Equestrians Human Spirit(Old Version)
Chapter 52: Forgiveness of a Dragon(Un-Edited)
Previous ChapterNext ChapterPreviously, Spike has unlocked his inner hidden power and fought against Kuro. the dark demigod didn’t stand a chance against Spike and his elemental powers. He was defeated, and Spike left the girls and Daniel. Will Spike ever return, or is this the last time we will see our favourite Dragon? Find out now!
(Que Opening 1 or the Fan Opening)


(The music starts and seven different colored orbs move around the black screen, leaving a glitter path behind them. The orbs moved faster and then, they clash together, and a bright light filled the screen. The light fades, and the title Equestrians Human Spirit is seen. The light shines off the title and gives off an amazing flash at the edge, until the screen changes.)
Standing here with dried-up lips
Being unprotected right below
(The camera moved around a bit until Daniel is seen on an edge of a cliff, with the wind blowing through his hair and clothing. Daniel opens his eyes and looks up at the blue sky.)
the freezing sunlight
(Daniel Smiles and jumps off the edge, opening his wings and flying off in the distance.)
Countless tears are overflowing
Falling as they scrape against my face,
(Spike is seen next, while a few tears flow out of his eyes. Ryu slowly appeared next to him, face turned and he looked at Spike, with Purple eyes glowing, smirking evilly.)
With a shining light so bright
(Then, a light is shown in front of spike, making Ryu disappear, and making the young drake smiled and rush forward to the light.)
I've been searching far and wide for your presence close to me
So I can reach out, and fill my empty heart.
(Daniel is seen again, on the same cliff, looking up at the night sky. He sees his mother and grandfather smiling warmly at him, while Daniel reaches out for them. His family vanishes, making his hand drop, and he lowered his head while tears flowed.)
But when I hold your hand, I'm able to feel the loneliness that's inside of you
(A purple hand takes his hand softly, making him look up and behind him, and sees Twilight, her friends, Spike, Pipsqueak, the four princesses, Shining, and Aurora smiling at him.)
When We're miles apart!
(Daniel smiles as well, and jumps to the camera, unsheathing his sword and slashing the view in white.)
The wish that we held on to, in the middle of our hearts
(The view changes and Tom, Chuck and Will stand on the front, while Two shadow Alicorn beings stood behind them, smirking evilly, while Will frowns a little.)
was torn apart by destiny
(The camera moves and shows Daniel with a determined face, and roars, transforming into his fire form, and charges at the shadow beings.)
And even though you vanished from my life,
(The main six are seen, wearing the Elements of Harmony. Two rainbows shot up and collided and explode.)
I still have the memories
(Spike jumps in the air and fires a fire breath at a Kuro, smirking evilly, and the fire hits him, engulfing the screen.)
that you left behind
(Kasai, Darkus, and twelve other dragons, covered in shadows appear and roar together.)
And right now, I can feel you here…
(Daniel in fire form holds his wrist up, and Kasai's gem appears. He grabs the gem, and plunges it into his chest, and he's engulfed in flames. His mother was on his right, while his Grandfather was on his left, as spirits.)
in me.
(Daniel throws his hands out, covering the screen in white.)
(The screen shows Daniel Landing on the ground, and pulling his sword out, giving it one swing, and smiled, with his friends behind him, smiling as well. The title Equestrians Human Spirit is shown on the Screen then goes black.)
(Opening Ends)
Chapter 52: Forgiveness of a Dragon(Un-Edited)
Daniel poured the remains o his dark energy into the orb, and the last of the ponies were freed. he panted and the orb dropped from his hand. the orb made contact with the ground, and it shattered into a million pieces. The bits dissolved in black smoke.
Daniel, the CMC were at Canterlot, so everypony was there. While he was regaining his breath, He heard Twilgiht.
"He's already gone?!”
"Yup, long gone." Sweetie Belle said with a frown.
Danile turned to see the main six talking with the CMC. Ever since the battle, the girls wanted to make things right with Spike, but they will never get that chance.
