick look of confusion to pinkie, she looked up at her ears, which was flapping up and down.

"m...manehatten! we need to go to manehatten! he's there!"

"um...who?"

"cheese sandwich! you see copper, I kinda..."

pinkie's sentence trailed of with embarrassment, as she started to blush again. she took a deep breath in.

"i love cheese sandwich, and i need to see him to tell him how I feel!"

"well, not on your own you don't!"

fluttershy turned around in shock. it was discord! he ran to her and dipped her down and gave her a passionate kiss. pinkie and copper stared at them in shock, blushing all the way. the kissed for a while, eventually breaking away.

"fluttershy?! you got me worried sick about you! I even flipped over the house and took it off the ground to find you! do you know how hard it is to..."

fluttershy gently put her hoof on discord's mouth and smiled.

"i need to take pinkie to manehatten! cheese sandwich is there!"

discord twirled around his beard in confusion.

"are you serious?! just make a cheese sandwich yourself!"

the three of them laughed about his misunderstanding, he still was confused.

"no silly! hahaha! a colt named cheese sandwich I need to find!"

discord clicked his fingers in satisfaction.

"oooooh! you know, you could of just told me!"

copper chuckled and pulled out three tickets for manehatten and handed them out to the three of them.

"here you go! since you are my best friend, you can get them for free."

"AWW, THAT'S SO SWEET! THANKYOU!"

she quickly hugged copper, and she hugged her back.

"well, you better get going! the train is about to leave!"

fluttershy, discord and pinkie jump onto the train and wave copper off.

"THANKYOU COPPER! SEE YOU SOOOOOON!"

pinkie shouts at the top of her voice, everypony (and draqoneques) clenches their ears. meanwhile on the train, the ponies look uncomfortable with the fact that the lord of chaos was on the train with them. but pinkie and (obviously) fluttershy was ok with him. discord gently lifed her chin and kissed her once more. fluttershy wrapped her hooves around him, everypony else on the train looked at them in shock and cringed, half of them in disgust. pinkie gave a warm smile, feeling happy for them. they actually made a cute couple, if she could say so herself. but she suddenly thought about her and cheese. will she receive his love in return? she thought. they broke the kiss, being hypnotized in each other's eyes, the two of them blushing. after a while, she broke the concentration as she saw lots of big buildings in front of them.

"um...pinkie? is this manehatten over there?"

she pointed her hoof out of the small wooden window, pinkie shoving her head out.

"AAAAH! IT IS! IM SO EXITED TO..."

pinkie stopped as she saw discord look at her suspiciously.

"so, what with you and this 'cheese sandwich' anyway?"

"I..i love him? and I need to tell him how I feel about him?"

discord did a teasing whistle, making pinkie blush again.

"hey, stop it!"

discord and fluttershy chuckled, as the train came to a sharp halt.

"AAAAAALL ABOAAAAAAARD!"

the conductor shouted enthusiastically. discord gently takes fluttershy's hoof and helps her get down.

"my lady."

discord winked, and fluttershy giggled as discord helped pinkie down aswell.

"trying to be a good friend, yes?"

"thanks discord"

pinkie smiled at him, and she jumped as her back twitched again.

"he's in manehatten party pony centre!"

"and where exactly is that?"

discord asked, looking at fluttershy worried.

"where do you think? centre?"

"oh...yeah. lets go!"

discord held on to pinkie and fluttershy and clicked his fingers, teleporting to the centre of manehatten. pinkie's eye's widened and she gasped, when she regonized a familiar orange figure in the distance...

"c...ch...cheese?..."

to be continued...

the confesion

pinkie ran to cheese, hugging him tightly. tears of happiness fell from her face, as a confused cheese sandwich didn't recognize who was hugging him until she let go. discord and fluttershy  ran over to get a closer look.

"pinkie pie? what are you doing here? I thought you were in..."

I came here because I need to talk to you...alone."

pinkie turned around to see the couple facing them.

"we wont be long guys...about five minutes or so?"

they both looked at each other and then nodded.

"okay fine...at least that will give us a little...privacy?"

discord gave a cheeky grin, making fluttershy shocked, and she blushed.

"discord!"

"What?"

cheese and pinkie chuckled, as he leaded her to his apartment that he was staying in at the time. pinkie marvelled at the sight presented to her. there was a sophisticated hot tub with expensive cosmetics, balloons and streamers surrounded the room and cheese sandwich crusts scattered on plates on his wooden desk, and on his brown and yellow bed.

"w...wow this is awesome!"

cheese smiled brightly at the pink mare.

