Amiss Fortune
3. A Corrupted Mind
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And a smooth wind graced my fur
I saw Carol trotting happily
and I moved to join her
We conversed in joy for hours
or that's what it would seem
Until a loud rumbling
Awoke me from my dream...
my eyes shot open
But my limbs would not respond
The paralysis spell must still be active
(Of which I was not fond...)
my eyes slowly adjusted
To the strange dark
But the horror that I saw
Would leave a mental mark
Bloodied bodies of ponies
Lay all around me
This wretched gore filled sight
Was so hard to see
I shut my eyes tight
And tasted my own bile
But came to my senses
After a long while
I realized I was moving
And reluctantly looked around
To find my immobile body
Was not on solid ground
I was on a track
That ran towards a large flame
I had to get off of this
Or it would be my end game
I struggled very hard
But was frozen still
Then I remembered Carol Belle
And that enraged my will
I had to find her
But feared it was too late
But I must save her
Or at least know her fate
I slowly got to my hooves
And stumbled on my way
All about this room
Were dark walls of grey
I tripped over a detached forehoof
and a snap came from my side
Passing out from the pain
I thought that I had died...
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My next time being awoken
I saw a "familiar" face
It was of the dark figure
And my heart increased in pace
"Don't make any noise"
The stallion whispered at me
the dark outline of a small room
Was all that I could see
"Where the buck am I?"
I asked, lungs screaming in pain
But all I was returned
Was him telling me to shut up again
"You're in Hell..."
He said after a long while
"Please enjoy your stay!"
He added with a grim smile
His mane was red and black
and did not look well kept
This dark blue stallion being friendly
Seemed difficult to accept
He sat silent
Before letting me know
"My name is Night Shade,
"But they call me Shadow
"Well, I'm Amiss Fortune"
I said after some thought
He chuckled and replied
"Well, who is not?"
I ignored his attempt
To lighten up the mood
My pain wasn't just from my ribs
For my stomach was void of food
"They think you are dead,
"So let's keep it that way
"You will be silent and listen to me
"If alive is how you wish to stay."
"Who is 'They'?" I asked
Wanting to know what this was about
He just turned and looked at me
Saying "you haven't figured it out?"
"There is a 'project',
"Of which few ponies know
"For it exists in such horror
"Where pony thoughts choose not to go"
"The idea was to be immortal
"To live life without fear
"But they bit too much off
"And their goal is nowhere near"
"Instead they made a disease
"that infects one's mind
"That amplifies their last thought
"Leaving rational thinking behind"
"Yet they continue testing
"Instead this damn place
"Ignoring that the outside world
"May develop a case..."
I was shocked and startled
At this bucked up news
All this was hidden
From all public views
"How long was I out?"
His answer brought me fear
"Mindless or asleep?
"For the first has been half a year
"Where is Carol Belle?!"
I stuttered in full fright
"I'm afraid she wasn't as lucky"
He said, avoiding my sight...
My mind filled with emotion
No longer capable of full thought
But I promised, no matter the pain
She wouldn't be forgot
The small room filled with choked sobbing
As tears flooded my eyes
I had managed to live
But she met her demise
Shadow heard something
And quickly turned his head
He pulled me to the floor
Before pushing me under a bed
The door of the room opened
And in came a unicorn
Her Pissed off expression
Hid my thoughts that were forlorn
"What the hell are you doing?!"
Came her enraged yell
She held a knife to Shadow's throat
With a telekinetic spell
"Give me a damn reason...
"You shouldn't end up like the rest
"You are given so much here
"Yest still my rules you test"
"Get your ass back to work!"
She barked, lowering the knife
"If you buck up one more time...
"I will end your pathetic life..."
She then left the room
And Shadow too did go
I was stunned and had many things
I still wished to know
One question was,
Where was I?!
Then the important one...
Is this where I die?...
A few hours passed
Ill content with what I'd accrued
I carefully left the room
In search for some food...
After exiting the door
I was in a long grey hall
And was startled when I heard
From a speaker, a loud call
"All security ponies needed"
Came the voice's shout
"In lab D-4,
"The subject has gotten out!"
I panicked and stumbled down the hallway
Feeling very weak
Until I found a sign
For which I did seek
Partially relieved
I was in F-2
But I also found out
This place was bigger than I knew
I heard somepony coming
And quickly passed through a door
But did not notice
That the room had no floor...
I hit the chipped stone ground
And felt my hooves crack
It was quickly evident
I would not be going back
The pain of my body
Was now too great
To the point that
I would have welcomed fate...
Tears came from my eyes
As my body hurt all about
I had no hope in fighting it
So I let them come out
A little while passed
Before I heard a slight groan
And I was startled
Realizing I was not alone
A dirty pink mare
Sat in the corner of the room
Something was off about her
And her presence seemed to loom
"You have had better days?"
She laughed and said to me
"To figure that out,
"I don't need to see..."
She turned her head at me
And I swore it to be lies
But this mare before me
Had removed her eyes...
"What happened to you?!"
I said in sudden shock
And almost instantly
I wished I hadn't talked
"Everypony is so judgmental"
She plainly said
"But I aim to fix that
"By MAKING them use their head!"
"It is so great!
"A wondrous way to be
"You are happy with everything!
"Just look at me!"
I started moving back
My bloodied hooves raking the floor
I fought through the pain
And my whole body was sore
"See? You try to leave me!
"I have been nothing but kind!
"Don't worry, I can fix you
"So you see with just your mind!"
With that she was upon me
With a sharp rock in her jaws
Her damaged hooves cut my sides
Feeling more like claws
I struggled against her
But gasped in shock
As she missed and made my shoulder
Embedded with the rock
I kicked her off me
And saw the rock still there
Where it was lodged
There was a bloody tear
"I am just helping!"
She loudly screamed
I was going to die
Or that is how it seemed
I looked about the room
And saw my wretched prize
Now there was a chance
I would not meet my demise
A metal bed frame
Sat broken and near by
The protruding jagged piece
Is what caught my eye
I felt her hoof
As it connected with my head
I had one chance at this
To spare me from being dead
She was now bleeding
And as we fought it got on me
If I bucked this up
My life would be the fee
I brought up my leg
Knocking her into the bed
The jagged metal impaled her
But she still was not dead...
"I-I was helping you...
"To be a better pony..."
Her tone became soft
"I wanted you to be happy..."
"I just...wanted...
"I... tried..."
Then her breath stopped coming
And with that she died...
I had just killed a pony?!
The thought contested my head
Because of my actions
She now was dead
She tried to cut my eyes out
I quickly reasoned
But I would never come to terms
With what I had done
Covered in her blood
I fell to the ground
With a warm tingle
Then icy darkness all around...
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