Pain - OC/MLP Fanfic

by KerisBear

Pain

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Pain

It was a bright day in ponyville, The earth ponies roamed around the town doing their own things, The pegasus kind were busy working with clouds and weather, Unicorns were doing magical experiments.

But there was a rumor ponyville has recently heard of, 'The Nightmare Hour' As everypony calls the rumor that has scared everyone from a sudden disapearance..

Rainbow Dash


"Twilght!" Called an echoing voice across the Library "Come on! This is soooo lame" A feminine voice which belonged to a Blue pegasus with a rainbow pattern for both mane and tail, "Its just a rumor! How could ponies be soooo

scared of it??" This blue pegasus, who was a she, She was called Rainbow Dash and she loved to cause trouble around Ponyville when near Nightmare Night and it was close to that holiday. Twilght's Brows turned into a

frown and her eyes filled with worry "Rainbow! I dont think its a good idea to just wander off in the middle of the night at the EVERFREE!" Twilght exclaimed, "Besides! Zecora has even mentioned there is a pony who contiuniously haunts her!"

Rainbow Dash just rolled her eyes and grunted in disbelief at Zecora's words "Shes probably just trying to scare you, Twilght! Zecora doesn't really like visitors around her" "R-rainb-" Rainbow Dash had just

interrupted Twilght by saying "Whatever, Twilght! I'm going at 11:30 Pronto!" Twilght just sighed and knew there was no convicing Dash to stay. "If you want to, Then go." Twilght felt worry take over her fragile mind

but, Twilght was going to recieve a massive Nightmare Fright...

When its 'The Nightmare Hour'.


"So HuNgRy...FeEd Me.."

...

DING DING DING!

The beeping came from Dashe's alarm "Urrghnnnnnfhhh..Darn Clocks.." A lazy Rainbow Dash was awaken from the loud beeping

Dash smashed her hoof onto the loud beeper and got out of her bed, "Well its 11:28 now, Best be going" Dash spoke out loud and spread her wings to fly towards Ponyville and the everfree forest.

CLOP CLOP, CLOP CLOP, CLOP CLOP.

Clopping of hooves touching the ground were present as Rainbow dash walked through-out ponyville, She was admiring the silent night and eyed the quiet city altogether, But she remembered she had a rumor to solve, Well what she wanted to solve anyway. She finally reached the destination of the opening which belonged to the Everfree forest, "Well here it is, Hah, How is THIS place scary?" Dash chuckled to herself and started leading herself into the dark abyss of the forest, To go to the center where The Nightmare Hour takes place, She suddenly heard screaming which sounded familiar to dash, More like...More like a Zebra? ' Wait a minute' Dash thought and suddenly gasped and galloped to Zecora's Hut to check if she was okay and it wasn't her screaming. She then reached Zecora's hut in a matter of mere seconds and knocked furiously and continuously on the wooden door that belonged to the Zebra.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

No Answer.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

Still no answer...

"Zecora!" Dash yelled as her mind was losing bravery but now was filled with worry and fear, Was Zecora attacked or kidnapped?!

She had a thought in mind 'Knock the door down' and she thought the idea was crazy at first but knew it was to check on Zecora then continue with her journey and help whoever was screaming, What she saw was horrible.

"Z-z-z-zecora?!" The zebra, Zecora was lying on the floor, Blood coming from all directions of her body, Ears,Mouth,Nose and her chest was torn open! "Pegasus!" She screamed "RUN! For the beast has not had its *gag* F-fun!" She wailed. but with a tint of agony in her tone of seriousness. Zecora was missing her other half of the body, The Half of where her tail was, Her legs and stomach.

"Pega-"

CRASH!

...

Rainbow Dash was knocked out from the outburst of the mysterious force that struck her...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- LATER

...

Rainbow Dash woke up with an obvious groan that she hated waking up from a peaceful nap, But then she remembered...Zecora! She realized she was still in Zecora's hut and scanned the area with her eyes but realized that Zecora was gone!

She tried moving but she couldn't feel her legs and when she looked down at her legs to see what was wrong, She screamed in horror..

Her legs were missing and gone completely, just like Zecora, Poor Dash didn't notice the Strange creature that came towards her with a Ghastly grin that reached both ends of each side of the head. "Hello you whore," A demonic female voice interrupted Rainbow Dash's panicked whimpers, Rainbow Dash looked up at the creature.

An alicorn.

This alicorn was a strange looking one aswell, Dark tattered blue fur, An Radioactive sign but instead of having a black and green colour to the symbol, It had black and red and full black eyes with Green iris's. "More for me" It spoke and opened its jaw wide enough to swallow me whole, Sets of sharp razor teeth were present and very visible, And a sticky red substance i recognized as...Blood..  "They call me Twitch but i doubt that will matter to you, you piece of filth"

CHOMP

The teeth closed in onto Dash's chest and snapped her ribs to bits.. the Sharp pair of teeth chomped down onto the pegasus' neck and crunched the spine and tore away the veins inside the neck and slowly started to devour dash and her broken half skeleton and her body was not to be found ever again.

But Dash's screams were loud enough to wake many.

GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!

....

The End!