(unrevised version, I figured it would be easier to change my writing style if people find in it inadequate when I do my revision later on. So please leave some criticism… just be gentle i am shy about my writing)

Being born into a family with a long running lineage of wonderbolts, the pressure was on Sulfur to be able to follow in his family's footsteps especially his sister's.

Unfortunately he encounters a slight issue that dashes his goals to be a wonderbolt, Is it for the best? Sulfur feels ashamed but never really felt flying is what he wanted to do for a living.

So what does a Pegasus do when he no longer has the prospect of flying with the wonderbolts?