Night Fall - Conclusion

by Yosh-E-O

Rating: everyone
Tags: Tragedy, Random, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Sad, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other
Length: 5487

Pint and Bucky discover what Fall's life is really like inside the orphanage by arranging a sleepover they'll never forget

Pint and Bucky, determined to spend more time with their orphaned friend, Fall, devise a plan to infiltrate the orphanage to bring the magic of friendship to her.

Upon executing their plan, Pint and Bucky quickly find themselves immersed in a world far from what they've become accustomed to.

What will become of Bucky and Pint? Will they be able to help Fall in coping with what she has sadly grown so accustomed to?

This is the 4th story in the "Fall the Orphan" saga. All characters and concepts belong to Ari Angelcub. You can learn more about her and her characters by visiting http://ari-angelcub.tumblr.com/.

Published 2015-04-24 14:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-04-24 14:10:02 UTC

Chapter 7 - A Culture of Control

Pint distanced himself from the misbehaving preschoolers. He couldn’t believe the stallion wasn’t saying, or doing, anything. He just kept reading his newspaper while occasionally telling the children to behave without so much of a glance.

“Perhaps,” thought Pint as he crept closer to the stairs. “Nobody would notice if I…”

CLICK-CLOP

CLICK-CLOP, CLICK-CLOP

The spotted Unicorn was taken from his thoughts as a sky-blue mare with a white and grey mane came up the stairs. Behind her was Bucky and Fall.

“Whoa,” said Pint upon noticing how Bucky appeared as if he had just gotten into a fight. His amber-colored mane was sticking up in places and looked as if it had been run through a mud puddle. The same went for his tail and yellow coat. Bucky also appeared to have a limp as he mindlessly followed after Fall, who didn’t look much better than Bucky.

“Keep moving!” snapped the sky-blue mare.

Bucky and Fall both replied, “Yes, Ms. Powder Puff” in a tone that was more out of defeat than respect.

“I’ve got to follow them,” stated Pint as he crept ever closer to Bucky’s behind. His Pegasus friend didn’t notice him approach. But neither did the newspaper stallion or Ms. Powder Puff.

***

Upon reaching the third floor, Ms. Powder Puff shouted at a volunteer to head down to the second floor and get the kids to bed. The volunteer complied while the older children grew eerily quiet.

“Okay, scamps!” she called out. “Lights out in ten minutes! Every pony who needs the bathroom better use it now!”

Some of the older children grew frightened expressions as they darted towards what Pint only could assume was the bathroom.

“There’s the False Foal!” called out a green-colored Pegasus.

“Thanks for doing the dishes, again!” shouted a purple Unicorn.

Fall said nothing. She was too tired and too used to these sort of remarks.

“Who’s up for a dogpile?” asked a colt with a white mane before charging towards Fall.

Fall gasped as she knew what was coming. The black colt with the white mane was going to leap and put all his weight on her as those who wanted to participate would do the same. Fear showed in her eyes as she could already feel the pain that was about to come.

“NO!” cried Bucky as he stepped in front of Fall.

BOOF!

“Ow!” the colt cried as he slammed into Bucky, fell to the floor, and found a herd of fillies and colts soon tripping and falling on top of him.

Bucky grimaced from the pain of the impact. His knees buckling as pain shot through his body from a combination of the impact and all the intense labor he had just completed with Fall.

“Run…” he groaned.

Fall was frozen in place. Her mind and body convinced she was going to be hurt immensely at any second.

Pint, seeing Fall standing there and shaking with fear, dashed towards the quaking, pigtailed Pegasus.

“Come on, Fall!” he called while grabbing her hoof. His eyes quickly looking for a place to escape to. He then spotted an open door and pulled Fall towards it as he exclaimed, “This way!”

“Pint?” asked Bucky upon noticing his Unicorn friend leading Fall towards an open door.

“You,” growled the black colt. “You’ll pay for that!”

Ms. Powder Puff finally took notice of what was going on.

“You two!” she shouted. She then recognized that the one she was shouting at was Bucky and stated, “You can’t keep out of trouble, can you, chubby?”

“What?” asked Bucky.

“Garbage duty for you tomorrow!” she boomed.

The black colt grinned at hearing Bucky’s punishment.

“And you!” snapped Ms. Powder Puff. “You’ll be doing it with him, Moonside!”

“But…” Moonside tried to say.

