Equestrians Human Spirit(Old Version)

by ShadicBro Brony

Chapter 43: Confrontation (Un-Edited)

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(Que Opening 1 or the Fan Opening)

(The music starts and seven different colored orbs move around the black screen, leaving a glitter path behind them. The orbs moved faster and then, they clash together, and a bright light filled the screen. The light fades, and the title Equestrians Human Spirit is seen. The light shines off the title and gives off an amazing flash at the edge, until the screen changes.)

Standing here with dried-up lips
Being unprotected right below

(The camera moved around a bit until Daniel is seen on an edge of a cliff, with the wind blowing through his hair and clothing. Daniel opens his eyes and looks up at the blue sky.)

the freezing sunlight

(Daniel Smiles and jumps off the edge, opening his wings and flying off in the distance.)

Countless tears are overflowing
Falling as they scrape against my face,

(Spike is seen next, while a few tears flow out of his eyes. A dark figure in the shape of a dragon, same height as him, while his purple eyes glowed and a evil smile formed.)

With a shining light so bright

(Then, a light is shown in front of spike, making the dark figure disappear, and making the young drake smiled and rush forward to the light.)

I've been searching far and wide for your presence close to me
So I can reach out, and fill my empty heart.

(Daniel is seen again, on the same cliff, looking up at the night sky. He sees his mother and grandfather smiling warmly at him, while Daniel reaches out for them. His family vanishes, making his hand drop, and he lowered his head while tears flowed.)

But when I hold your hand, I'm able to feel the loneliness that's inside of you

(A purple hand takes his hand softly, making him look up and behind him, and sees Twilight, her friends, Spike, Pipsqueak, the four princesses, Shining, and Aurora smiling at him.)

When We're miles apart!!

(Daniel smiles as well, and jumps to the camera, unsheathing his sword and slashing the view in white.)

The wish that we held on to, in the middle of our hearts

(The view changes and Tom, Chuck and Will are seen in the front, while Two shadow Alicorn beings stood behind them, smirking evilly, while Will frowns a little.)

was torn apart by destiny

(The camera moves and shows Daniel with a determined face, and roars, transforming into his fire form, and charges at the shadow beings and humans.)

And even though you vanished from my life,

(The main six are seen, wearing the Elements of Harmony. Two rainbows shot up and collided and explode.)

I still have the memories

(Spike jumps in the air and fires a fire breath at a black cloak being, smirking evilly, and the fire hits him, engulfing the screen.)

that you left behind

(Kasai, and thirteen other dragons, covered in shadows appear and roar together.)

And right now, I can feel you here…

(Daniel in fire form holds his wrist up, and Kasai’s gem appears. He grabs the gem, and plunges it into his chest, and he’s engulfed in flames. His mother was on his right, while his Grandfather was on his left, as spirits.)

in me.

(Daniel throws his hands out, covering the screen in white.)

(The screen shows Daniel Landing on the ground, and pulling his sword out, giving it one swing, and smiled, with his friends behind him, smiling as well. The title Equestrians Human Spirit is shown on the bottom.The Screen then goes black.)

(Opening Ends)


Chapter 43: Confrontation (Un-Edited)

“Daniel~”

“Wake up sweetie~”

“Mmmmmm…” The sound of two mares slowly woke me up from my slumber. I opened my eyes slowly, seeing only the sight of four orbs. Two being light sapphire blue and another two being forest green.


“Morning.” The two mare greeted to me with loving smiles.


I smiled back. “Morning ladies.”

“Sleep well?” Rhyme asked.

“Yeah.” I rose up and stretched, making a few popping sounds go through my body. “I just want to thank you two again for last night.”

“The part where we had sex, or treating you for who you are?” Milky asked.

I chuckled. “Both.”

At that, the three of us laughed. I haven’t felt more stress free. I felt like a new man.


“Well, we might want to get up now.” I said as I began to rise.


However, tow soft hands pressed against me chest and pushed me gently down. Rhyme and Milky crawled on top of me, with their breasts swinging a little in my face.

“Who says we need to get up now?~” Rhyme asked with half lidded eyes.

“Let’s have a little fun before we start our day.~” Milky said seductively.

“Oh boy.” I thought.


(30 minutes later)

After having our fun, the three of us washed up and got into our clothes. Rhyme went to Buttons room to wake him, while me and Milky went downstairs. The two joined us a little after a few minutes and we started eating breakfast.

