Rising Sun

by unleashedtwilight

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Princess Luna, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Sunset Shimmer, Main 6
Length: 3256

After the event in Rainbow Rocks, Sunset Shimmer Finally realized she needed to fix her past in Equestria. The only way to do that was for her to go back.

After the event in Rainbow Rocks, Sunset Shimmer Finally realized she needed to fix her past in Equestria. The only way to do that was for her to go back.

(Hi everyone. Basically this story is going to be about if Sunset Shimmer had returned and if she was in season 5. I'm going t be updating it weekly depending on the episode.)

Published 2015-04-09 18:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-08-02 17:32:30 UTC

Goodbye Until Next Time

“I… I don’t understand…” Pinkie Pie stammered as tears dripped down her face. “You’re just leaving us?”

Sunset Shimmer huffed heavily and hugged Pinkie Pie close to her chest. “I know it’s tough you guys. But I have to go back… Equestria is where I belong. I made up for all the bad things I did in this world…” Sunset looked back at the portal behind her. “Now its time I made things right in my own home.”

All the girls looked at Sunset with either upset, or somewhat mad looks. “You will come and visit us, won’t you darling…?” Rarity asked stepping forward. “After all we’ve made so much progress in our friendship… We would surely miss you.”

“Of course.” Sunset answered nodding. “I’ll always visit you guys whenever I get the chance.”

“We really will miss you Sunset Shimmer…” Fluttershy finally said as tears dripped down her face as well.

“Don’t be a stranger, ya hear?” Applejack said hugging Sunset. “And come back as soon as ya can…”

Rainbow Dash just looked away with her arms crossed; an annoyed look plastered onto her face. “Ugh… dang it!” Rainbow exclaimed. “All of you being all sappy is making me do the same thing…” She said finally turning back to Sunset Shimmer. “I’m gonna miss you too Sunset…” With that the six human girls got together for one final group hug. After about a minute or two, they finally all let go, watching as Sunset Shimmer walked toward the portal to Equestria.

Sunset turned back to her friends again and smiled. “Just like Twilight said: This isn’t goodbye. It’s just goodbye until next time.” she said getting a few smiles from her friends. She huffed and turned her attention back to the portal. “Well… Here I go.” she closed her eyes tightly and walked inside the portal headed to Equestria.

Of course she could feel all the changes in her body again as soon as she walked through it. Her feet and hands both turned into hooves.Her face changing into more of a pony again with her muzzle along with her horn on the top of her head. And of course, her tail and cutie mark appearing on her flank. To her it felt like the process went by slowly. But in reality, it was quick as she soon found herself thrown out of the portal on the other side. In Equestria. Although the room she was in looked different this time around. The mirror wasn’t in the same location as it was before, which was the Crystal Empire. Sunset groaned and got up on her hooves, at the same time getting used to them again from how long its been. “I wonder where everypony is…”

“Let’s go through this one more time…”

“Ugh…” Rainbow facehoofed in annoyance. “We’ve been over it like a million times Twilight!” Sunset heard that name and quickly looked around to see where the source of the voice was coming from. “We found all six keys, defeated Tirek, and got this sweet castle! End of story!” Sunset slowly cracked the door open to get a look at who was talking. She did so as to keep herself hidden from them.

“But why?” Twilight asked thinking about the situation.

“I don’t know sugarcube.” Applejack answered walking toward her chair with her cutie mark on the top. As she did though, without noticing, the cutie mark on both the chair started to flash. “Maybe it’s just your new house and there ain't nothin’ more to it than that.”

“I must say, speaking strictly on her status, there really doesn’t need to be more to it. It’s all simply divine!” Rarity cooed sitting on her chair, getting the same effect as Applejack.

“I agree with Twilight.” Fluttershy smiled sitting down as well. “And Rarity, and Applejack, and Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie… oh, and probably Spike.” She said looking at the still sleeping baby dragon.

“As princess, I’ve been chosen to spread the magic of friendship across Equestria.” Twilight said pacing around the floor before going to sit in her chair as well. “So why would the Tree of Harmony want us to sit in a castle in Ponyville? It doesn’t make any sense!” she said sitting down. But as she did, the chairs all started to flash, and the ground started to shake around them. Eventually, the center of them formed into a table with a map of Equestria on it. This really surprised Sunset. Although at the same time, she wasn’t even sure Twilight was aware of it.

After that, Spike finally woke up and saw the table as if it wasn’t that much of a surprise. “Is that new?” He asked. “I like it.” Spike got up and walked on the map itself looking around on it. “This is incredible! It’s got all of Equestria!”