“But nothing!” snapped Ms. Powder Puff. “Now you and chubby better take this opportunity to use the bathroom like the rest of you urchins before lights out!”

The green Pegasus walked alongside Moonside towards the bathroom. Both with their heads down.

Bucky, wanting nothing to do with the two troublemakers, tried to make his way to where he saw Pint take Fall. But he was stopped before he could by Ms. Powder Puff.

“We have a rule here,” she said. “No accidents.”

Bucky watched as Ms. Powder Puff pointed towards the bathroom.

“Get it out of you, wash your hooves, and wait here like the rest of you little ingrates.”

Bucky watched as two fillies exited the bathroom. Both had noticeable frowns on their faces. He then sighed and obeyed Ms. Powder Puff’s command.

Author's Note

This is the conclusion of "Night Fall". Some details have changed since the inception of the story so please don't mind any slight variances between what the characters know and don't know. Particularly on Pint's part.

The characters are continually getting updates to improve upon the telling of their story. Though these are minor changes in which do not impact the story's whole. We hope you enjoy it.

Chapter 8 - Revelations at Sunset

“I think we’re safe,” stated Pint upon entering the room with Fall.

Fall was still shaking with fear. Her muscles were tight and her eyes closed. Her underdeveloped wings couldn’t even be seen for she had them pulled so tightly against her trembling body.

“Fall,” said Pint. “It’s okay. You’re safe now.”

Fall continued to quiver as she slowly opened her blue eyes.

“Sa, sa, safe…?” she asked.

“Yes,” assured Pint. “Bucky blocked the bullies so I could get you in here.”

Fall’s eyes fully opened as she took in how she was now in the bunk room.

“Buh, Bucky…?” she asked.

“Yes,” said Pint. “We’re friends.”

“Fa… Friends…?” asked Fall. Her body had now stopped shaking as she allowed her tiny wings to unfold.

“Yes,” confirmed Pint. “Bucky and I are your friends.”

Fall stared towards a window on the far side of the bunk room. She then darted towards it without saying a word.

***

Pint took notice of all the bunks in the room. They all had the same bedsheet, comforter, and worn out pillow. There were little stands by each bed in which he only could assume were places for the children to keep their material possessions.

“Wow…,” he awed upon noticing how little each of the colts and fillies in the room had.

***

Upon reaching where Fall had darted towards, he noticed that it was a bunk unlike all the others. It had a stand for personal items, but none appeared to be placed on it. The pillow and blanket missing from the bed and clumped up along the windowsill with Fall laying atop of it and staring outward.

“Fall?” he asked.

The small, brown Pegasus gingerly used her hoof to open the window’s lock and opened it ever so slightly.

Pint jumped up on the bed, which felt and sounded like an old see-saw at the park, and sat alongside Fall.

“I…,” said Fall meekly. “The sunset.”

Pint looked out the window and admired how the sun was about to set over the horizon. The sky bright with various hues of red, orange, and purple as the moon prepared to rise up from the horizon from where the sun was setting.

Fall took in a deep breath and sighed.

“The air,” she said without facing Pint. “It’s nice.”

Pint took notice of how thin and scratchy the blankets he was lying on were. He also thought he could see a pillow under Fall, but it seemed too smooshed to be an actual pillow.

A breeze blew in that gently teased at Fall’s pigtails as she asked, “Will I… Will I ever be free?”

Pint moved in closer and put a hoof over Fall.

“Yes,” he said. “Bucky and I will get you out of here. I promise.”

“Where will I go?” she asked while keeping her eyes focused on the sun in which had now set.

Pint didn’t know how to answer. So he decided to position himself over Fall’s back so that he could comfort her.

“Do you know why they don’t like me?” she asked.

Pint was again speechless.

“It’s because I’m a False Foal,” she said.

“A False Foal?” he asked.

“Yes,” she sighed. “I keep the fillies and colts who are my age from getting adopted.”

“That…,” said Pint. “That doesn’t make sense.”

The stars began to appear in the darkening sky as Fall answered, “It’s what they say. It’s what’s true. It’s why I am punished.”

“No,” assured Pint as he held Fall tighter. “That’s not true.”

“A foal like you wouldn’t understand,” stated Fall.

“A ‘foal’ like me?” asked Pint. “I’m not a foal.”

Fall said nothing. Her eyes fixated on the first stars of the night. It was as if she were calling out to Princess Luna for help.

“I’m going to be seven in a few weeks,” stated Pint. “I’m definitely no foal.”

