A Girl in an Equestrian World

by bright_night_pony

Rating: teen
Tags: Pinkie Pie, Human, Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Angel, Fluttershy, Adventure
Length: 2646

After a spell gone wrong, Fluttershy woke up one morning as a human. Now, with the help of her friends, she needs to find away to return to he true self.

What if you were to wake up and find that you had turned into a pony here on earth?After a spell gone wrong, Fluttershy woke up one morning as a human. Will she, Twilight and Angel find a way to turn her back into the pony that she is meant to be, or will she forever a girl living in an Equestrian world?

Published 2015-04-25 22:30:03 UTC
Last updated 2015-04-29 07:40:52 UTC

Chapter 1

It was a beautiful day in Ponyville. The weather ponies had done an amazing job keeping the skies clear while the sun was shining far brighter than normal. The grass waved gently as a cool breeze swept across the ground. In the lake, Rainbow and Pinkie were playing with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle and Applebloom, while Applejack was peacefully resting on the bank, Spike laying right beside her, his red sunglasses shielding his eyes from the stars blinding rays while he sipped on a smoothie brought from home. Rarity, of course, was sitting under a nearby tree, reading a magazine of the latest fashion trends.

A little ways away, Twilight was struggling to perfect a spell that she had been working on for the past hour, Fluttershy and Angel both curiously watching her.

“Twilight?”

“Yes, Fluttershy?”

“What exactly are you trying to do?” Fluttershy asked, clearly confused as to why Twilight was casting the spell on the tree which Rarity was under. With every jolt of the spell, the wood of the tree would change from white and black to a brown as if Zecora was crafting a potion to constantly change the color of her coat.

“Remember that spell I used for the best young flyers competition in order to give Rarity wings?” Twilight responded, still intently focused on the spell.

“Yes, why?”

“Well, remember how difficult it was?”

“Yes”

“Today I had an idea,” She shared, looking up, excited to share, what was in her opinion, a stroke of genius, “What if, instead of simply giving a pony wings, I actually temporarily change them into a different type of pony. For example, what if I were to turn an earth pony into a pegasus?”

“So why are you aiming your spell on the tree?”

“As an experiment. I’m working on turning the tree from an oak tree to a birch tree and back,” she said, returning to her spell casting.

“Is there anything I can do to help?” Fluttershy asked growing ever more interested in Twilights work.

“Actually, perhaps there is,” Twilight responded, contemplating the wisdom of her idea. quickly she looked at Fluttershy as though she were a rat, just waiting to be put through a maze in order find the cheese. It wasn’t long before Fluttershy caught onto her plan.

“You want to cast the spell on me?” She asked, her voice trembling.

“I think it would help to reverse engineer the spell to turn a pegasus into an earth pony”

“Well, uh, I guess... if it would help.”

“Really?” Asked Twilight, surprised by Fluttershy’s willingness. Normally, Fluttershy would be trying everything she could in order to get out of a situation like this, but then Twilight started to realize. Fluttershy has become significantly more bold over the course of the past year.

“Sure! I mean, if you would like.”

Twilight could tell that Fluttershy was shaking ever so slightly yet at the same time was very calm and collected.

“You sure?” She asked.

“It won’t hurt will it?”

“No.”

“Will it be permanent?”

“It shouldn’t be.”

“Oh,” Fluttershy said, taking a deep breath. “Okay.”

“Okay, what?”

“Let’s do this.”

“You sounded a bit like Rainbow Dash when you said that.”

Hearing that, Fluttershy let out a quick smile. She really admired her cyan colored friend and her apparent fearlessness. Often times, she wished that she could be more like her. Rainbow Dash didn’t seem to be afraid of anything, but Fluttershy, on the other hand, was afraid of everything. Often times, she felt like such a coward, so to hear that she reminded Twilight of Rainbow made her feel extremely proud.
Twilight pointed her horn at Fluttershy and a violet aura formed around it. A few seconds later a beam erupted from her horn, engulfing Fluttershy in an intense ray of light. The beam started to grow brighter and brighter as it lifted right off the ground. Then, like a flash of lightning, it was finished. She fell down on the ground with a loud thud.

“Ow! I thought you said it wouldn’t hurt!” She said.

“I didn’t expect you to just fall on the ground like that!”

“So, did it work?” Fluttershy asked rhetorically, getting up off the ground. She looked over to her side and saw a wing.

“Sadly no,” Twilight answered, looking down at the ground.

“I’m sorry, Twilight.”

“Don’t be!” She said, picking her head up. “It just means that I have a bit more work to do.”

Immediately, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and the little fillies came over.

“Uh Sugarcube,” Applejack said, “I hate to be a bother but were gonna have ta get goin’”

“So early? But it’s only six!”