“Hi mom and dad!” Pinkie exclaimed looking at her old rock farm on the map before Spike stomped on that part cause Pinkie to cry.

Eventually all of them looked back to see that their cutie marks were flashing. Sunset Shimmer took this as a chance to try and sneak past them while they were focused on the map. She let her horn glow bright and teleported herself in the other room across from the one the six ponies were in. “Hey, did you girls hear something?” Rainbow asked looking around.

“It sounded like a spell…” Twilight said.

Sunset went wide eyed and quickly ran down the hallway and out the giant door that was the entrance to Twilight’s castle. “Huh? what…?” Sunset said looking around in a panic. “This doesn’t look like Canterlot at all…” She started running toward the town where all the other ponies and residents were located. Eventually she found a sign of where she was… “Ponyville…? I don’t think I’ve ever come here before.” she looked around to see if she was getting looks from anypony. Thankfully for her, they didn't seem to pay her any mind. They either smiled or waved at her as she walked by.

Back inside the castle…

“Oh my gosh!!” Pinkie Pie exclaimed out of the most random time possible.

“What? What is it??” Twilight asked. “Is something wrong!?”

“No silly!” Pinkie answered. “I said ‘oh my gosh!’ because there’s a new pony here in Ponyville!”

The other girls just looked at each other in confusion. “How do you know that?” Twilight asked.

“It’s always this feeling I get when somepony new comes! Please Twilight, before we leave, I have to meet this new pony! Please please please please please please PLEASE!!!” Pinkie begged going on her knees.

Twilight rolled her eyes but smiled. “Sure Pinkie, go ahead. We’ve got plenty of time anyways, right girls?”

“Of course!” Fluttershy answered with a smile. “Besides, we wouldn’t want to keep you away from making a new friend.”

“If this pony is a pegasus, let me know.” Rainbow pointed. “I want to know if i’ll be getting anymore competition.” she said flexing her wings.

“Competition in what exactly?” Applejack asked with a mused look.

“Being the fastest and most awesome pony in Ponyville of course!” Rainbow answered proudly.

Applejack just facehoofed at the answer. “Why did I even ask…?”

“Alright! I’ll be back before you know it!” Pinkie exclaimed quickly zooming out the room.

Back with Sunset Shimmer…

“Hmm… Sugarcube Corner… Kind of reminds me of the place I go to in Canterlot high.” Sunset said examining the building. Curiosity got the best of her as she walked inside looking around to see other ponies enjoying sweets. “Yup… exactly like it.” Sunset smiled seeing Mrs. Cake at the counter.

“Well hello there!” Mrs. Cake said looking at Sunset Shimmer. “I don’t think I’ve seen you around town before.”

“Yes well, I’m fairly new here. I just moved here from… Canterlot.” She said feeling a bit nervous. Technically, that wasn’t a lie. She just didn’t want to let her know what she actually meant.

“Oh, Canterlot! What a lovely place! You know, Princess Twilight moved here from Canterlot as well.”

“Did she? I… didn’t know that.” Sunset chuckled a bit nervously.

“Well, it’s always nice to meet new ponies. I’m Mrs. Cake.”

“I’m Sunset Shimmer.” She smiled back at her.

“Sunset Shimmer!?!?” a familiar voice from behind exclaimed. Sunset quickly turned her head back to see a certain pink pony with a look of complete shock.

“P-Pinkie Pie!” Sunset stammered. “Look, please wait!” But before she could get a word out, Pinkie just let out a high pitched scream… and the next second later, feeling a warm embrace from the pink equine. “H-huh…?”

“Oh my gosh, it’s really you! Twilight told all of us what you did to help with the sirens!”

“What… she did?” Sunset asked looking surprised herself.

“Uh-huh! She said that you really changed for the better and she’s so happy that she has you as a friend!”

Sweet Celestia… She’s EXACTLY like the Pinkie Pie in Canterlot High… Sunset thought to herself. “Well, what are you doing here right now?”

“I live here silly!” Pinkie beamed. “But I’m actually here trying to find a new pony to Ponyville…” She said looking around… then quickly paused and turned her head back to Sunset. “Oh. My. GOSH!! You’re the new pony!!” She quickly took Sunset’s hoof. “Come on! I have to give you a quick tour!”

“What! what are you--!” Without another word Pinkie, along with Sunset Shimmer (who was mostly dragged), zoomed around the town, meeting every pony that she knows.