Fall gasped as she turned to face the brown-spotted Unicorn.

“You…?” she inquired. “You’re almost seven years old?”

“That’s right!” Pint stated proudly.

Fall gestured for Pint to get off of her. She then eyed him from head-to-toe.

“So…,” she struggled to say, “You’re… Like… Me?”

“Huh?” asked Pint.

“A False Foal,” she said.

“What?” wondered Pint.

“I’m…,” she stammered. “I’m…”

“What?” asked Pint.

“I’m…,” gulped Fall. “I’m seven years old, too.”

Pint’s jaw dropped upon hearing Fall state this.

“You,” he said. “You’re older than me?”

Fall nodded slowly.

Pint was surprised at what he was hearing. There was a part of him that couldn’t believe that Fall was older than both he and Bucky. But there was another part of him that felt a sense of relief in knowing this as it meant he wasn’t the only one who was accidentally believed to be a foal due to his small size.

“LIGHTS OUT!” cried a mare’s voice from outside of the room.

Fall gasped with panic.

“Quick,” she said while closing the window. “Hide.”

Pint took notice of the blanket and comforter they were sitting on. So he hid himself under both while Fall took the pillow, slipped it under her head, and slid herself into the blankets to give the illusion she was already ready for lights out.

“I hope this works,” thought Pint as he heard the sound of many hooves trotting into the room.

Author's Note

This is the conclusion of "Night Fall". Some details have changed since the inception of the story so please don't mind any slight variances between what the characters know and don't know. Particularly on Pint's part.

The characters are continually getting updates to improve upon the telling of their story. Though these are minor changes in which do not impact the story's whole. We hope you enjoy it.

Chapter 9 - Lights Out

The lights out process reminded Pint of what it was like to be sent to bed for doing something his parents were really unhappy with him about. All he heard was a mare snapping commands and the occasional insult to the fillies and colts. Most of which she either didn’t know by name, because there was a lot of ‘Filly with the red mane!’ and ‘Tree colt!’.

“Hey, you!” she shouted after what seemed like all the other fillies and colts were in bed. “Chubby new colt! We’re out of space so go find yourself a spot on the floor!”

“The floor?” wondered Pint from beneath Fall’s sheets.

“Where are the blankets and pillows?” asked Bucky.

“Bucky?” gasped Pint softly from within his warm hiding space alongside Fall’s torso. His muzzle was right at her shoulder level beneath the sheets. It felt a bit awkward but Fall wasn’t moving and he was too scared to be spotted by whomever was being so mean to all the children.

“Any of you squirts want to give chubby here a pillow or blanket?” the mare asked.

There wasn’t a word spoken.

“Tough luck, chubby,” she said. “Now go lie down somewhere.”

Bucky sighed as he tried to find a space to curl up in.

“Wait,” said Fall.

“What is it, Fall?” the mare snapped.

“He…,” she said while throwing the very worn out pillow she was resting on to floor. “He can have my pillow.”

“Lucky you, chubby,” stated the mare with the white-and-grey mane. “Now go lie down before I give you another day of garbage duty!”

Bucky made his way alongside Fall’s bed, laid himself upon the hard, dirty carpet, and placed his head on the pillow that barely provided any comfort from the floor itself.

“Lights out!” the mare cried as she shut the door, locked it, and then shut another door and locked it before closing one more door, locking it, and making her way up to what could only be the fourth floor of the orphanage.

***

Some time passed and neither Bucky nor Pint could get to sleep. The floor felt like it had little spikes in it that continually poked into Bucky’s fur and Pint had to use the little colt’s room.

“Bucky?” whispered Pint as he poked his head outside of the blankets. “Are you awake?”

Bucky rolled over to look up towards Pint.

“Yes,” he moaned softly.

“I…,” said Pint. “I need the restroom.”

“I don’t think we can get out,” stated Bucky. “Ms. Powder Puff locked the door.

“What?” gasped Pint. “But I can’t hold it any longer.”

CA-CLIP

CA-CLOP

Bucky and Piint’s discussion was interrupted by the sound of hooves softly moving towards what seemed to be the bunk room door.

“Ready?” asked a colt.

“Ready,” replied another Colt.

FLICK-TICK

TICK-TICK

CLICK

“Got it,” stated the first colt. “Now it’s your turn.”

FA-SHEW

“Remember,” said the second colt. “Quietly.”

