The Equestrian War

by Rarity Is Mah Favorite

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Tragedy
Length: 1713

The ponies get into a war, lead by Applejack. Shining Gold and Whisp Shadow are secretly dating. Many problems come at the Dangerous Duo. Can they survive the war?

Shining Gold and Whisp Shadow are in love, but a war is keeping them apart. When the Shadow ponies kill Shining Gold, Whisp decides to save him. Will it go smoothly afterwards?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-04-22 04:20:02 UTC

The sadness

"What was that, Applejack?" Sunset asked, fear lingering in her eyes.

"Ah don't know, Sunset."

"Let's investigate!" Twilight yelled, clearly happy.

All of the troops on the colors side marched to where it was. A shining gold coat. Beautiful silver eyes. A ruby colored mane. One wing was on the body, the other was near the the stallion's lifeless body.

"Whyyyyyyyyy!" Fluttershy's wail was loud.

"Shh. It's going to be okay Darling. Just shh." Rarity walked away with a sobbing yellow Pegasus.

"Shining Gold?" Whisp whispered.

Whisp was laying next to him, her translucent body was covered in his blood.

"Yes?" He managed to get out.

"I love you." Whisp kissed his forehead.

"I love you too Whisp." He kissed her forehead.

"Goodbye." He reached out his hoove to touch Whisp, upon saying his last words.

His hoove dropped. He was now pronounced dead.

"You Did This!" Applejack stormed over to where Whisp was sitting.

"You planned this! You told your papa ta shoot him! You knew he was naive! Ah'm......."

Whisp broke down. She was crying, her tears landing the body.

"Can't you see? I loved him! I tried to keep it secret from my dad so he wouldn't kill him, or worse me! Treason. A stallion my age who is a douchebag wanted to wed me, but I guess he found out and told my dad. I loved him, and he loved me back. All we wanted was for this war to be over so we could be married and have a happy life. His wish was never fulfilled, which pains my heart. Do you know how that feels! Well, it feels absolutely awful!" Whisp began to cry again after saying that.

"I'm sorry. I know how that feels." Twilight went back to her tent.

"Ah'm sorry. C'mon troop!" Applejack waved her hoove and left, leaving Whisp with the body, alone.

"I'm so sorry." Whisp then flew back to her building.

The Douchebag

Whisp ran to her father.

"Why!" Whisp yelled.

"He was a color. Colors are unintelligent. Heck, he didn't remember your name!"

"You don't know what the fuck you are talking about. He remembered my Fucking name, he remembered my fucking middle name, he remembered my fucking birthday, and he loved me! Out of any mare at all, he chose me!" Whisp was getting eyes of fire. Literally.

"Hey Whisp." As Whisp would say, and I quote "that douchebag son of a bitch" trotted into the room.

"Fuck off, douche." Whisp muttered.

"Ahem." Her father gave her a "don't cuss that much" look.

"You smell like a douc...." Whisp's father cut her off.

"The Douche has a name, which is Troy." He looked at Whisp with a devilish grin.

"FUCK THIS SHIT, I'M OUT!" Whisp yelled, spread her wings and flew.

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Whisp went to the color's medicine woman, Zecora. Whisp was now accepted to come over whenever she pleased, due to Applejack knowing what Shining Gold wanted.

"Hello, My Dear Shadow, I am very pleased, have come to revived your loved deceased?" Zecora grabbed a potion and handed it to Whisp.

"What is it?" Whisp studied the black potion. Zecora explained that she would be able to see him and revive him, but if she didn't do it within two hours, she would never see him alive again. Whisp drank the potion. She felt woozy, then fell down.

The most Fucked up chapter yet

"Whisp?"

"Huh?"

"I said are you Whisp?" Shining Gold was standing infront of the shadow mare.

"Yeah, I am. How are you Shining Gold?" Whisp looked up and met the gaze of Shining Gold.

Whisp got up and explained that she wasn't dead, she was just put in here by a potion. She said that she had only two hours to revive Shining. Shining said that he was happy he saw her again. Whisp told him what would happen if she didn't. Then, a random anus appeared.

"What the actual fuck." Shining said, looking at the random anus.

"I'm gonna be sick! And shadow ponies can't get sick." Whisp grabbed him and flew over the random anus.

Sick and disturbed, Shining trotted on.

"Fuck her right in the pussy!" A random voice said.

"George!" A woman yelled.

"Nancy!" The voice that said the unspeakable said.

Somehow, an old couple was bickering. Whisp grabbed Shining Gold again, and left quickly. They came to a bunch of mirrors. One half of the mirrors had Whisp washing her privates in the shower. The other had Shining Gold well, masturbating.

"One hour's up! Move it!" Whisp flew over the mirrors, followed by Shining Gold.

"There it is! The end!" Shining slowly descended, landing on a cloud stuffed pillow.

"Tsk, tsk. Not even one kiss, Shining? C'mon, you know you want to." A orange mare with fiery red hair stepped out of a random door.