I felt happy with these mares around me. They never turned me away, they comforted me. The hope and happiness in my heart grew, and I was happy again.

Then, there was a knock at the door.

“I’ll get it.” Rhyme said and went to the door.

Milky kissed me on the cheek, making me blush but smile.

“Are you in a relationship with my mom and Milky now?” Button asked.

I was shocked that he asked a question like that.

“Don’t act all surprised. I know my mom and Milky have been dating for a year now.” Button said shrugging.

“Oh…well, I guess I am. Your mom and Milky made me very happy.” I said smiling.

Milky giggled. “You’re such a charmer.”

“Daniel,” We all looked up and saw Rhyme holding a scroll. “You have a letter from somepony.”

I got up from the chair and walked over to her. I took the scroll and opened it.

“It’s from Princess Luna.” I said, making the family gasp.

“What does it say, What does it say!?” Button asked excited.

“Let’s see…”

Dear Daniel,

It took me a while to find out where you are, but I managed to find your location from your dreams. I know you’ve been through a lot from the last three days, but there’s something me and my sister want to address to you.

I don’t know if you’re upset of my sister, but she really wishes to speak to you. There will be a chariot coming to the town in about a few minutes. I hope you can come to Canterlot to speak with us.

Until then,
Luna.

I stopped reading, and thought for a moment. I don’t know what Celestia thinks of me, since she did see me as Darkus that night. However, from the letter, she really does wish to speak with me. If Luna talked to her about what happened, maybe I can give her a second chance. Not only that, it would be nice to see Cadence and Aurora again.

“What did it say Daniel?” Rhyme asked, taking me out of my thoughts.

“Celestia and Luna want to speak to me in Canterlot. There’s a chariot coming in a few minutes.” I explained rolling the scroll up.

“Awwww, do you have to go?” Button asked pouting a little.

“If this is important to attend to, I have to. Sorry kiddo.” I said smiling sadly.

“Don’t worry Daniel, we understand.” Rhyme said smiling.

I collected my stuff and the chariot came to the town, waiting for me.

“I guess this is goodbye for now right?” Milky asked.

“Maybe, but I’m glad I met you ladies, and that I met you Button.” I said.

“You’re more than welcome to visit anytime Daniel.” Rhyme said smiling.

“Thanks. You’re also more than welcome to visit Ponyville if I’m there.” I said smiling.

“Not planning to leave Ponyville for good right?” Kasai asked me.

“After thinking it over this morning, my home is in Ponyville. Besides, Will, Pipsqueak and Spike are there. I can’t just leave them forever.” I explained.

“Twilight and the others?”

I frowned. “I still need time to think about that. I still don’t want to see them still.”

“I understand. Just let your heart find the answer.”

“Thanks Kasai.”

“We’ll be sure to visit when we have the chance.” Rhyme said smiling.

I smiled and gave the two ladies one last kiss, and ruffled Buttons mane, making him giggled.

“I should introduce Button to Pip the next time they visit.” I thought.

I got onto the chariot and waved goodbye to the family. They waved back, and I flew off to Canterlot.

The ride was long, longer than I thought it would be, but the chariot made its landing and I stepped out. As I was making my way to the castle, many of the civilians were looking at me with amazement and awe. I was really confused to why, but I didn’t think of it as I pressed on.

I walked to he entrance of the castle, and the guards noticed me.

“Celestia and Luna want to speak with me.” I said.

They nodded and let me through. I walked through the halls of the castle, until I stopped at the doors of the throne room. I breathed deeply, and stepped in, where Luna, and Celestia are waiting.


As I entered, I saw both of the princesses talking with both Aurora and Cadence.

“Ahem.” I cleared my throat to get their attention.


“Daniel!” Aurora said and to me, engulfing me in a hug.

“Mph mma mme mm mo momph.” I muffled in her bossom.

“What did you say?” She asked pulling away.

I took my breath and said it again. “I said it’s good to see you Aurora.”

She smiled. “it’s good to see you to.”

“Daniel,” I looked at Cadence, who was looking a little worried. “Are you doing okay?”

I smiled a little. “I am.”

“Are you sure? When you left Ponyville, you gave everypony a scare.” She answered.

I was surprised that they actually noticed I left in under such a short time.

“Not to mention your battle.” Aurora added.


“What battle?” I asked.

Luna came up to me and held out a newspaper. The headline of it surprised me.