“Yes, but we’re hosting this super awesome slumber party at Sweet Apple Acres for the girls and their class,” Rainbow Dash said, “It’s gonna be a hundred percent cooler now that I’m there.”

“Yeah, It’s gonna be so great!” Scootaloo exclaimed excitedly, “Any party with Rainbow Dash is automatically awesome.”

“Thanks, Scootaloo.”

“Well Girls, let’s go,” Applejack commanded.

“Yay! Cutie Mark Crusaders sleep over!” The three young fillies said in unison.

“Yeah, uh, well have fun.”

“Will do Twilight,” Applejack replied, “See y' all.”

“Bye, Rarity!”

“Goodbye dear,” Rarity said looking over at Sweetie Belle. She quickly returned to her magazine as the girls walked away with Rainbow, Applejack a few feet behind.

As they walked away, Twilight remembered something Pinkie said earlier that day.

“Um, Pinkie?” Twilight asked, looking over at the pink mare still playing around in the water.

“Yes, Twilight?”

“Didn’t you say earlier that you had cupcakes in the oven?”

“Yep!”

“You do realize that was three hours ago?”

“Uh huh.”

“Dontcha think you should check on them?”

“Why?”

“To make sure they don’t burn,” Twilight pointed out with concern for Pinkie’s cupcakes.

“Oh,” Pinkie responded, now mirroring Twilight’s concern, “Probably.”

“You gonna go do that?”

“Do what?” Pinkie asked with confusion.

Twilight facehooved at Pinkie’s antics. She knew that there was no point in reminding her as she would remember any-

“Oh my Gosh!” Pinkie interrupted, remembering her cupcakes. “I’ve got to go check on my cupcakes!”

She ran off quickly before Twilight or Fluttershy even had a chance to say goodbye.

“Well,” Twilight said after a slight pause, “I should probably go home and do more research. C'mon Spike.”

“Ah, Twilight. Do we have to?”

“Yes, Spike. It’s time,” She replied. “Goodbye, Fluttershy.”

“Goodbye Twilight”

As Fluttershy started to make her way home, she was glad that she did not live too far. It was starting to get dark, and she did not like the dark. As she was walking, however, she started to get a throbbing feeling in her head and the closer she got to home, the worse that feeling became.

By the time that she got home the pain was so bad, she could hardly bear it. It was as though hundreds of tiny insects were crawling all around in her head. As soon as she walked through the door, she went into her kitchen to pour a glass of water and grab an aspirin tablet. But as she flew up to grab the aspirin, her wings suddenly gave out on her, and she collapsed to the ground, unconscious.
The next morning, she woke up, head still throbbing from the previous night. Unaware of going to bed, she guessed that one of her larger animals had noticed her sleeping and brought her to bed. As she instinctively reached up to rub her head, she noticed an unfamiliar sensation in her hoof. Curious, she looked at her hoof and was shocked to find that in its place was a hand. She glanced down to notice that there were feet hanging off the edge of the bed and a strange shape underneath the sheets.

By this point, she was panicking. Immediately she threw off the covers to see what was under them, and what she saw were of breasts bobbing up and down because of her rapid breathing. She got out of bed to stand up, but she hit her head on the ceiling. She crawled over to a mirror hanging on the wall and saw a tiny stub with holes where her muzzle would be normally, and instead of her ears being on the top of her head, they were resting comfortably on the side.

Minutes later, Angel came in bringing breakfast to Fluttershy, expecting her to still be asleep in her bed. Instead, what he saw was a strange, terrified creature looking at him.

“Angel,” She said, “Please go get Twilight.”

He dropped the plate that he was carrying and immediately left the room.

Author's Note

I hope that you enjoyed the first chapter of this story. I will try to publish a chapter every few days until the completion of the story. Feel free to let me know what you thought down in the comments.

Chapter 2

Angel was hurrying down the streets of Ponyville, desperate to find the help his friend needed. Being the small rabbit that he was, it took him quite a long time to travel the already great distance to Twilight’s castle. Angel arrived at the castle and quickly tried to knock on the door; however, the door was far too thick for there to be an audible sound the other side. He tried to reach the door handle, but because of his small size, he was unable to, even while jumping.

Luckily, Pinkie Pie happened to be coming to give Twilight a cupcake. Angel could hear her singing from all the way down the street. She was trotting joyfully up the steps of the castle. When she got to the top, she opened the door; the opportunity of which Angel took full advantage of.

By the time he got in, Twilight was already busy talking to Pinkie. Angel was trying to get her attention, but neither stomping his paw nor jumping up and down in between the two of them worked. Frustrated he decided to use the last resort. He gave a hard yank on her mane.

“Ow!” She yelled, looking down at the little white rabbit. He was jumping up and down pointing at the door. “What is it, Angel?”