Bucky and Pint could only make out shadows. But they were all by what had to be the bunk room door doing something.

“Good job,” said the first colt as he appeared to step out of the bunk room. “Now let’s do this.”

Bucky and Pint watched as at least four shadows made their way out of the bunk room.

Fall was still fast asleep as Pint slid himself down alongside Bucky.

“Let’s follow them,” he said.

Bucky nodded as he slowly trotted towards the opened door.

Author's Note

This is the conclusion of "Night Fall". Some details have changed since the inception of the story so please don't mind any slight variances between what the characters know and don't know. Particularly on Pint's part.

The characters are continually getting updates to improve upon the telling of their story. Though these are minor changes in which do not impact the story's whole. We hope you enjoy it.

Chapter 10 - Friends in the Dark

Moonlight shined through the open windows in the common room. This dim light was just enough to make out how the colt, Moonside, was doing something with another locked door.

“Rawhide,” a filly whispered intently. “We have company.”

The red mane of Rawhide became visible as he approached Pint and Bucky.

“Beat it,” he hissed. “You’ll ruin everything.”

“What?” Pint asked softly.

“Got it,” stated Moonside. “Now don’t mess up, Silent Shadow.”

FWISP

Bucky and Pint watched as the doorknob became covered in a grey lightand turned.

“Now it’s your turn, Spittles,” said Moonside.

THWUP

THWUP

“There’s got to be more to my special talent than making spit wads,” stated Spittles.

Rawhide sneered towards Bucky as he said, “You’re lucky, chubby. If we didn’t have to be so quiet about this I’d pound you into a pancake for getting my friend in trouble.”

“Your friend,” replied Bucky. “Was about to hurt my friend.”

“Fall?” asked Rawhide. “She’s your friend?”

“And she’s mine, too,” added Pint with a tense look on his face.

“Shh,” hissed Moonside. “Do you want to get caught?”

Rawhide turned, stuck his rump in the air towards Pint and Bucky, and approached the door in which opened both slowly and quietly thanks to Spittles’ effort to ‘grease’ the hinges as Silent Shadow used her Unicorn power to carefully open the door.

“Okay,” said Moonside. “We’re in. I’ll stand guard while Rawhide, Spittles, and Silent Shadow use the restroom.”

“Don’t forget me,” said another colt who appeared from under a pile of blankets.

“Right,” said Moonside. “Silent Shadow. Use your magic to place the blankets along the floor so that our hoof steps go unnoticed.

“You’d all be nothing without me,” stated Silent Shadow as she levitated the blankets and placed them in such a way that lead to the sinks and the stalls.

“And you wouldn’t be outside without my ability to pick locks,” stated Moonside. “Now get in there and use your magic to light up the room for Spittles and Rawhide. Then use that spell you figured out so they can wash up without anyone hearing the water pouring.”

Pint and Bucky were in disbelief of what they were witnessing. Up until this point all the colts and fillies seemed so mean and single minded. But, right now, they were working as a team without any sign of dislike towards each other.

“Can I go in, too?” asked Pint as he approached Moonside.

“Shouldn’t you be in a diaper down on the first floor with the other foals?” snapped the colt with the black coat and white mane.

“I’ll have you know,” growled Pint. “That I’ll be seven in just-”

“-Fine,” stated Moonside as he put his hoof to his lips. “Just wait for Rawhide or Spittles to get out first.”

Spittles exited the bathroom. He smelled a lot better and trotted proudly back into the bunk room.

“Follow the path,” stated Moonside. “Do your business and do exactly as Silent Shadow tells you.”

Pint complied as Bucky approached Moonside.

“You,” scowled Moonside.

“Me,” replied Bucky.

Moonside glared towards Bucky and stated, “You got me in trouble.”

“You got yourself in trouble,” stated Bucky.

Rawhide exited as Bucky and Moonside shared words.

“You want me to give him the once over?” the green Pegasus asked.

“Not now,” stated Moonside.

“Tomorrow, then?” asked Rawhide with an evil grin.

“Yeah,” replied Moonside. “Now get back to bed.”

Bucky and Moonside were equally matched in size with the exception that Bucky was far more muscular from all the walking and outdoor play he did with Pint.

“What’s your problem?” asked Bucky.

“You,” stated Moonside. “You and that False Foal you brought with you and how you defend that miserable twerp, Fall.”