Vironous Taken Down

Yesterday, a family of Vironous came to a small town, just a few miles off from Ponyville. The beasts were defeated non other than Daniel Blaze the Human, who defeated the beast by himself, with the help of a large fire dragon. More on the news, he also brought the life of a young colt bak from the dead. His name grows reaching almost every part of Equestria.

In other news…

“Oh great, now I’m going to be a celebrity.” I groaned.

The ladies giggled.

“I’m amazed you defeated three this time.” Celestia said.

“I did had some help with Kasai of course.” I said shrugging.

“We’re just glad you’re okay now.” Cadence said smiling.

I smiled as well, but frowned. “I believe I was brought here because you wanted to talk with me right?” I asked Celestia.

The sun princess frowned, but nodded. “Come with me. We’ll talk while we walk.”

I followed Celestia out of the throne room and followed her through the halls of her castle.

“So, what is it you want to talk about?” I asked while my face hardened a little.

“I…I want to…apologize.”

My face lifted a little, but I stayed silent to allow her to speak.

“That night when that darkness took hold of you…I was afraid of you.” She looked at me in the eyes, and I saw her eyes were starting to form tears. “I too saw you as a demon, who wishes to hurt others.”

My face hardened more from her words, and it also hurt me. I still didn’t say anything as I continued to listen.

“I was scared of your darkness, and thought you would hurt and kill my subjects and everypony else. But…that was when Luna knocked some sense into me. I was blinded by fear, and I was pushing you away. When Luna told me that you two are one in the same, I then realized what I was doing to you. We all love Luna, and we gave her a second chance. But you…we pushed you away.”

Celestia stopped in her tracks and her tears fell. “I’m so sorry for the way I thought about you Daniel. You’re not a demon, you’re important to all of us. You are the greatest thing in our lives. You protected us, made us all smile, you even remind me and Luna of Jon so much.”

“How?” I asked.

“Jon was always sweet, kind, and had a heart of gold. He always protected me, my other, my father, and Luna. He always knew how to make us all smile when we were down, how he always loved us and treated us like we were normal ponies.” Celestia sniffed and wiped her tears.

“You are just like him Daniel. Whenever I look at you, I always see Jon before my eyes. After I realized what I did to you and found out you left, it felt like something was missing inside of me…you. But…I pushed you away. I was such an idiot. I’m so sorry.” She lowered her head and starred crying a little.

I stood there in silence, and in shock. They actually saw me like that? I never knew Celestia and Luna saw me like this. I looked back at her, while she was still crying. Seeing her like this made my heart crack. I couldn’t stand seeing her like this. I knew for certain, she really wanted to make thing right for the two of us.

I approached her, and she didn’t know. I wrapped my arms around her waist and pulled her into a hug. She gasped by the sudden contact.

“Daniel?” She whispered in shock.

I smiled and tightened my grip on her a little.

“All is forgiven my friend.” I whispered.

Her tears fell harder and she returned the hug, starting to sob in my shoulder.

“Thank you…thank you.” She whispered.

“Shhh…let it all out Celestia.” I shushed while stroking her mane. It felt very warm, and soft, and silky.

We stayed like third for the moment. I found my faith restored in Celestia. I pulled away a few seconds later, with her smiling at me while drying her tears.

She then leaned in and kissed my cheek, making my face turn bright crimson.

“Thank you for giving me another chance.” She said smiling warmly at me.

I smiled and touched where she kissed me. “Anytime Tia.”

Celestia’s blushed when I called her that.


“Oh. sorry. I didn’t mean to call you that.” I apologized.

“It’s okay.” I looked up at her while she still smiled warmly. “You may call me Tia if you want.”

I smiled.

“Daniel?”

My heart immediately stopped by that familiar voice. I slowly turned around and saw the ponies I didn’t want to see.

My face hardened and I growled at Twilight and the others.

“What do you all want?” I growled.

“We…we wanted to know if you were okay.” Twilight answered.

“Oh? What’s with the sudden change of heart?” I taunted. “I thought all of you didn’t want me around, saying how much of a threat I was to all of you and to your home.”

The girls cringed by that, and I wanted to see that.

“How…how did you know that?” Twilight asked.

“Be obvious Twilight. I followed you. I wanted to know why you and the others were avoiding me, why you all were acting all nervous around me. I knew you all were scared of me since that night, but non of you had the fucking right to treat me like that! Didn’t you all know what you were doing to me!?” I shouted.