Thus beginning Sunset Shimmer’s new journey on resolving her past in Equestria...

Unnamed Town

Sunset Shimmer began to pant heavily after all the running around Pinkie Pie did dragging her along. “Please Pinkie Pie, don’t ever do that again…” Sunset huffed trying to catch her breath.

Pinkie Pie giggled embarrassed. “Sorry about that. Guess I got carried away again.”

“It’s not a big deal.” Sunset said smiling back at her. “I’m pretty used to it actually…” she smiled thinking about her Canterlot High counterpart Pinkie Pie.

“Hey, since we pretty much met everypony, can I ask you something?”

“Of course Pinkie. What is it?”

“How come you were trying to avoid us?”

Sunset’s face immediately changed from happy to some what embarrassed. “How did you know I was…?”

“My Pinkie sense silly!” Pinkie beamed. “I knew you were here the minute you came!”

Sunset looked down and sighed. “I guess I was just afraid at first… The night you first saw me, I didn’t exactly give off the best first impression.”

“The night we first saw you? Oooohhh! You mean the night you tried to steal Twilight’s element of harmony and use it for yourself for your own personal needs and trying to--”

“Yes, that!” Sunset snapped not wanting to hear the whole thing again. “I was afraid that you would still have mixed thoughts about seeing me again after that…” Right after that, sunset could feel the embrace again from Pinkie Pie. “Huh?”

“Don’t worry about it silly!” Pinkie smiled letting go. “It was the old you right? I don’t have any reason to be mad at you, and I’m sure the others won’t be mad either!”

“I just hope you’re right…” Sunset sighed as they got close to the castle entrance.

“Just trust me, okay?” Pinkie winked opening the door, leading the way inside.

“Gosh…” Sunset said looking around the castle. “Twilight mentioned to us that she had her own castle now, but I didn’t think it would be so breathtaking... “

“Yeah, it’s really big and shiny too!” Pinkie said smiling at her own reflection. She stopped and continued on her way to the main room where everypony else was. Sunset Shimmer just followed close behind her. “And this is the room where me and my friends go a lot!” she said standing in front of the big door. “Wait right here!” She smiled and quickly went inside seeing everyone getting ready to leave. “Oh, we’re gonna leave soon?”

“We’re leaving right now.” Twilight answered. “Were you able to meet the new pony?”

“Yup!” Pinkie beamed. “She’s a unicorn!”

“Oh, well where is she staying?”

“Here in the castle!” Pinkie smiled again.

The others just looked at eachother a little confused. Sunset Shimmer, who was behind the door listening, was a little confused as well. “Pinkie Pie, you didn’t tell me that…” Sunset said to herself.

“Where is this new unicorn?” Rarity asked. “Where is she from?”

“From Canterlot.” Pinkie answered. “She even had the same teacher as Twilight!”

“Princess Celestia was her teacher…? But…” Twilight stopped to think for a moment.

“You can come in now!” Pinkie exclaimed catching Sunset off guard.

The room was deathly quiet. Not a single sound was heard except the loud creaking sound of the door slowly opening with magic. When the door opened, everypony in the room was at a loss for words. They knew who she was but at the same time, they still couldn’t believe it. “Um…” Sunset was the first to say something. “It’s good to see all of you?” she said smiling sheepishly.

“Sunset Shimmer…” Twilight finally said stepping forward. “Is that really you??”

“Yeah it’s me…” Sunset answered rubbing the back of her head.

“What are you doing here? I thought you were going to stay in that other world.”

“Well, to be honest Twilight… I can’t stay there anymore as long as I still have a guilty conscience. I know I fixed everything with my friends there, but Equestria is my real home. Plus, I have to make up for the wrongs I did here as well.”

Rainbow Dash crossed her hooves with a skeptical look on her face. “This is a little weird…” she said keeping her hooves crossed.

“Why exactly did you come now of all times?” Applejack asked stepping forward as well.

“Well… after Twilight helped us in Canterlot High with the Sirens, I felt like I had done everything to earn their friendship.” Sunset answered looking back at Twilight. “And now I want to help out here any way that I can.”

“Well…” Twilight thought to herself. “We were about to head out to a new town because we believe there may be some sort of trouble.” She said pointing at the map at the spot where the six cutie marks were floating. “We don’t exactly know why it’s there, but we’re going to find out.”

“New town…? Do you mind if I come as well to help investigate?” Sunset asked.

“I don’t see why not.” Twilight smiled. “Besides, it’s good seeing you here again.” She turned to her five friends. “What do you girls think?”

