enter the forest

by snowie525

Rating: teen
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Random, Adventure
Length: 1207

set off on a journey through the neverending firest of equinox

the point of the story is you as yourself is walking through the neverending forest of equinox. in this place, twisted and disgusting things owait your arival and hope for your death to come. you have been sent on a mission to meet someone in the heart of the forest. now go. be on your way!

Published 2012-05-15 05:34:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-15 05:34:01 UTC

chapter 02: the big escape

chapter 02: the big escape

You open your eyes from a long nights rest to find yourself in a new cage. But this time, the cage has fire underneath it raising the heat of the bars rapidly. You know that if you don’t escape now then you will burn to death. You look around for a way out when you hear shouting and screaming coming from the door ahead of you. The doors swing open and to your amazement, you see jack running into the room followed by the so called “zalgy cake”. Jack runs and jumps on top of the cage you are in without even knowing you’re in there. “You’ll never get out of here alive” zalgy cake whispers in a creepy tone. As zalgy cake walks out of the room she pulls on a leaver raising the temperature of the fire.

After zalgy cake leaves, jack jumps off the cage and goes to walk out when you shout out “wait!” jack turns to see you in the cage. He has a confused look in his eyes as if he didn’t know you. “Who are you?” jack asks as he tilts his head. He goes to the leaver and holds onto it. “I will ask you again, who are you?” his eyes are filled with both confusion and anger. “It’s me your best friend. Don’t you remember me?” you answer. Jack lowers the leaver extinguishing the flame and opened the cage. You want to ask him what just happened but you are too afraid to. “Sorry for that. They did something to me. I don’t remember anything! But when you said your my best friend, something just snapped in my head and I remembered.” jack says.

After what happened in the cage before you know you have to escape. This realm looks the exact same as the other one but that does not help because you don’t know your way around. “I know where to go! Follow me!” jack shouts from down the hall. You follow jack not knowing where you are going.

Jack leads you out to an old house now destroyed by weeds and vines. “Where are we going?” you ask jack as you enter the house. Jack replies “you will see soon enough.” You run through the kitchen, into the hallway, up the stairs, past 2 rooms and then up into the attic. “There is nothing in here apart from dusty books” you say. Jack turns around and looks at you. His eyes are black and hollow as if he has no sole. His hollowed out eyes start dripping with blood and his whole body is now covered in cuts and scars. He then grows 2 giant tattered wings out his side and transforms into a giant beast.

still in progress.

chapter 01: the beggining

chapter 01: the beginning

The story begins with you, a happy young pony ready for fun and ready for adventure. You have just arrived in PonyVille when you get a unhappy welcome. The twisted versions of the main 6 have come and taken people back to equinox. One of the people being you. You tried to hide but it was no use. The destruction and fire forced you to exit your new home and run into the open. The last thing you see is the nice calm open fields just off the coast of PonyVille. After that view, everything went dark.

You wake up in a prison cell surrounded by other cells with other ponies in them. One of them being your best friend jack. "What happened" you ask as you sit down on the cold hard chair. "These scary monsters came and grabbed people and took them back here" jack replies. "We are not monsters" a voice says in the distance. As the voice gets closer and closer to the cell where you and jack are, it begins to laugh. Exiting out from the mist is a pony dripping with blood. "Who are you?" jack asks as he shivers with fear. "Im Zalgy Cake. And i'm your worst fear come to life."
You close your eyes hoping for the deathly figure to disappear. As you close them, you hear a scream so loud it nearly pops your eardrum. As you open your eyes your friend is gone. You don't want to make any noise just in case the scary thing known as "Zalgy Cake" comes back.

You have spent what seems like days in the cold and wet cell. Every time you fall asleep, someone must come and put food in your cage because you have yet another pile of muck on the floor in your cell. It feels as though someone is keeping you as a pet.

Every day that you spend down in the dark cells, someone from another cell goes missing. Now it is just you and a shy pony that has not said anything for days. You try to get her to at least say her name but to no avail. The light coming through the dusty old windows are starting to dim and the light shining on the ground is fading away. As the light dims, you close your eyes in hope that you will not be next to disappear.

(still in progress)

chapter 03: friend or foe?

chapter3: friend or foe?

The scary beast known as jack stood 3 times your high and was ready for battle. “Why jack?” you ask. “Jack is gone. I am the beast that has taken his body as my own!” the beast replies. Its mouth isn’t moving. Instead it is talking to you through your thoughts. “I know exactly what you’re going to do, and it won’t work! I already ruined your plan to run out the door. The door has been locked shut.” It was right. The door has been locked shut! “Now I shall take your body! Like I did with your friend!” the beast bends down and grabs you with his big spikey hand. It is crushing you with his giant hand and you hear a loud popping sound. Your bone has penetrated the skin and you are losing blood fast. As well as being crushed, you are in intense pain from the broken bone.

The door smashes open and a unicorn comes in. the beast lets you go and instantly goes for the unicorn. The unicorn uses intense magic powers and pushes the beast through the roof of the house and across the wreckage. You blackout.

You wake up several hours later with the same unicorn staring at you. You get up and look at your leg. Your leg is not broken anymore. “Are you all right?” asks the unicorn. “Yes I’m fine. Who are you?” you ask. “I’m twilight sparkle.” she replies. She has no look of evil to her so you decide to trust her for now. “There is a forest to the north from here. If we can get through there, I can perform an old magic power allowing us to get back home” she says.

After a little while of walking and running, you finally make in to the forest entrance but something is guarding the entrance.