“Daniel…please…”

“I don’t want to hear it! I don't want to see you all for the moment! Get out of my sight!” I turned and started to walk away. The last thing I need is them.

“We’re sorry Daniel! Please give us a second chance! We’re still your friends!” Twilight pleaded.

I immediately stopped in my tracks. That’s when my anger blew.

“Oh really!?” I whipped around and approached them. "Do friends turn their back on those who needed help!? Do friends believe false rumors from false thoughts that fucking accuse you!? Do friends push others away!?”

They all shrank by my voice and my eyes turned black. “DIDN’T YOU ALL UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH PAIN I WAS IN WHEN YOU ALL SAID THAT SHIT TO ME!?” I turned to Applejack.

“YOU THINK I’M NOT THE PERSON YOU ONCE KNEW BECAUSE I HAVE A DEMON INSIDE OF ME!? YOU THINK I’M A THREAT TO YOU!? HOW MANY FALSE LIES PLAGUED THAT FUCKING BRAIN OF YOURS!?”

Applejack cringed and held her head.

I turned to Rainbow. “YOU THINK I WAS GOING TO TEAR YOU APART BECAUSE I HAVE THIS MONSTER INSIDE OF ME!? WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU BEING THE ELEMENT OF LOYALTY!? IF YOU ARE LOYAL, THEN YOU WOULD HAVE BEEN THERE FOR ME!”

Rainbow was covering her ears and looking away.

I turned to Rarity. “SO YOU ONLY SEE THE DEMON SIDE TO ME NOW!? I THOUGHT YOU WERE BETTER THAN THIS! I DID SO MUCH FOR YOU, AND YET YOU SPAT IN MY FACE, YOU FUCKING BITCH!”

Rarity’s eyes were covered in tears and she tried her best to block out my loud voice.

I turned to Fluttershy. “SO YOU THINK I WOULD JUST GO AROUND AND KILL ANY CREATURE THAT I SEE!? DO YOU NOW SEE ME AS A MURDERER!? A MINDLESS ANIMAL!?”

Fluttershy was sobbing while hiding behind Rainbow.

Pinkie was next. “ THE FIRST TIME IN MY LIFE PINKIE, I ALWAYS LOOKED UP TO YOU! YOU ALWAYS MADE ME SMILE, BUT THE WAY YOU SAID THE BULLSHIT ABOUT ME, YOU TOOK THAT SMILE FROM ME! DIDN’T YOU KNOW HOW HURT AND SAD I WAS!?”

Pinkie’s body had a duller shade of pink and her mane was really straight, along with her eyes filled with tears.

“AND YOU!” I turned to Twilight who was also crying. “YOU TOOK EVERYTHING FROM ME! I LOVED AND TRUSTED YOU WITH EVERYTHING I HAD, BUT YOU DESTROYED IT ALL IN FRONT OF MY EYES! WELL NEWS FLASH, YOU WON’T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT ME ANYMORE! HERE I AM IN CANTERLOT, AWAY FROM ALL OF YOU! YOU ALL WON’T HAVE TO SEE THIS DEMON EVER AGAIN! YOU’RE ALL WORTHLESS TO ME!” I roared at the top of my lungs, that could be heard all over Canterlot.

I breathed heavily, while tears of my own fell from my eyes.

Celestia herself felt waves of hurt and sadness. She never thought her own student and her friends would actually do this to me.

“I thought you were all better than this.” I said with my voice cracking while I sobbed a little. I looked up at them and glared hard. “You‘re all not the bearers of the Elements of Harmony. You’re all nothing but a joke.”

That was the last nail to hammer. They all fell with huge depressed faces.

“I don’t want to see you all until further notice.” I started to walk away, while my tears continued to fall from my face.

(3rd Person POV)

Twilight looked up and saw Daniel leaving. She got up and started running for him, but only to be stopped by Celestia. She didn’t look very happy. No, she was pissed.

“Celestia?” Twilight asked.

“I am very disappointed in you Twilight Sparkle. You have failed to help Daniel in his desperate time in need. You all have failed.” She said in a disappointed and angry voice.

Twilight’s heart shattered by that.

“Leave Canetrlot, and return to Ponyville.” She then walked off to where the young broken heart warrior was.

Twilight then looked and saw Aurora, Luna and Cadence, giving all of the girls death stares.

