The One They Call Phoenix V2
Prologue: Just a Normal Day...Right?
"Alright, great job tonight guys! See you all Thursday for evening practice, remember, be here at 8:00 sharp!" The Martial Arts teacher said as my friend and I walked out of the room. It was still daylight outside, so I wanted to get home as fast as possible. My friend Andrew walked up beside me.
"Yo CJ, you ready for Thursday?" He said while nudging me on the shoulder. Andrew was your average teenager. He stood about 6" exactly, had short brown hair, and at one time he had it styled the way Justin Beiber does. However, now he had it spiked up slightly like he used to. He was wearing a plain blue shirt and blue jeans, and had an old hat on that he's had since we entered high school together three years ago. It was brown, had band-aids, stickers, zebra tape, and other things on it. The reason he kept those items on his hat was because those were memories that he and his friends made together. I respected that, it's a lot like the random videos I take on my iPod to remember the good times with Wesley, Joseph, Carter, Kelby, and the rest of the gang.
"Yea, besides, what could we do that I haven't already done?" I said while sitting down on a leather couch in the corner of the room; I reached down and began to tie my shoes. Meanwhile, I looked up and around, hopefully trying to remember when I'll never have to come back to this place. The building was old and run down. The white walls looked like they were remade, and the building repainted. However, that didn't hide the smell of mold and all the dust that flew off the walls every time someone would hit them. The building was ages old, and I've been here for years; four, five, heck I don't know. All I know is that once I hit year seven, I'm out of here; even though I've basically learned everything there is. The only thing I do is hone my skills when I'm here.
"I don't know man, who knows, maybe he will start using weapons." Andrew said while shrugging before he reached down and grabbed his shoes. I finished tying mine and stood up.
"I hope not, you know I don't like using weapons. I find it a way of cheating in a fight." I said as I walked over and grabbed my backpack from school. The only problem that I have with this place, besides the dust and smell of mold, is how it's so close to the school. It's literally a block away, so I have no time to relax after school. I leave school around 3:30 and show up here by 4:00, and go home around 8:30-9. So yea, my Tuesdays and Thursdays pretty much sucked.
"Yea yea yea, I know I know, you don't like using weapons." Andrew said as he stood up and pulled on his grey jacket. He opened the wooden door that lead to the small parking lot outside. "Ladies first." He said while gesturing me to go through first.
"Whatever man, just go." I said while motioning him to walk out of the door. He refused, so I just went on through, ignoring his smirks afterwords.
"Oh, here's my ride man, see you tomorrow at school!" Andrew said as he ran towards his car, waving.
"Alright, see you then!" I waved back as I walked to my car. Thankfully, I knew how to drive, so I didn't have to deal with my mom nagging me to hurry up anymore. I put my backpack in the passenger seat, and started up the car. The car was a black Pontiac Sunfire. I really can't remember what year it was, but I didn't care. It looked cool, it sounded cool, it was black, and it was mine; and I loved it.
I drove out of town, and within 15 minutes I was home. My home wasn't much, but it was enough. It was two stories, is white, and has a green tin roof. The house has a decently sized porch on the front, and has a two car garage, one for my car, and one for my mothers. As I pull in and look to the door on the left side of the garage. It seems like my mom left for work not to long ago. I got out of my car and walked up to the note that I saw on the door.
Dear Christopher,
Got called out tonight for work, won't be back home till late, dinners on the table. Also, don't forget to clean your room, it looks like a tornado went through it.
Love, Mom
I crumple up the note and put it into my pocket, annoyed on how many times I've had to tell her that my room isn't a 'mess', and how it's more of an 'organized chaos'. However, that apparently never gets through to her, so I just shrug it off and walk into the house. When I walk in, the door leads straight to the kitchen. The kitchen is pretty big compared to others. It has a black and white tile floor, has marble counters, and has two refrigerator/ freezers, and is lined with cabinets above and below the counter tops. I just drop my backpack off by the door, and walk into the living room. The living room has blue carpet, has a 52" screen TV, and has all my game systems under it. I walk over to the blue couch and sit down.
"I swear, if mom wasn't so obsessed with blue, then everything would either be red or black." I said while letting out a sigh. "Oh well, it's only 9:30. I can get a few hours of gaming in." I walk up and hit the power button on my xbox 360 and go to Minecraft. After a while I begin to get tired, and fall asleep on the couch, which is very common.