Bucky extended his wings, allowed his body to show its full size, and glared at Moonside and snarled, “There’s never an excuse for bullying.”

“Quiet down,” stated Moonside. “You’ll get us all-“

“-What?” asked Bucky as he raised his tone. “What you deserve for being cruel to an innocent filly?”

Moonside knew he was backed into a corner. Bucky was bearing down on him and he firmly believed the yellow Pegasus when he threatened to ruin what he and his team of companions had worked so hard to achieve.

“Fine,” he said. “Just calm down.”

Bucky lowered his wings, relaxed his muscles, and faced Moonside.

“You and all the others owe Fall a big apology,” he stated.

“For what?” asked Moonside. “She ruins everything.”

Bucky raised his hoof in preparation to stomp it fiercely down upon the floor.

“Wait,” gasped Moonside. “Don’t do that,”

“Then you better promise me you’ll all apologize to Fall and start treating her better.”

“But…,” groaned Moonside.

Bucky positioned his body so that his back was facing the wall. He then prepared to smash his back hooves as hard as he could against the wall.

“Okay,” said Moonside. “Just don’t do that.”

“And what are you going to do?” asked Bucky as he remained in his bucking position.

“Apologize to Fall,” said Moonside.

“And for what?” persisted Bucky.

“For…,” he stammered. “Being so mean.”

Bucky returned to his standard posture as Pint walked out with the biggest smile he probably ever had in his life across his face.

“Silent Shadow is amazing,” he said. “She even said she’d-“

Pint noticed how tensely Bucky and Moonside were facing each other.

“What’s going on?” he asked.

“Moonside and I were just waiting our turn to use the bathroom,” replied Bucky. “Weren’t we?”

Moonside wasn’t taking any chances. Bucky had already gotten him garbage duty and the yellow Pegasus was definitely not intimidated by him like the other fillies and colts were.

“Yeah,” he said. “That’s it.”

Pint made his way back to Fall’s bed as Bucky, Moonside, and Silent Shadow finished cleaning up after their nocturnal activities.

“And remember,” said Bucky as he looked Moonside straight in the eyes. “I’m not afraid to do anything if you ever try to bully Fall, or any other kid, in this place. Got it?”

Moonside gulped upon being put in his place for the first time in his life.

“Got it,” he replied with the most sincerity he had all evening.

As Spittles, Bucky, Silent Shadow, the unnoticed colt with the blankets, and Rawhide all returned to their resting positions, Moonside worked to lock the doors they had opened and returned to bed as well.

Author's Note

This is the conclusion of "Night Fall". Some details have changed since the inception of the story so please don't mind any slight variances between what the characters know and don't know. Particularly on Pint's part.

The characters are continually getting updates to improve upon the telling of their story. Though these are minor changes in which do not impact the story's whole. We hope you enjoy it.

Chapter 11 - A New Dawn

Pint was woke abruptly by a very cold breeze blowing against his coat.

“Wha…?” he asked as he attempted to gather his bearings.

“Pint,” whispered a voice. “Come here.”

Pint gasped as he realized he wasn’t in his own home. He then thought he was at Bucky’s house before recalling he and Bucky were at the orphanage with Fall.

FWOO

Pint shivered as another gust of mid-autumn wind blew across his coat.

“Pint…?” asked Fall. “Are you okay?”

“Yeah,” whispered Pint as he moved alongside Fall as she laid facing out the window.

“It’s coming,” she said.

“What’s coming?” asked Pint.

A pause ensued until Fall gestured outward and said, “The sun.”

Pint was confused.

“Where?” he asked.

“Isn’t it beautiful?” asked Fall with a smile.

All Pint could see was shades of purple, blue, and orange. The moon was nowhere to be seen and the stars were beginning to fade into the growing light of the sky.

Fall sighed as the growing light brought the barren trees into view along with the browning grass.

“What’s wrong?” asked Pint.

“She’ll be coming soon,” she said.

“Who?” asked Pint. “Who’s coming?”

“…,” Fall sighed. “Ms. Powder Puff.”

The smile that was once on Fall’s face had now turned into a frown. Her head drooped and her tiny wings sagged as she fell into her pillow and blanket nest she had made in front of the window.

Pint didn’t know what to say.

“What’s it like?” asked Fall. “What’s it like to wake up to a family?”

Pint paused before answering. He didn’t want to say anything that might make Fall more sad than what she already was.

“It’s..,” he said. “Nice.”

“Do you ever wish you could sleep forever?” she asked.