"why thanks, pinkie! anyway, what's the matter?"

pinkie and cheese sat on the edge of his bed. she turned around to face him, and doing so they accidently touched noses. they quickly moved away a little bit in embarrassment.

"you see cheese, ever since you left the party, I missed you, and I needed to see you again, but I luckily counted on my cheesy sense to find where you were. I couldn't sleep last night, caus all I was thinking about was you! I never thought that in all my life I would ever miss you like this! well, what im trying to say to you is..."

cheese looked at pinkie in shock, as she turned around for a few seconds to gather up her courage she took a deep breath and breathed out, and looked back at cheese.

"I..i think I l...love you cheese."

cheese blushed a pure red colour and his green eyes widened.

"you mean it?"

"it's true! I didn't realise it until before but...I love you"

cheese put his hoof around pinkie's waist and gently pulled her closer to him.

"I cant believe it..after all this time you...loved me?! I thought you never would!"

"wait a minute...you love me to?"

"yeah...strange, right?"

"nope."

cheese took pinkie's hooves and wrapped them around his neck, and he put his around her small waist for better mouth contact, but pulled her into a tight hug. fluttershy and discord crept around the corner and watched them. exitment filled their bodies.

"fluttershy...are they really going to...?"

I think so! were just going to have to wait and see."

he stroked her dark pink soft, poofy mane and placed his hoof around the back of her head. she closed her eyes and kissed her, pinkie's eyes widening in shock. a tingling sweet sensation went through her body, draining the energy as she kissed him back. they got so taken away they fell onto the bed. discord stuck his tongue out in disgust.

"ggggross!"

fluttershy looked at him and rolled her eyes in playful way.

"oh, come on! you kiss me all the time!"

discord groaned in defeat.

"humph, I guess you're right."

he scooped her down and gently pressed his lips against hers, and she returned the kiss, discord snapping his fingers behind his back to create fireworks. pinkie suddenly broke the kiss, confused.

"cheese, what's that sound?"

"its just fireworks, for romantic emphasis. whatever that means."

pinkie and cheese giggled, as they reconnected their mouths to each other. they kissed for a while, soon breaking again. cheese slowly put his hoof around pinkie pie and turned to look at her face. he now caressed her more than anything, and would do absolutely anything for her. he loved everything about her; her beautiful face, hair, eyes. he quickly thought for a minute, and thought it was about time he asked her.

"pinkie pie?"

"yeah?"

"I need to asked you something."

pinkie leaned up in excitement.

"yeeeees?"

"will you...will you be my special somepony?"

pinkie squealed in excitement and hugged cheese tightly again.

"YEEEEEEEES!! WHOO HOO!"

pinkie kissed him, but as long this time.

"I was wondering...should I stay in ponyville...with you? as long as you want me to."

"really?! yes again!! but in that case, we better get going, my friends will wonder where I am."

after he packed up,  they took one last look at the room. cheese sighed as he looked at the hot tub.

"it's a shame, i never got to try out the hot tub."

"we have a spa in ponyville, and that has a hot tub. we can go there if you want to."

they hugged each other with their heads around their necks, and left the room. however, they spotted fluttershy and discord around the door!

"oh..h hey guys! how's it goin? he heh..."

discord was attempting to act casual, but fluttershy was curled up like a guilty dog. cheese looked at each other in embarrassment and worry.

"you...y you saw us k...k...kiss?!"

pinkie stammered as she and cheese turned bright red. discord raised his eyebrow.

"you know, you are going to have to get used to kissing, you are dating now."

"well I guess you're right. anyway, back to ponyville, pinkie?"

"back to ponyville, cheese."

discord teleported back to the train station.

"discord sweetie, what about the tickets?"

"ahh, don't worry my dear, I read the label and it says if you go to manehatten, you go home for free. it's a special offer."

"but what about cheese?"

cheese gave a reassuring grin to fluttershy.

"don't worry fluttershy, I've got it covered."

and with that they all went back home to ponyville. All of pinkie's friends (accept fluttershy and discord) were shocked to see cheese back in ponyville so soon, especially the fact that they were holding hooves a lot of the time. they dated for 2 years, going on dates together, planning party's together, spending hearts and hooves day together. although, around hearths warming eve they were pushed under mistletoe a few times, by rainbow dash and rarity. until one day, cheese finally thought it was the right time and day to ask...

the proposal/wedding

cheese swung around his back hooves around on the two seater bench. he looked at the little dark blue silk box. inside was a gold necklace with a ring pendant. in the middle was a real diamond light blue balloon like pinkie's cutiemark. like all colts with a mare, he was very nervous to ask her. his ears suddenly perked up, as he heard delicate trotting noise coming towards him. he quickly slouched up thinking it was pinkie, but it was just rainbow dash. she smiled as she noticed him, and slumped down next to him.