I awoke with a song playing from my iPod, making me jump and fall off the couch. "Dang iPod, always waking me up for school. Why can't it...you know, forget?" I said as I pulled out my iPod from my pocket and turned off the alarm. I walked out of the living room and into the kitchen. I began looking in the cabinets for my breakfast.
"Let's see here....AH!, here we go." I said as I pulled out a box of Cheerios and sat it on the counter. I walked to one of the fridges and opened it. "Alright milk, where is the milk." I began to say milk constantly. "Milk milk milk milk...milk....AH!, here it is!" I said as I reached behind the orange juice and pulled out a gallon sized jug full of milk. I sat the milk on the counter as well, now my goal was to find a bowl. I looked in the top cabinets, and finally I found one. I sat it on the counter and began to pour the Cheerios into the bowl, and the milk soon following. After I was done with the milk I put it back in the fridge and closed it with my elbow as I walked over to the sink. I pulled out a drawer from the top, right under the sink, and grabbed a spoon and put it into the bowl.
"Alright, what time is it?" I said as I looked towards a clock on the wall. "Hmm, 5:50...YES!" I yell as I carefully walk out of the kitchen and plop down on the couch in the living room. I grab the remote to the TV and hit the power button. It turned on to the news, and I just sat there for a few minutes. "NOPE!" I said as I flipped the channel to The HUB. It was almost six, and as every morning, I watch My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I know, I know, it's a little kids show right? Wrong, well, technically Lauren Faust made the show enjoyable for all ages, that way parents could watch the show with their kids and enjoy it as well. Her plan worked better than expected, getting teenagers and adults of the male gender to like the show entirely more than she expected, creating one of the best fan bases in the world. I sat on the couch, watching Twilight, Fluttershy, Applejack, and the rest of the Mane 6 go throughout their daily lives in Ponyville. After the show was over I get the usual thought I always do. 'I wish I could go there, I bet it would be amazing, and fun too. Plus, I would get to see Fluttershy and Luna...*squee*' Yes, I just squeed in my mind. Since it was now 6:30 and almost time for school, I grabbed my backpack and walked out the door. "Oops, almost forgot my keys, ehehe." I ran inside and grabbed my keys on the counter, locking the door on the way out. I got in my car, started it, and drove to school.
Okay, just another normal day of school. Art went just fine, hopefully I can complete my drawing before it's due. That way, I can work on my own projects, like my OC. I think as I walk out into the school parking lot. I get into my car and start the engine, plugging up my iPod into the aux port as always. I hit shuffle on the iPod, and the song that came on got me pumped up. It was a Five Finger Death Punch song, and one of my favorites as well. It was a perfect fighting song. I turned up the stereo as loud as it would go, that is, without busting my eardrums. I pulled out of the parking lot while getting weird looks from people. "Yea, that's right, I listen to FFDP, what ya gonna do?" I say out loud, getting more looks from people. "Heh, people and their Justin Beiber, their Country, their Red Solo Cups, and their other crappy music. I'd rather die than listen to that crap." I say as I drive off to go home.
Once I get home, I walk inside and go into the living room. "You know what," I said while talking to myself. "I'm going to go outside and draw today. Besides, why waste a good day like this?" I questioned myself. However, I didn't need an answer to that. I opened the zipper on my backpack and pulled out my green sketchbook and a few drawing pencils. "Alright, let's go." I said as I walked out the back door. If there's one thing I like about my house, it's the seclusion. It is miles away form any house or town, it takes me 15 minutes to get home just because I drive fast. I walk out to the field in the back yard and sit under the lone tree in the middle of the green field. The tree was old, maybe older than the house, me, and my mom combined. I looked up and began talking to the tree.
"Hey, been a while since I last talked to you hasn't it?" I said to the tree, not expecting an answer. "So I guess you wouldn't mind if I sit here and draw?" I said as I begin to slide my back down the side of the tree. "I won't be here long, just to draw a little." I opened my book and started drawing. I was just sketching, when I began to feel tired. "Why am I so sleepy?" I said as my eyes begin to close. "Sun...warm....me......sleepy" I couldn't say anymore. I fell asleep under the tree.
*Rumble*
"OW, what the?" I was awoken by a big acorn falling on my head.
