Time for the sun to set

by Sparkling Shadow

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure
Length: 946

Sunset shimmer is a mare that has everything she wanted. A great teacher and more! But everything starts to change when a certain purple unicorn shows up.

Sunset Shimmer is proud to be called number one student of Princess Celestia. But when Twilight Sparkle shows up and takes her place, she plans on taking revenge.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-05-04 18:50:02 UTC

Revenge

Few years later.....

"Urg...I've had it with that Celestia! Twilight this and Twilight that! Pfh. What's so special about her anyway?" Sunset growled. She didn't understand what was so inportent about Twilight! She let out a sigh of frustration and decided to go back to her house.

Once she entered her glimmering house, she thought about how much she hated Twilight Sparkle and Princess Celestia. Just the thought of it gave her the shivers. Then she thought about seeking revenge on them, or at least one of them. Then she decided that she wanted revenge, especially on that Celestia.

Sunset thought for a moment. "That's it! The perfect plan.." she exclaimed and let out a evil laugh, before vanishing behind her bedroom door.

A strange new world

"W-where am I?" Celestia asked herself. It felt strange. She was so used to hearing a voice respond to her, but here she felt like loner.

"Why you're in Shadowville of course..." hissed a rather delicate voice

"Hello? Is anypony there?" asked a rather shocked Celestia.

"Well DUH! Why else would I be speaking to you?!" At this point Celestia's heart was beating very fast. It was like the pony hadn't noticed that she wasn't from here.

Finally, the pony scanned Celestia's face, looking at every single detail. The pony looked shocked, her jaw wide open. It took her a few minutes to pull herself back together, but when she did she took a deep breath and spoke solemnly.

"Forgive me your majesty. I'm sorry i didn't notice you sooner. Would you like to stay and have some tea?" asked the pony. Celestia didn't speak, but instead nodding her head slowly before gracefully, walking into the mysterious pony's house.

Paid The Price

In Canterlot Castle

"Okay...now just gotta get out of here alive." Sunset Shimmer panted. There was no doubt, she was stuck. *trotting noises*

Oh god...WHAT DO I DO?! Sunset was sweating, panting, breathing heavily. She knew she was going to get caught.

She glanced over to the window, seeing the guards thrusting their swords at the door. "HEY! OPEN UP!" one of the screamed with anger. Another just simply got the freaking key, and opened the darn door! RUN SUNSET RUN! her mind was racing she didn't know what to do!

But before she could do anything she found herself blinded. Weak. Useless.

A New Plan

*groan* "Urh...where am-" Sunset shimmer paused. Where was she? She looked in front of her, she could see big iron bars surrounding her, and right behind them was standing a rather upset purple unicorn, looking at Sunset.

"Twilight?" Sunset was surprised was she in jail? Twilight didn't say anything but instead walking away slowly. "What did I do?" asked Sunset, her eyes welling up with both anger and sadness.

She decided to make a new plan to destroy the pony who did this to her. But of course, it was not going to be easy. She passed out just before she saw the guy/girl. She sighed heavily, why was her fate like this. She didn't know.

Replaced

It was a beautiful evening in the city of Canterlot. Everything was peaceful and calm.... but in the Castle things weren't going so well.

"Why can't I still be your personal favourite student anymore?" Screamed a slightly golden yellow coated mare.

"Why can't you? Because this student has far more talent than you Sunset Shimmer!" argued back a white coated alicorn. "And look at her cutie mark it's amazing!"

Sunset didn't like the feeling that she wasn't getting as much of the praise on how she got her cutie mark. "So your saying you don't care about...about me getting my cutie mark?" Sunset questioned a bit sadly.

"No but-" Princess Celestia was cut of by a huge growl.

"OH....I GET IT NOW....YOU WANT TO REPLACE ME. BECAUSE um.." Sunset paused for a moment before continuing."YOU LOVE PURPLE!"

"Sunset..that's really random..." exclaimed Celestia

"I don't care! Now if you excuse me, I'm going now!" She growled and stomped away with her head held high. The princess just sighed and continued with her daily work.

Attack at Canterlot

She got all the things she needed for her quite violent plan. "Oh the fun I have planned Celestia" she whispered to herself, while chuckling in the most evil way. But besides all the fun she was having she realised that she had to get to canterlot by noon, so the princess could be there to witness the shocking surprise.

At Canterlot.....

"Bye Princess Celestia, I'll write as often as I can!" Shouted Twilight Sparkle as she took off in the shining carriage. Princess Celestia simply waved back like a normal princess would do, before turning around to enter the entrance of the thrown-room. As she made her way in she felt like she was being watched..followed...both. She felt slightly frightened, her hooves started to tremble, crack she twisted around, her heart racing.

Oh thank goodness, it's just a twig. Wait how did a twig get in here? she thought to herself, a bit confused and concerned. She felt even more frightened! But slowly turned her head away. She walked up the stairs to her throne, reading past letters of her past students.  She suddenly fell asleep. But little did she notice that she was being tied up and being dragged into a magical portal that lead to an unknown world of horrible and nasty pony's. "Goodbye Celestia!" Sunset screamed, and threw the princess through the portal.

Few hours later

"Urg... I certainly set for quite a long tim-" Celestia stopped, to take in her surroundings before letting out a big HELPPPPPP!!!