"hey cheese. how come you're by yourself?"

dash peered at the little box that was on the palm of his hoof.

"what's in that little box?"

"its a...p proposal necklace for pinkie?"

cheese blushed and let out a little squee, and rainbow dash gasped. a big grin grew onto her face.

"YOU'RE GOING TO ASK PINKIE TO MARRY YOU?! OH MY GAAAAAAH!! I'LL GO GET PINKIE!!"

and with that, dash jumped up, spread her wings and zoomed off to sugarcube corner.

"rainbow wait!!...crud. well cheese, this is it. after two years, it's time to change our relationship and make it much stronger than before."

meanwhile at sugarcube corner, pinkie was baking lemon cupcakes. she slammed her muzzle onto a end of a spoon full of sugar, (get it Mary Poppins joke there!) sending it flying into the bowl with the cupcake mixtures.

"GOOOOOWL!!!! WHOOOPEEEEE!!!"

she took out pompoms from thin air and danced around with them, until dash flew through her window, grab her by her tail.

"hey!! dashie!! what gives?!"

"no time to explain!! I need to get you to cheese!!"

"wait!!...is he in danger??!!"

"no! he's just fine!"

she dropped pinkie on cheese, landing on top of him, accidently kissing each other. she quickly got off him in embarrassment.

"geez cheese, im really sorry."

pinkie blushed, but cheese gently put his hoof on her check, bringing her lips to his, and kissing her again. rainbow put her hoof on her mouth and pretended to throw up.

"hey dash! look behind you!"

pinkie shouted to her after they broke the kiss. dash turned around and standing behind her was sourin.

"babe, what are you doing...mph!!"

dash blushed as sourin kissed her in front of them. the couple chuckled as she looked surprisingly embarrassed. as they broke, dash whimpered and grabbed sourin's tail, flying back to cloudsdale. cheese got back his concentration and face pinkie.

"pinkie pie, as you know we have been dating for a year, and I love you very much. and I never would of became a super party pony if you didn't plan the party that I fell into. all that time, there was something about you that I found great about you, and I wanted to stay with you for the rest of my life, but I had a job. I love you more than party's, cheese sandwiches, even boneless. I would do anything for you, and id rather forget about making party's for anypony else than to not see you happy."

pinkie was very touched by what he was saying, and was on the verge to tears.

"c..cheese..."

"please let me finish! I would not be here if you didn't confess your feelings for me! I would be halfway across equestria by now! and I would of never imagined a life without you."

"so what's all this about, cheese sandwich?"

he got down on his hind legs and opened the little box in front of her. pinkie gasped dramatically and she almost started crying.

"pinkemena Diane pie, I admire you more than anything in my life, so will you have the honour of becoming my wife?"

her mouth was wide open. she was speechless, and stammered in shock.

"YES, CHEESE!! YEEEES!!"

she burst out crying and hugged cheese, crying into his chest. she lifted her head and gently pressed her lips against his, as he returned kiss. after they stopped, they heard cheering behind them. they looked around to see all her friends jumping up and down and stomping their hooves in excitement

"yeah, pinkie pie!! that was AWESOOOME!!"

"this is just marvellous! another wedding! dibs making the dress!"

"I'll marry the both of you, as honour of the princess."

"you rock! whoo hoo..."

"yee haah!"

"should I be the ring bearer again?"

every pony laughed and nodded their heads. cheese and pinkie once again shared a tender kiss. it took a month to plan the ceremony, and when the day came, they both were very nervous. pinkie was wearing her gala dress, accept it was white gold, and pink, it had some lace, and it had a long trail behind it. she wore a white see through vail, and the hooks were covered by candy brooches. her hair was pulled into a poofy and curly plat, with candy clips and glitter. her fringe was made into gentle curls, and she wore pearl white shoes, with pink ribbon going around the top, with and a pink and gold bow in the middle. she looked like a princess.

"pinkie darling, you look a lot nicer than I expected you would! You look...exquisite!"

pinkie blushed and smiled at all her friends who arrived.

"im super-doper happy that you all are here with me! it means so much to me, since this is probably the most biggest and important day of my whole, ginormous, HUMONGOUS life!"

"we your friends, we are always there for you, no matter what."