*Rumble*
"Woah, why is the earth shaking?" I say as I begin to think for a second. 'Wait a minute, earth shaking, things falling...oh my god...2012 came early...SHIT!' I begin to dash for the inside of my house, leaving my drawings and stuff behind.
*Rumble, Crack*
"What the?" I see a thin line running in front of me.
*RUMBLE, CRACK*
I watch as the earth in front of me opens, making me balance myself on the edge, but as luck would have it, I fall in.
"FUUUUUUUUUUUU-" I see something open below me. Something that looks like a portal of some sort. I have no time to look thoroughly as my head hits the side of the rock knocking me out as I fall through the thing.
I awoke looking up at the sky, and it looked nice for the sky on earth. Then it hit me. 'Wait a minute, I remember seeing something as I began to fall through the earth, so why am I staring at the sky?' I try to move, but I feel nothing but pain as I try to move.
"AHHHHHHHH!" I scream out, trying not to move. "Okay, okay, just don't move and everything should be okay." I heard something approaching me from behind me. "What, who...who's there! I say while trying to look up, but it doesn't work as another surge of pain goes throughout my body. "AHHHH, FUCK!" I hear it walk closer, but slowly. I try to lift my head up, trying to ignore the pain. However, as soon as I lay my head down, I see a stream of red come down my face. "Blood?...Great, I'm in an unimaginable amount of pain, AND I'm bleeding....how could thins get any worse!"
"U-Um e-excuse m-me, b-but are y-you o-okay?" I look down as far as I can, and what I see amazes me, freaks me out, and makes me pass out.
I felt a cold rag upon my head, and slowly opened my eyes. "Oh man, what happened...I feel like shit." I said as I sat up, making a slight pain go throughout my body. "Ow" I seemed to be in a small house made out of wood. It had animal cages all over, and animals seemed to be running all over the place. There were stairs to the left of me, and a door to the right. Also, there was a fireplace directly in front of me. "Oh man, how did I get he-"
"Eep!" I looked over to what made the noise, and everything that happened before came back. 'Holy shit! I'm looking at Fluttershy, THE ONE AND ONLY FLUTTERSHY!' I manage to hold back all of my fangasms and slowly begin to talk. "Okay, what am I doing here?" I ask to Fluttershy.
"Yes, what are you doing here!" I look to my right and see nothing, so I look up. Right in front of me was Rainbow Dash. "Woah now, I mean no harm. I just want to know how I got here and why?" I look around thoroughly this time and see that I'm surrounded by all the mane six. Twilight, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie were all in front of me, glaring at me. "W-What?" I ask nervously.
"What are you?" Twilight asks.
"A-A human...why?" I say while stuttering the first word.
"A human? We've never seen anything like you here in Equestria...you mind if I take some notes on you?" She said as she pulled out a quill and paper out of nowhere.
"S-Sure, I don't mind." I began to think, 'I'm going to regret this.'
After a while of studying me, looking me over, lifting random body parts, sending a note..wait a minute...fuck. I know who that note was to when I think about it. After a while I get introduced to the other ponies, and begin to have idle chit chat with them. I have to admit, reading big freak out moment's in fics was funny back on earth, but now that I'm here I don't see why they would? Yea, they do get taken away from everything back on earth, but since I'm a brony, then I would rather spend my time here in Equestria then back on earth. Besides, I stay very calm in rough situations. My sensei always told me that a calm mind can think clearly, while one that is confused can't think for anything. So, that's why I taught myself to stay calm in these kind of situations. I mean, I was freaking out at first, but now I'm fine. After a few more minutes of idle chit chat, we all hear and see a bright flash outside the door.
"O-Oh, here, let me get the door." She says as she flies to the door and opens it. What was on the other side made me have a one word reaction. "Shit." I said as I facepalmed and ran my hand down my face.
A/N: Well, this is my redo...I don't know if I've done any better, but comment, criticize, etc... Also, chapters will be coming out randomly as of right now (finals are coming next week, also the last week of school). So, after schools out I should be putting out a lot more chapters, longer as well...anyways...see you all later...btw...how did I do for doing this all in one day? XD
The One They Call Phoenix V2
Chapter 1: And Here. We. Go!
I watched as the princess of the sun waked into the house.
"Princess Celestia!" Twilight said happily. "I'm surprised you got here this fast!" She ran up to her mentor, and Celestia started nuzzling Twilight's neck.