"Where is he?" Twilight asked.
"Why should I tell you? Just so you can treat him wrong again? For you to banish him for destroying more than half of Equestria! It wasn't his fault!”
"Sweetie Belle, it's not like that, we just need to-“ Rarity started, but was interrupted.
"No! I don't want to hear any more of your lies!”
Daniel frowned, knowing that Spike leaving broke the little fillies heart. he had to bring him back. While nopony was looking, he quietly summoned a shadow clone, and the clone vanished, and head off to the mountains to where Spike might be.
(High Above The Grassy Plains)
Spike was flying to the volcano that was his new home.
"I guess this is goodbye... I lived with ponies my whole life, even as a different creature. They took me in, and now... this is what it comes to..." Spike was about to cry. "No, I shouldn't be sad, it wasn't MY fault this happened. Who knows? Maybe I'll be happier this way!" Spike had an angry expression on his face, but he looked down in sadness. "Who am I kidding? I'll miss all of them…"
“Spike! Hold up!”
Spike stopped and saw Daneil flying to him.
“Let me guess, clone?” He asked when the clone stopped.
“Yeah.” He answered.
"Did Celestia send you to get me?”
"No, I came here on my own free will.”
"What do you want?”
“Spike…I want you to come home.”
"Why? Everypony hates me..." Spike looked down. “If they find out you’re here, they’ll find me, and they’ll lock me up!”
"Why would they lock you up? You are the her-“
"Maybe I deserve to get locked up, I caused havoc across Equestria.”
"Spike, we know it wasn't your-“
"Maybe I deserve to get banished, or exiled," He said with widened eyes.
“Spike!"
Spike looked up at Daniel.
He sighed and lowered himself to the ground.
“Take a walk with me while we talk.”
Spike sighed and landed on the ground, folding his new wings.
"Spike, we all know everything. From when you got controlled to when you saved all of Equestria. You're Equestria's hero.”

"B-But then Twilight, and the others-“
"Yes, they all know everything that happened. They aren't mad.”
"So then... everypony knows it wasn't my fault!”
"I'm afraid not every pony knows about how you got controlled, but they do know that you saved Equestria from Kuro.”
“How is that supposed to make me feel better? I’ve done so many wrong things.”
“I know you’re afraid over what happened today, and angry for the way Twilight and the others treated you, believe me, I know that feeling. I felt the same way when Darkus tried to take over my body. The girls tried everything in their power to beg for my forgiveness, but I continued to shut them down. I still needed time to heal, and think over my decision.” Daniel explained.
“Will you ever forgive them?” Spike asked.
“Possible. I’m still mad at them fro the way they treated me, and for the way they treated you.” He explained.
“Makes sense.”
The two walked for a little bit, not saying a word, until, Daniel broke the silence again.
“Will you plan to come back home?” He asked.
“..No. Don't you remember? I originally ran away because I got abused and neglected.” Spike explained.
Daniel frowned. “I know, but the others need you Spike. I need you. Sweetie Belle needs you. Will needs you. Even Pip.”
Tears formed in the drakes eyes. “Please…don’t make this harder for me than it is now.”
Daniel frowned, knowing he didn’t want his little dragon brother to suffer anymore.
He sighed. “Okay…if you think this is what you want…then I won’t stop you, but…where will you go?”
"Up ahead, there's a volcano. I'm going to live on the top of it. It's the perfect place for a dragon like me.”
Daniel and Spike stopped and looked at one another. “I guess this is goodbye then."
Spike nodded.
The two gave each other one last hug, knowing this is the last time they’ll see each other.
“Goodbye little brother.” Daniel whispered.
“Goodbye big brother.” Spike whispered.
The two broke the hug, and the clone vanished in smoke. Spike sighed and started fying to the volcano once more.

(Canterlot)
"All I wanted to do this whole time... was to apologize to Spike. But I couldn't..." Twilight looked down. "The thing I wanted to do the most, I didn’t."