Pint was again speechless. Both he and Bucky never liked to sleep. Unless, of course, it was the morning. They did like to sleep in until breakfast was ready. But, even then, there were days they’d be so excited to get into mischief before their parents got up that they’d still get up early.

“No…,” stated Pint. “Why?”

Fall sighed and closed her eyes.

“Because…,” she said sadly. “I love to dream.”

“What do you dream about?” asked Pint.

Fall looked towards Pint and said, “You. You and Bucky. That day we had in the town. The games we played. It all… It all made me so… happy.”

“I’m saving up bits so we can do it again,” stated Pint.

Fall smiled.

“Since meeting you and Bucky,” she said. “I’ve felt something. Something I’ve never felt before.”

“What’s that?” asked Pint.

Fall looked into Bucky’s eyes as she replied, “Hope.”

Pint smiled and put his hoof on Fall.

“I’m glad,” he said. “You make me feel special, too.”

“…,” blinked Fall. “Me?”

“Yes,” said Pint as he pulled Fall in for a hug. “You’ve taught me to appreciate life and how important kindness and generosity really are.”

“Kindness?” asked Fall. “Generosity?”

“They are two parts of what are known as ‘The Elements of Harmony’,” he stated. “I never knew how important they were until I met you.”

Fall looked down at Bucky who was still fast asleep. His head resting on the balled-up, scratchy comforter he had swapped with Pint in exchange for Fall to have her pillow back.

“What about Bucky?” she asked.

Pint chuckled lightly as he stated, “He’d be ‘The Element of Laughter’.”

“Laughter?” asked Fall.

“There are six elements in all,” stated Pint. “Kindness, Laughter, Honesty, Generosity, Laughter, Loyalty, and Magic.”

Fall thought on what Pint was sharing.

“Magic sounds like only something a Unicorn can have,” she stated.

“No way!” announced Pint. “Bucky and I believe every pony has the elements inside them. And they say the ‘Element of Magic’ is one that is created through friendship.”

“Friendship?” she asked.

“Yes,” said Pint. “When Bucky and I met you, I feel you helped us to gain ‘The Element of Magic’ in which only comes through friendship.”

“Friendship…?” asked Fall. “Magic?”

“Exactly,” stated Pint. “Our friendship is magic.”

Fall smiled and gave Pint a very gentle kiss on his muzzle.

“Thank you,” she said as tears welled up in her eyes.

Pint held Fall close as he asked, “For what?”

“For showing me the magic of friendship,” she said.

Author's Note

This is the conclusion of "Night Fall". Some details have changed since the inception of the story so please don't mind any slight variances between what the characters know and don't know. Particularly on Pint's part.

The characters are continually getting updates to improve upon the telling of their story. Though these are minor changes in which do not impact the story's whole. We hope you enjoy it.

Chapter 12 - The Orphan Uprising

BOOM-BOOM-BOOM!

“COCK-A-DOODLE-DO, RUGRATS!” shouted Ms. Powder Puff as she unlocked the door and opened it. “GET YOUR FLANKS OUT OF BED THIS INSTANT!”

“AH!” cried Bucky as he rose to his feet from Ms. Powder Puff’s booming entrance. “What’s going on?”

“I trust you slept well, chubby?” Ms. Powder Puff more stated than asked.

“You…,” Bucky scowled.

“Don’t sass me, boy!” snapped Ms. Powder Puff as she glared towards Bucky.

Bucky didn’t know what had come over him. He just suddenly felt himself snap.

“You’re the poorest excuse for a parent I’ve ever met!” he proclaimed while stomping his hoof to the floor. “You don’t deserve your Cutie Mark!”

All the children watched in awe from their bunks. Nobody had ever stood up to Ms. Powder Puff before.

“That’s enough, chubby!” she exclaimed. “A whole month of garbage and dish duty for you!”

Bucky stomped forward and proclaimed, “Make me!”

Ms. Powder Puff was beside herself.

“You…,” she growled as her teeth grinded within her mouth. “You…,”

The stallion Pint knew from the floor below came trotting in.

“What seems to be the trouble?” he asked.

“You!” stomped Bucky. “You, Ms. Super Butt, and all you other poor excuses for parents!”

“How would you know what a parent is?” the stallion asked with a smirk. “You don’t have one.”

“That’s right, chubby,” added Ms. Powder Puff. “Without us you’d have nothing!” She then looked to all the confused children in their bunks and exclaimed, “You hear that? NOTHING!”