"Well, as soon as I read your letter about this so called 'human' that you found, I had to see him for myself. So, I decided to let go of my royal duties for a bit and come see this human." She said, raising back up from nuzzling Twilight's neck. "And I'm guessing you are the human." Celestia said while walking over to me. Once she got close enough, she started staring me down.
"U-Um, y-yes, that would be me." I was actually scared by Celestia. She had a calm facial expression yes, but once she get's pissed, she will bring down the suns wrath upon your ass. I began to mentally laugh inside my head.
'Ha, wrath...ass...I see what I did there.'
"Well, you sure are a strange one. Your the first of your kind here you know that?" She said in a calm tone, which made me relax a little.
"I figured as much, I don't see any other humans walking around here. The only thing closest to my species back on Earth were apes, and they still differed a lot. Even though scientists said we evolved from them, but I don't see how." I said, letting out a sigh of relief.
"You what now? You say you evolved from apes? I mean we have apes here in Equestria, but there a big difference form you." Twilight said, curious as ever. "Would you mind telling me a bit more about where you came from?" She said, floating another notebook and quill from her purple bag on her side.
"Sure, I don't mind. Be aware though, some of it won't be pretty." I spent the next few hours describing Earth. The wars, diseases, people, places, environment, and anything else I could think of. Let's just say at the end some were scared, some were intrigued, and some didn't really care. Celestia was wide eyed, and i was surprised to actually see an expression on her face.
"T-that's awful." Fluttershy said.
"Meh, it's easy to get used to." I calmly replied.
"Easy, how do ya find all that easy ta get used to?" Applejack replied.
"Simple really, humans constantly live through those kind of predicaments, so we're used to it."
"Still, Ah wouldn't be able ta stand livin' there. Ah mean, Ah'm used to livin' here, and Ah guess You're used ta livin' there so, Ah, nevermind, Ah just confused mahself." Applejack said. I let out a laugh, and everyone else seemed to join in, even Applejack.
"Okay, anymore questions?" I said looking across the room, no one said anything. "I take that as a no? Alright then, what to do next?" My stomach began to rumble. "Well, I guess he just decided for us. I hate to be asking, but does anyone have anything to eat?"
"U-Um, would you like an apple?" Fluttershy said as she began waling into the kitchen.
"Yes please, that would be nice." I said, then noticed that Pinkie was unnaturally quiet. "Hey Pinkie?"
"Yea CJ?" She said, snapping out of whatever she was doing.
"Why are you so quiet?"
"Oh, I'm thinking of what to name your welcoming party." She said putting a hoof up to her chin. "Sorry-You-Got-Transported-From-Your-World-But-Welcome-To-Eaquestria-And-Ponyville? Or just, Welcome-To-Ponyville?"
"I believe the second one would be best. The first seems a bit...long." I said thinking of seeing how low the sign would hang to the ground.
"Okay!" She happily said. "Better start on it no-"
"I don't believe that's a good idea Pinkie." Twilight interrupted.
"But why Twilight? He's new here, and he needs to feel welcomed by everypony." She said, her mane deflating a little.
"It's okay Pinkie, I feel welcomed already. I promise to let you give me one, but now now. Everypony needs to get to know me." I said.
"Yes, like CJ said. Everypony needs to know him, we don't want another Zecora incident to happen now do we Pinkie?" Twilight said in a motherly like tone.
"No, I felt bad for judging Zecora so fast just because she was different. Still, she had that creepy robe, and how she dug into the ground; it just made her look mysterious and evil." Said Pinkie.
"When we got to know her though, she wasn't evil and mysterious. She was kind, caring, and somehow managed to rhyme every single time. I don't see how she does it either, maybe it's a zebra thing." Twilight said, pondering about the question she asked herself.
"I know right, it's so weird. I want to learn how to do that!" Pinkie said, hopping around the room.
"Here you go CJ." Fluttershy said as she floated in with the apple in hoof.
"Oh, thanks Fluttershy." I said, taking a bite out of the apple. "Man, this is one good apple. Probably the best I've ever had!" I bit into it again. "I could live off of these things!" I really liked that apple.
"Y-Your welcome CJ" She said, blushing while landing on the ground.
"Ah hope you like that apple, came straight from Sweet Apple Acres." She said, making a proud stance.