"Who the fuck are you?" Whisp asked the mare.

"Fireburst."

"Die motherbucker!" The Brony Hero of Equestria came and shot the random mare with a random bazooka.

Whisp happily flew, along with her boyfriend, to the ending.

The Epilogue

Whisp got happily married to Shining Gold, and on October 31st, gave birth to Princess Nova Twinkling Gold. Applejack began to work at the Apple farm again. Twilight wrote a book about her experiences during the war. Rarity made war inspired clothing. Pinkie Pie made a scrapbook with small things from the war. Rainbow Dash went back to racing. Fluttershy then began her own animal shelter, which is not in her cottage. Even after their days, Equestria will always remember those war rebels, by the names of Princess Luna Shadow and Shining Rare Gold.

The lovers

"The shadows are evil, but you are heavenly."

Shining Gold touched the mare in front of him, forgetting she was a shadow pony, and fell. The mare who was a shadow pony, was named Whisp. Her mane was waving like Celestia's, but Whisp's was black and translucent.

"What are ya doin'?" Applejack was running to see what was doing on.

Shining Gold told Whisp to go away. Whisp looked sad, and silently obeyed. She slowly left, saying that she blames her father, the king. Shining Gold started to reply that he blamed Applejack, but she was gone.

"Patrolling the outsides of camp. No shadows yet, Applejack. Oh, and by the way, bring me my meat and corn?"

"Alright, Sugarcube. I like a nice, independent stallion like you. After all, you've been raised by a posh lady. I'll be back, alright?"

"Bye AJ!" Shining Gold said.

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"Fire!"

A shot rang out. The cannons all fired at the same time. Shadows scrambled, Colors rejoiced.

"Fire until you hit that rather colorless pony." King Shadow commanded.

A few shots were fired.

"Ahhhhh!" For the actual first time, Maud had expression within her voice.

"Man errrr..... Pony down!" Rarity yelled from her spot near near Maud's.

Every-pony ran over. Pinkie was in tears. Rarity was laying on a random couch sobbing. Rainbow Dash did a Sonic Rainboom. Applejack was giving her a proper farewell. Shining Gold was helping in the proper farewell. Twilight made a coffin appear and lined it with rare rocks. Fluttershy's gift was Maud's favorite flowers. Whisp then appeared in front of Applejack.

"I am sorry my father did this. I didn't want to do this. I didn't even sho......." Whisp was interrupted by Rainbow Dash.

"Listen here. You did this. You ordered for Maud to die. Get the Fuck out of here! Nobody likes you!" Rainbow yelled.

Whisp looked at Shining sadly. He gave her a, I don't want this but this will protect our beautiful relationship look. Whisp gave him a, I wish this war never happened look. Shining gave her a, Me too look.

"I wanted to give a farewell to your fallen solider. Pinkie, I'm sorry. Rainbow Dash, I like your flying. Twilight, I like your ideas. Rarity, I like your mane. Fluttershy, I like your personality. Sunset, Your cutie mark looks great. Applejack, I like your hard work." Whisp looked at each one, then spread her wings and flew away.

"She's tryin' at us. She's gonna befriend us and then cheat us! Shadows can't be trusted." Applejack had eyes of fire when she spoke.

"I think she was being sincere. Not All shadows are bad." Shining Gold was quiet when he said that.

"WHAT DO YOU KNOW, PRIVATE GOLD?" Applejack yelled.

"Let's hit the hay. Rainbow, it's your watch day." Fluttershy wanted no pony to fight.

That night, a shot rang and hit someone.

The end

Trotting happily, Shining yelled, "Shining Gold, Reporting For Duty!"

Applejack ran over to the stallion, checked where his body was supposed to be, and ran back.

"Who saved yah?" Applejack wanted to hear that he was buried alive, that he was just in a bad condition. Nope. Instead of that, she got this.

"Whisp. Whisp Shadow. My marefriend."

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Meanwhile, Whisp had convinced her father to stop the war. Right now, Whisp was leading the troops because if her father did, they would mistake it as an ambush. Beaming with pride, and happiness upon arrival, she yelled.

"We would like to make peace! My troops have come with their weapons for a proper peace meeting. I hope you accept this. In order for a proper peace treaty meeting all of your troops have to march out here!"

All of the color troops were lead out, with their weapons as well. Whisp handed Applejack a Peace Treaty, already signed by her father. She told Applejack to give a speech before she signed.

"Ah like ta know that we have survived all a this war. It warms mah heart about us finally bein' able ta trust the Shadows. Ah never have thought that we would be signin' a treaty. Ta finally finishin' the war!"

Applejack signed her signature. The shadow ponies walked to Applejack and politely gave her their weapons. Shining then stepped up to Whisp, digging in his vest. Finally, he pulled out a small blue box and got one one knee.

"Whisp Luna Shadow, will you marry me?" He held out the small bow waiting for an answer. Whisp then kissed him on his lips.

"Yes. I definitely will."