“Hmm,” Pinkie said, kneeling down to stare Angel right in the eyes, “It seems as though he’s saying that Fluttershy is in trouble. Somehow, she’s turned into some sort of two-legged creature.”

“Oh no!” Her eyes wide and mouth open with terror. Immediately, she knew what was wrong. Her transformation spell had worked, but instead of transforming Fluttershy into an earth pony like it was meant to, it transformed her into a human.

“What’s the matter?” Pinkie questioned, her head tilted to the side in confusion, one eyebrow cocked higher than the other. Twilight walked into the library, Angel and Pinkie Pie close behind. Her horn was glowing as she scanned through the thousands of books, looking for the one on species from other worlds

“Remember that time Sunset Simmer stole my crown and I had to travel to another world in order to get it back?” Twilight replied after taking a brief moment to calm herself.

“Yes,” Pinkie answered, her eyes widened and jaw dropped as she began to put the pieces together.

“Well, that world was populated primarily by a species called humans and it seems if a spell I performed yesterday turned Fluttershy into one.”

“Twilight,” Pinkie said with a gasp, “How could you?”

“It wasn’t intentional,” Twilight answered as she pulled a book from the shelf. “I was simply testing a spell I had been working on and it seemed to go wrong.”

“That seems to happen a lot, doesn’t it?”

“Unfortunately, yes.” Her head dropped to the in a quick attempt to hide her embarrassment. Picking it back up, she turned her attention to the book. Written by the Equestrian Academy of Mythological Studies, it was titled ‘Anthropology: Humans and Other Creatures From Worlds Beyond’. Twilight opened the book to a chapter detailing the anatomy and diet of a human.

“I have to find a way to turn her back into a pony,” Twilight said, her muzzle buried in the book. “Fluttershy will never be able to survive in this world while in human form. Her diet won’t allow for it as she’d be unable to get the nutrition she would need in order to live a healthy lifestyle. Not only that, but if she remains here, she’ll be the only one of her kind.”

“Oh no!” Pinkie said, beginning to panic. She was quickly pacing around the room, her head seemingly on the verge of exploding. “Fluttershy will never be happy again!”

She stopped pacing directly in front of Twilight. Reaching out, she grabbed Twilights head pulling it close to her own, her eyes near bulging out of their sockets. “You have to fix this,” She said in a hushed tone.

“Yes, Pinkie. I know,” Twilight reassured her, pulling her head away, “When have I ever caused a problem that I haven’t been able to fix?”

“Well there was that one time,” Pinkie said with a grin.

“Do not say it,” Twilight glared.

“Ah, but it’s funny!”

“Do not say it!”

“Fine,” Pinkie replied a sullen expression on her face.

“Anyhow, Angel and I need to go over to Fluttershy’s cottage and check on her,” Twilight said as she grabbed Angel with her magic and put him on her back.

“Yeah Twilight, it will be an adventure, we’re going on an adventure Twilight!”

“We’re just going to Fluttershy’s cottage.”

“Yes, but we have to find a way to return her to her normal form.”

“Yeah, Pinkie about that,” Twilight started cautiously, “I think it may be a good idea for you to stay here.”

“What! Why?” Pinkie asked, her face filled with anger.

“Well, it’s just that she’s already in a compromised state and you don’t always think about what you say, and I’m nervous that you might say something that will only exacerbate the issue.”

“What! No, I wouldn’t!” She yelled with a giant scowl covering her face.

“Sorry, Pinkie.” Twilight, along with Angel departed out the door of the castle, into the streets of the town, leaving Pinkie Pie alone.

Then she got an idea! An awful idea! Pinkie got a wonderful, awful idea!

“Twilight said I should stay behind,” said she with a mischievous grin, rubbing her hooves together, her plan about to begin. “She never said I had to stay!”

Then a smile appeared as she walked out the door. Skipping and singing a tune she adored.

It wasn’t long before she caught up with Twilight. Putting on her traditional Groucho glasses disguise, she followed closely behind, finding any obvious hiding spot she could. As though some form of earth pony magic surrounded her, both Twilight and Angel remained completely oblivious to her presence.

As they approached Fluttershy’s cottage, Twilight took Angel inside to check on Fluttershy while Pinkie remained outside. From where she was, she could see Twilight yell something, and she assumed that Twilight was calling out to Fluttershy. Without hesitation, Angel jumped off of Twilights back, running upstairs. Only a moment later, Angel returned, a tall shadow closely tailing him. Pinkie loudly gasped when the caster of the shadow came into view.

Author's Note

I hope that you enjoyed the second chapter of A Girl in an Equestrian World. It is my goal to release a chapter no later than Saturday of each week. If you would like to stay up to date on this story or any of my future stories, feel free to follow me and/or add this story to your bookshelf. Lastly, I would truly appreciate your feedback, so if you have any constructive criticism, I would love to hear it the comments.