Liam & Darksun Re-Ending
Chapter 1: To the Garden
Load Full StoryNext Chapter"Come on, Liam!" Darksun yelled, trotting out in front of me.
Darksun is a normal sized pegasus. She has a grey, coat, and bright red eyes. She has dark blue hair, with lines of dark red running through it. She is very sweet, and kind to ponies, but if you mess with her or her friends, not even the hills will hide you.
"Well, slow down! I'm not as fast as you, Darksun!"
Liam is a brown colored pony, with Chocolate brown eyes. His hair is the same, with small light spikes of brighter brown near the edges. He is very open and accepting to others. And, yes. He is a human from an alternate dimension.
She was too fast. Even when trotting, I couldn't keep up with her. My chest was hurting from all the trotting, and running. I had to stop, or risk passing out on the ground, again. Doing so, I stopped and took a deep breath.
Immediately, Darksun turned around, and trotted up to me. "You alright, Liam? Sorry, Was I going too fast?" I simply looked up, and nodded, still trying to catch my breath. "Sorry." Darksun, repeated, lowering her head. I simply stood up, and kiss her forehead, in response.
"It's alright, Darksun." I said, looking down at her. She brought her head up, and her bright red eyes met mine, as we stood there for a moment. Then, her small frown, turned around to make a, slightly cute, smile.
"Have I ever told you how great you are, Liam?" I laughed, slightly, and brought Darksun into a hug, making sure to let this moment last as long as it can. "Because you're fantastic." She continued, closing her eyes, and hugging back.
"I am quite fantastic." I said, jokingly. I could hear Darksun laugh slightly through the hug.
"Don't get full of yourself" Darksun said, still laughing.
"I'm always full of myself" We both laughed at that, and detached from the hug. "So, you have something to show me? That is why you brought me out here."
"Oh, right!" She turned around, quickly, and trotted in the other direction, leaving me in the dust, again. "Come on, Liam! This way!" She said, turning back to look at me. "And, this time, try and keep up!" With then, She turned back around, and trotted further into the forest. I sighed, and walked after her. I can remember meeting Darksun here.
Believe it or not, I met Darksun here in the forest, right on this path. I can remember her odd expression, and straight up confusion. In all truth, the first time I met Darksun, I never would believe that I'd be her coltfriend. I wasn't very interested in talking to her the first time meeting her. But, after a few situations forced us together, I started to consider her a friend.
And, it would take around a year before I gave her the position of my best friend. Now, I can't see myself ignoring her, leaving Ponyville, or anything that would separate me from her. I don't want to come across as a pony who hogs their loved ones, though. I just feel like everything in my boring little life matters when I'm with her. And, I don't ever want lose her.
"I'd go to hell and back for you, Darksun." I whispered to myself.
"Care to prove that?" A monotone voice said, making me jump slightly. I turned around to see a black hooded pony staring at me. His face was completely shrouded by the shadow cast by the hood on his head, keeping me from seeing his face. I could tell he was a male, though. His body was big, but still pretty small for a colt.
"What do you mean by that?" I asked, keeping a close eye on him. He just stood there, looking at me.
"I mean exactly what I said, dumbass. Would you care to prove that you'd go to hell and back for such a simple pony?" He finally said. As soon as he said "simple pony", I was pissed.
"You shut your damn mouth!" I yelled. Stepping closer to this black hooded pony. He didn't even flinch.
"Oh. So intimidating." He said, chuckling slightly. "Besides, Liam. That's all that pony is. Plane and simple. Why would you ever risk your life for such a useless pony?" Immediately, I launched myself forward, grabbing his dark coat with the top of my hoof.
"Shut up!" I yelled, pushing his coat back slightly with each of my short, but powerful, breaths. I could see his mouth, now, but, instead of a frown, he was smiling at me. I started to notice more about his face, as I looked more. He has a dark blue coat, and his teeth were slightly yellowish. Oblivious, this guy doesn't brush his teeth, and I could smell it too.
"Who are you to judge a pony by simple looks?" I said, in an obviously pisses voice. He just sat there in silence, still smiling.
"You would really die for her?" He finally said. I nodded, making my answer clear. His smile grew wider with that. "Then prove it." With that, he pulled up his hoof by my face, as a large glow of light began to emanate from it. Then, suddenly, a large flash of light covered my sight.
I fell onto the ground in pain, covering my eye's with my hooves. The sounds around me were muted, to the point that I couldn't tell if I was even screaming.
"Liam!" A familiar, muffled, voice yelled. Suddenly, I could feel myself move into a sitting position, as the light began to fade from my eyes. "Are you alright?" Darksun said, propping me against a tree. Finally, I pulled my hooves off my eyes, and looked at Darksun. I couldn't just say that I was alright.
I was on the ground, in pain. Possibly screaming. So, I asked the only thing I could think of.
"Did you see anypony?" Darksun's face went from concerned to confuse.
"Only you." She said, shaking her head. "Why? Who else was here?" I didn't even know. The only things I can remember about him were his black rain coat, dark blue coat, and his smile.
"I'm not sure myself. He just came out of nowhere." As I said that, I placed a hoof on my eye, making sure I can still see, properly. Darksun's expression was still stuck on confusion. Suddenly, though, her expression changed to a very small smile.
"Glad you're OK, though." She said, pulling me into a small hug. I was caught off guard by this, and didn't know how to react. I sighed slightly, and hugged her back. I didn't know what to say, and she knew it. I could tell she had more questions for me, but knew I could answer them right now.
"Sorry for worrying you." As I said that, she only squeezed tighter. "So, uh, what was that thing you wanted to show me?" I said, trying to break away from this topic.
"Oh, that." She replied, breaking out of the hug. "It's this way" A small smile crossed her face; she started to walk towards the other direction. This time, waiting for me to catch up.
We have been walking for around 10 minutes before Darksun struck up a random conversation.
"But, anyway. That's why I like that song so much." She said, trying to explain why she likes the song 'Discord' so much. I've just been here, walking with her, and not talking.
"Okay, Darksun. I get it. You like that song. You don't have to explain why." She turned her head to look at me with a slightly annoyed look on her face. "So, how long until you tell me what you brought me out here, for?"
"Don't worry. We're almost there." She said, giggling slightly. We kept on walking in silence for a couple moments, before Darksun broke the silence. "There!" Darksun immediately began to trot down the path even further, not stopping for me.
"Darksun! Wait up!" I began to trot after her, trying to not lose her again. Finally, though, she ran through a gap in the trees, and stopped to wait for me. I pushed through the tree's and find Darksun sitting by a small river. "Whoa. What is this place?"
"It’s some sort of garden I found." She said, turning her head to face me. "I thought you'd like to see it."
"It’s beautiful." I started to walk towards Darksun, looking at the entire area before finally reaching her. I turned my head to see her red eye's looking up at me. Watching me with such happiness.
"Come and sit. The grass is soft, and really comfortable." She said, patting the ground where I could sit. I smiled, and sat down right next to her.
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