
A Burning Desire
This is the first page of my first fic, hit me up if you like it and I will continue the story
FlameWing should despise Rainbow Dash, shouldn't she? she had stolen her dream to be the best. but even so, one cannot overlook certain...aspects that RD has that FlameWing could not help but find...attractive. what will happen in this story of love and hate? Will FlameWing ever forgive Dash, and let her love blossom? and if so, what challenges will they face? rated teen for possible future stuff
I has an editor now, so check out the real chapter 1 again, it has changed a bit. special thanks to Flutterstar for being an amazing Editor and seeing hope in an originally horrible peice :pinkiehappy;


4021 words: Estimated 20 minutes to read
5 Chapters:
- The Beginning 2012-06-21 07:29:27 UTC632
- Confrontation 2012-06-02 07:07:43 UTC600
- Jealousy and family traditions 2012-06-13 02:17:21 UTC840
- Cheater 2012-06-20 21:56:27 UTC966
- Revalations 2012-06-22 08:33:58 UTC983