“You’re wrong!” proclaimed Bucky. “They’d have each other! And that’s a lot more than they have with you!”

Fall shivered as she watched Bucky act in a way she had never seen the yellow Pegasus act before.

“I’m scared,” she said as she held close to Pint.

As much as Pint wanted to comfort Fall, he knew he had to be there for his friend. So he got down and stood beside his much taller friend with the amber-colored mane.

“That’s right!” he shouted. “You treat the fillies and colts here like slaves and not as kids!”

“What do you know?” asked Ms. Powder Puff. “You’re a pathetic foal that no pony wanted!”

“Sorry to break it to you,” stated Pint. “But both Bucky and I have parents and know how a true and caring family should be.”

“Oh, really?” asked the stallion. “Then why are you here?”

“To make sure horrible ponies like you don’t get away with what you’ve been doing!” snapped Pint.

Ms. Powder Puff chuckled as she stated, “And how do you plan to do that, you little reject?”

“His name is Pint!” snapped the yellow Pegasus. “And mine’s Bucky!”

“Well, Buckwheat,” stated Ms. Powder Puff. “You and colorless have ten seconds to get going on garbage duty or you’re both going without breakfast!”

“My name is Moonside!” announced the black colt with the white mane.

“And I’m Spring Hope!” snapped the pony who Ms. Powder Puff had called ‘Broccoli Head’ the night before.

All the children began to rise up against their so-called caretakers. It wasn’t long until absolute discord ensued.

“Thanks!” thanked the green stallion with the red mane to Bucky and Pint. “Moonside and I will take it from here.”

Pint nodded.

“Things are going to change around here,” stated Moonside with a smile as he admired the chaos. “We won’t be bullied around here anymore.”

“Speaking of bullying…,” stated Bucky as he looked towards Fall and then glared back at Moonside. “Just make sure to stop being bullies to each other and treat Fall nice.”

“Uh…,” stammered Moonside.

“This isn’t up for negotiation,” stated Bucky as he pressed his muzzle firmly into Moonside’s face. “If I find out that you, or any pony, bullies another filly or colt in here, I’ll come back and mop the floor with the lot of you.”

The green Pegasus watched as his friend hunched down in submission to the large, yellow Pegasus.

“Moonside…?” he asked.

“You heard him, Rawhide!” announced Moonside. “Besides, it’s these grownups who are the real problem.”

“Right,” stated Rawhide.

“Then go cause some trouble for them!” ordered Moonside.

Without a single word, the green Pegasus dashed and tackled the stallion before yelling, “TAKE THAT!”

Pint and Bucky looked towards Fall. She had a look of fear and disbelief on her face.

“What about Fall?” asked Pint.

Bucky looked to see Fall frozen in place as she watched the other fillies and colts shout, jump, and do all sorts of whimsical things to Ms. Powder Puff and the stallion.

“Fall,” said Pint as he took hold of her hoof. “I promise we’ll get you out of here.”

“And Pint keeps his promises,” added Bucky. “Except when it comes to beating me at Backyard Brawlers or any other game.”

Ms. Powder Puff and the stallion had begun to restrain some of the fillies and colts who were causing them grief.

“We’ll be back,” said Pint. “I almost have all the bits I need for another big, fun day out.”

“And it will be a fun day,” stated Bucky as he noticed the children still battling the grownups but noticeably losing the war. “But we really most go.”

“I understand,” Fall said softly as she leaned forward and gave both Pint and Bucky a kiss. “Now go while you still can.”

Bucky lowered himself for Pint to climb aboard. “Same time next week by the bush?”

Fall nodded and smiled, “See you then.”

Bucky and Pint said one final ‘goodbye’ before bolting out of the bunk room, dashed down the stairs, and made their way out of the orphanage. They then quickly made their way over the fence and dashed to where their parents would soon be expecting them. And, although the revolt was put to an end shortly after the colts had left, the orphanage would not ever again be the same way that it was. The children had gotten their first taste of empowerment and they most certainly were not going to give up on it as easily as they once did

Author's Note

This is the conclusion of "Night Fall". Some details have changed since the inception of the story so please don't mind any slight variances between what the characters know and don't know. Particularly on Pint's part.

The characters are continually getting updates to improve upon the telling of their story. Though these are minor changes in which do not impact the story's whole. We hope you enjoy it.