"Like it, I LOVE IT! It's the best apple I've ever eaten." I said while finishing up the apple.
"Well, Ah'm glad you do like it." Now there was nothing else to do again.
"Twilight, I must head back to Canterlot, it's almost time for the sun to set." Celestia said while her horn started glowing.
"Okay, buy Princess." Twilight and the rest, including me, waved goodbye, and with that she teleported form the room.
"Well, do you guys mind if I go outside and watch the moon come up?" I said while standing and stretching.
"Just don't wander into town, ponies might be scared of you. We have to prepare them for you." Twilight said.
'Why does she act like a mother all the time? I guess it's where she's used to being around Spike. Ha, she'd actually be a pretty good mother.' I thought while nodding and walked out the door, being careful not to hit my head on the way out.
I laid down against the tree, the moon just now rising. Fluttershy's cottage not too far from where I'm sitting. I could see the glistening of the river that goes by her house in the moonlight, and hear as it flows past me. I closed my eyes, and felt the cool air flow through my hair. This was my element, this is my time of day. Night has always been my favorite time of day. To me, if you add night, rain, storms, and video games, or music, or all of them, then you'd have the perfect night for me. I opened my eyes to see a shadow fly through the night sky. It eventually grew larger and larger, until it flew past the tree I was under. It flew around, and I watched as a night blue pony with a moon for her cutie mark pass by me. 'Holy shit! It's Luna!' I kept the fangasms from happening again. She landed beside me and looked me over while I just kept staring at the night sky.
"So, your the one my sister was telling me about. You sure are a strange one." She said, sitting down beside me.
"I know right? One lone human who comes from a different world, or maybe even universe, appear here in Equestria? It is strange." I said, sighing at the end. "However, this place is so much better than my world. I'm kind of glad to be here. Also, I like the nights here. They are so much more...vibrant than the ones back on Earth."
"Well, it's nice to know somepony appreciates our night. We've tried so long to do so, and to think. The first one was somepony who wasn't even form Equestria." She said, laughing a bit. "Well, at least it's nice to know there's somepony out there who likes it." She said, standing up beside me. I began to get the most random thought in my head.
'Okay, this is too tempting. I've read in multiple fanfics that their cutie marks are very sensitive. I know I may regret this, but I'm gonna try it.' I said as I slowly reached up and touched her cutie mark. She let out a moan, and began to blush. Then she gave me a death stare.
"OH SHIT! I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY." I said over and over.
"How dare you....YOU DARE TOUCH MY ROYAL BACKSIDE! FOR THIS YOU PAY!" She said as she began to flare her horn.
"Shit!" I stumbled as I tried to get up, but as soon as I did, I ran for my life.
"GET BACK HERE!" Luna screamed as I ran towards the house.
"HELP!" No help came, so I kept running. 'I wonder why she isn't flying yet.' A magic ball of fire hit the tree beside me.
"SHIT!" I ran faster, until I heard the flapping of wings, and the sound of the ground behind me exploding.
"FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK!" I kept running, I ran past the house. "FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, SOMEONE HELP ME!" No one answered still. Looks like I was out of luck. We kept running for a while until she eventually landed on me.
"Look, I'm sorry. I didn't know, and it was just too tempting." She began to flare her horn. "It just looked so beautiful that I couldn't help but touch it." I said, cowering now. She backed off of me.
"Well, I guess I can let you off the hook this time." She said wile blushing. "But do this again, and there will be consequences." She gave me a death stare.
"I'm sorry. I said, still cowering." I know, I'm a coward, but when you offend your favorite pony, you can't help but feel bad. "I feel bad about it now." I said, walking away.
"Wait, it's okay. I mean, was I really that tempting?" She asked.
I blushed a bit. "Yes." I plainly answer, still walking away.
"Well then, I'll forgive you, so there's no need to feel bad." I perked up a bit.
"Well, I'll still feel bad, and apologize occasionally, but eventually I'll forget it."
"I guess that works. Still, I'm flattered you think about me that way." She said.
'Wait, I have a chance with Luna? Wait, why am I going for a pony? Ah, fuck it. I'm the only human here, so what does it matter.'
"Well, I must be going, I have court to hold tonight. So bye for now. Oh, I didn't even get your name." She said while blushing.
"It's fine. It's CJ, well, that's not my actual name, but that's what people call me."