“I say yes!” Pinkie exclaimed hugging Sunset again.

“If she’s your friend, I suppose it’s worth giving her a chance.” Rarity said smiling.

“I don’t mind.” Fluttershy smiled as well.

“Should be nice gettin’ to actually know her.” Applejack said giving Sunset a pat on the back.

“I don’t mind… I guess.” Rainbow said still with a skeptical look on her face. The rest of the girls, excluding Sunset, gave Rainbow a sort of glare.

“It’s settled then, she will be coming with us as well.” Twilight smiled hugging her.

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The seven ponies were almost at their destination. One of them however was staying a little bit behind, not exactly feeling all that comfortable yet. “Sunset Shimmer, what’s the matter?” Twilight asked looking back at Sunset.

“Oh, don’t worry about me.” Sunset fake smiled. “I’m fine back here.”

“Sunset, there really is no need for you to be so nervous… Come walk with us.” Twilight smiled holding her hoof out. Sunset looked at the others first before going next to Twilight. “We’re here.” she stopped and looked down at the town.

Everyone looked at the town curiously. But none of them could really see any problem here. Everypony was smiling, and the only strange thing was their cutie marks. “Um, there doesn’t seem to really be any problem here...” Sunset said.

“Great… another boring adventure.” Rainbow huffed. “Why the hay would the map send us here then?”

“I don’t like it!” Pinkie said with a serious look on her face. “I don’t like it one bit! I know smiles, and those smiles are just not right.”

“Forget the smiles. Look at the cutie marks!” Twilight pointed out, noticing that everypony indeed had the exact same cutie mark being an equal sign.

“Okay… that’s weird.” Rainbow said having the same expression.

“An entire village with the same cutie mark…?” Sunset said. “How is that even possible?”

“I bet there’s some sort of horrific monster behind it.” Rainbow said.

“What makes you say that?” Twilight asked.

“Because fighting a horrific monster would be super awesome!” Rainbow said while Sunset facehoofed.

“I reckon we just head into town and talk to some locals.” Applejack said turning to Twilight. “Find out what’s goin’ on.”

“Great idea AJ!” Rainbow exclaimed. “Let’s go!” without another second of hesitation, she zoomed off.

Pinkie however did not seem amused at all. “Those smiles are bad news…”

The seven ponies then proceeded to head through the town, passing the creepily smiling ponies. Each one of them all saying “Welcome!” as they passed by.

“This must be the most pleasant place in Equestria.” Fluttershy smiled looking around at the town.

“Welcome!” a dark blue pegasus with a white mane and tail said making Fluttershy giggle.

“Ugh… thanks a lot map…” Rainbow said in annoyance.

“Welcome!” A male unicorn said walking up to the girls. “Pardon my forwardness, but are you an alicorn?”

Twilight just smiled nervously in response as Applejack answered for her. “That there is the Princess of Friendship!”

“Well, you’ve certainly come to the right place for friendship.”

“What brings you to town?” A white earth pony asked walking up to the girls as well.

“We’re not… entirely sure.” Twilight admitted.

“I see.” The white earth pony said. “All are welcome here in our little village. My name is Double Diamond and this is Party Favor.” he said pointing at the male unicorn next to him.

“Howdy Double Diamond. I’m Applejack, and this here’s Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Sunset Shimmer, and Twilight Sparkle.” Applejack said pointing at each of them as she said their names, as Twilight let out another sheepish smile.

“And you all have your own unique cutie marks!” Double Diamond point out while Pinkie tried to cover hers.

“If you don’t mind, has there been any sort of trouble here lately?” Sunset asked stepping forward.

“Trouble? Why, I don’t think we’ve ever had trouble in our little village.” Double Diamond responded.

“It’s true, you’ll see.” Party Favor added.

“Perhaps you care to speak to our founder, Starlight Glimmer.”

“I wish that everypony in Equestria were as friendly as these ponies are.” Fluttershy said with a smile.

“I’ve got my eye on them…” Pinkie said glaring at the other ponies in town as they all followed the two new ponies to somepony’s house. “Something's rotten in… whatever the name of this village is that we’re in right now!”

The two ponies both just knocked on the door they were in front of. “Starlight? We have some new visitors.” Double Diamond said walking inside letting the girls follow.

"Get ready." Rainbow whispered. "We don't know what could come out that door!" She said as all the girls turned their attention back to the door.

"Welcome!" A pinkish unicorn with purple hair said smiling.

"Ugh..." Rainbow Dash groaned.