Call of the Sea

Hey guys, listen. This is my first fanfic so any comment, good or bad, would be useful to me. Also if my chapters are too short well I'm sorry but I might do a big story in the future one day. I also will take ideas for any new fanfics so please bear that in mind so my big story could come from you but only the good ones so you better be a good writer. And for anyone who wants to ask me about my fanfics,please be positive because I can't stand negative questions. Negative comments I can take, but negative questions just too far. Same goes for any twilight saga fans since those movies are worse than ( to avoid hurting or insulting poeple I shall just type random stuff). I will do vampire fanfics at some point but  only non twilight saga related ideas will be used.