"It's okay Twilight, I'm sure we'll find Spike now that this is all over," Fluttershy said.
"Yeah... I just wish I knew where he was.”
Everypony left to get home, and rebuild their towns after the destruction Ryu and Kuro left behind. The CMC were not looking at their sisters, still angry at them for what they did to the poor drake. Will was away from the group, lost in his thoughts, while Daniel processed what he gained from his clone after it popped.
“Is something on your mind Daniel?” Cadence asked.
“Just processing what Spike told me when my cone and him talked.” Daniel answered.
Twilight immediately zipped up to him, with wide eyes. "Y-You talked to him? Where is he?”
Daniel glared and turned away. “Why should I tell you or the others, after the way you all treated him?”
The ponies bowed their heads in shame.
“Didn’t you all understand Spike never wanted any of this!? Everything in his life was destroyed because all of you ignored and abused him to you own needs! Because of all of you, Spike, MY LITTLE BROTHER, is gone!”
"We know, w-we... just want to say sorry. I want his forgiveness.”
Daniel growled and looked away.
“Daniel, tell them where he’ll be.” He heard Kasai say.
“No! I am not telling them after the way they all treated him!”
“TELL THEM OR I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU FOR THIS!!” Kasai roared.
Daniel jolted by his sudden yelling and was shocked. That was the first time in his life Kasai, the Dragon of Fire, ever snapped at him like that.
“K…Kasai?” Daniel asked concerned.
“I…I’m sorry. I never should have snapped like that. Please, I need you to tell them.”
“Kasai, what’s wrong?”
“Please bring him back. I don’t want him to leave. Please.”
Daniel has never seen this side of Kasai in his life ever since he got him. he felt bad for the fire dragon. He sighed, and told Twilight.
"He's... headed for the volcano past the Everfree Forest, and even if he doesn't want to come back I'm sure he'll still forgive you all. If all of you are going, so am I. He is my brother after all.”
Twilight nodded.
“Pip, stay here with the princesses. I’ll be back soon with Spike…I promise.”
The young colt nodded and walked over to the princess of love.
The main six and the two humans left to the mountains.
(Volcano)
Spike walked to the opening of the volcano and jumped in, making a splash of lava. Spike swam up and relaxed in the pool of lava. "Ahhh, the only other time I swam in lava was when the Dragon Migration happened." He glared at nothing in particular. "I remember when Rainbow made fun of me, and that made me want to go to it, to prove myself as a 'dragon'." He looked at the pool of lava. "I could never do this in Ponyville, it's too dangerous for ponies." He sat back a bit. "Ahhh, I could get used to this.”
After a couple of minutes, Spike came out of the lava pool and got into his clothing again. He laid down on a rock. He put his claws on the back of his head, closed his eyes, and rested.
(Daniel)
An hour passed, Daniel, Twilight and the others were approaching the volcano.
The Mane Six and two humans stopped at the bottom of the volcano.
"This is it everypony, Spike's at the top of this volcano." Twilight and the rest looked up.
"Do we have to climb this thing?" Rarity whined.
"Do you want to apologize to Spike?”
"...Yes." Rarity said.
"Well, what are we waiting for, let's go!" Pinkie said.
The main six started climbing.
The two humans nodded and started climbing as well
(Few hours later)
The sun was about to set over the horizon, but the group managed to get to the top at long last. they all caught their breaths for a moment, until they walk around to find the young drake.
Not to far from them, Spike was collecting rocks with his mental abilities, and wasn’t paying attention to what was going on around him.
Twilight and her friends finally arrived at the top of the volcano. They looked around and saw Spike doing something in the far distance.
”Spike?" She finally found him. "...Spike!" Twilight started to run towards him.
Spike turned around hearing his name being called, and what was more surprising than his name being called out, out of nowhere, was seeing Twilight running up to him. “T-Twilight?"
Twilight stopped a couple meters away from him, the others soon caught up.
"All of you, are here?”
"Yeah, we are. We know all about how you got controlled Spike, you don't need to fear us!”
