Dawn Of A New Crown

by sgthootnany

Rating: everyone
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Sad, Comedy, Romance, Adventure
Length: 1059

dawn of a new crown is a story about a fruitswirl and how she must crush a kingdom then fix it.

this a dramatic story that includes possible sexual references ,achohal references and mature language

fruit swirl was born in arabonia were her mother had commited high treason by mating with another stallian and now fruitswirl is sent to canterlot were luna become her foster mother but fruitswirl has no idea that she is not her real mother and lives a normal life until she is made captain of lunas royal gaurd and i sent into a war against arabonia and finds out about her past while stumbling upon a note in lunas desk while looking for a peace of parchment and learns that she is next in line this is all i will tell you must read the fanfic to find out more

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-15 17:17:31 UTC

dawn of a new crown chapter one: a filly is born

The dawning of a new crown

[author notes: this is my first fanfiction ever and i based on my oc fruitswirl these event take play way before the great war of luna verses celestia. fruit is adopted royal child whos is from Arabonia and she does not know of what powers she truly hold until luna takes her out for what was to be a simple flight lesson.]

In a distant land far from equestrian called Arabonia lived a king and a queen. They had two filly’s the first was an alicorn as expected from a family of pure alicorns. Her name was Albona. The second one who came 5 years after the first was Fruitswirl. But something was wrong she was born as a Pegasus. King “how could this be.” “a family of pure alicorns and the chain is broken by a Pegasus.” The king had wondered and wondered how then it struck him maybe it was his maybe is was some one else’s filly.

1 year later.

court house of Arabonia.

Judge “it has been abjured we have found the defensive guilty of treason.” Queen “no you cant”. Queen slammed her hoof on the desk. Judge “its too late you shall be executed a dawn. The judge slams his hammer of justice down on the pallet of justice making a loud bang of justice. Queen “what about are child?!?!” judge “he shall be sent far away from here to another kingdom for he would shame this kingdom and bring no good to it.” Queen “Noooooo…” judge “take her to the dungeon” (Screams from the queen echo as she is dragged to the dungeons.)

9 years later

Canterlot Castle some time at 12:00

??? “can we go to the city can we can we ca.” ??? “no not today. Today we begin your training.“ ??? “training?” ??? “yes fruit. Training for you.” Fruitswirl “Training for what though Luna?” Fruitswirl look as luna with a question on her face.  Luna “training to become the leader of my royal guard”luna said looking down on the filly with smile. Fruitswirl “ REALLY NO WAY!” said fruitswirl with a big smile. “yes” said luna looking back up to see were she was going.

1:23 am

Some where on a cloud in some place

Fruitswirl “Why are we here.” Said Fruitswirl with an excited yet confused look. Luna “we are at a place where I learned to fly and now you will learn here too.” Said Luna with a proud look as she pranced around Fruitswirl. Fruitswirl “and that is…” fruitswirl closed one eye and made the other bigger giving Luna the stink eye. Luna “that’s no way to talk to your elder!” Luna shouted at fruit because it is her responsibility to make sue fruit becomes a proper lady and knows how to talk like one around her superiors. Fruitswirls “ok sorry” Fruitswirl looked down at the ground knowing that Luna was scary when she was mad. Luna “well pressing on I want you to open your wings and attempt to hover.”

Fruitswirl “uhmm ok” Fruitswirl opens her wings try’s to fly as she closes her eyes and begins to flap. Fruitswirl flaps harder and harder and continues to try to hover. Luna gets an idea Luna’s horn start to glow dimly. Fruitswirl “hey look I’m doing it.” Fruit opens her eyes “o that’s just mean.” Said Fruitswirl with a grim look on her face. Luna giggled a little attempting to hold it in trying not to laugh out loud. Luna puts fruit on the ground. Fruitswirl “ha ha ha” Fruit continues to grim. Luna ‘cheer up champ only a joke” Luna stops giggling and puts on her pokers face “alright let try again”

3:47

Luna “Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.” Fruitswirl “huh one more time.” Fruitsirl begins to flap as if there was no tomorrow and soon begins to feel light on her feat. She closes her eyes and puts all of her might into it. Fruit begins to gain lift and fast. The noise of the flapping had woken Luna. Luna stared bedazzled by how fast the filly had learned to fly. But then Fruitswirl had but it into over drive blasting strait up like thunder and lightening put together break the sounds and light barriers like  butter that’s been melted down. As she blasted through the air like a arrow forged by the magic of every magical thing on the planet. All the clouds fruit passed were destroyed by the might of the G forces created by fruits speed. But Fruitswirl had used most of here might on the take off she had been exsosted of all her energy and rate before breaching the atmosphere she began to slow down soon coming to a complete stop hovering what seemed like hours for fruit but were mere seconds. Then she began to plummet to the ground like a meteor the size of a planet. Luna reacted as fast as she could forming a magical orb around fruit to slow here down it took all of her strength she has never stopped anything of such proportion with this much magnitude. Luna begins to get tired trying to grab the little one from the sky her magic cannot all grip her do to her small size. but Luna quickly fly's up and snatches fruit from the sky and put the filly on her back. Luna could do nothing but land on the ground and regains her breath "what are you fruit are you even a pony?" with haste Luna fly back to the castle to check the record to see if there is anything similar to this much power and to also tuck fruit in her bed.

5:24

Luna "finally were home" Luna goes to fruits bed and puts her in tucking her to sleep and then places fruits plushy in her arms because fruit love's her wonder bolt and princess plushy. Luna turns her attention to the door and walks to it and begins to open it when suddenly the door is slammed open and standing there was a very angry Celestia. Celestia rushes in and slam the door shut with her magic " Luna why is a good portion of Equestria destroyed and why were you not at the meeting tonight?!?!

                                                                    to be continued.....