"yeah, what twi just said! our friends happiness is something we value more than anything!"

"just remember we don't care what anypony says about y'all that's mean, sugar. caus we love y'all just the way you are,"

"and are a special gem, one in a million, like everypony else."

she gently pulled all her friends in for a group hug.

"thanks, guys..."

she smiles, and suddenly gasps as she looks up at the clock. it was 12:58, and the wedding started at 1:00. she jumps out like and clucks like a chicken.

"WE ONLY HAVE 2 MINUTES TO GET TO THE ALTAR!!"

they all gasped, and run out of the door. pinkie had to stay behind the door with her dad, igneous rock.

"you look as beautiful as your mother on her wedding."

he gave a small smile to pinkie. he didn't really smile that often.

"thanks dad. to be honest, im pretty scared."

"don't worry your mother and I were nervous. you'll get over it pretty soon."

" it's time! get ready!"

igneous wrapped his hoof around her hoof, and the door opened to reveal pinkie's family and friends on the left, cheese's on the right. her friends were on her side, accept for spike and fluttershy, who was his best mare. behind him was twilight, and next to him was spike, with a velvet blue pillow with the two rings/necklaces. discord was on the piano, who played the traditional wedding tune. pinkie and igneous slowly walked down the isle, and cheese sandwich looked at her in amazement.

"woow..."

he was wearing a black tux, with a pink and yellow tie to represent them. it didn't really go with his outfit, but he didn't care. discord stopped playing the tune when pinkie got to cheese. they both smiled at each other, memorized in their eyes.

"dearly beloved, we are gathered her today to celebrate the union, of pinkie pie and cheese sandwich. only few couples ive seen are so helpless in love, they would sacrifice their life for one another. this couple have a love so strong, they could never be apart for long. do you, pinkie pie, take this colt as your lawfully wedded husband?"

"absolutely!"

"and do you, cheese sandwich, take this mare, to be your lawfully wedded wife?"

for a few seconds, he lost his concentration as he was daydreaming of his fiancé, but he quickly shook his head and got back his concentration.

"oh, yes! yes! I definitely do!"

twilight smiled, and turned to spike.

"may I have the rings, spike?"

he held the pillow in front of him, and she took them with her magic, passing them to each other. cheese put on pinkies, she doing the same.

"i now pronounce you, mare and colt! you may now kiss the bride."

and with that, cheese dipped her down and kissed her lovingly, and the crowd cheered. AJ nudged rainbow dash, and tilted her head out to the window.

"oh, yeah! why do I keep on forgetting?"

she flew out her dress and created a rainboom in front of everypony.

"well, welcome to the married life, cheese!"

"same with you to, am I right?"

they hugged each other with their heads around their necks.

in canterlot gardens, they held hooves and danced, and behind his back, she winked at dj pon 3 (best ever pony) and she switched the disc and turned it to 'daft pony'  technologic.

"pinkie, what happened?"

"trust me, you'll like this!"

pinkie jumped out and did the robot with cheese, leaving the crowd laughing at them, joining in. pinkie accidently tripped over cheese as he tried catch her, witch made them dip down. they rolled their eyes and kissed each other, making some of the uptight ponies cringe. pinkie and cheese got into a golden carriage, and waved off the crowd.

"see ya!! take care of pinkie, or you'll have to mess with me!"

dash held out her hoof, as pinkie threw out the rose bouquet.

"come on! this time it has to be mine!!"

rarity yelped viciously. but instead, twilight caught it, blushing with embarassment, looking at flash century. she held the bouquet with her magic and kissed him.

"ooooh, look who's having the next wedding!"

discord smiled, bringing fluttershy close to him. she suddenly didn't feel nervous, and gave a cheeky grin. she grabbed him by his blue tie, and gave him a passionate kiss. he was shocked for a few seconds, but kissed her back. meanwhile in the carriage, cheese looked at pinkie. he deeply caressed his new wife.

"well pinkie, now were alone,..."

she moved on top of him and kissed him lovingly returning, cheese putting all fours around pinkie. the kissed for a long period of time, and removed her mouth from his. after all the years of dreaming about love, they finally found it. he kissed her forehead gently, pinkie closing her eyes blushing.

"so, were finally married. what do we do now?"

cheese smiled warmly and stroked her mane.

what couples always do,..."

pinkie's ears instantly went down and turned bright red in shock.

"w w wait ...you m mean... y you...m me...in there?"

"im just teasing!  im not ready for that yet."

"phew! I thought you actually meant it then! I love you."

"i love you to, pinkie."

THE END.