"I know, Daniel told me... But forget all about that, the real reason you're here is because you want to apologize!”
"Y-Yeah, we do." The Mane Six were surprised at Spike's angry tone.
"You think you can just say sorry, and then everything will go back to normal?! No! I will not be your slave anymore!" Some lava erupted behind Spike as he said that.
"N-No, Spike. We won't make the same mistake again.”
"I don't believe you!" A hint of darkness appeared in Spike's eyes.

"We will Spikey! We promise!" Rarity said.
"Don't make promises you can't keep, didn't you already learned that?!”
"We'll keep this one, we've learned from the past!" Applejack said.
"Yeah, we'll even make it up to you," Rainbow said.
“SHUT UP!" Spike's voice grew darker.
"Spike?" Twilight looked at Spike. He was changing, he started to turn back into his dark form.
"What's happening? Why is Spike turning back into that monster?" Fluttershy asked.
“I don't know, maybe the darkness within him hasn't been broken! Maybe it was only blocked my Sweetie Belle's love!" Daniel explained. "And now the darkness has powered up again because of his sudden hate!”
Suddenly, a big explosion happened where Spike was standing.
The Mane Six and two humans coughed from the smoke that quickly surrounded the area, and when the smoke settled down, they could see... him.
Spike was once again Ryu, the Dragon of Shadows, he had an insane expression on his face. He looked towards Twilight and the others with a big smile and fired.
Like before, the blast completely missed the Mane Six.
"No, the last time this happened he was out of control…"
She remembered how dangerous Ryu was. “Everypony! Over here! We have to take cover!" Twilight ran to take cover behind the rock and the others quickly followed.
Ryu ignored them and continued to blast everywhere around him while laughing maniacally.
"What have we done?! Now he's in this state again!" Rarity said.
"There's gotta be a way to stop him!" Rainbow said as she flared her wings.
“We are not gonna fight him! Haven’t you learned your lesson from before!?” Daniel snarled.
Rainbow shrunk back and looked away
"This is my fault, I released his anger." Twilight thought to herself. "I've got to fix this.”
Twilight stood up and made her way to Spike.
"Twilight!" The others yelled.
Ryu noticed Twilight, "Hello there!" and he started to blow his dark fire at her.
Twilight used her magic and created a barrier blocking his fire. She slowly made her way to Ryu.
Twilight started to talk out loud. "I've made many mistakes in the past, but they were nothing compared to this one. I've treated you wrong, I used you for my own needs. I always made you work for me, and I gave you nothing in return. I kept you working while I had fun, You got abused, but you still showed a happy face every day. When I did take you out, you would just get neglected even more. You looked up to me, you thought of me as a mother, and I never acted like one." Twilight was a few meters away from Spike, and he stopped blowing his fire. "Spike, I'm sorry." Twilight with teary eyes pulled Ryu into a hug.
Ryu smirked. "Are you really sorry?”
This made Twilight release her grip a little, but she still held on to Ryu. "W-What?" She asked in disbelief.
"Hmph. I would never believe that "you're sorry."" He started to gently push Twilight's arms off of him.
Unfortunately for Twilight, Spike's "gentle" was pretty strong for her standards. She used all of her might, however, and never let go.
"You're not Spike..." She started. "Spike wouldn't attack us after we would try to apologize. In the worst case, he would shrug us off, wouldn't care, and break our hearts. But he wouldn't even do that!" She stated.
"Spike", raised an eyebrow while grinning. "I am Spike. Can't you see?”
“No you’re not.” Daniel said walking up to them. “Spike would never want use violence for the necessary of getting revenge, or hurting those he loves and cares for. You’re only the dark version of Spike. You only cause nothing but pain and hatred.”
“Heh, funny coming from a human that acted like a monster when his darkness took hold.”
Daniel growled. “Spike would never say something like that. He knows full well I’m not a monster. He knows that.”
"I'll never let your Spike be released. I, the rightful Spike, will be in control-" His eyes widened as he started to flash, he started to turn back into his regular self. "No! You fool!”