"Okay then, CJ, I guess we will see each other soon." She flew off into the night sky.
I walked back inside the house. Everyone was still awake, but seemed to be sleepy. "Hey, everyone okay?" This seemed to wake them up a bit.
"Oh my, it's late. I still have orders to finish! I better get back!" Rarity said as she ran out of the door. Applejack was the next to leave, then Rainbow, then Pinkie, Twilight was the hesitant one to leave.
"CJ, there's something different with your eyes." She said, looking straight at me.
"Oh, you mean the red mixed in with my natural hazel. Yea, it always happens at night or when I'm in a dark room. It's always been weird like that, I think it's kind of cool though." It started happening after one day at school. My friends said they saw a glimmer of fire in my eyes, then they turned red. I didn't believe them until I got home and looked into a mirror, and there it was. My eyes had red streams running through them. I thought it was cool, but any time I would enter a dark room or something, my eyes would change, and people would call me a freak. I got used to it, but still, I think it's cool.
"Well, but where are you going to stay? I guess since everypony had to leave, that leaves you staying at my library or here at Fluttershy's." I looked over to Fluttershy.
"Is it okay if I stay here until I get my own place?" I didn't really want to go through town and risk being seen, so Twilight's was out of the question. Fluttershy blushed. "I-I guess it's fine. I mean, I don't have a spare bed, but you can use mine." She said.
"Okay, I'll leave you two alone to figure this out. I need to get back to the library. See you guys later!" She waved as she walked out of the door, shutting it with her magic on the way out.
"I'll be fine taking the couch, you can have the bed." I said, laying down on the couch. She nudged me off it somehow.
"No, your taking the bed. The couch it too small for you. My bed may be small, but at least it's more comfortable than this." She said while pointing to the couch. "Now let me show you up to my room." I did as ordered, but I had a plan. One we got upstairs, we walked down a small hallway and entered a room on the left side. Inside was a neat looking room. It had one chest at the bottom of the bed, had green covers with a white pillow on it, and had animal houses everywhere. It was a very homey feeling, and was nice. I pulled down the covered and got in.
"Goodnight Fluttershy." I said, pulling the covers up over my head; my legs hanging off the end of the bed.
"Goodnight CJ, sweet dreams." She said as she walked out of the door. I heard her walk down the stairs, and then nothing. I waited for about half an hour, then got up.
"Okay, I am not sleeping here. I said I'd sleep on the couch and that's where I'm sleeping." I said while slowly opening the door. Once I opened it without a sound, I slowly walked down the small stairs, trying not to make a sound. I hit one stair, and it creaked a bit. I stopped, and heard moving around downstairs, but she didn't seem to wake up as I light didn't come on. I sighed and began to move downstairs again. Once I reached the bottom, I looked through the living room, seeing her sleeping on the couch. God, she was freaking adorable to say the least. there was so much d'aww, I almost had a heart attack and instant diabetes. I quietly walked through the living room, trying not to wake Fluttershy up. I felt around with my feet, and not feeling anything in the vicinity I took a step forward; only to ram my shin into the coffee table. "MOTHER FU-!" I cover my mouth, covering my shout. Fluttershy began to stir, but thankfully didn't wake up. I let out a sigh of relief, and finally made it to the couch. I uncovered her carefully, and picked her up with care. She was light as a feather, so I carefully carried her back up into her room and laid her down on her bed. I laid her head on her pillow, and covered her up. As I walked out, I heard faint snoring, and god, I almost died of heart attack and diabetes again. I walked back down the stairs, carefully dodged the table this time, and laid down on the couch. It was okay I guess, but it could have been bigger. Still, I'm in a world full of ponies, so everything is going to be smaller. I just ignored the feeling of my legs hanging off the edge, and went to sleep.
A/N: Okay, here you go..I know the thing with Luna was a bit weird, but I needed some filler until my writers block passed XD...plus, I always wanted to do that. In normal fanfics you see it happen to the mane 6 or some other random pony, not the rulers of Equestria. I thought that'd add a bit of randomness. Also, should I start my fanfic about my OC NightWing (the name is separate, but I like it to be one name in general.) I have a whole back story to him, but that's for the prologue. That is, if you guys want the fic. Hope you guys liked the chapter, and see you all next chapter =3
By the way, if you see any mistakes, point them out, and I will fix them to the best of my abilities.