Aurora shook her head and walked away.

“if anypony is the demon around here Sparkle, it is you and your actions against Daniel.” She said and walked away.

Twilight turned to her sister in law.

“Cadence?” She asked weakly.

“I thought you were better than this Twilight. You have let me down.” She walked off, leaving all of the girls there on the ground.

Twilight felt her heart shatter into a million pieces. She collapsed on the ground and buried her face in her hands and sobbed. Not only she lost her trust in Daniel, but to her teacher, her friends and her sister in law.

(Daniel POV)

I was standing on the balcony, with my arms resting on the rails. I was trying to stop the tears from coming out, but no prevail.

“I believe you went overboard with what you said Daniel.” Kasai said.

“I don’t need this right now Kasai. Leave me alone.” I said turning my head.

“Very well. I understand your anger and sadness. I’ll leave you alone until you’re ready to speak.” Kasai left my presence.

I breathed deeply, and I wiped my tears again.

“Daniel.”

I looked back at the three princesses and Aurora.

I frowned and turned away. “I’m sorry you guys had to see me like that, and for my language.”

Celestia walked up to me and placed her hands on my shoulder. “Don’t be. I understand your anger to what happened between them. I couldn’t believe that Twilight and her friends would do something like this.”

Luna came up and hugged me. “We understand to why you let it go Daniel. There are times where we can’t control our anger.”

Cadence walked up and hugged me as well. “Taking time to yourself is the first step to healing your heart. I know it’s hard to forgive those around you and how they treated you, but I promise things will work out soon.”

“We’ll be here for you if you ever need our help.” Celestia said hugging me as well.

“We all still love you Daniel.” Aurora said joining the hug.

I smiled a little and hugged them back.

“Thank you…all of you.” I whispered.

They broke the hug and smiled.

“Come. Let’s go eat. I’m sure you’re hungry.” Celestia offered.

I smiled and nodded.

(Timeskip. Nightfall)

I was lying in my bed, looking up at the celling. Today was really hard. I did feel a tad bit bad for screaming at Twilight and the others. I still don’t know if I can ever forgive them after the way they treated me. I did forgive Celestia for her seeing me as a demon, but…I don’t know about the others. I’m sure Will, Spike and Pip are worried about me.

So much was going on in my head. I didn’t know what to do.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

I rose up after hearing the sound of my door knocking.


“Come in, it’s open.” I called out.

The doors opened and surprisingly Cadence in her nightgown walked in.


“Cadence? What is it?” I asked getting off of my bed.

“I was wondering if you wanted some company for tonight. I can still sense in you heart you’re struggling, and you’re lost.” She answered.

I was a tad bit surprised that she actually wants to stay with me for the night. I didn’t know if I should, but…

“Are you sure? I mean…I don't want to…you know…”

Cadence smiled and walked over to me. She gently placed her hand on my cheek and I looked into her amazing glittering violet eyes.

“I know you’re worried about what’s happening between me and Shining right now, but I’m not worried about that. What my heart is telling me, is that you need somepony to comfort you right now.”

I thought over for a moment, until I sighed and smiled a little.

“If this is what you’re heart is guiding you to, then I won’t judge you by your decision.”

She smiled and she walked over to my bed. I came over and we got under the covers. Cadence scooted over to me and snuggled close to me.

I blushed, but smiled and placed an arm around her.

“Hmm…this feel like how Shining would hold me.” She whispered.

“What do you plan to do with him?” I asked.

“I don’t know. I don’t want to get back with him, but I still love him so much. I just don’t know what to do.” She answered, placing her head on my chest.

“I guess you and I are in the same boat.” I said stroking her mane.

“I know this is hard Daniel, but like I said, I know things will work out for you and Twilight, along with the others.

I smiled a little. “Then I guess things will work out with you and Shining soon.”

She smiled and kissed my cheek, making me blush.

“I’m glad you came into our lives Daniel.” She said.

I smiled and hugged her. “Me too.”

We both yawned and got comfortable in the bed.

“Goodnight Cadence.” I whispered.


“Goodnight Daniel.” She whispered.


Author's Note

Dawwwwwwww, that ending. Shit really hit the fan this chapter with Twilight and the others. What will happen to the boys back in Ponyville? Will Daniel ever forgive Twilight and the others? Will Daniel ever find his inner piece with Darkus? Find out Next time.

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