(Spikes mind)
"What are you doing?!" Ryu asked in rage.
"I defeated you last time. I can do it again!" Spike replied. "I won't let you hurt my friends.”
“...Fool."
Ryu seemed like he was evaporating. Like the last time Spike defeated him.
He grinned. "Fine. Have this win…"
Spike raised an eyebrow.
"But I tell you this, you cannot get rid of me. I am a part of you!”
"You're not a part of me! I'm nothing like you! You're only the dark side of me that uses my rage. But no matter how much rage I produce the real me wouldn't hurt others.”
"...Hmph, so be it." Ryu smiled as he disappeared. That smile soon turned into chuckling, then into straight evil laughter.
Even after he disappeared his laughter echoed within Spike's mind for a few moments, before fading away.
(Reality)
The scales on the belly started to turn back into the brighter shade of green, the darkness was removed from his eyes.
Spike looked up and saw Twilight looking at him with tears running down her cheeks. “T-Twilight..." He then looked at the warrior next to her. “Daniel…”
“Spike…” Spike looked at the lavender unicorn. “I’m so sorry for everything I did. I hurt you, and ignored you. I want to make things right between us. Can you ever forgive me?” She asked with pleading eyes filled with tears while she backed away.
Spike looked down, not looking at her in the eyes. “…No. I can never forgive you.”
Twilight’s eyes widened. She then lowered her head and her tears fell. Suddenly, a warm smooth body hit her, and looked down to see Spike hugging her.
“Spike?” She asked while her spirits lifted a little.
Spike looked up at her and he smiled while tears of his own fell. “Because I already forgave you.”
Twilight’s tears fell again, but this time, they were tears of joy and happiness. “Spike…” She then hugged him tightly. She fell to her knees and Spike lowered with her.
“I missed you.” She whimpered, clinging to his shirt.
“I missed you too…mother.” He whispered while sniffing.
Twilight’s eyes widened again, then her eyes grew, and sparkled. Her lips trembled, and a new fresh batch of tears formed; she hugged him tighter than before. She sobbed as the two continued in the warm, welcoming embrace.
Daniel himself sniffed a few times while wiping tears of his own. He felt touched by this reunion. He was glad Spike was back.
The rest of the Mane Six approached Spike and Twilight. "Can ya forgive us too?”
Spike gave them all a warm smile. "Of course, I can.”
They all ran towards Spike and they performed a group hug.
Will walked over, wiping a tear and looking at the drake.
“Welcome back bud.”
Spike grabbed him and hugged him with one arm. “Great to be back.”
Just then, Sweetie Belle peeked up from behind a rock. “Finally!"
"Sweetie Belle?”
Sweetie Belle ran up to Spike. She kissed him on the cheek and hugged him.
Everypony but Rainbow Dash 'awwed', and Scootaloo and Apple Bloom also peeked out from the rock.
"Everything turned out alright after all just like Sweetie Belle said it would." Apple Bloom stated.
Spike, the CMC, Mane Six, and the two humans all looked at the sunrise from atop the volcano.
"Incredible view," Applejack said.
"It's simply fabulous!" Rarity said.
“Come on everypony, let’s go home.” Spike said smiling.
They all nodded and Twilgiht charged her horn and they all vanished in the purple light.
(Daniels mind)
Kasai smiled and wiped his tears and smiled at the group as they made their way back to Canterlot.
“Spike…you have grown so strong. Very soon…you will know…who you really are.”
Author's Note
Bam! Spike has finally forgave the main six and gave them a second chance. Hope the forgivness wasn’t rushed. Anyway, we are at the end of the first season of EHS, and the next chapter will be the season finale. A new season will begin. It will be known as EHS Season 2: The Dragon Saga! Stay tuned for the finale of the first season!
Oh dear, it seems EHS has reached 100 dislikes. Aw well, won't let something like this slow me down. I'm still going to finish this story, no matter what.
Thank for reading everypony! See you all next time! ^^
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